Ek Hateli Lovestory (complete)

Update 1​

Aniket Narayanrao Rane, ek dildaar dilkhulas dilfek vyaktimatva, apne selmon bhoi ka dialogue hai na mere bare me jyada mat sochna main dil me aata hu samajh me nahi ha wo dialogue is bande pe puri tarah se fit baithta hai

Kya hai na apna hero jara ulti khopdi hai , matlab uske dimag me kab kya aa jaye wo kisko kya bol de kuch nahi keh sakte, ha par ek baat hai banda dil ka bada saaf hai munda dilda ni mada siddhu moosewala nai aniket rane

Aniket ko samajhna hai to uske janm se dekhna padega kyuki aksar aise namune jaldi samajh me nahi aate aur dimag se nahi dil se sochna dimag lagane lagoge to kuch palle nai padega maine khud itna jyada dimag nahi lagaya hai

Bujhe... To chalo fir chalte hai Aniket ke ghar uske janm se is kahani ki shuruwat karne

To once upon a time kisi ek gaon main Narayanrao Rane naam ke ek suprasiddh aur rahees vyapari rehte the , uperwale ka diya unke paas sabkuch tha daulat sohrat ijjat, aaju baju ke parisar me unke bas naam se hi kaam ho jaya karta tha, Narayanrao ko apne gaon se apni matrubhumi se bada prem tha isiliye wo apni patni ke sAth gaon me hi rehte the, unki ek badi dukan thi gaon me aur sath hi wo 80acre khet ke bhi malik the aur iske sath sath apne kshetra me unki raajneeti par bhi achi pakad thi, Narayanrao ko apni sari sampatti apne purvajo se mili thi aur unhone use apni mehnat se dugna kiya tha, unki patni kaushalya bhi ek samanjas stri thi, dono pati patni ka gaon me bahut maan samman tha, ghar me naukar chakar lage the uper se sab acha dikh raha tha par dono pati patni ke man me ek khalal thi, unki shaadi ko dus saal ho gaye the par abhi tak unke koi aulaad nahi huyi thi..

Waise dekha jaye to kaushalya ek dharmik mahila thi, riti rivaj, pooja archa wo sab kuch karti thi. Gaon me maruti ka ek jagrut mandir tha aur kaushalya ki unpar atut shraddha thi, wo roj mandir jati aur bhagwan se bas itna maangti ke uski kokh bhar de aur aakhir kaar bhagwan bhi kab tak apne bhakt ko taraste unhone kaushalya ki jholi bhar thi aur wo garbhvati huyi

Narayanrao aksar kaushalya ko maskhari me kehte ki

Narayanrao- kaushalya jara sambhal ke ha, maruti ko vardaan manga hai dekhna unhi ke jaisa hoga hamara baccha

Narayanrao ka bolna ek hisab se sahi bhi nikla, pet me hi us bacche se aisi dhoom machayi ke kaushalya hairan ho gayi

Maruti ke us vardan ne nau mahine bhi pet me raah nahi dekhi aur aathve mahine me hi baccha baahar,

Narayanrao aur kaushalya ko putraratna ki prapti huyi thi, shadi ke dus saal baad unke ghar me khushiyan aayi thi, unke harsh ka koi thikana hi nahi tha Narayanrao ne pure gain me mithaiyan batwayi wo ab baap jo ban gaye the

Narayanrao aur kaushalya ne bade prem se apne bacche ka naam aniket rakha, Aniket dikhne me bhi bada cute tha use dekhte hi koi bhi god me lele par ye baccha kisi ke paas nahi jata tha, Aniket ke kafi laadchav huye aur dekhte dekhte samay apni gati se chalta raha

Maruti ke vardaan se prapt huye is bacche ne ab apna pratap dikhana shuru kar diya tha, dekhte dekhte aniket school me pahucha aur waha to mano use ek naya vishwa mil gaya ho, ab ghar me udham machane wala aniket school me udham machane laga tha, pehle to wo ro ro ke school sar pe utha leta tha jisse teachers ko use chhodne ghar par aana padta tha, pehle jo masti aniket ghar me karta tha ab wo school me karne laga tha aur jaise jaise wo bada hota raha uski shararate bhi badhti rahi, kabhi kisi ladki ki chotiya bandh deta to kabhi kisi ke jute ki lace,

Ab aniket ki complaints ghar tak bhi aane lagi thi, aniket apni maa ka ladaka tha par Narayanrao kadak aadmi the fir kya tha jaise hi complaint aayi unhone aniket ko mast sut diya, aniket ek kone me baitha ro raha tha aur uski maa use samjhane ka prayas kar rahi thi

Kaushalya- anu bete rote nahi aise, tum bade ho gaye ho ab, ache bacche jaise rehna chahiye na...

Maa ki baat sunkar aniket ne sar uthakar uper ki taraf apni maa ko dekha aur kaushalya ko bhi samajhte der nahi lagi ke aniket maar ko bhulkar wapis se pehle wale mood me aa gaya hai

Aniket- maa main bada ho gaya hu?

Kaushalya- Ha to! Ab bade ho gaye ho tum..

Aniket-kitna bada?

Fir kaushalya ne use hath se ishara karke bataya

Kaushalya-itna bada!

Aniket- Maa main bada ho gaya hu to tum to fir buddhi huyi na...

Kaushalya ne jaise hi aniket ke muh se apne liye buddhi suna uske ek jordar mukka uski peeth pe jad diya

Kaushalya- nalayak apni maa ko buddhi bolta hai, ruk abhi batati hu tujhe

Par kaushalya jab tak jhadu lekar aniket ko maarti ye bhaisaab wo waha se bhag liye the

Kaushalya(upar bhagwan ki taraf dekhte huye)- hey bhagwan ek baccha manga tha ye to aapne bander de diya

Kaushalya ne jhadu rakha aur kitchen ki taraf jane lagi itne ne fir se aniket ka awaj aaya

Aniket- aye buddhi

Kaushalya wapis use pakadti tab tak to aniket waha se gayab ho gaya tha aur kaushalya bechari piche chillati rahi

Narayanrao ka dukan ghar se thodi hi dur tha to aniket bhagte huye waha pahuch gaya aur dukan me pahuchte hi uske dimag me ek nayi shararat ne janm le liya aur wo ekdum bhola chehra bana ke Narayanrao se bola

Aniket- papa wo maa ne ghar bulaya hai aapko wo koi buddhi aayi hai jaldi bulaya hai

Ab isse pehle hi Narayanrao usse kuch puchte ye bhaisab bhag liye dosto ke sath khelne aur Narayanrao ghar aaye aur aate hi unhone kaushalya ko awaj lagayi to kaushalya bhi kitchen se apne hath poochte huye bahar aayi

Narayanrao- kya hua hai kaun buddhi aayi hai?

Narayanrao ki baat sun kar kaushalya ne apna matha pit liya

Narayanrao- arey kya hua hai kaun aaya hai? Aniket bata raha tha

Kaushalya apne hath ki chudiya uper karti huyi boli

Kaushalya-aaj to aane do use ghar, aaj tumhare bete ki khair nahi, mujhe buddhi bolega, aaj to bas aane do use...

Ab tak Narayanrao ke samajh me pura ghatna kram aa chuka tha aur wo has rahe the jise dekh kar kaushalya aur bhi jyada chid gayi

Kaushalya- aapko hasne ko kya hua, aap kyu has rahe hai, jaisa baap waisa beta, aapko bhi samajh nahi hai usne kaha aur aap dukan chhod kar aa gaye

Narayanrao(haste huye)- kamaal hai na ye ladka bhi, subah itna maar khaya aur ab ye wapis se nayi shararat

Narayanrao ander aakar sofe par baith gaye aur kaushalya wapis se apne kaam me lag gayi....

Ghar me karib karib ghanta bhar kafi shanti thi kaushalya ne Narayanrao ke liye chai banayi aur Narayanrao chai pite huye bole

Narayanrao- subah use mara ti tha par mujhe hi acha nahi lag raha tha, ab wo is umra me shararat nahi karega to kab karega

Narayanrao ki baat sunkar kaushalya ne unki taraf aankhen badi karke dekha par wo apne hi khayalo me bole ja rahe the

Narayanrao-nalayak ek minute shanti se nahi rehta hai par wo na ho na to ye ghar bhi khane ko daudta hai

Kaushalya- ha ha kyu nahi apako kya hai bol ke aap to dukan nikal jate ho sardard to mera hota hai na

Narayanrao ne kaushalya ki baat ka koi jawab nahi diya ab wo bhi jaante the biwi thodi gusse me ho to usse ulajhna nahi chahiye wo haste huye wapis dukan ki or nikal gaye.......

To Be Continued........

Update 2​

Shaam ko jab hamare Aniket Rane apne dosto ke sath udham macha kar khel kud kar apne ghar laute to unka swagat unki pujya matashri kaushalyadevi ne jhadu se kiya bas fir kya tha bechare aniket ko apni dophar ki maskhari ki saja sham ko maar kha kar chukani padi

Kaushalya aur Narayanrao ke beech ek alikhit karar tha aur wo ye tha ke dono me se koi bhi agar aniket ko daatega ya marega to dusra aniket ko samjhayega aur isike chalet to subah jab narayanrao ne aniket ko mara tha to kaushalya use samjhane ki koshish kar rahi thi par apni ulti khopdi ne kaushalya ko hi gussa dila diya tha aura b uska parinam bhi jhel chukka tha….

Raat ko jan narayanrao dukan se ghar aaye to unhone paya ke unke jo suputra hai wo ek kone me chupchap gumsum baithe huye hai aur kisi soch me dube hai, narayanrao ko samajhte jara bhi der nahi lagi ke ghar me kya hua hoga fir bhi unhone aankh ke ishare se kaushalya ko pucha to unhone bhi apne hath se ishara karke bataya ki unke chiranjiv ke maar khaya hai isiliye chupchap hai ab chuki in dono pati patni ke beech wo alikhit karar tha to narayanrao aniket ke paas jakar baithe aur use samjhane lage

Narayanrao- anu beta tum aise kaam hi kyu karte ho ki tumhe maar mile? Kabhi to ache bacche jaise raha karo, ye sabko is tarah satana achi baat nahi hai bet, hame bhi tumhe daat ke ya maar ke koi khushi thodehi milti hai, tum ye tumhari shararate kab band karoge..

Narayanrao aniket ko samjhato rahe the par anket ka to unki bato ki taraf koi dhyan hi nahi tha, wo to is waqt apni hi soch me tha aur narayanrao bhi samajh gaye ki ise samjhane ka koi fayda hi nahi hai jarur iske dimag me koi kurafati vichar ghum raha hoga aur Narayanrao ka andaja ilkul sahi nikla, kuch samay baad aniket bola

Aniket-papa, ek baat puchu aapse?

Narayanrao-ab agar main mana karunga to puche bagair to rahoge nahi, puch hi lo, ab hamne hi tumhe paida kiya hai to tumhare sawalo ke jawab bhi to ham hi denge na..pucho!

Aniket-papa, aap kabhi hamare padosi desh me gaye the kya?

Narayanrao-ab ye kaisa sawal hai, ye aajkal ke bacche bhi TV dekh ke kuch jyada hi hoshiyar ho gaye hai

Aniket-batao na papa aap kabhi hamare padosi dekh gaye ho kya

Narayanrao-nahi, main kabhi is desh se baahar nahi gaya hu

Aniket(apni maa ki taraf hath se ishara karte huye)- to fir aap ye aatankwadi kaha se laye ho, jab dekho tab mujhe maarti rehti hai….

Aniket ki baat sunkar Narayan ko hase ya roye samajh me nah aa raha tha, hasi to kafi aa rahi thi unhe, aur ye acha hua ki aniket ki ye baat kaushalya ne nahi suni nahi to fir s ek baar aniket ki ache se dhulai ho jati

Aisa nahi tha ke aniket sabko sirf satata hi tha, uski ye sab shararate to bas upper upper se thi par wo apne mata pita se behad prem karta tha, bas fark itna tha ke wo use jata nahi pata tha ya use apna pyaar jatana acha nahi lagta tha, aniket bhele hi maskhari me apne maa baap ko kuch bhi bol le par agar koi dusra aisa bole to ye use bilkul sehan nahi hota tha

Aniket ka ek baalmitra tha, Avinash Kanitkar urf avya, to ek baar hua yuk e avinash ne ek baar majak majak me kaushalya ke bare me bol diya “dekh anya teri buddi aa gayi”

Bas fir kya tha aniket ne ek ghuma ke di avinash ke kaan ke niche aur daat piste huye bola

Aniket-avya harami, ek baat dhyan me rakhiyo, meri maa hai main majak me kuch bhi bolu par mere alawa koi aur bole ye mujhe bilkul sehan nahi hoga, samjha

Ab aniket ne avi ko gariya to diya tha par tha to wo bhi aniket ka hi baalmitra usne bhi ek bharpur mukka aniket ki pith me jad diya

Avi-to sidhe sidhe bol na bhadkhau maarta kyu hai….

Samay apni gati se daud raha tha aur dekhte hi dekhte hamare aniket rane ab dasvi kaksha me pahuch gaye, ab yaha tak pahuchne me aniket ne koi parakram nahi kiya tha, wo kya hai na sarkar ka niyam hai 8vi tak kisi bhi bacche ko fail nahi kia jata aur 9th me school wale waise fail nhi hone dete bas isiliye ye mahashay ab dasvi me the warna apna hero to kabhi 5th bhi paas nahi kar pata,

Dekho aisa nahi hai ke aniket ekdum hi murkh tha, uska swabhavhi aisa tha ke wo kisi chiz ko seriously nahi leta tha, bas haso hasao ye ekmatra kaam tha uska ha par uske majak se kisi ko thes na pahuche is baat ka wo dhyan rakhta tha,

Bhaisab ne pehli baar dasvi ki pariksha di thi aur aaj result ka din tha, aniket ki result dekhne hi himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi isiliye usne result dekhne avinash ko bheja aur khud ghar par ruk gayaaur avinash ko sakht hidayat thi ke sabke saamne result na bataye bas itna dhyan rakhe ke agar ek subject gaya to namaskar bolna hai, do subject gaye to ram ram air teen subject me fail huye to jai shri ram bolna hai, avinash puri baat ache se samajh gaya aur result dekhne chala gaya

Kaushalya ne dekha ki unka ye putraranta to ghar par hi hai, waise unhe aniket ke paas hone ki khas umeed bhi nahi thi unki to bas itni icha thi ke aniket apne pita ka kaam sambhale, narayanrao bhi dophar me khana khane ghar aaye huye the aur aniket avinash ki raah dekh raha tha itne me avinash ander aaya aur ek jordar jaikara lagaya

‘bola pundlik varde hari vitthal shri gyandev tukaram pandharinath maharaj ki jai’

Aniket ne apne sar ko hath laga liya, use samajh me aaya gaya tha ki wo har subject me fail ho gaya hai, fir kya dusri baar koshish ki teesri bar koshish ki par natija wahi, ab padhega to paas hoga na, ek din kaushalya chidh kar boli

Kaushalya-anu sharam nahi aati na tumhe, kitni baar fail hoge, bas karo tumhare bas ka nahi hai ye

Ab aniket ne apni ab tak ki jindagi me kabhi sharam laaj lajja ke bare me socha hi nahi tha jo use is baat ka fark padta, wo natki bhav me bola

Aniket-maa papa, mere guujano se mujhe sikhaya hai ki failure is first step to success apyash ye yash ki pehli payri hai

Narayanrao-ha wo sahi baat hai par tumne us ek payri ki seedhi bana di hai uska kya gadhe

Aniket-papa aap hi bolte ho na 10th education ka base hai to bas main apna base majboot kar raha hu ‘slow education pragati ka lakshan :cool: ’

Nayaranrao-nalayak agar tu ek aur baar fail hua na to apni dukan me majdur bana dunga tujhe

Aniket-sach batau papa main na aapki wajah se paas nahi ho raha

Narayanrao-arey waah! Aur wo kaise bête

Aniket-dekho maa papa, main agar paas hua to college jaunga, fir aage naukri ke liye jaunga kisi dusre gaon ya fir main desh ke baahar bhi ja sakta hu, tab aap dono Buddha buddhi ko kaun sambhalega

Aur jaise hi aniket ne buddhi bola kaushalya chidh gayi

Kaushalya-nalayak, halkat, khud se paas nahi hua jar aha hai aur ham dono ko dosh de raha hai tum niklo beta ham sambhal lenge khudko

Aniket-maa challenge mat karo ha

Kaushalya-kiya challenge agar tum hare to tum wo karoge jo ham kahe aur jeete to jo chaho wo milega

Aniket collor tight karte huye bola

Aniket-ab to tum bas dekho maa main kaise paas hota hu fir mast shadi karke tumhare liye bahu launga aur fir tum dono ko char dham yatra pe ravana karunga

Aniket itna bol ke ja hi raha tha ke kaushalya piche se chilayi

Kaushalya-aur agar fail hua to Himalaya pe jane ki tayari rakhna

Narayanrao-ab ye kyat ha, hamare eklaute bacche ko tum Himalaya ke bhejogi

Kaushalya-arey nahi ji main ache se jaanti hu ise ab aap dekhna ye kaise paas hoke dikhata hai

Narayanrao-to fir itne din kiski raah dekh rahi thi 2 saal barbad ho gaye

Kaushalya- har chiz ka sahi samay hota hai

Narayanrao-aur agar hua paas to? Chale char dham yatra pe

Kaushalya-aapko lagta hai wo aisa karega, wo mujhe mere bhai ke yaha nahi jane deta aur yatra pe bhejega, wo batana nahi hai par hamare bagair nahi reh sakta wo aur na ham uske bina

Har maa apne bacche ko barabar pehchanti hai, kaushalya ne aniket ki sahi nas dabayi aur banda ek jhatke main sabhi subjects me paas aur annket paas aur avinash bhi paas…

Jald hi aniket ab college me jane wala tha aur uski jindagi me kuch anokhe badlav kuch anokhe mod aane wale the iski use khabar hi nahi thi….

Update 3​

To, pichle update me hamne padha tha ke kaise apne nautanki baj hero, Aniket ne jaise jaise karke apni maa ke diye challenge ko pura kar liya tha yani wo 10th ke exams paas kar chuka tha aur ab bari thi college me padarpan karne ki, ek nayi duniya dekhne ki ek nayi duniyadari samajhne ki

College jane ke khayal se hi aniket ekdum khush ho gaya tha, itna ke khushi me mare raat bhar use neend hi nahi aayi aur bhaisab subah subah mast naye kapde perfume wagaire lagake badhiya tayar hoke room ke baahar nikle

Baahar narayanrao nashta karte huye baithe the aur itni subah aniket ko is tarah tayar dekh kar unhe fullon ashcharya hua, matlab unke liye to anket ka is tarah subah tayar hona koi chamatkar hi tha, kaushalya kitchen me thi unhone wahi se use awaj lagaya

Narayanrao-arey kaushalya jara khudki se baahar dekhna to suraj kaunsi disha se nikla hai aaj, arey bhai hamare kuldipak aaj is samay pure ready hokar aaye hai, inki jara najar utaro bhai ye drishya roj roj nahi dekhne milenge (fir wo haste huye aniket ki taraf mudkar bole) ha tohamare kul ke chirag aaj subah subah kiski vaat lagane nikle ho

Aniket ke pehle nashta liya aur fir table par baithte huye narayanrao se nola

Aniket-papa, aaj ek baat puri imandari se sach sach batana, main sach me aapka beta hu ya main aaplogo ko mandir ki seedhiyo par mila tha

Aniket ka sawal usi ki tarah tha vichitra, par Narayanrao ko uske aise ajibogarib sawalo aur bato ki adat thi isiliye wo react na karte huye bole

Narayanrao- ab kya kare beta, ye aisa namuna hamare hi naseeb me tha, yakin na ho to hospital ke bills dikha du?

Bas an aniket ki nautanki shuru

Aniket-arey waah ab tak sambhal ke rakhe hai, aap thoda ruko papa, ek baar main kamane lag gaya na to aapki ye sari udhari chukka dunga, par ye bate chhodi aur ye batao ki aapko apne bacche ki koi chunta hai ya nahi, uski padhayi ki koi chinta?

Narayanrao(muskurate huye)- bas samajh gaya main tum kya kehna chahte ho, college kaise jaoge wo batao?

Aniket-kaise matlab, wo hai na aapki khatara..

Narayan-badhiya, bindast leke jao wo gadi mujhe waise bhi ab uski koi jarurat nahi hai

Aniket-hawww, fir aap ka is umra me paidal ghumoge, are aapki ye budhi haddiya is umra me itna kaam nahi sahengi tut jayengi, aapki khatara rehdo mere paas hai meri rampyari uspe chale jaunga main

(Rampyari ye aniket ke cycle ka naam hai)

Narayanrao-nahi nahi koi jarurat nahi maine waise bhi nayi gadi le li hai

Aniket-kya baat kar rahe ho? nayi gadi? Kab li?

Narayanrao-abi kal hi kharidi hai

Aniket-papa aako sharam nahi aayegi, aniket rane jisa handsome cool naujawan aapk khatara pe college jayega aur aap nayi gadi chalaoge, arey log kya kahenge wo dekho itna handsome ladka khatara pe ja raha hai aur uska bapu nayi gadi leke ghum raha hai

Narayanrao-ho gaya, kar li nautanki ye lo ab chabi pakdo apni gadi ki

Narayanrao ne apni jeb se nayi gadi ki chabi nikal ke aniket ke hatho me di aniket ne chabi li aur baahar jakar dekha to uske liye ek nayi splendor khadi thi (dekho waise to yaha moment bullet wala banta tha aur narayanrao bullet aasani se le bhi lete par kya hai na vyapari aadmi hai aur apni santan se bhali bhati parichit bhi to unhone bullet lene ka risk hi nahi liya :D par apna hero isme bhi khush hai)

Gadi dekhte hi aniket ekdum khush ho gaya aur wapis ander aate huye bola

Aniket-you are great bapu, ye bhi theek hai par aapko meri padhayi ki chinta hai ya nahi?

Narayanrao- anya apne baap ko mat sikha.

Tujhe to ye bhi nahi pata hga ki main CKMB college ka ek director hu

Narayanrao ki baat sun kar aniket ko ashcharya hua

Aniket-bapu sach me kya? Par ek batao tum jaise aadmi ko director kisne banaya

Narayanrao-nalayak ek laat marunga na yahi to kamar tut jayegi aise baat karte hai kya apne pita se, aur main apne time me 12th tak padha hu samjha wo to baadme tere dadaji ne mujhe kahi jane nahi diya aur us college ki jamin tere dadaji ne us trust ko di thi isiliye tu wahi admission lega, maine kal hi waha ke principal se baat kar li hai

Aniket-arey gazab! Par bapu ek aur kaam tha

Narayanrao-malum hai, jaha tu jayega teri puch bhi jayegi, avi ke bare me bhi baat kar li hai, jao ab lagao vaat college ki

Aniket-bapu, I love you, aaj to aapko chumne ka man kar raha hai

Narayanrao- aye hatt! Wo adhikar teri maa ke alawa kisi ka nahi hai

Par aniket to anket hai to rukega thode hi usne apne bapu ko gale laga liya aur dono galo pe chum bhi liya

Narayanrao- aye kaushalya, ye tumhara nalayak beta tumhari property ke kabja karna chahta hai

Ab iske aage koi kuch bolta uske pehle hi aniket waha se nikal gaya aur narayanrao aasman ki taraf dekhte huye bole

Narayanrao-hey bhagwan kya hoga is ladke ka

Aniket apni shart jeet gaya tha aur uske badle me mili huyi nayi gadi leke aniket sidha avinash ke paas aaya, avinash uska tab se dost thajab dono ko chaddi pehanna bhi nahi aata tha, ghar ki haalat ekdum garib usme bhi uske pita bachpan me hi gujar gaye the, avi ko uski maa ne hi paal ke bada kiya tha, avi aniket pe jaan chidakta tha aur aniket ne bhi kabhi use bhai se kam nahi mana tha, dono me ladaiya bhi khub hoti thi par dono hi ekdusre ke bagair nahi reh sakte the, is waqt avinash apne ghar ke aangan me pair pasar ke baitha hua tha

Aniket-avya halkat ab tak tayar kyu nahi hua chal apne ko CKMB college jana hai admission lene

Par avinash ke kuch jyada utsah nahi dikhaya

Avinash-nahi yaar CKMB college nahi jhepega meko

Aniket-dekh dera baap upper jane ke pehle paise deke gaya tha meko, ab natak band kar aur chal

Avinash-nahi bhai samajh

Aniket-chal udhar deta hu aisa samajh, aur tu chinta mat kar ha main ek ek paisa wasool karunga aur agar jyada hi jarurat huyi to meri shadi me khana parosne ke liye rakh lunga teko, ab ye Ayesha jhulka jaisa muh band kar aur mast bacchan jaisa tayar ho aur chal, nahi to gand pe laat padegi yaad rakhiyo

Aniket ki baat sun kar avinash uske gale lag gaya

Aniket-abe kya subah subah sasural simar ka dekh ke aaya hai kya? Chal natak band kar aur tayar ho

Avinash 10 minute me tayar hokar baahar aaya aur use dekhte hi aniket ki hasi chhut gayi

Aniket-maine bacchan bola tha tu to johnny lever ban ke aa gaya, :lol1: chal baith gadi pe

Dono dost college pahuche to waha admission ke liye lambi line lagi huyi thi

Avinash-anya abe kitni lambi line hai, apne ko milega na admission?

Aniket-avya apne baap ka college hai apne ko admission nahi mila to college hi band kar denge BC, tu tension mat le re bindass chal

Avinash-kaha?

Aniket-arey bapu ne principal se baat kar li hai, unko malum hai ham aane wale hai

Dono bagair admission ki line me lage aage jane lage, aniket aage ja hi raha tha ke koi unke beech ke rakte me khada tha, aniket ne use kandhe se pakad ke side hataya aur chalet huye bola

Aniket-aye chal na baju hat

Wo aage badha hi tha ke piche se ek awaj aaya

“ouch! Aye andhe ho kya, aankhen fut gayi hai kya?”

Awaj sunte hi aniket ruk gaya, avinash ne bhi wo awaj sun liya tha, dono ne piche palatkar dekha to pehle to unki aankhen ashcharya se badi ho gayi fir dono ne ekdusre ki taraf dekha aur jor jor se hasne lage…….

To Be Continued……

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Aniket ne use kandhe se pakad ke side hataya aur chalet huye bola

Aniket-aye chal na baju hat

Wo aage badha hi tha ke piche se ek awaj aaya

“ouch! Aye andhe ho kya, aankhen fut gayi hai kya?”

Awaj sunte hi aniket ruk gaya, avinash ne bhi wo awaj sun liya tha, dono ne piche palatkar dekha to pehle to unki aankhen ashcharya se badi ho gayi fir dono ne ekdusre ki taraf dekha aur jor jor se hasne lage…….

“hasne jaisa kya hua hai abhi yaha :mad:”

Aniket- o hamper gussa nahi hone ka, hamari koi galti nahi hai hamne to tumhe ladka samjha tha ab tum ladki ho isme ham kya kare

Aniket aura vi fir jor jor se hasne lage jisse wo ladki aur bhi jyada chidh gayi

Ladki- tabhi to maine kaha na ki aankhen fut gayi hai kya tumhari?

Aniket(hasi control karte hue)- dekho main manta hu ke tum jo keh rahi ho sahi hai par mujhe ab bhi tumse koi ladki wahi feeling nahi aa rahi hai, kabhi dekha hai apne aap ko aaine me?

Aniket ki baat bhi sahi thi waise, pairo me woodland ke jute, jeans uspar tshirt aur jacket aur ye sab kam tha to hairstyle puri boycut, us ladki ko piche se dekhkar koi nahi keh sakta tha ke wo ladki hai, usme uska swabhav bhi pura ladko jaisa, bolna kisi ‘bhai’ jaisa aur gussa to mano uski naak pe baitha hua tha, wo ladki gusse me hi boli

Ladki-ab samajh gaye na chalo ab niklo idharse :chalnikal:

Aniket(hath jodte hue)- mujhse galti ho gayi deviji I am sorry, ab khush, avya bsdk tub hi bol sorry

Fir avinash ne bhi kisi agyadhari balak jaise dono hath jod ke us ladki ko sorry bola aur wo dono waha se jane lage fir bhi unhe us ladki ki piche se awaj sunai di

Ladki-sale lafange !

Ab us ladki ke muh se apne aur aniket ke liye lafanga shabh sunkar apne avinash bhai bhadak gaye na par aniket se use sambhal liya aur wo dono principal ke cabin me pahuche, principal saahab abhi aaye nahi the wo aniket aur avinash unka intajar karte huye baahar hi ruk gaye, avinash ab bhi gusse me tha

Avinash-uski maa ki….

BC usko sorry bola fir bhi lafange bol ke gayi yaar apne ko

Aniket-avya tu jab bhi bolta hai na nuksan ka hi bolta hai

Avinash ko kuch samajh nahi aaya ke aniket kis bare me bol raha hai

Avinash-ab isme kya nuksan ho gaya tera

Aniket- samjhata hu, dekh, mera bapu jo hai na wo ek number ka vyapari aadmi hai

Avinash-ab isme kaka kaha se aa gaye beech me:hmm:

Aniket-bsdk chalti train me mat ghus aur jo bol raha hu sun beech me mat bol, ab sun, mere bapu ne meko ek baat sikhayi hai, hamara jo mood hota hai na wo lakh rupaye ka hota hai fir ye hamne decide karna hota hai ki hamare sath jo ghatna huyi hai wo hamara mood kharab karne layak hai ya nahi, agar hai to bindass apna mood kharab karne ka aur bhid jane ka samne wale se par agar wo baat faltu hai to ham apna lakh rupaye ka mood kyu kharab kare? Aur chutiye apan ne dekhna chahiye tha wo ladki hai apan log to sidhe nikal gaye the to galti to apni thin a ab jab gutter me mu dala ho hai to sun le na yaar aur waise bhi kya galat boli wo apne se bade lafenge is college me dhundh ke bhi nahi milenge

Avinash(hath jod ke)- baba aniket tum dhanya ho

Aniket-isiliye hajar baar bola hai teko mere sath rehte huye ache se raha kar log tere sath meko bhi lafanga samajh lete hai

Aniket ki baat sun ke avi ne mast ek mukka uski pith me jad diya

Avinash-bsdk!

Itne me principal saahab aa gaye aur dono principal se ekdum sajjan balak banke mile aur dono ka college me admission final ho gaya, ab us bechare principal ko thodehi pata tha ke jin sajjan baccho ko unhone admission diya hai wo pipal ke ped ke bhoot hai, khair chalta hai galtoya to sabse hoti hai principal se bhi ho gayi :D

Dekhte dekhte college bhi shuru ho gaya aur sath hi shuru hua avi ka aniket ke kaan pakana

Avinash-anya college me naye log milenge be, apne se dosti jamegi na unki?

Par aniket ekdum relax tha

Aniket-dosti na jamne me kya hai, apna funda clear hai bhidu ya to unhe apne rang me rang lene ka ya khud unke rang me rang jane ka

Dono class me pahuche, avinash vyarth hi chinta kar raha tha, aniket character hi aisa tha ke usko bahut se log jaante the, class me bhi kayi aise log the jo aniket ko jaante the aur unme se kaiyo ko aniket bhi jaanta tha, aur jis ladki se wo log us din takraye the wo bhi usi class me thi aur us ladki ne in dono ko dekhte hi apna cehra dusri taraf ghuma liya, ye baat avinash ke dhyan me aa gayi par apna hero ko apni hi masti me tha isiliye use to is baat ka pata bhi nahi chala

College ka pehla lecture shuru hua, ab pehla lecture tha sab shant baithe huye the aur isme apna hero bhi apvad nahi tha wo bhi shant baitha hua tha fir introduction ka daur chala aur lecture khatam hua

Ab apne hero ko itna samay shant baitha jamne wala tha kya, aap log batao? Ye to uske character me hi nahi tha jaise hi lecture khatam hua aur teacher baahar gaye aniket bol pada

Aniket-avya chal

Aur avinash bhi bagair kuch puche aniket ke piche ho liya

Avinash-abe par jana kaha hai? Abhi to pehla hi lecture hua hai

Aniket-abe yede pata nahi kya mahadev ke darshan karne se pehle nandi ke darshan karne padte the nahi to mahadev ke darshan adhure mane jate hai ab chal

Avinash-bhai tu theek hai na, ab kya mandir chalna hai kya apne ko? Aisa mat kar bhai tujhe mandir me dekh ke bhagwan bhi bhag jayenge waha se

Aniket-abe kam dimag, tere baap ne tera naam hi galat rakha hai, avinash battry rakhna tha jyada sense banta , upper wala akal baat raha tha tab hagne gaya tha kya

Avinash-na be tere sath ghum raha tha, ab jara samjhe aise bata, chutiya hamehsa ghuma ke baat karta hai

Aniket-arey avya tujhe pata hai, student college me admission lete hai ye multah ek andhashraddha hai, asal me admission canteen me liya jata hai re, college ka asli maja canteen me aata hai aur asal namune wahi paye jate hai samjha battry :D

Avinash-ha ha wo sab theek hai waise bhi bhuk lag reli hai apun ko chalo canteen me

Aur fir dono us jagah pahuche jaha college ke sabhi dham ek hote hai, college canteen me 😌

Waha bhi aniket ke kuch pehchanwale the hi bas fr kyat ha dhingana chalu :D

Dekhte dekhte ek hafta beet chuka tha college shuru huye, wo ladki ab bhi jab aniket ko dekhti to gusse se hi dekhti thi par aniket ko use koi fark hi nahi padta tha sab ekdum mast chal raha tha tabhi ek din ek ladke ne ek ladki ko dekh k eek abharda tipanni paas kar di aur aniket wahi usi ladke ke piche tha usne wo sun li aur us ladke ko roka

Aniket-bhai teri behan kaunse school me hai re

Ladka-tu kaun be ye puchne wala?

Aniket-tera baap!

Aur ekdum ‘tadak!’

Aniket ne us ladke ke kaan ke niche ek jordar thappad jad diya tha aur wo kuch samajh ya kar pata isse pehle hi uski gardan pakad ke bola

Aniket- bsdk baap ka college hai mere dobara aisi neech harkar karte huye dikha na to gand pe aisi laat marunga ke dobara jindagi me kabhi pant nahi pehan payega

Par isme bhi avinash beech pe bol pada

Avinash-abe pant ka kya logic hai isme 🤔 ?

Aniket-iski gand pe laat maar ke isi dono tange tod dunga to ye pant kaise pehnega be?

Itne me wo ladka aniket ko maarne ke liye aage badha aur niket aur avinash ne pure college ke saamne use jam ke pel diya

College shuru huye ek hi hafta hua tha aur aniket aur avinash dono principal ke cabin me the, aniket ne jab jhagde ka kaaran abataya to principal ko bhi unhe saja dena uchit nahi laga to unhone aainda aisa ka karne ka kehkar unhe chhod diya

Dono principal ke office se baahar aaye to saamne wo ladki thi, wo sidha aniket ke saamne aayi aur kamar pe hath rakh ke rasta rok ke khadi ho gayi, usko aise dekh ke apne dono punter bhi ruk gaye aniket kuch kehta isse pehle hi us ladki ne bolna shuru kiya

Ladki-main thi waha jab wo lafda hua, tune kya solid rakh ke di yaar us ladke ko, main tabhi samajh gayi thi ke tumhe pehchanne me galti ho gayi hai

Aniket ko kuch sujh hi nahi raha tha ke iskar pkya bole tabhi wo ladki hath aage karte huye boli

Ladki- hi main Komal,

friends?

Aniket(komal se hath milate huye)- sure par main tumhe bata du ke mere dost hamesha kehte hai mujhse dosti karne se behtar hai kisi Bandar ko paal lena, dosti karne se pehle soch lo..

Komal-aajtak mujhe koi meri takkar ka mila nahi hai isiliye koi dost bhi nahi par par tum bhi meri dosti halke me mat lena

Aniket-theek hai komal, apni dosti pakki, kal milte hai..

Itna bol ke wo dono waha se chale gaye…….

To Be Continued….

🔥 ULTIMATE STORY CONT

Update 5​

Komal Patil, Maharashtra kesri pailwaan sayajirao patil ki kanya, komal jab paida huyi thi tab dikhne me kapas ki tarah gori aur najuk thi, uski maa ki jid ke chalet uska naam komal rakha gaya, par potti maa ki najar bacha kar apne baap par hi gayi, komal to sayajirao patil ki jaan thi, apne baap ke alawa kisi ke baap se na darne wali ladki, uska sirf naam hi komal thabaki ladki full rowdy thi, aaj tak na jane kitne hi ladko ko usne patak patak ke mara tha, aur uske isi rowdy swabhav aur dehshat ki wajah se uske aaspaas koi fatakta nahi tha, ladke to ladke ladkiya bhi usse dur bhagti thi par komal ko isse jyada fark nahi padta thaw o to apni hi masti me magan rehti thi…

Us din aniket ke sath pehli mulakat me use aniket par kafi gussa aaya tha, aniket ne jaldi se sorry bol diya isiliye us din is mahamaya se bach gaya tha par baad me komal ke samajh me aaya ke wo jaisa soch rahi thi aniket waisa ladka nahi tha, wo to ladkiyo ki ijjat karne walo me se tha, us din komal ke dhyan me aaya tha ke admission wale din aniket se jo use dhakka laga thaw o galti se laga tha aur iske piche aniket ka koi galat intesion nahi tha, wo to pehle din se aniket ka tiraskar kar rahi thi par aniket ne ek baar bhi uski taraf palatkar nahi dekha tha, aura b komal ke dhyan me aa gaya tha ke aniket hi hai wo uske takkar ka hai :cool:

Agle din jab komal college me pahuchi to aniket class me nahi tha aur komal bhi sanmajh gayi ke ye namuna canteen me hi milega aur aniket wahi tha bhi :D, komal bindass jakar aniket ke table par uske saamne wali khurchi par baith gayi

Komal-anya abhi to class me dikha kar, padhna vadhva nahi hai kya

Komal ne ekdum bindass tone me kaha jise sun kar aniket aur avinash thode shock huye aur ek dusre ko dekhne lage tab komal ne wapis kaha

Komal-kya hua? Bhul gaye? Kal hi to dosti huyi na apni, main komal

Tab aniket ne kaha

Aniket-nahi wo sahi hai sab yaad hai mujhe, aur batao kammo kya chal raha teri jindagi me?

Ab komal thoda shock huyi ke ye bande ne use direct kammo bola

Komal-kya bola?

Aniket- arey main aise hi bolta hu, komal avinash aise awaj dene se lagta hai kisi apne se nahi dur wale insaan se baat kar rahe ho, ab dekho ye mera langoti yaar par isse pucho aaj tak maine ise kabhi ‘avinash’ aisa bol ke awaj diya ho to?

Ab dono avi ki taraf dekhne lage aur avi bhi kuch sochte huye bola

Avinash-ek baar tune aise awaj to diya hai

Aniket-abe kab?

Avinash(haste huye)- abe yede abi abi :lol1:

Avinash hi baat pe teeno kho kho kar ke hasne lage aur usne aise ichitra hasne se pure canteen ke log unhe dekh rahe the par in teeno ko koi fark hi nahi pad raha thaw o apni hi masti me the aur us din se aniket komal ko kammo hi kehta tha, teeno class me aaye, unke liye last bench reserve rehta tha, pura din teeno sath me rehte the, aniket aur komal ko to ekdusre ko chidhane ke alawa koi kaam hi nahi tha aur avi uske sath reh ke pure maje leta tha unke jhagde ke ha par agar koi aur inke beech me bol de to wo to giyo samajh jao

Ek baar komal ko uske class me ki ek dost ne kammo bol ke awaj de diya, bas wahi baat bigad gayi aur madam bhadak gayi aur us ladki se boli

Komal-oye chimkandi! Kammo kisko boli be, dobara mujhe kammo bola na to baal noch lungi tere

Komal ka ye avtar us ladki ke liye naya thaw o to bechari komal ke in madhur shabdo ko sun kar rone lagi par komal ko isse kaha kuch fark padta ha agar uski jagah koi ladka hota to…..:D khair

Komal-oye second hand nirupa roy ye rone dhone ka natak dusri taraf samjhi #nomelodrama ab chatko idhar se :chalnikal:

Wo bechari ladki waha se chali gayi aur utne me waha aniket ki entry huyi

Aniket-kya hua kammo subah subah karele ka juice pi liya kya?

Komal(gusse se aniket ko dekhte huye)- anya gussa dilane ke kaam mat kar faltu me ulte hath hi pad gayi to daat waat gir jayenge tere

Aniket-arey shant gadadhari bheem chal teko thanda cold drink pitala hu

Itne me professor class me aa gaye aur inlogo ko class se baahar jate dekh pucha

Professor- o kidhar chale?

Aniket ne bhi twarit jawab diya

Aniket-sir dadi off ho gayi hai sir bas udhar hi jar aha hu

Professor-Mr.

Aniket Rane main tumhare pure khandan ko pehchanta hu samjhe tumhari dadi ko upper gaye kai saal ho gaye hai, mujhe mat sikhao

Aniket-arey sir baat to suno aap, meri nahi is bechari ki dadi (komal ki taraf ishara karte huye)

Komal se bhi dukhi chehra banaya aur teeno class se satak gaye aur unko jata dekh professor bhi man hi man bole “ye kabhi nahi sudhar sakte”

Teeno canteen me jakar baithe aur baithte huye komal ne ek mukka aniket ke pet me jad diya

Komal-nalayak meri dadi ko maarne pe kyu tula hai

Aniket-wo chhod kammo mera mudda abhi dusra hai, meko to tere ladki hone pe doubt hai yaar, kya hath hai tera, antadiya maggi jaisi jama ho gayi lagta ander

Komal(haste huye)- kya ladkiyo jaise rote ho re

Aniket(avi se)- avya teko ek baat malum hai kya, iske baap ko ladki chahiye thi aur maa ko ladka, dono ne mil ke uperwale ke itna pressure dala, itna pressure dala ke wo bhi pareshan ho gaya aur dono ki mange ek hi baar me puri kar di

Avinash samajh gaya tha ke aniket kya bolna chahta hai pa fie bhi bola

Avinash-bhai par ye to ladki hai

Aniket-galat femi hai re teri ye ladki ki khal me ladka hai re

Dono ekdusre ko tali dete huye hasne lage aura b komal ka para aur bhi garam aur wo avinash se boli

Komal-avi, tune kabhi socha hai tu bina daato ka kaise dikhega?

Avinash sambhal gaya aur aniket se bola

Avinash-anya pailwan ka mood kharab hai bhai sambhal ke!

Komal-avya jyada bola to tere 64 daat yahi girenge abhi

Ab is baat pe aniket ka bolna to banta than a

Aniket- 64 nahi kammo insaan ke 32 daat hote hai

Komal-mujhe pata that u beech me bolega hi isliye 32 tere bhi gine hai, bol girau

Aniket- o sitaram kaka(canteen owner) jaldi ek chilled colddrink do hamara pailwan jyada garam hai aaj

Dekhte dekhte kuch aur din bite, pure college me ab aisi afwah thi ke komal aur aniket lovebirds hai, dono dinbhar sath hi ghumte the aur jis hisab se indian mentality kaam karti hai koi bhi yahi sochta ke komal aur aniket ke beech kuch chal raha hai, aur yahi afwah ekdin komal ke kano par padi aur wo aniket ko dhundhne lagi aur akhir aniket use mila library me, komal dandanate huye library me ghusi aur boli

Komal-anya mujhe important baat karni hai

Komal ka awaj kafi jor se tha to librarian ne unki taraf dekh kar “shhhhh” karne komal ko chup rehne ka ishara kiya par madam uspe bhi bhadak gayi

Komal-yaha padhke koi PM nahi banne wala jo aap chup kara rahe ho ruko yaha important baat chal rahi hai (aniket ki taraf mud ke) anya akkhe college ko lagta hai tere aur mere beech kuch chal raha hai, jo bhi hai wo abhi clear karo

Komal ki baat sunkar aniket full serious ho gaya aur uska aisa serious chehra dekh kar komal ko tension aa raha tha kyuki usne aniket ko itna serious kabhi nahi dekha tha aur sirf usne hi nahi avi ne bhi aniket ko kabhi itna serious nahi dekha tha, sab aniket ki taraf dekh rahe the ki wo ab kya bolega aur aniket se komal ka hath pakda aur use library ke baahar le aaya…….

To Be Continued…..

Update 6​

Komal ki baat sunkar aniket full serious ho gaya aur uska aisa serious chehra dekh kar komal ko tension aa raha tha kyuki usne aniket ko itna serious kabhi nahi dekha tha aur sirf usne hi nahi avi ne bhi aniket ko kabhi itna serious nahi dekha tha,

Komal-anya sare college ko lagta hai mere aur tumhare beech kuch chal raha hai, agar aisa hai to mujhe job hi hai sach sach batao aur abhi ke abhi batao

Komal serious thi is mudde me aniket ke chehre se bhi pata chal raha tha ke wo majak ke mood me nahi hai, aniket komal ko library ke baahar le aaya tha aura b wo komal aur avinash ek side khade hokar baat kar rahe the

Aniket-kammo pehle shant ho jao aur puri baat batao, kya hua hai?

Komal- tumhara shant gaya gaddhe me mujhe mere sawaal ka jawab chahiye faltu ki jhanjhat nahi

Par aniket ab bhi use samjha raha tha

Aniket-kammo itna gussa mat kar apan is bare ne baad me shanti se baat karte hai na

Komal-anya baad me nahi ha jo kuch bhi bolna hai job hi baat hai abhi hogi

Aniket ka chehra kamal ka serious tha aur aakhir me usne komal ka hath pakda aur bolna shuru kiya

Aniket-hmm, ab jab baat nikal hi gayi hai to main batata hu par usse pehle promise karo ki isse hamari dosti me koi fark nahi padega

Komal-anya ab agar tumne faltu ka ek bhi shabd bola na to main bata rahi hu tum sidhe hospital me miloge

Aniket ne ekdum shanti se komal ka hath pakda hua tha aur uske aankhon me dekhte huye aniket bola

Aniket-kammo, agar is duniya ki sari ladkiya mar gayi ho aur tum akeli bachi ho to..

Aniket ne ek lamba pause liya jisse komal ki bhi bechaini badhne lagi

Komal-to kya?

Aniket ab komal se thoda dur sarka aur fir bola

Aniket- agar is duniya ki sari ladkiya mar gayi ho aur tum akeli ladki bachi ho to…to main atmahatya kar lunga par tumse shadi nahi karunga :lol:

Aur boooom….

apni baat bol ke komal ke kuch bolne ya samajhne se pehle hi aniket waha se haste huye bhag liya

Komal-iski to :mad2: anya ruk abhi batati hu tujhe

Aur komal bhi aniket ke piche bhagi use pakadne ke liye par aniket kuch komal ke hath laga nahi, thoda samay bhag ke komal thak gayi aur wahi haafte huye chilla ke aniket se boli

Komal-bhag bhag ke kitna bhagoge kabhi to pakad me aaoge hi, fir dekhna agar maine tumhari haddiya nahi todi na to mera naam bhi komal nahi

Aur fir komal piche jakar ek bench par baith gayi aur abhi thoda hi samay beeta tha ke aniket ne aakar use piche se pakka pakad liya taki ye mahamaya uspe hamla na kar sakte (safety first you know :D )

Komal-anya chhod, chhod mujhe aaj to tu gaya

Aniket-arey yaar sorry na yaar kammo par main kya karu, tu kahi se bhi kisi se bhi kuch bhi sun ke aati hai aur mera dimag khati hai, abhi jab tak tu maaf nahi karegi main nahi chhodne wala

Komal ne apne aap ko aniket se chhudane ki kafi koshish ki par sab vifal raha, aniket ki pakad majboot thi jiske aage komal ki ek na chali aur wo thak gayi

Komal- jao kiya maaf ab chhodo 😏

Aniket-na aise nahi pehle apne baap ki kasam kha ki maregi nahi fir chhodunga

Komal-theek hai mere baap I unke baap ki kasam khati hu ke nahi marungi, ab chhod

Ab aniket ke komal kok chhod diya aur uske bagal me aake baith gaya aur dono apni hi is uljulool harkat pe hasne lage

Komal-sala halkat nautanki

Aniket-sorry kammo par tu bhi kya yaar ye ulti seedhi bate sunti rehti hai

Komal-its ok

(ab aaplog batao yaha baat clear ho gayi majak karke ho gaya ab koi aadmi hame maarne ke liye hamare piche bhage aur bagair mare maaf kar de to aap uski dobara unglli karoge kya, nahi na par apne aniket babu aise nahi hai padho aage)

Aniket-kammo tu na sach me bahut achi hai re par main mar jaunga par ter se shadi nahi karunga

Komal-ab tu marega beta ek baar maaf kar diya dobara wahi baat boli na ab tu gaya

Aniket to apni baat bolke waha se bhag liya tha aur komal ke paas se jate huye ek ladke ke hath se hockey stick chini aur aniket ke piche bhagi aur isi ke sath hockey stick ka jordar prahar aniket ke pichwade pe hua ‘ui maa’ karte huye aniket pure college me apna pichwada bachate huye daud raha tha aur usi ke piche komal daud rahi thi, ab in dono ko pura college pehchanta tha isiliye koi inke beech me nahi aaya wahi apne avi babu mast canteen pe chai pite huye show ka maja le rahe the

Iske baad aniket do din tak college ki aur nahi gaya aura b aniket nahi to avinash bhi nahi avi bhi college nahi gaya waise iska ek kaaran aur bhi tha, aniket se chacha ka ladka yash aaya hua tha aur pura time aniket aur avinash yash ke sath hi the (waise ye yash important character hai ye yaad rakhna story end hone ke baad viva lunga :D )

Yash kal raat wapis chala gaya tha raat ko uske sath der tak ghumne ke baad naiket subah der tak sota raha itne me use apni maa kaushalya ka awaj aaya

Kaushalya-aniket utho dekho ghadi me kitne baj rahe hai

Aniket ne baat ko unsuna karne huye karwat badly aur chader tan ke wapis so gaya

Kaushalya-aniket tumse milne koi aaya hai utho

Aniket(chidh kar)- usko bolo mar gaya hu main aur sone do

Uske baad kuch samay shanti me bita aur fir aniket ke kano me ek awaj gunji

“anya abi uthega ya laat maar ke uthau”

Ye awaj komal ka tha aur komal ka awaj sunte hi aniket ne chader se mu nikal ke dekha

Aniket-kammo, iski ma aka , tu yaha kya kar rahi hai be, akkal wakkal hai teko sidhe ghar aa gayi be aur maa ne dekha kya teko

Komal-arey Mr.

Nautanki unse mile bagair main yaha tak kaise aaungi na

Komal ki bat sun ke aniket se bed pe pade pade hi sar pe hath maar liya

Aniket-lag gayi vaat, mata denger hai yaar meri

Komal-kuch bhi mat bol ha kaku to sweet hai yaar aur tere don bhi ache hai

Aniket- kya :shocking: bapu se bhi mil li tu, arey deva!

Komal-pehle uth tu

Aniket-nahi tu baahar ja pehle

Komal-tu wapis so jayega

Aniket-abe nahi sounga mere pure khandan ki need ud gayi hai yaha tu ja baahar ja

Komal-arey tum chader se baahar nikal pehle

Aniket-bilkul nahi pehle baahar ja tu

Komal-anya kya tarika hai ye meko bhaga raha hai tu

Aur komal ne ekdum se chader khich li, ab apna hero baniyan aur shorts me so raha to aur komal ke samne is halat me aane se bhai k ki najro me bhai ki ijjat khatre me aa gayi na :D wo kaise filmo me heroine sadi ka pallu sakarne ke baad apne hath chati pe rah leti hai aniket ne bhi waise hi kiya

Aniket-kammo besharam ladki sharam nahi aati teko

Komal-isme kya sharmana hai, shorts aur baniyan pehni hai na tune fir jyada nakhre kyu kar raha hai aur bhul gaya mere bapu pehalwan hai aur pehalwan single piece me rehte hai

Aniket-nirlajja ladki tu baahar ja pehle baad me gyan diyo

Aur komal ko baahar jane ka bolke bhai khud hi bathroom me ghus gaya

Aniket tayar hokar baahar aaya to komal baahar uske maa baap ke sath baate kar rahi thi, aniket maa se bola

Aniket-maa late ho gaya hai main canteen me hi kha lunga kuch chalo komal madam

Aniket jakar apni gadi nikalne laga tab komal boli

Komal-kyu meri gadi pe baithne me sharam aati hai?

Kaushalya ye sab kitchen se dekh rahi thi aur muskura rahi thi

Aniket-theek hai la de chabi

Komal-kyu mere piche baithne se ijjat kam ho jayegi?

Aniket-abey yaar 😩 subah subah krele ka juice piker aayi hai kya chal

Aniket kurkur karte huye komal ke piche gadi pe baith gaya aur dono college ke liye nikal gaye

Wahi kaushalya ko apni hasi hi control nahi ho rahi thi aniket ki halat dekh kar, unhe to bas filhaal isi chiz ki khushi ho rahi thi ke koi to hai jo unke chiranjiv ki bolti band kar sakta hai :D

Update 7​

Aniket aur komal dono college ke liye nikal gaye the

Aniket-teko kuch samajh hai, akkal hai tere main, tu ghar pea a gayi be direct aur maa ne kuch nahi bola teko

Komal-faltu ki badbad kara lo bas, teri mummy sweet hai re, tere jaisa rakshas kaise unke naseeb main aa gaya yahi samajhnahi aata

Aniket-sweet? Beta meri mata ek baar bhadak gayi na sari sweetness nikal jayegi, jaan de chhod meri dost hai aisa hi bataya na?

Komal-maine na unko bola ki unki hone wali bahu apne pati parmeshwar se milne aayi hai to mujhe milne diya jaye :tongue:

Aniket-thobda dekha hai kabhi apna aaine me aai badi bahu banne wali

Dono college me pahuche ab class me baithne ka mood to nahi tha (waise bhi hota kab hai inka classes karne ka mood padhai karna to inko sabse jyada pasand hi na :sigh: ) dono canteen me pahuche

Komal-anya to ab ye to decided hai ki tu merese shadi nahi karega to ab mujhe bata ki teko kaisi ladki pasand hai

Komal ki baat sunkar aniket babu khayalo ki duniya me pahuch gaye aur komal ne unhe wapis dharti pe laya

Komal-ab agar koi ghatiya picture ka dialogue mara to kaan ke niche khane tayar rehna

Aniket-aye chup! Ladki aisi ho jise dekhte hi kano me ghanti bajni chahiye

Komal-gajab, to pujari ki ladki pata lene ka fir uska baap dinbhar kaan me ghanti bajata raega :lol1:

Aniket ne pehle to komal ko gusse se dekha aur fir apna mood badalte huye bola

Aniket-ye pyaar ishq mohabbat ki bate hai kammo rani tum nahi samjhogi

Komal-aur mujhe samajhna bhi nahi hai, thanki you, faltu me babu shona baccha baby karte huye apni raat kaun kali karega, maine dekha hai ladkiyo ko 22-23 saal se ghodo ko mera sonu pillu baby bolte huye, kasam se aisa thappad maarne ka man karta hai na nibba ninni sale

Aniket-kammo ye sab ladkiyo ki bate hai re teko nahi samjhengi

Komal-ha to na samjhe tu ye bata apne college me hai kya koi aisi ghanti wali

Aniket-nahi na yaar, agar hoti to tu ab tak meri shadi me naach chuki hoti

Komal-hogi bhi par tumhe tumhari harkato se fursat milegi tab dhyan doge na?

Aniket- chal ke dekha jaye kya? Ek chakker senior ke class ki taraf bhi daal lenge

Komal-apne se badi ladki chalegi?

Aniket-usme kya hai, sachin Tendulkar ne bhi apne se badi ladki se shadi ki hai

Komal-anya ab teri barabari sachin the great Tendulkar se hogi :sigh: shakal dekhi hai apni kabhi tune kaha sachin legend kaha tu jhand haadd comparison karne me bhi sharam aa rahi hai :sigh:

Aniket-shabass! Tere jaise dost agar ho to dushman ki jarurat hi nahi hai main waise hi barbad ho jaunga

Komal-ha chal cha lab jyada nautanki mat kar, tere jaise kaiyo patak ke mara hai :heh:

Aniket-kammo tune sach me ladko ko mara hai ya bas hamper dhaus jamati rehti hai

Komal-dikhau maar ke :huh:

Aniket-nahi! Us din ki hockey stick hai dhyan me

Komal-anya ek idea hai, abhi mid break hoga apan kya karte hai sedhiyo ke paas jakar khade ho jate hai jaha se sab niche aayenge aur mast ladkiyo ko line marenge

Aniket-kammo main tujhe kya samajhta tha aur tu kya nikli, tu to ek number ki mawali nikli re :sigh:

Komal-chal chal nautanki baad me karna

Dono canteen se baahar nikle aur decide ki huyi jagah par jakar khade huye, jaise hi break ki bell baji waise sabhi students class se baahar nikalne lage aur itne me avinash bhi waha pahuch gaya

Avinash-anya yaha kya kar raha bhai

Ab aniket to ladkiyo ko dekhne me busy tha to komal ne jawab diya

Komal-ladkiyo pe line maarne aaya hai

Ab avinash ke liye ye naya tha kyuki aniket ne aajtak aisa kabhi nahi kiyia tha ha par ye baat bhi satya thi ke wo kab kya karega iska koi andaja nahi laga sakta tha

Avinash-ye kya nawa chutiyap hai, anya ye komal ke chakker me mat pad tu lagta hai kaka ko batana padega ye komal bigad rahi hai tujhe

Komal-avya kya bola dobara bolna :huh:

Komal ne jaise

hi avi ko gusse se dekha to avi samajh gaya ki use bhi maar pad sakti hai aur is maamle me to aniket bachane bhi nahi ayega isiliye baat sambhalte huye bola

Avinash-hehe ab main maskhari bhi nahi kar sakta kya 😅

Komal-hmm good boy

Fir komal avinash ke paas sarki aur dheere se usme avinash ke kaan me kuch bola aura b avinash bhi unme shamil ho gaya, wahi aniket aane jane wali har ladki ko dekh raha tha aur aakhir kaar komal boli

Komal-ani ek bhi ladki pasand nahi aayi kya

Aniket-nahi na yaar

Komal-mujhe to tumhari chinta hone lagi hai ab, suna tha bhagwan ne sabse liye Jodi banayi hoti hai par tumhari lagta hai bhrun hatya me maar to nahi gayi na ( well yaha ye line as a joke likhi gayi hai par this is not a joke ‘SAVE THE GIRL CHILD’ beti bachao beti padhao aur ab aage padho)

Par aniket ne komal ki baat ko ansuna kar diya aura b tak lagbhag sbahi ladkiya class se baahar aa chuki thi aura b aakhri do ladkiya class se baahar aayi aur unlogo se thoda aage badhi to komal ne avinash ko kuch ishara kiya aur usne apne hath ki do ungliya muh me daalte huye ek sansanit siti bajayi aur komal ne paas se ek kankar utha kar ek ladki ki pith pe mara

Abhi abhi kya hua ye aniket ke kuch samajh hi nahi aaya wo bas wahi khade khade dekhta raha aur jis ladki ko kankar laga tha wo mud kar in logo ke paas aayi aur gusse me pucha

Ladki-kisne kiya ye ?

Aur avinash aur komal ne bagair ek pal ki raah dekhe aniket ki or ishara kar diya

“murkh,nalayak, halkat, besharam, kutta”

Aisi galiya dete huye aniket ke kuch bolne se pehle hi

‘chataak!’

Aniket ke kaan ke niche laga ke wo ladki pair patakte huye waha se nikal gayi

Aniket ko to din me tare najar aa gaye the aur wo bechara apna gaal sehlate huye piche muda to ye dono rakshas avnash aur komal use thappad khata dekh jor jor se has rahe the

Avinash- :lotpot: sale ye komal ne teko chane ke jhad pe chadhaya aur tu chad bhi gaya ab kha thappad, usdin ka pura badla nikala hai isne :lol1:

Aniket-harami kammo, khali fokat ijjat duba di yaar tune ab nahi bachegi tu

Aniket ne komal ka hath pakad ke pith ki taraf mod diya

Komal-sorry sorry sorry anya sorry yaar aur chinta mat kar meri pehchan wali hai wo usko bata dungi ham majak kar rahe the hath chhod yaar

Aniket ne hath chhod diya aur bola

Aniet-iski saja milegi barabar milegi

Komal-ham bhi saja ke liye tayar hai jani

Aniket-gazab mere sath reh reh ke tu bhi nautanki sikh gayi kammo to chalo ab tumhari punishment hai ke aaj tum the great aniket ko idli wada khilaogi aur bsdk avya tu, tu bahut siti baja raha tha ab teko aisa bajaunga ki siti bajana bhul jayega

Avinash-ha chal chal ala motha shahana :roll:

Aur teeno nashta karne nikal gaye……

Update 8

Ek ladka aur ladki kabhi dost nahi ho sakte
-Mohnish Bahl,
Maine Pyaar Kiya, 1989​

Is line ko likhne ka ekmatra uddeshya ye hai ye wahi wo line hai jisne hamare mata pitao ke dimag me ye baat bhari thi ke ladka aur ladki agar dost hai to wo dost nahi hai balki unke beech kuch chal raha hai halanki 90% time ye baat sahi bhi hoti hai agar ladki ladke ko friendzone na kare to :D

Ab mudda ye hai ke maine ye yaha kyu likha hai to aage padhiye janab aap samajh jayenge

Aniket jab college me ghum ke ghar pahucha (padh ke nahi ghum ke kyuki ye college padhne nahi jate hai ghumne jaye hai :sigh: ) to kaushalya aur narayanrao ghar ke aangan me chai pite baithe the aur jab narayanrao ne aniket ko dekha to unhone ek teasing smile karte huye aniket ko dekha (wo smile nahi hoti jab ham kisi apne dost ko uski girlfriend ke sath dekh lete hai aur unke paas jane ke bajay apne dost ko smile karte huye ishara karte hai bas kuch kuch waisi hi smile abi samajh jao)

To narayanrao aniket ko dekh ke muskura rahe the wahi kaushalya ke chehre pe bhi muskan thi par apne hero full confusion me tha, use jara bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ke ye dono use dekh ke muskura kyu rahe hai :hmm2: ab jab kuch samajh hi naih aa raha tha to aniket badhiya hath muh dhokar fresh hokar unke paas aakar baith gaya par ab bhi dono me se koi kuch nahi bola balku muskurana chalu tha aur aakhir me aniket hi chidh kar bola

Aniket - kya hai!

Narayanrao(kandhe jhatakte huye)- kaha kya kuch bhi to nahi

Aniket-to aaj ke muskan ki chamkan ka kya raaz hai :huh:

Kaushalya(apni hasi dabate huye)- kaun has raha hai, ani beta tujhe bhas ho raha hoga, kyuji aap hase kya

Narayanrao(bhola chehra banate huye)- kaun main, main kyu hasunga? Main to aaram se apni chai pi raha hu tum hi hasi hogi kaushalya

Baad main wapis se dono gaalo hi galo me hasne lage aur narayanrao ne halke se kaushalya ko aankh maar di aur yahi apne aniket ne dekh liya

Aniket-arey yaaar :mad1: aap dono bhang ki goli kha ke baithe ho kya jo aise bematlab hase ja rahe ho aur bapu aap bhi kya mere jaise bacche ke saamne akhiyo se goli maar rahe ho

Narayanrao- kaushalya ab to case pakad ke baahar hai, acha bhala ladka gaya kaam se

Aniket ke kandhe pe hath rakhte huye narayanrao ne kaha

Narayanrao(aniket se)-chinta mat karo aisa hota hai, bematlab hasne ka man karta hai, kuch karne ki icha nahi hoti to kabhi man udas hota hai

Aniket ke kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ke ye chal kya raha hai wo hath jodte huye bola

Aniket-papa aaj BP ki dawa lena bhul gaye kya aap, kya behki behki baat kar rahe ho, tabiyat theek hai na aapki

Narayanrao(ekdum shayar andaj me)- na dawa kaam aaye na dual age, aye khuda kisi ko ishq ki hawa na lage

Aniket ke anguthe se pine ka ishara kiya aur narayanrao se bola

Aniket- bapu kam se kam raat to hone dete sham me party shuru kar di aapne to par botal nahi dikh rahi kahi 🤔

Narayanrao-nalayak dikh nahi raha main chai pi raha hu

Aniket-to fir ye shero shayari, maa bapu ka chal chalan theek nahi lag raha meko, ab is umra me ye ishq waigaire jamne wala hai kya aapko

Aniket ki baat sun ke kaushalya ne mast ek chota sa mukaa jad diya uski pith me

Kaushalya- nalayak wo tere

bare me baat kar rahe hai, ladki pasand aa gayi unko

Aniket-o o o bapu ye kya aap maa ko kuch bhi batate rehte ho? Ek minute (pehle to aniket ne apni kaam ki baat dhyan se nahi suni aur bolna chalu kiya par jab uske dhyan me aaya ki kaushalya kya boli hai tab wo bola) ek minute maa kya bola tumne dobara bolna jara?

Kaushalya- maine kaha hame bahu pasand aa gayi hai

Ab kaushalya ki baat sun ke aniket ne sar pe hath maar liya aur use samajh aa gaya ki ye sab kya nautanki chal rahi hai

Aniket-hey bhagwaan chalk al ere sath hospital me chalo kal ke kal aap dono ka motiyabind ka operation karane ka hai, matlab kuch bhi yaar

Narayanrao has rahe the aur aniket aur bhi jyada chidh raha tha

Aniket-arey yaar papa haso mat yaar komal dost hai meri sirf

Narayanrao-ok

Aniket-sirf dost aur kuch nahi

Narayanrao- theek hai

Ab aniket ko waha rukna theek nahi laga kyuki narayanrao ka hasna hi nahi ruk raha tha aur aniket waha se utha aur apne room ki taraf jane laga par jaye huye ek baar fir aaya aur bola

Aniket- sirf aur sirf dost samjhe?

Narayanrao-ham kaha kuch bol rahe hai tu hi bol raha hai jo hai ham to kuch nahi bole

Aniket-good wo dost hai meri sirf aur ye hasna band karo yaar :mad1:

Aniket pair patakte huye room me chala gaya aur narayanro kaushalya se bole

Narayanrao-tumhe kya lagta hai kaushalya

Kaushalya-mujh to aisa kuch nahi lagta jaisa aap bol rahe ho agar aisa hota to wo ladki itni bindaas banke ghar nahi aati

Narayanrao-ye baal dhup me safed nahi huye hai kaushalya

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Aise hi ek din aniket aur komal canteen me baate karte baithe the aur avinash thoda late aaya tha. Ab avinash aur komal ka pasandida kaam yahi aniket ko satana to komal ne avinash ko pucha

Komal-avi vadapav khayega?

Aur usne avi ko aankh maar di aur fir aniket ke pucha

Komal-anya tu khayega?

Aniket apne phone me kuch dekh raha tha to usne haa me gardan hila di to komal ne do vadapav ki order di aur waiter ne vadapav waha lakar rakha aur jaise hi waiter gaya avi aur komal ne vadapav utha ke fast kar liya aur aniket unhe dekhta hireh gaya

Komal-avi tu to nahi khane wala than a?

Avinash-arey wo dekh ke ekdum mood ho gaya khane ka sorry anya, komal ek aur ho jaye?

Komal-nahi tu au rani khao

Avinash ne bhi 2 vadapav ka order diya aur wapis se wahi is baar komal ne aniket ka vadapav utha ke kha liya to avi jhuta gussa dikhate huye bola

Avinahs-bolna than a komal pehle ab wapis ani reh gaya na

Komal-arey aaj mast vadapav bana hai isiliye raha nahi gaya sorry anya

Par ab aniket ke dhyan me aa gaya tha ke ye dono uski maja le rahe hai, usne apna phone jeb me rakha aur man me bola ‘abi inko batata hu’ aur aniket ne 2 vadapav oder kiya

Waiter ne vadapav rakhte hi aniket ne plate apne paas khichi aur “thu thu thu’ karte huye vadapav ke thuke jaisa kiya, avinash aur komal is baar bhi vadapav uthane ki tayari me the par aniket ke thu thu ko dekh ke unhone apna hath piche le liya aur aniket ne unke saamne plate sarka di

Aniket-kya hua, lo lo vadapav lo, ekdum mast bana hai na, huh bhai se bakchodi karne chale the

Aur fir aniket se mast vadapav khaya aur uske baad jo usne Dakar mari hai agar wo vadapav banane wala us dakaar ko sun leta to uska to vadapav banane ka careersafal ho jata…..

To Be Continued…..

Update 9​

Aniket, Avinash aur Komal teeno ek se badhkar ek the aur teeno ke dimag ke khurafat bhari huyi thi aur college bole to inke liye apne khurafati ideas ko sakriya karne ki inki apni haq ki jagah, padhai wagaire ka to ye waise bhi itna tension nahi lete the halanki aisa bhi nahi tha ke padhte hi nahi the, padhte the the padhai ke samay padhai jaruri hoti hai teeno ye baat jaante the padhai ke samay padhai aur masti ke samay masti ha ab ye baat alag hai ke masti ko inka 90% time milta tha :D

Top rank lane ki race me participate karna to dur inhone uski taraf dekh bhi nahi tha, teeno ki rank hamesha beech me rehti thi, aur sabse khas baat ye thi ke teeno bhale hi dinbhar ek dusre ka majak banate rehte ho par kisi ke bhi man me kisi ke liye dwesh bhavna nahi thi thi to sirf aur sirf dosti, teeno jindagi ke in anmol palo ka bharpur aanad lutne me lage the unhe to pata bhi nahi tha ye yahi man aage bhavishya me unke chehro par muskan le aayenge (is bhavna ki tivrata wohi samajh sakta hai joy a to is samay college me hai ya jiska college khatam ho gaya hai aur unhone apne college life ko mukthast jiya hai, jara apne dosto ko aur unke sath bitaye apne palo ko yaad kariye aur jo smile aapke chehre par aayegi uska koi mol nahi laga sakta)

To aise ye hamare buddhijivi khurfatveer is samay ek nayi khurafat dhundhte huye canteen me baithe the aura vi hamesha ki taraf deri se aaya tha tab tak aniket aur komal apne pasandida dish yani vadapav khane me busy the avi bhi unke paas aake baith gaya tab komal vadapav ke sath mirchi kha rahi thi jise dekh ke aniket bola

Aniket-kammo tu mirchi kha leti hai aisi sabut teko tej na lagti kya :shocking: ?

Komal ne jaise hi aniket ki baat suni wo samajh gayi ke isse mirchi nahi khayi jayegi aur uske dimagi ghode daudne lage arey matlab use nayi khurafat sijh gayi

Komal-anya vadapav ki maja mirchi ke bagair nahi aati, hai na avi

Avinash(mirchi uthate huye)- bilkul sahi par kya kare ye ani se mirchi khayi nahi jati na

Aniket-oye avi tu jyada ud mat samjha, tujhe kya lagta hai maine mirchi nahi khata?

Bas yahi komal ka kaam ho gaya unse yyaha machis ki tili laga di aura b to avi bhai bhi bhadak gaye na :D

Avinash-abe main to mirchi ke bagair khana bhi nahi khata

Avinash bole jar aha tha aur komal use aur bhi chane ke jhad pe chadha rahi thi aur wo chadh bhi gaya :lol1:

Aniket-avya itna bhi fekna shai nahi hai chal main bhi kha ke dikhata hu ke ye koi badi baat nahi hai

Komal ne barabar dono ko uksa diya tha aura b to na avi na ani koi bhi piche hatne tayar nahi tha

Avinash-lagi bet? Bol kitne ki bet lagi ?

Aniket-chal lagi hajar rupaye ki

Dono ne canteen wale se plate bhar ke mirchiya bulwayi aur fir shuru hua mirchi khane ka competition, aniket aur avinash dono me se koi haar nahi maan raha tha aur komal wo to mast maje le rahi thi wo kabhi avinash ko support karti to kabhi aniket ko cheer karti aur ab mukabala apne charam pe pahuch raha tha dono parties ne 14-14 mirchiya kha li thi aura b isse jyada khane ki kisi me himmat nahi thi to mutual understanding se ye mukabala unhe yahi khatam karna pada

Ab josh josh me inhone mirchiya to kha li thi par kuch hi samay baad mirchi ne apna kamaal dikhana shuru kar diya aur dono college se sidha ghar ki taraf bhag liye

Us din us mirchi ne kuch aisa kamaal dikhaya ki avinash do acre khet ko kaam aaye itna sendriya khat(khad, organic fertilizer) kheet me faila aaya, aur ye khad failane ka kaam itne speed me shuru tha kea vi bhai ne baad me din bhar payjama pehanne ki risk hi nahi li :lotpot:

Dusri taraf aniket bhi apne ghar ke tanki ka pani khatam karne me laga hua tha, maa ke dhyan kea a gaya tha ke aaj unke yuvraj diwan-e-khas me 7-8 baar jakar aaye hai to akhir maa to maa hoti hai ma wo shahad ki botal lekar aniket ke room me pahuchi, aniket abhi abhi aathva akraman karke baye hath ki laday karke bed par aada pada hua tha, sharir me jaan hi nahi bachi thi uske aur khud se hi badbad kar raha tha

Anikey-haayy! Kammo tera satyanash ho…kide pade tujhe haayy, dusht dakini chudail…baith ke maja le rahi thi waha…haayyy chhodunga nahi

Ab ye sab kya chal raha hai ye kaushalya ke dhyan me aa gaya tha aur wo bhi hasne lagi, us din aur agla ddin aniket aur avinas dono me se kisi ne ghar ke baahar kadam nahi rakha uske agler din….

Subah ka samay tha aur aniket mast apne bed pe pada hua tha tabhi uske kano me awaj aaya

“aniket”

Aniket ko laga ki wo ab bhi neend me hi hai kyuki ya to use sab ani bulate the ya anya bolte the koi bhi itne pyaar se aniket nahi bolta tha isiliye wo waise hi pada raha

“aniket…….ani……ye anya”

Bas anya sunna tha ke aniket tadkan uth ke baith gaya aur saamne dekha to waha komal khadi thi bas fir kya tha use dekhte hi bhai bhadak gaya

Aniket-teri to…..haramio ladki…tu aaj gayi….

aaj to tera khun hoga mere hatho

Aur aniket room me idhar udhar dekhne laga to uske hath ek jhadu lag gayi bas fir kyat ha komal ke kuch bolne se pehle hi bechari ko jhadu ka fatka baith gaya aura b apna bachna mushkil hai ye dhyan me aate hi komal kitchen ki taraf bhagi aur aniket uske piche jhadu leke bhaga

Kaku, kaku bachao bolte huye komal kitchen me ghusi aur kaushalya ke piche jakar chip gayi aur piche se aniket jhadu liye waha pahucha

Komal-kaku dekho ye kya kar raha hai

Tab kaushalya aniket ko daatte huye bol

Kushalya-ani kya hai ye sab kyumaar rahe ho bechari ko

Aniket-bichaaaari :shocking: ye aur bichari arey ye to bhutni hai

Komal ekdun bholi surat bana ke kaushalya ke piche chippi huyi thi

Kaushalya-kuch bhi kya bakte rehte ho

Aniket-maa tumko malum nahi hai ye chudail hai chudail, kammo tu baahar nikal aaj to nahi chhodunga tujhe

Kaushalya(chidhte huye)- arey ye subah subah kya natak lagaya hai? Koi batayega kya hua hai

Fir aniket ne pura kissa une sunaya itne me awaj sunkar narayanrao bhi waha aa gaye aur unhone bhi pura kissa suna to wo hasne lage aur narayanrao aniket ki taraf se bole

Narayanrao-arey beta komal kya hai ye koi aise karta hai kya?

Ab komal kuch bole usse pehle hi kaushalya uski side lete huye boli

Kaushalya-arey mana ki komal ne waisa kaha tha par mirchi khate huye inki akal kaha ghas charne gayi thi, kal ko komal kuye me kudne bolegi to kya ye kud jayenge

Aab jawab me narayanrao kuch bolte isse pehle aniket bol pada

Aniket-dekha…dekha isne aap dono ko bhi ladwa diya, pehle to meko shak tha ab pura yakin hai ye koi jadugarni hai, ye aam ladki hai hi nahi bhut chudail hai ye ab confirm ho gaya meko, amawas ke din asli rup nikalta hoga iska aur raat me jhadu pe ghumti hogi ye, meko malum hai dekha kaise jadu se maa ko ape side kar liya

Tab kaushalya baat khatam karte huye boli

Kaushalya-aaha ha um bhi kuch kam nahi ho nawab sahab wo chudail to tum bhi rkshas ho, itna bada ghodfe jaisa ho gaya hai fir bhi baccho jaise uske piche jhadu leke pada hai, khudko samajh nahi hai aur use chudail keh raha hai, rakh wo jhadu aur ja nahane

Kaushalya se aniket ko daat padte dekh komal has rahi thi

Aniket-kammo daat tod dunga jyada hasi to

Aniket to waha se nikal gaya aur kaushalya komal ko samjhate huye boli

Kaushalya-ye sab kya hai komal aise karta hai kya koi aur thoda to ladkiyo jaise raha karo mujhe batao kyu kiya ye sab?

Komal(aankhen michkate huye)- maja..🙃😉

Narayanrao has rahe the aur kaushalya ne apne sar pe hath laga liya

Kaushalya-is ladki ka kya hoga bhagwaan jane…..

To Be Continued…..

Update 10​

Masti hasi thitholi karte huye samay kab bita pata hi nahi chala au dekhte dekhte tikdi ab 11th se 12th main pahuch gayi thi, ab chuki ye saal in log ki 12th thi to thode bahut badlav sabhi me huye mata pita ne inhe padhai ko lekar serious hone kaha, teachers bhi change ho gaye the aur baki logo me bhi badlav huye the par hamari tikdi ko in sab bato se fark kaha padne wala tha wo to apni hi dhun me jiye ja rahe the

Ek din komal ke jijaji yani uske ek cousin ke husband jo usi college ke purine student bhi the college me aaye, jijaji ke college me aane se komal ekdum sadguni bacche jaisa behave kar rahi thi ekdum vinamrata se sabse baat kar rahi thi aur jab ye sab aniket ne dekha to usne is sab ke bare me avinash se pucha aura vi ne bhi puri information aniket ko de di jispar aniket rakshas ke mafik kutilta se haste huye bola

Niket-abi maja aayega na bhidu :yes1: ab aaya unt pahad ke niche, abi dekh main kya karta hu

Fir aniket avi ko lekar sidha canteen ke kitchen me pahucha aura vi ko baahar rukne ka bolkar ander gaya, aur kuch 10 minute bite honge aniket baahar aaya aur avinash ko chalne kaha, ab dono komal ko dhundh rahe the aur komal jijaji ke sath office ke paas ruki huyi thi aniket dheere se uske paas pahucha aur dhime awaj me usse bola jise jijaji aaram se sun sake

Aniket-aye kammo wo baahar paan tapri wala tere naam se chuilla raha tha teri jo cigarette ki udhari baki hai use pehle clear karne bol raha tha wo aur ha jo pichli baar tu ganja layi thi usse kuch bhi nahi hua tha duplicate maal tha wo…

Aniket komal ko kuch bhi bolne nahi de raha tha aur komal ke jiju ashcharya se unki baate sun rahe the par aniket ne unki taraf dekha bhi nahi iski apni hi badbad chalu thi

Aniket-kammo aaj bahut mast plan set hua hai maja aa jayega teko

Fir aniket ke ani jeb se ek choti hi plastic ki pudiya baahar nikali aur koi dekhne ka aise batate huye bola

Aniket-aaj sham ko mil mujhe brown sugar mili hai, dhamaal karenge chal main chalta hu…

Aniket ki bate sunkar komal ke chehre ka rang hi ud gaya tha, ye abhi abhi yaha kya hua use kuch samaj hi nahi aa raha tha aur aniket waha se daat nikalte huye canteen me aa baitha aur avinash use gusse se ghur raha tha

Avinash-anya kuch akkal wagair hai kya tere me? Abe ladki hai wo aur tu harami cigarette ganja aur brown sugar tak pahuch gaya bsdk kuch andaja hai ki iska kya parinam ho sakta hai ? lawde majak jyada hogaya ye :sigh:

Aniket(haste huye)- BC lota parade bhul gaya kya tu? Dekh ab usko uske karmo ka fal to bhugatna hi padega isse koi nahi bacha hai aaj tak aur jyada se jyada kya hoga baap marega hi na, kal jakar bata denge ki ham majak kar rahe the, par kal aaj nahi aaj jara usko thoda maar khane de

Avinash-tu dost hai ki dushman ye hi samajh nahi aa raha mere to

Aniket-oye satyawadi agar jyada kharab lag raha hai na to ja jake bata de sab nikal….

Anikash(do minute sochne ke baad)- dekh bura to lag raha tha fir dhyan me aaya ke lota parade ke baad baithne me bahut takleef huyi thi yaar, jane de jo hota hai ache ke liye hi hota hai

Fir dono tali dete huye hasne lage…

Thoda samay beeta tha ke avinash ne aniket ko baahar dekhne ka ishara kiya to komal aur uske jiju dono canteen me aa rahe the aur dono ka chehra utra hua tha aur dono unhi ke table par aakar baith gaye, jiju aniket ke bagal wali khurchi par aakar baithe aur dheere se usse bole

Jiju-ani tumhe shayad pata nahi hai par main bhi isi college ka purana student hu, khair jo sab jane do aur sabse pehle to mujhe tum ye batao ki maal original to hai na?

Aniket ke liye ye anapekshit tha use ab is baat pe kya hi bole samajh nahi aa raha tha tabhi jiju wapis bole

Jiju-jara batana to wo brown sugar, bahut saal ho gaye taste kare huye

Aniket ne chup chap bagair kuch bole apni jeb se wo pudiya nikali aur jiju ke hath me rakh di, jiju ne wo packet khola aur chunti me thoda saw o brown powder liya aur muh me dala aur sambhal ke uska taste lene lage aur baad me wo us pudiya ko aniket ke saamne rakhte huye bole

Jiju-ani bhai kisi ne bahut bura kata hai tumhara, brown sugar bolke kisi ne brownvita de diya tumhe to :sigh:

Fir juju thoda haste huye aniket ke kandhe par hath maarte huye bole

Jiju-wo film ka dialogue hai ka ek ki jis school me tum padhte ho ham waha ke principal hai, waise tumhari ye idea bahut purani aur ghisipiti hai dosto ko satane ki, komal ne mujhe pehle hi tumhare aur tumhare college ke kisso ke bare me bata diya tha barkhurdar

Aniket-arey yaar jiju main to khud ko hoshiyar samajh raha tha aap to mere bhi guru nikle, aapko aniket rane ki taraf se full respect

Ab sab has rahe the aur komal aniket ki taraf gusse se dekh rahi thi

Aniket-kammo jiju ki wajah se bach gayi tu to has na kya sadi si shakal banayi hai ham bhi to dekhe tu haste huye achi dikhti hai ya nahi

Aniket ki baat sun kar komal ke chehre par bhi hasi aa gayi

Aniket-aye bas bas haste huye aur bhi jyada buri dikhti tu rende

Sablog badhiya haste huye baatchit kar rahe the aur haste huye aniket ka dhyan canteen ke darwaje ki taraf gaya aur wo ekdum shock lage jaisa usi taraf dekhne laga, kano me ghanti bajne lagi thi, aniket bas usi tarf ektak dekh raha tha, uske liye to mano duniya ruk gayi thi, saas lena tak bhul raha tha wo, jindagi me pehli baar aniket is chiz ka anubhav kar raha tha, jiju jane lage to aniket ne bas kisi yantravat unse hath milaya par uski najre ab bhi wahi thi, avi aur komal kuch badbad kar rahe the par aniket ka us taraf bhi dhyan nahi thaw o to saamne ka najara dekhne me vyast tha aur dimag me uske bas kuch shabd ghum rahe the….

“Chehra ik phool ki tarh shaadaab hai
Chehra us ka hai ya koyi mahtaab hai
Chehra jaise ghazal chehra jaan-I ghazal
Chehra jaise kali chehra jaise kanwal
Chehra jaise tasawwur bhi tasweer bhi

Chehra ik khaab bhi chehra taa’beer bhi
Chehra koyi alf lailawi daastaan
Chehra ik pal yaqeen chehra ik pal gumaan
Chehra jaisa ke chehra kaheen bhi nahi
Maah-ru maah-ru mah-jabeen mah-jabeen

Husn e jaanaa ki tareef mumkin nahi :loveeyed2: ”​

Ye baat avi aur komal ke bhi dhyan me aa gayi aur unhone bhi us taraf dekha jaga aniket apni sudh budh kho kar dekh raha tha

Ab ye alag se batane ki jarurat nahi hai ke woe k ladki thi, khubsurat, simple yet beautiful, black skirt aur pink color ka tshirt pehni huyi, uske lambe baal pony tail me bande huye the, hotho pe halki si lipstick, kano me bade rings aur mathe par ek chhoti si tikli, gori tikhi naak aur kisi ko bhi ghayal kar de aisi gehri aankhen, aniket is waqt usi ladki me khoya hua tha aur avi bhi us ladki ko dekh ke halke se siti bajate huye bola

Avinash- kammo kaun hai ye menka jisne apne vishwamitra ki tapasya bhag kar di hai…….

To Be Continued…..

Update 11​

Aniket ektak us ladki ki taraf dekhe ja raha tha, aaj pehli baar kisi ladki ne iskadar uske dil ko chua tha, aniket ke liye to mano wo samay wahi ruk sa gaya tha aur wo ladki kisi hawa ke jhoke ki taraf waha aayi aur chali bhi gayi,wahi komal aniket ki is halat pe has rahi thi

Komal-anya lagta hai wicket gir gayi teri, kano me ghanti to nahi baji na :lol1:

Aniket-haayyy kammo kaun thi ye pari

Komal-pari?? Mujhe to chapri lag rahi thi :sigh:

Aniket ke komal ke kandhe par ek chamat mara

Aniket-pagal jaise kuch bhi mat bola kar, waise kammo info nikal ka iski, kaun hai ye jo aaj tak mujhe na dikhi aur dikhi to sidha ghayal kar gayi re

Komal-tune kya mujhe kaam pe rakha hai info nikalne ke liye aur jaise main to ekdum khalipili hu na, teko pasand aayi tu nikal info

Aniket-avya kuch jalne ka baas aa raha hai kya teko?

Komal-jale meri juti, chal fut!

Aur fir aniket aur avinash dono waha se apni mohim par nikal gaye, dono ne pura college chan maara lekin wo ladki unhe kahi par bhi nahi dikhi aur akhir me dono thak ke wapis canteen me aakar baith gaye jaha komal ab bhi koi book padhte huye baithi thi, avinash dhad se khurchi pe baithte huye bola

Avinash-sala ladki hai ke bhoot pehle hamare dost ko pagal banaya ab khud gayab ho gayi

Aniket(muskurate huye)- abe jayegi kaha, kal college me aayegi hi

Komal uthi aur boli

Komal-tum log tumhari aashiki chalu rakho main nikalti hu kal milte hai

Aniket(komal ka hath pakad ke rokte huye)- ruk na kammo ghar jake kya karegi, help kar na thodi

Par komal nahi ruki aur jate huye bol gayi “dekhte hai”……

Agle din jo kabhi nahi hua wo hua, aniket aur avinash samay ke pehle hi college pahuch gaye aur us ladki ki raah dekhne lage gate par hi ruk kar par jab kafi samay tak wo nahi aayi to dono thak ke canteen me aake baith gaye, udhar class me do lectures ho gaye the aur kuch samay baad komal bhi canteen me aayi use dekhte hi aniket bola

Aniket-kya kammo itni der laga di, lecture kar rahi thi kya? Tabiyat theek hai na teri?

Komal ne apni bag table par patki aur khurchi par baithte huye boli

Komal-pehle chai nashta khila fir baat karenge

Aniket ne aviki taraf sawaliya najro se dekha par usne bhi kandhe jhatak kar kaha ki use kuch nahi pata hai

Aniket-aaj mera janamdin hai kya jo tujhe nashta khilau :roll:

Komal (khurchi kar aaram se baithte huye)- theek hai teri marji, fir main bhi tujhe teri chammak challo ke bare me nahi batane wali

Ab to komal ki baat sunkar aniket bhai ekdum khush

Aniket-bas kya kammo yahi dosti apni, bata na kya naam hai uska?

Komal-dosti gayi bhad me abhi kya bol raha tha nashta khilane ke liye?

Avinash(chidhte huye)- abe yaar anya jab tak iske muh me ek cup chai aur ek vada nahi thusega ye kuch nahi batane wali

Aniket ne jaldise chai nashte ka order diya aur komal mast nashta karne lagi fir usne full aaram se chai pi par yaha aniket utawala hua ja raha tha

Aniket-kammo kitne nakhre karegi be batana kya naam hai uska

Komal ne chai ka aakhri ghut liya aur cup niche rakhte huye kaha

Komal-shravni

Aniket ko to wo naam sun ke aisa laga mano kisine uske kano me shahad ghol diya ho

Aniket-shravni! Waah, jitni wo sunder hai utna hi uska naam sunder hai, shravni, sawan ki pehli bearish jaisa sunder, naam lete hi sharir par pani ki bunde mehsus hone lagi

Komal ne aniket ki baat sunkar apna sar pit liya

Komal-ha wo shravni aur tu sawan a mendhak, naam sunte hi laga darav darav karne

Aniket-kammo kaun hai wo aur kaunse class me hai batana na

Komal-sari info milegi balak par fokat me nahi milegi

Aniket-arey tu bol kya chahiye tujhe

Komal-multiplex me ek picture aur interval me popcorn

Aniket-bas, chal diya ab info bata jaldi

Komal-naam hai shravni patvardhan, class 12th commerce, baap cleark hai gov office me aur ladki thoda kiski huyi hai :relievied:

Aniket-khiski huyi :hmm2: ?

Komal-samajh jaoge jaldi hi

Aniket-kammo tu sach bol rahi hai na

Komal-arey ekdum sach ye, ye avi ki kasam

Avinash- oye oye oye tumlog ko udhar kya game khelne ka hai khelo meri kasam kha ke meri jaan ke piche kyu pade ho be :redface:

Aniket table se uthte huye avinash se bola

Aniket-avya chal teri bhabhi se milne jana hai

Par komal ne use rok liya aur uska hath pakad kar use tablepar wapis bithaya

Komal-arey raja murad shakal ke tujhe kya lagta hai tu usse milne jayega aur wo slow motion main bhag kar aakar tere gale lag jayegi? Baith niche pata chala karne kya gaye the aura aye thappad kha kar, arey college me tumhari na sahi meri ijjat hai uske bare me to kuch socho

Aniket-to yaha baithe baithe kuch hone wala hai kya?

Komal-teko pyaar hua hai ya pyaar ka julab hua hai, thoda sabar rakho, wo aayegi yaha

Aniket-aur ye kaise hoga

Komal-hey bhagwan ab kya har baat samjhani padegi, Ishq Ne Nakara Bana Diya Galib, Warna Tu Bhi Insaan Tha Kuch Kaam Ka….

Aniket-kammo kabhi to jindagi me kuch sidhe sidhe bola kar sidhe sidhe bolegi to kyat era baap mere naam property kar dega kya :sigh:

Komal- main to sidhe shabdo me baat kar lungi par use samajhne ke liye tumhara dimag bhi jagah pe hona chahiye na

Aniket-hua baitho yahi

Aniket chidh kar utha aur baahar jane laga to komal ne jakar uska rasta rok liya

Komal-anya ladkiyo jaise kyu cidhta hai be? Jana hai to ja gobar me muh dene, sala meko hi akkal nahi hai to tere liye itnifielding laga kar aayi hu, par nahi tumhe to us bare me kuch sochna hi nahi hai, anya tu badal gaya hai re, us kal ki aayi ladki ke liye badal gaya hai tu, ja, ja ke mar udhar

Itna bol ke komal ne aniket ko dhakka diya aur pair patakte huye wapis canteen me apni jagah pe aake baith gayi, uske piche piche aniket bhi aakar baith gaya, komal dusri taraf muh karke baithi thi, do minute tak dono bhi shant baithe huye the, fir aniket ko hasi aa gayi

Aniket-kammo! Aye kammo!

Par komal ne koi reply nahi diya

Aniket- aye kammo! Arey sorry na yaar, bas kar na ab ye nautnki dekh kaan pakadta hu

Aur aniket ne komal ke kaan pakad liye, komal aniket ki taraf mudi aur ekdum aath dus mukke aniket ko pade, aniket sorry sorry bol raha tha aura b komal ka gussa bhi ja chuka tha aur dono hasne lage fir komal boli

Komal-wo shravni meri dost ki dost hai, mainer puri fielding laga li hai wo use break me yaha canteen me lekar aayegi

Aniket-arey gazab! Kammo agar tu ladki hoti na to yahi chum leta main tujhe itna jabardast kaam kiya hai tune

Aniket ki baat sunkar komal ne ek jordar gudda aniket ke pet me mara

Komal-aye haadd! Sala halkat

Aur jis tarah se komal ne sab setting kit hi usi hisab se break me wo ladki canteen me aayi…

To Be Continued….

Update 12​

Komal ki lagayi huyi fielding ke mutabik hi uski dost nidhi shravni ko lekar canteen me pahuchi, un dono ke aate hi komal ne apni nidhi ko ishara karne apne paar bulaya aur un dono ke waha aane par komal ne usse shravni ke bare me pucha

Komal-ye kaun?

Tab nidhi ne uski formal intro karayi

Nidhi-ye shravni hai aur shravni ye komal

Dono ne hath milate huye smile kiya aur fir komal ne jald hi aniket aur avinash ki bhi pehchan karwayi, aniket ne utawala hokar shravni se hath milaya, dono ki najre mili, aniket swabhav se to ek number tha hi aur dikhne me bhi acha tha, fir shuru hua bato ka daur, kuch samay me sabse pehle waha se avinash khisak liya, uske jane ke baad aniket komal ko bhi waha se jane ka ishara kar raha tha par komal kuch waha se halne ko tayar hi nahi thi, kuch samay tak aniket kosatane ke baad komal nidhi ko apne sath lekar waha se chali gayi aur shravni ko waha rukne ko kaha aur kaha ki wo log jald hi aa jayenge, ab waha sirf aniket aur shravni hi bache huye the aur baat kaha se shuru kare kya bole ye kuch bhi aniket ko sujh nahi raha tha, wo to bas waha baithe baithe shravni ko dekhna chahta tha par direct dekhne ki usme himmat bhi nahi thi isiliye kuch samay use dekhta fir idhar udhar dekhne lagta aur aakhir kaar shravni ne baat shuru ki

Shravni-aniket aap arts stream se ho na?

Par aniket ka uske bolne ki taraf dhyan hi nahi thaw o to shravni ko niharne me hi vyast tha uski baat sun kar aniket hosh me aaya aur chutiyo mafik bola

Aniket-kaun main?

Shravni-aniket aapka hi naam hai na?

Aniket-ha! Ha! Matlab mera hi naam hai par koi mujhe kabhi aniket naam se nahi bulata yaha tak ki mummy papa bhi nahi sab ani ya anya hi bolte hai, tum bhi ani ya anya hi bola karo

Ispar shravni apni naak chadhate huye boli

Shravni- chee baba, itna acha naam hai aapka aniket fir main ani ya anya bolke us naam ko kyu bigadu main aapko aniket kehke hi bulaungi

Shravni ke muh se aniket sun kar to apne bhai ko aisa laga mano kisi ne uspar pushpa varsha kar di ho

Aniket-tumhe mujhe jis naam se bulana hai tum bula sakti ho apne ko koi dikkat nahi hai

Shravni- aap naraj na ho to ek baat kahu?

Aniket-arey bindass, apun ke sath rehte huye bilkul chinta nahi karne ka jo man me aaye bedhadak bolne ka, aisa jhijhak ne ka nahi

Shravni- nahi matlab aisa nahi hai, wo kya hai ma mujhe aisa tu tu karke baat karte nahi aata aur mujhe ye pasand bhi nahi hai

Aniket-theek hai teko jaisa pasand hai waisa bol….

Par bolte bolte aniket ke dhyan me aaya ki usne wapis shravni se tu tadak me baat ki hai to usne jeebh dato ke beech daba li jise dekh kar shravni ko hasi aa gayi aur jab wo hasi to aniket fir se ek baar ghayal ho gaya

Shravni-aap kafi famous ho college me

Aniket-kya baat kar rahi ho tum sorry kya baat kar rahi ho aap? Acha hi suna hai na mere bare me?

Shravni-ha matab aapke aur komal ke kisse kafi famous hai, aap dono ke beech kuch hai kya?

Ab bolte bolte shravni ye baat bol to gayi par fir uske dhyan me aaya ki ye log aaj pehli baar mil rahe hai aur direct aisa puchna sahi nahi lagta hai par apne aniket ko to is baat ka kabhi koi fark hi nahi padta tha

Aniket-hum dono ke beech agar kuch hota to aapko kuch problem thi kya usse

Shravni- I am sorry aise directly puchne ke liye wo to bas bato bato me muh se nikal gaya sorry

Ispar aniket shravni ke paas jakar dheere se bola

Aniket- koi baat nahi waise ab aapne puch hi liya hai to bata deta hu ke mere aur komal ke beech aisa kuch bhi nahi hai, main ekdum free hu

Aniket ki baat sunkar shravni sharma gayi

Aniket-agar aap naraj na ho to ek baat kahu aap na jab aise sharmati hai to aur bhi jyada khubsurat lagti hai

Usne aankhen badi karke aniket ki taraf dekha

Shravni- kya aap bhi kuch bhi bol rahe hai

Aniket- arey maine to jo sach hai wahi bola hai

Kuch samay fir shanti me beeta do minute tak dono me se koi kuch nahi bola fir aniket ne baat aage badhayi

Aniket- tu...matlab aapko kya pasand hai waise

Shravni-mujhe na kavitaye bahut pasand hai padhna bhi aur likhna bhi

Aniket- arey waah! Tu....

matlab aap kavitaye bhi karti ho

Shravni- ha, aaj hi ek likhi hai ruko aapko sunati hu padhke

Uske baad shravni ne aniket k apni kavitaye padhke sunana shuru kiya aur wo ruki hi nahi, ek ke baad ek kavita sunane lagi, aniket ko usme ka shabd bhi nahi samajh raha tha, wo bas aise hi waah waah kar raha tha, aur shravni kavita sunake hi nahi ruki balki uske piche bhi bhavnaye bhi wo aniket ko samjha ke batane lagi, par aniket ko is sab se koi lena dena nahi thaw o to bas shravni ko dekhne me busy tha aur aise me samay kaise bita pata hi nahi chala, ab komal aur nidhi bhi wapis aa gaye the aur un dono ko itne ache se baat karte dekh komal khush ho gayi

Komal-arey waah! Badhiya dosti ho gayi lagta dono me?

Tab aniket komal se bola

Aniket-arey kya badhiya kavita likhti hai yaar ye, shravni ise bhi ekad kavita sunao na

Bas fir kya tha shravni se fir se kavita sunana shuru kar diya aur jaise hi dusri kavita khatam huyi aur teesri shuru hone wali thi komal chidh kar boli

Komal- o gaankokila bas ha, ek to waise bhi mujhe ye kavita wagaire me interest nahi hai aur ye sab mujhe samajhta bhi nahi hai isiliye aaj jo ye sunaya ye pehli aur aakhri baar tha theek hai, hai na anya…

Ab yaha aniket fas gaya, ha bole to shravni naraj aur na bole to komal naraj, usne pani ka glass uthaya aur pini pite pite wo samay taalne ki koshish ki, shravni ka chehra utar gaya tha

Shravni-aapko nahi pasand hai to main aajse aapko nahi sunaungi par inhe to pasand hai na (aniket se) main aapko sunaungi

Itna bol ke shravni nidhi ke sath waha se chali gayi aur uske jate hi komal boli

Komal-kya calendar ladki hai yaar ye? Aur ye kya natak hai be ‘inhe pasand hai’ teko kabse college me itni ijjat se bulane lage :huh:

Aniket-jane de na kammo kyu maje le rahi bichari ke

Komal-bichari :huh: ye kab se bichari ho gayi aur sabse badi baat teko kavitaye kabsepasand aane lagi? Ek shabd to bhi samajhta hai kya uska

Tab aniket use samjhate huye bola

Aniket-arey aap chidhiye mat

Komal-aye haad! Ye aaho jaho aap tum mere se kiya to thobda suja dungi anya, hey bhagwan itna bada ladka kar diya ye thodi akkal bhi de dete

Aniket-arey theek hai komal rehta hai koi koi aisa

Komal(gusse me)- anya dimag mat kharab kar ha, aaj pehli baar komal bola hai tune mujhe, us chidail ne kuchjadu tona kar diya kya, suna tha log pyaar me andhe ho jate hai par murkh ho jate hai ye pehli baar dekha, mera dimag ghum jayega agar thoda samay aur yaha ruki to aur tere hath pair tute isse acha hai main hi yaha se chali jau

Aur komal waha se pair patakte huye nikal gayi…..

🔥 ULTIMATE STORY CONTEST 🔥

Update 13​

Aniket aur shravni ki dosti ab dheere dheere parvan chadh rahi thi, aniket shravni par full too fida tha, wo use behad pasand karne laga tha par jaise hi shravni uske saamne aati uski himmat hi nahi hoti thi shravni se apne man ki baat kehne ki , wo college me bas shravni ke ird gird ghumta rehta tha aur isi wajah se uska commerce section me bhi aana jana kafi badh gaya tha, ab to aniket ko dekh kar shravni ke bhi gaal sharam se laal ho jate the, wo bhi class ke paas aniket se baat karne me sharmati hi, dono ki job hi baate hoti thi wo bas canteen me hi hoti thi aur waha bhi nidhi shravni ko komal aniket ko chhodne ko tayar nahi rehte the wo inke sath chipke hi rehte aur ye sab waha maujood rehne ki wajah se aniket apne man ki baat nahi keh pata tha

Shravni aur komal ke beech bhi jyada jamti nahi thi, ye dono do alag alag kinare the jaise sikke de do pehlu, shravni najuk, kavi hriday wali tipikal ladki thi wahi komal iske ekdum viparit thi ekdum bedhadk

Ek din canteen me ye sablog baithe huye the tab komal aniket se boli

Komal- anya tu na bahut ander ki gath ka aadmi hai yaar, matlab tere na man me bahut kuch chalta rehta hai par tu kabhi kuch bolke hi nahi batata

Aniket-kuch bhi mat bola kar kammo

Komal-main kuch bhi bol rahi hu? Arey pichle ek mahine sedekh rahi hyu teko sirf gulugulu gulugulu shuru hai, bas ho gaya ab ye natak aur agar hamse mamla atak raha hai to sidha bol na ham chale jate hai yaha se fir aaram se baat kar

Aniket-kame jara shanti rakh na bhai

Itne me shravni boli

Shravni-aap kyu unhe hamesha har chiz ke liye jabardasti karti rehti hai komal

Komal-arey dost hai wo apna, main nahi bolungito kya rode pe ka bhikari aake bolega uske kaan me? Aur ye bai shravne teko kitni baar batana padega ki ye mere sath ye inko unko mat kiya kar teko aisa joi bhi karna hai uske liye ye aniket bail hai tere paas

Komal ka shravni ko shravne bolna shravni ko bilkul pasand nahi aaya wo gusse me boli

Shravni-dekhiye komal mera naam shravni hai to kripaya mujhe mere naam se hi bulaya kariye, itna sunder naam hai mera ‘shravni’ aapko matlab to bhi pata hai kya iska

Ab baat jab jhadge ke level taka a hi gayi hai to piche hate wo komal thode hi hai

Komal-mujhe to pata hai matlab, tu jaanti ho kya apne naam ka matlab?

Shravni-bilkul,shravni yani savan ke mahine ki barish ki ki pehli fuhar

Jispar komal ne has diya

Komal-lagta hai tumhe shravni ka dusra matlab pata nahi hai :D khair jane do

Shravni-jane do matlab kya,waise bhi iska koi dusra matlab nahi hai agar aapko pata hi hai to aap bata do na

Komal-arey rehne de, teko pasand nahi aayega, sirf shravne bolne me tu chidh gayi jab teko main dusra matlab bataungi to tu kya karegi bhagwan jane

Shravni-hoga tab kuch bataogi na aap iska koi aur matlab hi nahi hai aur agar hai to sirf matlab mat batana balki apni baat ko pramanit bhi karna padega

Komal-theek hai ab tum itna mujhe force kar hi rahi ho to suno shravni matlab gobar, gu, shen 😌

Bas komal ka itna kehna tha ke shravni ekdum bhadak gayi na bhailog

Shravni-jo muh me aaye wo mat bola kariye komal

Komal-arey maine to jo sach hai sirf wahi kaha hai, ab iksa praman bhi sun lo aur ache se samajh jaogi, apne Marathi bhasha me ek kahavat hai, ‘aamhi khalla tar shen an tumhi khalli tar……..

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Avinash-shravni….

Avinash tapak se bola

(ab jinko nahi samjha samjhata hu, bhai aaya hai batake jayega 😌 iska sidha matlab hai ham khaye to gobar tum khao to shravni matlab twada kutta tommy sadda kutta kutta, waisa sa matlab hota hai iska, samajh gaye, very good story ke end me viva lunga, abi aage padho)

Avinash ki baat sunkar waha maujood sabhi log hasne lage siway do ek ke, ab jab sahi has rahe the to aniket bhi has raha tha aur bakiyo ka to pata nahi par naiket ko hasta dekh kar shravni ko aur jyada gussa aaya, wo wahase uthi aur gusse me pair patakte huye waha se nikal gayi, aniket use awaj dete huye use rokne ke liye uske piche bhaga par wo sunne ko tayar hi nahi thi, ab aniket bhi bhadak gaya tha…

Aniket wapis canteen me aaya to avinash aur komal ka hasna shuru hi tha aniket ko dekhte hi wo dono ekdum chup ho gaye aur aniket bhi unke paas aakar unpar baras pada

Aniket-kame kuch akkal wagaire hai tere me thoda bhi dimag hai? Teko pata hai na main pasand karta hu use fir kyu pareshan kar rahi thi shravni ko, wo tere jaisi nahi hai bahut najuk man hai uska kitna bura laga use pata hai rote huye gayi hai wo bechari

Komal-anya bahut ho gaya ye bichari puran, teri wajah se sahan karte hai ham use warna to aaspaas bhi fatakne na de

Aniket-jab itna samajhta hai to apna muh band rakah kar na, pata hai na apne muh gutter hai khulega to baas hi marega

Komal-ye jyada ho raha hai ab anya, tuuski side kyu le raha hai re

Aniket-kyuki main usse pyaar karta hu..

Komal-aur hamse..?

Aniket-tum log dost ho yaar, main tumhari aur uski tulna nahi kar sakta..

Komal-theek hai samajh gayi aura b tu mere naam se mat chilla ha main to tujhe apne man ki baat batane ke liye keh rahi thi, wohi beech me kuch apni kavita ki potli leke

Aniket- tujhe nahi pasand to mat bola kar na usse

Komal-main kaha kuch boli wo hi apni beech me kudu(fir komal ne shravni ki nakal karte huye kaha)’aapko pata hai kya shravni ka matlab’ maine to kaha bhi tha ke mat puch par wo satvik pujarin piche hi pad gayi to maine bhi bata diya

Aniket-arey apne me kuch bhi chalta hai par wo apne jaisi nahi hai ye samajhna chahiye tujhe

Komal-shabash ab jaise mujhe samjhaya na waise hi apni satvik pujarin ko samjhane ka ja, ye sahi hai bhalai ka jamana hi nahi hai, aur ha apni premika ko ye bhi samjhana dena ye aainda mujhse na uljhe wo

Uske baad teeno shand baith gaye avi to waise bhi shant hi tha ye donohi bakbak kar rahe the avi dimag wala banda tha wo inke beech me nahi padta tha, koi kuch bhi bolne ko tayar nahi tha, thoda samay bita, gussa thanda hua aura b puri ghatna aniket ke dimag me ghum rahi thi itne me use hasi aa gayi, komal aur avinash ne uski taraf dekha to wo ekdum serious chehra karke baitha tha, dono ko laga ki unhe aabhas hua hoga unhone fir se apna chehra dusri taraf ghuma liya, aniket ko apni hasi rokna mushkil ho raha tha aur fir jab usse control nahi hua to wo jor jor se hasne laga aur dono use ashcharya se dekhne lage, unhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ke aniket has kyu raha hai aur aakhir me aniket ne komal ki khurchi par laat mari aur kaha

Aniket-kammo seriously :lol1:

Komal-tu pehle hasna band karega aur batayega hasne jaisa kya hua hai :sigh:

Aniket-main ye soch raha hu ke tu ye sab lati kaha se hai, bole shravnni matlab gobar :lol1:

Ab teeno hasne lage aur haste huye komal boli

Komal-arey sach baat hai ye ghar jake bapu se puch lena

Teeno aankho me pani aaye tak haste rahe aur fir thode shant hone ke baad aniket ne kaha

Aniket-aur ye satvik pujarin ka kya scene hai :hmm2:

Komal-wo ja ke apni maa se puchna :D

Teeno fir has rahe the

Komal-waise anya sorry ha ab nahi pareshan karungi teri shravni ko (avinash se) avi kalpana kar agar apna anya shravne ke sar pe hath maar ke thapthapaye to log kya bolenge?

Avinash ko kuch samjha nahi ke ye kya kehna chah rahi hai

Avinash-kya bolenge :hmm2:

Komal-yahi bolenge ki anya gobar ke uple bana raha hai :lotpot:

Bas teeno fir se hasne lage (koi kaam hi nahi hai inko hasne ke alawa :sigh: )

Aniket-acha ye sab bate chhodo aur ye batao maine jo kaha samjha kya

Komal(ekdum bhola chehra banate huye)- hao samajh gayi

Aniket-kya samjha?

Komal(avi ki aur dekhte huye)- ye samjhi ke shravni matlab….

Komal aur avi eksath- Gobaaarrrrrrrr……….

Aniket unko maarne ke liye utha hi tha ke isse pehle hi wo canteen ke baahar bhag liye aur unke piche aniket bhi….

Update 14​

Samay ki gati ko kaun rok paya hai din par din beete ja rahe the aur in beette dino ke sath sath parvaan chadh raha tha aniket aur shravni ka pyaar, halanki abhi ijhar-e-mohabbat baki tha. Aniket aur shravni dono ghanto canteen me baate karte baithe rehte, dono ko ekdusre ka sath kafi pasand aa raha tha par dono me se kisi ne bhi apni prem bhavna aage badhkar shabdo me vyakt nahi ki thi, shravni ki icha thi ke aniket use propose kare wahi aniket ko ye darr laga rehta ki wo propose kare aur shravni ke mana kar diya to, usne na keh diya to? Wo log aur bhi 3 saal college ke sath hai to abhi itni jaldbaji kis baat ki hai, aisa soch ke jaisa chal raha hai chalne diya jaye aisa aniket ne decide kar liya tha

Aise hi ek din aniket aur avinash dono film dekhne gaye huye the, raat ka showdekh kar jab wo log ghar laute to raat ke sadhe bara baj chuke the, aur chuki ab kafi late ho gaya tha to avinash bhi aniket ke ghar par hi rukne wala tha, wo log ghar pahuche to ghar ekdum shant tha, aniket ke apne paas ki chabi se ghar ka darwaja khola aur dono dabe paav ander aaye aur bagair awaj kiye aniket ke room me pahuche aur aniket ne jaise hi apne room me pahuch ke room ki light on ki waise hi….

“SURPRISE…!”

Aniket ka pura room sajaya hua tha, alag alag colors ke ribbon se puri room decorate ki huyi thi aur diwaro par bade aksharo me HAPPY BIRTHDAY ANIKET likha hua tha, room me bichoceech ek stool par cake rakha hua tha aur avinash aur komal jor jor se aniket ke kaan ke paas pungi baja rahe the, kaushalya aur narayanrao bhi waha upastit the aur tali baja kar aniket ko happy birthday wish kar rahe the..

Aniket kabhi apna janmdin is tarah se nahi manata tha isiliye aaj uske liye komal aur avinash ne ye sab plan kiya tha..

Aniket-arey kya hai ye sab kammo, main kabhi apna birthday is tarah se nahi manata hu, bapu aap to jaante ho na aapne bhi nahi roka inko..

Tab avinash aur komal ki taraf ungli dikhate huye narayanrao bole

Narayanrao-main to rok leta bête par ye jo do rakshas hai ye kisi ki sunte kaha hai jo inko theek laga inhone wahi kiya

Itne me komal boli

Komal-anya bhendi aaj tera birthday hai isiliye teko gali dene ka na bilkul mood nahi hai isiliye ab tere paas do option hai, pehla ekdum simple hai chup chap yaha aake badhiya cake cut karne ka…

Aniket-aur dusra..?

Komal-main ye cake utha ke tere muh pe maar dungi simple 😌

Aniket-nahi nahi pehla hi option theek hai ruk aata hu

Fir kaushalya ne aniket ko naye kapde diye jo wo uske liye leke aaye the aur aniket fatafat tayar hoke aaya aur narayanrao ne birthday gift meuseek sone ki chain di jiske baad cake cut hua sabne aniket ko wish kiya aur wahi sab jo har birthday ko hota hai wahi yaha hua kuch naya nahi tha, aur ye sab hone ke baad aniket bola

Aniket-kammo chal main chhod aata hu tujhe ghar

Dono ghar ke baahar aaye aur uske piche avinash do badi thailiya gadi par rakh kar baahar aaya aaya

Komal-avi ye kya hai?

Par avinash ne koi jawab nahi diya balki aniket ko dekhne laga aur aniket baat sambhalte huye bola

Aniket-wo kuch bhi nahi hai tuchal ghar chal late ho gaya hai, aur late hua to tera pehalwaan baap maarega meko

Komal-na naat possible, bapu yaha hai hi nahi wo to do dino ke liye baahargao gaye hai ab do din baad hi dikhenge wo

Aniket- ha to theek hai na maa to hogi ghar pe

Komal-use pata nahi hai ki main yaha hu

Avinash-matlab :hmm2:

Komal-matlab maa ke sone ke baad main gallery me udi maar ke baahar aayi hu aura b kuch maa subah tak mere room me nahi aane wali

Aniket-aur aa gayi to…unhe chinta hogi na?

Komal-na jyada kuch nahi hoga, maine hamesha hi aise khidkise kud ke apni dost suman se milne jati hu

Aniket-kamal hai teri ek number ki gundi hai tu

Avinash-gundi.. :hmm2:

Aniket-abey slow connection gunda ka female version yani gundi

Komal-wo sab chhodo aur pehle mujhe ye batao ki tum dono itni raat me ye do bade thailiya lekar kaha ja rahe ho :huh:

Aniket ke fir se baat taalne ki koshiish ki lekin avinash bol pada

Avinash-anya ise bataye bagair ye kuch apna picha chhodne wali nahi hai

Aniket(kuch sochte huye)- theek hai to fir chal

Thandi ke din the aur aise me ye teeno itne raat ko nikle the

Komal-anya batayega hamlog kaha ja rahe hai

Jispar ani aur avi dono has diye aur avi bola

Avinash-ruko jara sabar karo

Fir unhone ek jagahroad ke side me gadi roki aur avinash ne apne sath layi thaili me se ek blanket nikala aur aniket ke hotho par ungli rakhte huye komal ko shant rehne ka ishara kiya aur fir un dono neroad ke side thandi se kudkute huye logo par blanket daalna shuru kiya jisme komal ne bhi unki madad ki aur fir puri raat wo log aise ki thand se kaampte logo ko blanket udate rahe aur fir aakhri ka blanket kisi jaruratmand ko dene ke baad wo log railway station par pahuche..

Komal aniket ki pith thapthapate huye boli

Komal-masti majak maramari karne wala aniket dekha tha aaj samajsevi aniket pehli baar dekha hai, well done anya!

Is baaye avi pat se apni pith aage karte bola

Avinash-main bhi main bhi… :shy:

Jispar komal ne uski bhi pith thapthapa di

Komal- ye sab kab se raha raha anya

Aniket-bachpan se…pehle main aur papa aate the fir jabse thodi duniya ki samajh aayitabse main aura vi ye karte hai

Komal-wahi main sochu ke itne ache vichar tumhare is dimag ke kaise aa gaye..

Teeno us waqt station par ek tapir pe baith ke chai pi rahe the

Komal-anya blanket baatne hi the to din me baat te na itni raat ko thand me nikalne ka kya matlab hai

Jispar aniket hasa aur bola

Aniket-maine bhi bapu se yahi sawal kiya tha to unhone jo bataya tha wo batata hu, isme do bate hai, pehli ye ki din me agar blanket baate jaye to ye samajh nahi aata ki uski sahi jarurat kise hai, free me mil raha hai isiliye log gardi karte hai, kai log to aise hote hai jo ye blanket wapis dukan me bech aate hai, raat me hame samajh aata hai ki kise uski sabse jyada jarurat hai aur un jaruratmando tak sahi chiz pahuchti hai, thand me kaampte huye mila blanket wo kabhi nahi bechenge kyuki wo uski kimat jaante hai isiliye ye blanket raat ke baate

Komal kafi man laga kar sun rahi thi aur jaise hi aniket chai ka ghut lene ruka usne puch liya

Komal-aur dusri baat…?

Aniket-dusra raat me nikalne ka reason ye hai ke bapu hamesha kehte hai keagar ham kisi ki madad kar rahe hai to uski aankhon me na dekhe

Komal ko kuch samajh me nahi aaya

Komal-aisa kyu?

Aniket-wo kya hai na kammo, lene walo ki aankhon me upkar ka bhav hota hai jise dekh kar dene wale main ahankar aata hai, lene wala hamesha dene wale kea age jhuka hota hai jisse dene wale ko ghamand hota hai isiliye kehte hai kisi madad aise karo kid aye hath se diya hua baye hath ko bhi pata na chale, isiliye jab log soye the tab unhe blanket udaya, apne ko samadhan mila aur lene wale ko pata bhi nahi chala….

Komal aniket ki or dekhe ja rahi thi, man ke aneko sawal the, man hi man wo soch rahi thi ke ye kya ye wahi aniket hai jise ko jaanti hai? College me masti majak maramari karne wala aniket aaj kuch alag tha,,aajtak komal ko abhiman tha ke wo aniket ko ache se pehchanti hai par aaj uske samne aniket ka ye naya roop aaya tha, aniket ne jo bhi abhi kiya uska komal ko abhiman thaaur is sabme sabse badi baat ye thi ke kahi bhi dikhawa nahi tha, dikhawa to door ki baat hai aniket kabhi is chiz ki baat bhi nahi karta tha warna aaj to agar koi kisi ko ek kela bhi de de to 10-10 photo nikalke najane kaha kaha share karte the publicity ke liye aur ek ye hai jise de raha hai use pata bhi nahi chalne diya kisne diya hai… komal bas apne inhi khayalo me khoi huyi thi

Aniket-hello….kaha kho gayi..

Aniket ne komal ki aankhon ke saamne chutki baja ke use hosh me laya…komal ko bahut kuch bolna tha, bhar bhar ke aniket ki taarif karni thi par use shabd nahi mil rahe the, gala bhar aaya tha aur wo bas itna hi bol payi

Komal-shabaasss…!

Update 15​

Raat ko blanket baatne ka karyakram hone ke baad agli subah aniket fir se komal ko apne sath lekar nikla

Komal-anya ab kya naya batane wala hai, kaha ja rahe hai hum

Aniket-hai ek kaam tu chup chap chal na..

Komal-tu kab kya kare iska andaja koi nahi laga sakta, chal

Thodi der me dono ek hospital me pahuche to komal boli

Komal-ab yaha kya kaam hai

Aniket-kuch nahi wo bapu ke paas paise thode jyada ho gaye hai to bas wahi halka karne aaya hu

Dono hospital ke ander aaye to to aniket ko dekhte hi ek trainee docter ne uska swagat kiya

Docter-aao aao Mr. Aniket Narayanrao Rane, aaj yaha kya kaam aa gaya aapko

Us docter ko dekhte hi komal bol padi

Komal-sumi tu pehchanti hai isko?

(ab ye to alag se batane ki jarurat nahi hai na ke wo docter komal ke pehchan wali hai)

Suman-ha bilkul, par tu kaise jaanti hai isko?

Komal-arey ye best friend hai mera, ab bata tu kaise jaanti hai isko

Suman-iska yaha aana jana hamesha ka hai, bahut bada daanveer hai ye, matlab iska blood group ‘O’ hai aur tujhe to pata hi hai is blood group ka khoon kisi ko bhi diya ja sakta hai bas ye sahab har teen mahine me yaha chale aate hai fir apna khoon donate karne..

Komal-ye mujhe nahi pata tha yaar suman

Suman-shabaas matlab aaj do namune ek sath mile hai ab pata nahi mera aaj ka din kaise bitega

Jab In dono ladkiyo ki nonstop bate chal rahi thi to aniket unhe beech k rokte huye bola

Aniket-tum log ki ye chivchiv ho gayi ho to main kuch bolu kya.. :roll: suman chal list nikal…

Komal ko kuch samajh me nahi aaya par suman ne apne computer me kuch dekhne lagi aur fir usne teen naam aniket ko bataye jiske baad aniket ne apne jeb se ek noto ka bundle nikalkar table par rakha jise suman ne le liya komal ko samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ke ye ho kya raha hai aur ye paise

Komal-ye sab kya hai..?

Suman-arey jyada kuch nahi hai, ye mahashay ek taraf masti jhagde maramari karte hai aur fir apne un papo ki bharpai ke liye hosp[ital. me aakar garibo ka bill chukka dete hai aur to aur receipt bhi nahi lete

Suman bole ja rahi thi tab aniket ne fir se use roka

Aniket-bas kar na ab suman, sach kahu to tu na galti se docter ban gayi hai teri badbad sun kar to lagta hai ke tune kisi radio me hona chahiye tha nahi to railway station pe announcement karni chahiye thi kitna bolti ho be :roll:

Ab komal aur suman ekdum khas dost thi bas dono me fark itna tha ke suman thodi hoshiyar aur samajhdar thi isiliye wo docter ban gayi aur komal ki haalat aniket se alag nahi thi matlab samajh rahe ho na ek subject do subject :D

Tabhi achanak komal ko kuch yaad aaya aur wo docter suman se boli

Komal-sumi tera problem isko batake dekh, anya solid tikdam baaz aadmi hai tera problem chutki me solve kar dega dekhiyo

Tab aniket bola

Aniket-docter suman kya problem hai bolo na

Suman-nahi yaha nahi canteen me chal kar baat karte hai

Fir wo teeno hospital ki canteen me jakar baith gaye, docter suman baat karne me thoda hichkicha rahi thi, use samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ke aniket ko ye baat kaise bataye tab aniket hi bola

Aniket-o docter ab bolo bhi kiski raah dekh rahi ho

Par docter suman apne hi khayalo me thi use sujh hi nahi raha tha ke baat kaha se shuru kare jispar anket hasa aur bola

Aniket- acha to dil ka mamla hai, apun samajh gaya ab bindaas bolo kya kar sakta hu main isme

Aniket ki baat sun kar suman chauk gayi

Suman-tumhe kaise samjhi ye baat?

Ab is baat par komal table bajate huye gane lagi

Komal-dil ka haal sune dilwala sidhi si baat na mirch masala…dil ka haal sune dilwala, sumi bindaas bol ye bhi aashiq hi hai.. :D

Ab suman ne himmat karke bolna shuru kiya

Suman-wo docter siddharth hai na?

Aniket-ab unko kya hua?

Suman-hua kuch nahi hai tum pehle baat suno puri

Aniket-ha batao..

Suman-wp docter siddharth mere hi college me the, do saal senior the mujhse, aur mujhe wo kafi pasand hai…

Aniket-to isme kya hai direct propose kar dene ka na?

Suman-tune kiya propose?

Docter suman ke sawal ka jawab aniket ke paas nahi tha tab bhi wo baat sambhalte huye bola

Aniket-usme samay hai abhi

Suman-maine bhi aisa hi socha tha par samay kab nikal gaya pata hi nahi chala, siddharth paas out ho gaya, fir bhi hamara milna shuru hi tha par ab char saal ho gaye hai aur hamari gadi dosti se aage hi nahi badhi hai

Aniket-tum kaise keh sakti ho ke siddharth bhi tumse pyaar karta hai?

Suman-wahi to samajh nahi aa raha, ani help kar de na, tum to siddharth ko bhi jaante ho na

Aniket-ha jaanta to hu par tna ache se nahi, ruko jara..

Aisa bolke aniket thoda samay kuch sochne laga aur fir bola

Aniket-kaam to ho jayega par charge lagega

Suman-charge? Kaisa charge?

Aniket-charge, kaam karne ka paisa, majduri, pagaar

Suman-ani mera ye kaam kar de jo kahega main dungi

Tab komal boli

Komal-anya sharam aati hai thodi? Apne hi dosto ko lut raha hai?

Aniket-o ho ho, waah kya baat boli hai kammo tune, kitni samajhdaar hai tu, yahi samajh shravni ki info dete time kidhar gayi thi

Tab docter suman boli

Suman-komal tu chup reh, ani bol kya chahiye tujhe?

Aniket-filhaal to mast apple ke headphone original wale baki baad me batata hu

Suman-theek hai done

Aniket-ye huyi na baat, cha lab siddharth ka number de

Fir suman se aniket ko siddharth ka number diya aur aniket se use apne phone me save kiya aur bola

Aniket-dekho suman pehle main ye confirm karunga ki siddharth bhi tumse pyaar karta hai ya nahi agar wo tumse pyaar karta hai ya tumhe sirf pasand bhi karta hai tabhi tuhari madad karunga nahi to nahi

Suman-ok done

Aniket-theek hai to docter madam ek hafta hai tumhare paas apple ke headphone kharid ke rakhne ka

Fir aniket ne goggle lagaya aur komal ko lekar waha se baahar aagaya, komal ko kafi utsukta thi kea b aniket kya karega

Komal-ab kya karega anya?

Aniket-kammo tumne akshay kumar ka picture nahi dekha kya? Jo main bolta hu wo main karya hu aur jo main nahi bolta………………… wo nahi karta, main koi akshay kuma thode hi hu :lol1:

Komal-koi sense tha kya is baat kay yah ape kuch bhi kabhi bhi :redface: acha mujhe bata tu kya siddharth se direct puchega in sab ke bare me

Aniket-abey yaar kammo tub hi namuna hai ek number ki, aise koi direct puchta hai kya?

Komal-fir kya karega

Aniket- kaisa hai na kammo insaan ko kabhi is chiz ki kimat nahi hoti jo uske paas hoti hai wait and watch…?

Komal-matlab..?

Aniket-matlab mera La……….. :redface: jane de chhod

Komal ko kuch samajh me nahi aaya aur aniket ne apna phone nikala aur siddharth ko call lagaya

Aniket-hello main aniket rane bol raha hu

Shayad siddharth ne use pehchan nahi

Siddharth-kaun?

Aniket- Aniket, O negative

Ab aniket ne aisi unique pehchan batayi tab sidharth ne use pehchana

Aniket-docter aaj mera birthday hai aur sham ko ek chhoti si party hai aur mera aapse ek important kaam bhi hai jo main hospital me nahi bol sakta, isiliye aap please party me aaiyega, mere jine marne ka swal hai docter, maine aapko pata message kiya hai…

Aniket ne apni sari baat bol di aur is andaj me boli ke siddharth mana nahi kar paya aur usne invitation swikar kar liya…

To Be Continued…..

Update 16​

Aniket ne siddharth ko ek hotel me milne bulaya tha apni birthday party ke liye aur fir jaisa decide hua tha uske mutabik aniket aur avinash hotel me pahuch gaye gaye docter siddharth ki raah dekhne lage, aniket ne ye sara kissa avinash ko pehle hi ache se samjha diya tha aura b avinash se bhi siddharth ki raah dekhne laga

Avinash-anya aayega na wo docter..?

Aniket-aayega matlab.. arey use ana hi padega tere bhai ne itna sahi planning se bulaya hai usko jo jaroor aayega jara shanti rakh…

Aur avinash aur aniket ko jyada raah bhi nahi dekhni padi aur docter siddharth waha aa gaye, aniket ne unka swagat kiya aur docterne bhi use birthday wish kiya

Aniket-docter saahab aap aaye uske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya

Siddharth-pehli baat to mujhe sirf siddharth bulao y6e saahab wagaire nahi, jaise apne dosto se baat karte ho waise hi karne ka aur raha sawaal mere yaha aane ka to mujhe to aana hi tha ab tumne kaha tha ke jine marne ka sawal hai to main kaise nahi aata, waise bhi kisi ki jaan bachana to ham docters ka pehla kartavya hai…

Aniket ne fir se unka dhanyawaad kiya aur avinash ki pehchan docter siddharth se karwayi fir siddharth bola

Siddharth-aniket, tum to keh rahe the party hai par yaha to sirf ham teeno hi hai..

Aniket-ha w0o kya hai na ye apni private party hai, aap kya loge batao beer ya whiskey..

Siddharth-nahi nahi mujhe jaldi jana hai main kuch nahi lene wala, ab batao tumhe mujhse kya kaam tha?

Aniket bechain dikh raha tha matlab wo bechain hone ka natak kar raha tha..

Aniket-siddharth, agar tumhe koi dikkat na ho to main ek beer le lu, matlab thodi himmat aa jayegi isiliye bas

Siddharth-arey isme puchne ki kya baat hai tumhara birthday hai tumhari party hai lelo bindass

Aniket aur avinash ne eke k beer uthayi, aur fir aniket serious hokar bolne laga

Aniket-siddharth mujhe aapki thodi madad chahiye, aap kafi hoshiyar aur samajhdar docter hai isiliye mujhe aapka thoda margdarshan chahiye

Siddharth-arey kya chahiye bolo na, main jaroor tumhari madad karunga, kuch medical problem hai kya

Aniket-haa, heart ka problem hai

Siddharth-heart problem, itni kam umra me heart problem kaise? Tumne cheak up wagaire karwaya na?

Aniket-heart matlab aap samajh rahe ho waisa nahi, wo kya hai na main ek ladki se pyaar karta hu aur wo ladki mujhse umra me kafi badi hai aur samajhdaar bhi hai

Siddharth-to, tumse badi hai to ky hua? Tum pyaar karte ho na usse?

Aniket-ha, main bahut pyaar karta hu usse itna ke agar ko abhi ha kar de to yahi usse shadi bhi kar lunga

Siddharth-bas fir problem solve hai, umra ka to isme kahi koi sawal hi nahi hai tum bindass bedhadak jakar us ladki se apne dil ki baat kaho, use batao ki tum usse kitna pyaar karte ho

Aniket-wahi to use batane ki himmat nahi ho rahi hai docter isiliye to aapki madad mangne aaya hu, main nahi ji paunga uske bagair

Siddharth-acha mujhe batao kaun hai wo ladki

Aniket-aap jaante hai use

Siddharth- bas fir baat hi solve ho gayi main baat karunga use par ab mujhe sidhe se batao to kaun hai wo..

Aniket ne glass muh se lagaya aur siddharth use aise dekh ke muskuraya, use samajh aa gaya tha ke aniket ki himmat nahi ho rahi hai to wo use samjhate huye bola

Siddharth-aniket chinta mat karo mujhe bas uska naam batao main puri madad karunga tumhari do minute ke kaam ho jayega tumhara

Tab aniket se naam bataya

Aniket-docter suman..!

Suman ka naam sunte hi siddharth chauk ke apni khurchi se uth gaya

Siddharth-kyaaaa? Suman..? docter suman….

Aniket-ha suman, aap use college se jaante ho aur hospital me bhi aap uske senior ho wo aapki baat jarur manegi please mera itna kaam kar dijiye main jindagi bhar aapka ehsanmand rahunga

Aniket siddharth ke chehre pe expressions barkayi se dekh raha tha…docter suman ka naam sunte hi siddharth ke chehre ka rang ud gaya tha..aur aniket ne agla daav khela

Aniket-siddharth ek beer to lo

Siddharth apne hi khayalo me tha aur usne bhi ha keh diya aur aniket ne pat se waiter ko beer lane ko kaha tab tak usne avi ke beer se ek glass bhar ke siddharth ke saamne kar diya aur siddharth ne ek hi ghut me wo glass khatam kar diya, teer sahi nishane pe laga tha aur pehla daav pura ho chukka tha aur aniket ne ab avinash ko siddharth ko na pata chale aise aankh maar ke ishara kar diya mano keh raha ho

Loha garam hai maar de hatoda…

Aur uske baad avinash ne apni nautanki shuru ki..

Avinash-doctor saahab main aapke aage hath jodta hu, aap kaho to pair padta hu par aap kuch bhi karo aur mere dost ka ye kaam kar do, wo paagalpan maine kiya mere dost ke sath waisa na ho…

Aur ye baat bolte sath avinash ki aankhon me pani tha, siddharth ko samajh hi nahi aaya ke ye kya chal raha hai wo jara chidh kar bola

Siddharth-ab tera kya natak hai baba

Aur apna avi to aaj full form me tha aaj to wo Oscar liye bagair manne wala hi nahi tha

Avinash-natak!! Natak!! Arey docter sahab main bhi aise hi ek ladki se pyaar karta tha par meri himmat hi nahi hoti thi use propose karne ki, mujhe lagta tha ke wo meri classmate hai, hamesha mere sath rehti hai itni jaldbaji kis chiz ki hai, pehle padhai puri kar lu fir naukri leke settle hone ke baad sidha usse shadi ke liye puchunga maine aisa socha tha par…..

Avinash ruka aur usne beer ka ghut liya, ye kahani siddharth se milti julti thi isiliye siddharth bhi gaur se sun raha tha aur jab avinash kuch nahi bola to siddharth ne pucha

Siddharth- fir…aage kya hua..?

Avinash-hona kya tha wo meri raah dekhti rahi aur main darta raha

Siddharth-fir..?

Avinash-fir ek din ek amir ladka aaya aur usse shadi kar ke use le gaya, mujhe baadme uski saheli ne bataya ki wo bhi mujhse kitna pyaar karti thi par kabhi keh na payi aur uske baap ne uski shadi karwa di..

Fir avinash aasman ki taraf dekh ke bola

Avinash-ketki kyu kiya aisa..? kyu chali gayi mujhe chhod ke? Kaas tum ruk jati…par ab is baat ka koi matlab nahi hai…..

Aur avinash fut fut ke rone laga aur aniket use shant karane laga

Avinash-isiliye docter sahab dusra koi suman se shadi karke use le jaye aap mere dost ka kaam kar dijiye late nahi hona chahiye…

Ab siddharth kasar ghumne laga tha aur wo avinash ki taraf ektak dekhe ja raha tha, use avinash ne apna chehra dikh raha tha, aur un sab me 4 beer kab khatam huyi use pata hi nahi chala ek to suman ka khayal usme beer ka asar siddharth ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha thaw o apni jagahse uthte huye bola

Siddharth-ani ham is bare me baad me baat karenge abhi mujhe ek urgent kaam hai

Itna bolke siddharth waha se jhulte huye nikalgaya aur jate huye wo badbada raha tha

Siddharth-late nahi hona chahiye, late nahi hona chahiye

Siddharth hotel se baahar nikal gaya fir aniket avinash se bola

Aniket- kya sala nautanki hai to avya, do minute ke liye to maine bhi maan liya tha ke tu sach bol raha hai, kaha se sikha be itni jabardast acing

Avinash-kahi jane ki jarurat hai kya, tere se hi sikha hu :D ye sab chhod maine sab tere bataye mutabik kiya bas usme thoda tadka laga diya acting sahi huyi na

Aniket-tadkaa!! Babu tune sirf tadka nahi lagaya balki masala maar ke ye story dun biryani jaise peh ki hai, shabaas proud of you, aaj lag raha hai tum era dost hai…par ek baat bata ye ketki ka kya scene hai?

Avinash ne aniket ke hath me ek tissue paper pakda diya jispar us hotel ka naam printed tha ‘hotel Ketki’

Dono jor jor se hasne lage

Aniket-docter to giyo….:lol1:…..

Update 17​

Raat ko aniket apne bedroom me baitha aaj ke din ke bare me soch raha tha aur siddharth ka kissa yaad kar kar ke has raha tha.. tabhi achanak ek khayal bijli jaisa uske dimag me kaundha aur usne use hila diya, aniket ekdum uth baitha tha… wo soch raha tha ke agar avinash ki batayi kahani sahi me sach ho gayi to? Avinash ki jagah wo raha to? Aur jis ketki ke bare me avinash bola tha uski jagah shravni huyi to ? arey baap re jo aniket dusro ko gyan dete firta hai wo khud kya kar raha hai? Shravni saamne se aake khud kuch bolegi nahi jo bhi kuch bolna ya karna tha wo aniket ko hi karna tha aur wo bhi kisi aur ke beech me aane ke pehle, yahi sab sochte huye ab aniket ki bhi haalat kharab hone lagi, ek hisab se dekha jaye to avinash ne ek teer se do shikar kiye the, aniket khud se hi bola

Aniket-kya sala avya bhi nautanki baaz hai aur main ek number ka gadha hu, mujhe lag raha tha ki wo siddharth ki firki le raha hai par ab samajh aaya ki wo sala meri bhi firki le raha tha, isko to kal dekhta hu main…

Par fir agle hi pal uske dimag me khayal aaya ke kya galat bola avi ne? jane ko chhodo yaar ye sab abhi important nahi hai…important hai to wo hai shravni ko apne pyaar ke bare me batana, par bataya kaise jaye fir achanak uske dimag me aaya ki kyu na love letter ke dwara apni feelings shravni ko batayi jaye… mast idea hai ye soch ke aniket ne apni hi pith thapthapayi aur book pen leke baith gaya par bhai ki gadi shuruwat me hi ruk gayi na….

“kya likha jaye? Kaise shuruwat ki jaye?” aniket ne apne sar pe hath maar liya, use to ye bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha le love letter English me likhe ya hindi me aur bahut sochne ke baad usne decide kiya ke letter wo English me likhega taki impression acha pade….

Ab letter kaise likhna hai ye to bhai ne soch liya tha par fir se gadi pehle hi shabd pe aake ruk gayi, pehle aniket ne dear shravni likha wo use theek nahi laga to mita diya, fir my dear shravni likha wo bhi mita diya uske baad aniket ne my love shravni likha aura b to page hi faad diya :Lol1: ab aniket ko chidchid hone lagi thi

Aniket-kya lafda hai BC sadhi shuruwat kaise karu samajh nahi aa raha, :sigh:

Fir jaise taise aniket ne shuruwat karke char lines likhi (ekdum bakwas likhi thi isiliye batake mood nahi kharab karega apun :yuck: ) fir use laga ki kyu na is bare me kammo se pucha jaye aur aniket ne komal ko call kiya par ye direct love letter ki baat kaise kare isiliye usne shuruwat kuch is tarah ki..

Aniket-hello komal..teri dost ka kaam ho gaya hai..

Udhar komal ye baat sun ke ekdum khush, aur puche lagi ke kaise hua wagaire to aniket se use pura kissa short me bataya

Aniket-kammo ek aur baat karni thi tujhse..

Komal-to bol na teko kabse permission maangne ki jarurat padne lagi bindass bol..

Aniket-wo…..tune kabhi love letter likha hai kya?

Komal-kyaa..? anya tu daru piya hai kya? Main aur love letter chiii :yuck:

Aniket-usme itna chii karne jaisa kya hai apne liye na sahi kisi aur ke liye likha hoga..

Komal-ek minute pehle ye bata kit u ye kyu puch raha hai :huh:

Aniket-wo…..mujhe lagta hai ke….main bhi propose kar hi du shravni ko..

Komal-sach..to anya bindass jake bolne ka na ye letter wagaire faltu hai re..direct propose karne ka ham hai tere sath…

Aniket-wahi to samajh nahi aa raha..kaise karu propose?

Komal-kaise matlab sidha jake direct bolne ka

Aniket-direct?

Komal-ha wo ha bol degi 😌

Aniket-aur agar wo no boli to?

Komal-chinta mat kar re teri pujarin tujhe kuch karne wali hai kya agar jyada hi gussa ho gayi to bas do char kavita fek ke maregi tujhe aur kuch nahi

Aniket-kuch bhi mat bol kame use pasand hu na main?

Komal-anya chinta mat kar wo like karti hai tujhe

Aniket-tujhe kaise pata?

Komal-jaise billi doodh se bhare barten ko dekhti hai na waise dekhti hai wo tujhe billi ki tarah

Aniket-ye kaisa example hua :roll:

Komal-tune pucha isiliye maine sabhyata se billi kaha agar wo puchti to batati ke jaise laal kapda dekh ke sand pagal ho jata hai waise shravni ko dekh ke tu paagal ho jata hai

Aniket-ha ye sach bhi hai waise, use dekha to dusra kuch sujhta hi nahi hai, wo hai hi aisi lagta hai bas use hi dekhte rahe…swarg ki apsara mano mere liye dharti pe aayi ho

Komal-o taja taja aashiq aao wapis dharti pe aao sapno ki duniya se baahar niklo

Aniket-kame kya bolte hai propose karte time?

Komal-ye bhi main hi batau kya :roll:

Aniket-bata na

Komal-theek hai sun, usko college me ek side me leke jane ka aur sidha batane ka shravne tu meko bahut pasand hai sirf ha bol apan shadi kar lenge, bada ghar hai wahi rahenge aur baccho ko English medium me padhayenge wagaire… aisa bolne ka 😌

Aniket- fir wo kya karegi, ha bolegi na

Komal-jyada kuch nahi karegi bas sandel tute tak maregi tujhe, tere me akkal hai kya anya? Tu meko aise puch raha hai jaise main subah dudhwale se leke raat ko watchman tak sabko propose karti hu, abe paagal aadmi tere man me kya hai tujhe uske bare me kya lagta hai ye bol

Aniket-par wo ha bolegi na?

Komal-abey yaar iski gadi ab bhi wahi atki hai :sigh:

Aniket-ye lafde ka kaam hai yaar ek baar ko tu bol char logo ko maarna hai wo easy hai ye propose karne se, kammo main love letter likh ke hi propose karta hu…

Komal-ha aise bhi kar sakte hai

Aniket-maine char lines likhi hai whatsapp me photo bhejta hu teko bata sahi hai ya nahi

Fir aniket ne apne likhe love letter ka photo komal ko bheja aur do hi minute me komal ka phone aaya

Komal-anya lover letter ka khayal chhod de tu

Aniket-kyu? Acha nahi hai?

Komal-wo lines to ghatiya hai hi teri hand writing aur bhi jyada ghatiya hai :yuck:

Aniket-fir ab kya kare?

Komal-teko ye sab kal hi karna hai kya?

Aniket-hao

Komal-kyu uske baap ne uske liye rishte dekhna shuru kar diye kya?

Aniket-nahi re par apne ko koi rish nahi lene ka hai, nahi to main bas plan karte rahunga aur koi aur baji maar jayega, apne ko aur time waste nahi karne ka hai

Komal-theek hai abi so ja kal college me milke decide karte hai kya karna hai

Aniket-kammo meko bahut tension ho rahi yaar, wo ha bolegi na

Komal-arghhh! :mad1: anya agar dobara ye sawal kiya to waha aake laat marungi, dimag ka dahi kar diya pura, phone rakh aur so aur meko sone de kal dekhnege kya karna hai

Komal ne phone kaat diya par aniket ko neend hi nahi aa rahi thi aura b soch soch ke uska sar dard karne laga tha, isi chakker ke raat me use kab neend aayi pata hi nahi chala….

Update 18​

Agle din aniket subah jaldi tayar hoke college ke liye nikal hi raha tha ke komal uske ghar aa gayi aur dono waha se sath college ke liye nikle, raat bhar neend na hone ki wajah se aniket ki aankhen laal thi aur uske chehre par tanav saaf dikh raha tha, aaj aniket bahut jyada shant tha jo ki shayad bahut hi rare raha hoga uski puri jindagi me, dimag se khayalo ke ghode sab taraf daud rahe the, ye aniket ke swabhav ka ek aur gun tha, uske dimag me agar koi ek baat fit baith jaye to wo use pura karke hi dum leta tha aur jab tak wo baat puri na hoti thi use chain nahi milta tha aur yaha to sala dil ka mamla tha to chain kaise hi milta,

Is waqt aniket aur komal apne college ki canteen me the aur bechaini ke mare aniket canteen me idhar se udhar chakker laga raha tha, aaj avinash gayab tha, ek to abhi tak college nahi aaya tha aur dusra uska phone bhi nahi lag raha tha aniket bhi subah gadbad me college ke liye nikla tha to usne avinash ko pick nahi kiya tha aur akhir kaar aniket ki bechaini se tang aakar komal boli

Komal-mujhe to ye samajh nahiaa raha hai ki teko itni gadbad kyu hai propose karne ki?

Aniket-kammo teko pata hai na apni ek baat jo fix ho gayi ho gayi, ek baar maine commitment kar di to kar di bas ab bahut hua intajar aaj ye Vishay hi khatam, ya to is paar ya us paar, aaj to main shravni ko propose karke hi rahunga dimag ka bhusa ho gaya hai kal se…

Tab komal aniket ko samjhate huye boli

Komal-anya ye aise gadbd karna nahi nahi hoga apan shanti se baith ke decide karte hai, sab badhiya plan karke karenge…

Aniket-tu to aise bol rahi hai jaise band baje ke sath propose karna hai jo planning ki baat kar rahi, dekh kammo jo bhi karna hai shanti ke sath bagair halla kiye karna hai kyuki agar halla kiya aur shravni ne na bol diya na to sabke saamne ijjat ki aisi taisi ho jani hai aur ek baar ko to wo itne logo ko dekh ke hi na bol degi, teko pata hi hai wo kitni sadhi aur simple hai use ye sab tamjham nahi pasand aayega…

Komal-anya aa jaha aaram se baith aurye le pani pi, mere paas ek idea to hai dekhte hai kaam karta hai ya nahi..

Aniket jhat se khurchi par baitha aur utawale pan se pucha

Aniket-jaldi bata kya idea hai..

Komal-tu bas ye decide kar le ki tujhe shravni se kya kehna hai baki ka kaam mere pe chhod de, tujhe mere pe bharosa hai na?

Aniket-nahi!

Komal-very good fir ab dekh main kya karti hu…

Aniket-dekh tu kuch bhi kar bas meri vaat mat lagana, tera koi bharosha nahi hai, yaads hai na tere chakker me ek ladki ke hath ka thappad bhi kha chukka hu main

Komal-nahi re anya, maskhari maskhari ki jagah ki jati hai par abhi ye samay majak ka nahi hai, aur tu jigri dost hai apna aaj to tera mamla set karna hi hai aur agar nahi kiya to mera naam bhi komal nahi..

Aniket-aur agar wo na bol de to

Komal-tu bata, kidnap kar le kya teri pujairn ko..mamla ek jhatke me khatam ho jana hai fir

Aniket-nahi nahi itna bhi nahi karne ka hai kuch aur kammo tu na tere ye chote se dimag ko jyada kaam mat de jo karna hai jaldi kar break me shravni aa jayegi yaha aur jisne ye aag lagayi hai wo narad kaha hai dikh nahi raha

Komal-pata nahi…par anya don’t worry adha kaam ho chuka hai avi bhi aa hi jayega aur sam time se hoga tension mat le

Aniket-adha kaa ho gaya matlab?

Komal-tu jaha dimag lagana hai waha dimag lagana baki ki bato ko chhod de aur ye decide kar ke propose ke time kya bolega main yu gayi aur yu aayi

Aniket-ab tu kaha chali..

Komal-shamshan me marne! Chalega sath, aur chalega to akele aana teri wo pehli barish ki fuhar ko sath me le lena, teko aaj propose karna hai na to tu sirf uspe focus kar

Itna bol ke komal gadbad me waha se nikal gayi aur uske jate hi waha avinash maharaj padhare aur use dekhte hi aniket bhadak gaya

Aniket-bhosdk yaha meri gand ke niche aag lagi hai dhua bhi nikal raha hai aur tu ab aa raha hai lawde kaha gand marwa raha tha be gandu aur wo mobile bech diya kya

Avi ne koi reaction nahi diya wo bhi jaanta tha ye aag usi ne to lagayi thi

Avinash-phone ki battry down ho gayi thi BC aur charge karna bhul gaya tha

Aniket-ha aur teri battry ke chakker me hame charge pe lagane ka samay aa gaya hai

Avinash-kya hua ek raat me aisa kaunsa pahad tut gaua lawde jo itni bakbak kar raha

Waise dekha jaye to avi ne jaan bujh ke apna phone band kar diya tha, usne bahut soch ke siddharth aur aniket ke sath ye game khela tha, wo bachpan se aniket ko jaanta tha aur use sahi se pata tha ke aniket ke dimag me koi chiz kaise ghusani hai, sidhe sidhe bolne ke aniket kuch nahi karega ye avi jaanta tha isiliye usne ye pura khel racha tha

Aniket-avi tu na dikhta waisa nahi hai bhadkhau chal baahar chal batata hu

Dono college ke baahar aaye aur apne katte ke bath ke dono ne cigarette jalayi aur aniket bola

Aniket-avi maan gaye bhai teko kya solid game banaya tune mera

Avinash-main aur tera game, kuch bhi mat bol anya

Aniket-dekh aisa hai tu mujhe jitna gadha samajhta hai main utna nahi hu samjha

Avinash-matlab thoda gadha to hai ok samajh gaya

Aniket-wo chhod tune siddharth ko jo story sunay hai na usse meri aankhen khul gayi…

Avinash-wo story siddharth ke liye nahi tere hi liye thi bas mauka nahi mil raha tha us din mauka mila aur maine sidha sixer maar diya..

Aniket-haramkhor aadmi, khair waise jo hua acha hi hua aaj apun shravni ko propose karne wala hai

Aniket ki baat sun kar avinash ne khushi se use gale laga liya

Avinash-arey ek number bhai, gazab, meko laga nahi tha ke ye itne jaldi hoga par sahi socha hai aaj ya to aar ya paar, kammo kidhar hai

Aniket-wo kuch tayari karne gayi hai

Avinash-kahe ki tayari be, uska bharosa nahi, wo stree hai kuch bhi kar sakti hai

Aniket-abe bakwas mat kiya kar, baki ke time ka to nahi pata par is samay wo job hi karegi aflatoon karegi, jate huye mujhe bol ke gayi hai ke kya bolna hai decide kar lu baki ka wo sambhal legi

Avinash-fir soch liya kya bolega

Aniket-hao, raat bhar wohi to soch raha tha

Fir uske baad dono shanti se kash lagane lage, ye tufan ke pehle ki shanti thi, main do minute me aaya bol kea vi waha se satak gaya aur aniket ki cigarette khatam hone ke pehle aa gaya

Aniket utha aur bola

Aniket-chal, aaj to ho jane de

Avinash-ek minute…

Fir avinash ne apne jeb seek scent ki bottle nikali aur aniket ke kapdo par use scent mara aur apni jeb se ek mint nikal ke uske muh me di

Avinash-ye le mint kha, shravni ko agar cigarette ka baas bhi aaya to tere kuch bolne se pehle hi bhag jayegi wo

Fir avinash se ek dairymilk nikal le aniket ko pakdaya aur dheere se bola

Avinash-agar wo ha bole tabhi ye dairymilk diyo be, dukan wala pehchan ka hai ye wapis de ke dusra kuch le lenge

Aniket ne dairymilk li aur wo aur avinash wapis college me aaya, itna samay confusion me dikhne wala aniket ab full confident dikh raha tha…..

To Be Continued…..

Update 19​

Aniket aur avinash badhiya sutta fuk ke jab wapis canteen me aaye to komal unka waha intajar hi kar rahi thi aur wo unhe dekhte hi boli

Komal-kam se kam aaj to fukne nahi jana tha

Tab aniket topic badalte huye bola

Aniket-wo jane de tu bata tu jis kaam ke liye gayi thi wo ho gaya kya?

Komal-hao ho gaya hai

Tabhi komal ko scent ki khushboo aayi

Komal-arey waah anya tu to badhiya scent wagaire laga ke ready hai mast!

Aniket- ha to, aj ka din bhi to special hai

Fir komal ne apne bag me se ek tshirt nikala aur aniket ko diya pehanne ke liye

Komal-wo shirt nikal aur ye tshirt pehan le

Aniket-kyu kya kharabi hai is shirt me acha to hai

Aisa bolte huye aniket ko wo tshirt liya aur dekha to uske chehre par ek muskan aa gayi fir canteen ke kitchen me jakar wo shirt change kar aaya aur komal ne fir use ek jacket diya pehanne ke liye aur fir komal ne un dono ko pura plan samjhaya ki kya kya kaise kaise karna hai, aniket ne jhat se jacket pehan kar uski zip laga li aur komal ne usse pucha

Komal-kya bolna hai sab soch liya hai na ?

Aniket-hao 😌

Komal-theek hai to fir mujhe shravni samajh aur bol

Ab shuru huyi aniket ke proposal ki rangit talim, aniket bol raha tha aur komal shant waha khadi rehkar sun rahi thi, aniket ka bolna khatam hua, usne itna ache se sab bola tha ke komal bas use hi ektak nihar rahi thi, aniket ka bolna khatam hone ke baad bhi komal bas use hi dekhe ja rahi thi, uski aankhen dabdaba gayi thi aur wo apne aasuo ko rokne ki bharpur koshish kar rahi thi par fir bhi halke se ek aansu ki bund uski aankho se jhalak kar uske galo par aa gayi usne jhat se apne us aansu ko saaf kiya, aniket to apnihi dhund me tha uska to is taraf dhyan bhi nahi gaya aur komal ko bhi laga ki kisi ka is taraf dhyan nahi hoga par ek insan tha jisne ye baat dekh li thi jis aansu ko kisi ne nahi dekha use avinash ne dekha tha..

Aniket bola

Aniket-fir kammo kaisa laga mera performance?

Komal bhi apne chir parichit andaj me aate huye boli

Komal-anya teko dekh ke lagta nahi tu itna sab acha soch sakta hai, jhakaassss, bole to ekdum kadaak! Ab to shravni kya uska baap bhi ha bol dega

Idhar avinash ne sari fielding lagayi huyi thi, udhar shravni jaise hi apne class se nikli ek ladke ne avi ko is baat ki kharab de di ke shravni nikal chuki hai aura vi ne yahi khabar canteen me aakar de di, aaj akkhe canteen me kuch gini chuni ladkiya hi thi, avi aur komal ne milkar baki sab ko canteen ke baahar nikal diya tha aur canteen ke malik ko avi ne dhamki kam request kit hi to wo bhi is sab ke liye maan gaya tha…

Aur shravni aayi, apni jindagi ki ek bahut sundar ghatna aaj hone wali hai is baat ki use halki sib hi kalpana nahi thi, jaise hi shravni canteen me aayi komal uske paas gayi aur komal ne use ek sunder sa yellow rose diya ek smile ke sath

Achanak ye yellow rose ka matlab shravni ko samajh me nahi aaya

Shravni-ye kya hai komal?

Komal-yellow rose, dosti ke liye…

Shravni-aaj kuch special hai kya?

Komal-aise hi…

Itna bol ke komal waha se side hat gayi auruske baad avinash ne aake shravni ko ek rose diya fir waha baithi hare k ladki ne aakar shravni ko ek ek rose diya..

Ab ye batane ki jarurat nahi hai ye ye sab fielding komal ki lagayi huyi thi jiske bare me aniket ko jara bhi khabar nahi thi, aise dus bara gulab lekar shravni aniket baitha tha us table par aayi aur baith gayi

Shravni-aniket kya chal raha hai ye sab? Ye sabhi log mujhe kyu rose de rahe hai? Aaj rose day hai kya?

Fir aniket ne ek red rose shravni ko diya, ab ye sab mahol dekh ke shravni ko bhi idea ho chala tha ke ye sab kya chal raha hai aura b wo bhi excited thi ye aage kya hone wala hai, aur fir aniket ne bolna shuru kiya

Aniket-wo kya hai na shravni aaj ka din bahut special hai, bahut dino se mere dimag me ek baat ghum rahi hai par sasura samajh nahi aa raha tha ke kaise kahu, aaj main sab kuch keh ke apna man mokla karna chahta hu,

Shravni aage kya hone wala hai us khayal se excited ho rahi thi aur kaampti awaj me wo boli

Shravni-bolo na..

Aniket-main pehle aisa nahi tha shravni par jab tumhe pehli baar dekha main khud ko hi kho baitha..

us din sebas tum hi tum mere dilo dimag me ho dusra koi khayal hi nahi aata hai, aisa lagta hai bas hamesha tumhare sath tumhare aaspaas rahu, ghanto tumse bate karta rahu, tumhare sath bitaya hua har pal bada anmol hai mere liye, har pal bas tumhara hi khayal hai aur tumhari in aankhon ne to mujhe paagal kar diya hai, inhe dekhe bagair to raha nahi jaya, tumhe dekhte hi main khud ko kho baitta hu, tumhara bolna hasna sab pagal bana deta hai mujhe, pata hai jab tum paas nahi tohi ho to main man hi man sochta rehte hu ke shravni milegi to usse ye kahunga, ye baat karunga, sirf sapne rachta rehta hu par jab tum saamne aati ho to mere shabd bhi mera sath chhod dete hai, mere man me rache huye wo bangle wo bate sab mano kahi gum ho jate hai bas bachti hai to tumhe dekhte rehne ki icha, tumhare sath bitaya hua har par maine motiyo ki taraf apne man me sanjo ke rakha hai, mujhe nahi pata ki ise kya kehte hai, koi ise pagalpan kehta hai koi bachkani harkat bhi keh dega par sach batau tu mujh me in bhavnao ko pehchanne ki Shakti hai nahi hai, maine inhe kabhi samajh hi nahi pata, kya hai ye? Dosti ya pyaar? Aaj tak main apne man ko samjhata tha ke nahi! Kuch nahi bolna hai, bhavnaye kitni bhi umad aaye fir bhi bagair kuch bole chup rehna hai, iska reason ye ki mujhe darr tha ke kahi tum mujhse dur na ho jao, agar tum dur ho gayi to mera kya hoga, isiliye ajtak maine apni bhavnaye daba ke rakhi par jitna main apni bhavnao ko dabata utha hi wo baahar aane ki koshish karti, mujhe aaj tumhare man ki baat bhi janni hai

Fir aniket ne shravni ka hath apne hatho me liye

Aniket- shravni tumhare bina main adhura hu, tum aayi to jindagi ko naya matlab mila hai, prem bhavna ye maine aajtak bas suna tha par ye prem kya hai ye maine tumse sikha hai, mujhe jindagibhar ka sath chahiye, tum sath ho to ye jindagi kitn haseen hogi is bare me to main abhi sochna bhi nahi chahta, dogi mera sath, jindagibhar ke liye. Aaj main tumse apni mohabbat ka ijhar karta hu, main tumse itna pyaar karta hu ke use shabdo me bayan nahi kar sakta…

Fir aniket uth ke khada hua aur uske jacket ki zip open ki, tshirt par kuch likha hua tha

I LOVE YOU :heart:

DO YOU LOVE ME 💘

Shravni ki aankhe bhari huyi thi, hoth kaamp rahe the aur muh se shabd baahar nahi nikal rahe the…

Komal ne canteen ke fan ke upper gulab ke phulo ki pankhudiya rakhi huyi thi usne jakar fan shuru kiya aur aniket aur shravni ke uper gulab ki pankhudiyo ki barish ho gayi… komal ne aniket ko ek pachek diya hua tha shravni ko dene ke liye aniket ne wo packet shravni ko diya, shravni ne wo packet khola to usme bas ek kora kagaz tha, usne page ko palat ke dekha to bhi uspar kuch bhi likha hua nahi tha, aniket ne thode gusse se komal ki taraf dekha, komal aur avinash bhag ke waha pahuche aur aniket ko shant rehne ka ishara kiya aur komal ne table par ek candle jalayi aur bolo

Komal-shravni, aajtak aniket ki life is paper ke jaisi kori thi, tumhare pyaar ki garmi use mili aur kamaal ho gaya..

Aisa bolke komal ne wo paper candle ke thoda uper pakda, jaise jaise kagaz ko heat milne lagi jo halka sa jalne laga aur uspar kuch akshar ubhar aaye, uspar likha tha

I LOVE YOU SHRAVNI…. 💘

Update 20​

Aniket ke apna dil nikal ke shravni ke saamne rakh diya tha aur shravni ko samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ke ye sab sapna hai ya hakikat , itne sab mahol me shravni chakra gayi thi, uski aankhon me khushi ke aansu the aur aniket aakho me asha liye uski taraf dekh raha tha, shravni ke man me bhavnao ka aveg kuch is kadar umad raha tha ke uske muh se shabd hi nahi nikal rahe the

Aur ab sabko is baat ki tension hone lagi thi ki shravni kuch bol kyu nahi rahi hai aur achanak shravni apni jagah se uthi aur apni dono baho ka haar banate huye usne aniket ko gale laga liya… shravni ke is taraf gale lagne se aniket bhi thoda chauk gaya tha aur idhar avi ne apni do ungliya muh me daalte huye siti bajayi aur pure canteen me jallosh shuru ho gaya, full dhamaal aur akhir kyu na ho aniket ka proposal shravni ke accept jo kar liya tha, sabne milkar canteen ko sar par utha liya tha, sabhi log khushi me nach rahe the aur aaj to aniket aur shravni ke khushi kea age aasman bhi chhota pad gaya tha…

Kuch samay baad ye masti ka mahol thoda kam hua par abh bhi aniket ke shravni ka hath nahi chhoda tha jise dekh ke akhir me avinash bola

Avinash- o bhai, ab to hath chhod se bechari ka, ab to usne ha bhi keh diya hai, chinta mat kar kahi bhag ke nahi jane wali wo ab…

Avinash ki baat sunkar shravni se pat se aniket ki pakad se apna hath chhudaya par aniket wapis uska hath pakadte huye bola

Aniket-tere baap ka kya jata be aala motha shahana gyan dene wala

Itne me komal boli

Komal-aaila principal!!

Principal ka naam sunte hi dono ne pat se hath chhod diya aur aniket ne dheere se piche mud ke dekha to waha koi nahi tha….aur idhar avinash aur komal daat nikal ke jor jor se has rahe the…aura b unke sath shravni bhi hasne lagi aur boli…

Shravni-komal main aapka kin shabdo me dhanyawaad karu samajh nahi aa raha… aaj aapki wajah se ye jo anmol pal mujhe mile hai wo main jindagi bhar nahi bhulungi..

aapka ye ehsan hai mujhpar mujhe aniket se milane ke liye, main kaise chukaungi ise

Shravni ki baat sunkar apne shirt ki sleevs upper karte huye komal boli

Komal-ekdum easy hai, tumko bas teen chize karni padengi jya kuch nahi

Shravni-manjur!

Komal-arey didi sun to lo pehle :redface: to pehla kaam ye ki tum mujhe ye aap aap karke nahi bulaogi, tumko ab job hi ye inhe unhe aap tum karne ka hai uske liye tumhare paas ek banda hai usko karne ka 😌

Shravni-manjur, aage

Fir komal apni jagah par se uthi aur canteen malak ko bola, bola ka jahir kiya

Komal-kaka, canteen me jitne bhi log hai sabko aaj meri taraf se ek ek petis aur ek cutting chai do, behno aur unke bhailogo enjoy!

Fir koml niche baithte huye boli

Komal-ha to dusra kaam ye ke is sab ka bill tum bharogi :D

Komal ki baat sunkar shravni ghabra gayi par fir aniket ne use aankho se don’t worry ka ishara kiya ki wo sambhal lega, komal ne aage bola

Komal-ab teesra aur sabse important kaam bata rahi hu….

Fir komal ne ek bada pause liya…. Shravni ka dil jor se dhadak raha tha , wo man hi man me soch rahi thi k ye mahamaya ab kya mangegi, aur komal uske chehre par ke ye expressions dekh rahi thi aur fir komal boli

Komal-chill baby doll tu to aise tension me aa gayi jaise main anya ko maang lungi, chill baby main usse kuch bada mangne wali hi

Ab shravni aur jyada tension me

Komal-to aaj tu mujhe anya ko sakshi maan kar ye vachan de kit u aage aane wali jindagi me kabhi bhi kahi bhi ek chhoti sib hi kavita nahi sunayegi, bol manjur…

Pehle pehle to sabki hawa tight ho gayi thi ye sochkar ke komal kya mangegi par fir uski baat sunkar has hasne lage aur shravni ne uski ye baat bhi maan li..aur aniket haste huye bola

Aniket-ek number ki nautanki hai tu kammo..

Komal-ha na tere se kam hi hai..

Fir avinash ne ekdum se pucha

Avinash-komal, wo paper to pehle ekdum kora tha fir candle par pakadne ke baad akshar kaise dikhne lage uspe? Ye kaisa jadu tha?

Waise to ye sawal sabhi ke dimag me tha aur komal khulasa karte huye boli

Komal-wo ek badhiya trick hai tumlog bhi kar sakte ho, kya karna hai batati hu, ek kanda lene ka (pyaz) uska ras nikalne ka aur fir us ras se kisi bhi paper par likhne ka fir jaise hi tum wo paper candle par sahi se pakdoge jisme pyaz ke ras se likha hai to wo likha hua bhag jalne lagega aur jo likha hai dikhne lagta hai, bas itni si trick hai 😌

Jispar avinash komal ko shabasi dete huye bola

Avinash- kya gazab kamal ladki hai be, kaha kaha se lati ho aise idea, komal tu na ek dukan khol le, hamare yaha alag alag taraf se propose karke milega, dukan ke saamne line lag jayengi bata raha hu…

Teeno dost dil khol kar has rahe the, unhe dekh ke koi nahi keh sakta tha ke kuch samay pehle inke dimag par bhari tension tha. Shravni jab jane lagi to aniket use chhodne gaya aur unke jate hi avinash ne achanak apna hath komal ke samne shake hand ke liye aage kiya

Avinash-hello, main avinash…

Komal-meko pata hai, dmag ghum gaya hai kyat era? Aise kyu baat kar raha hai jaise ham pehli baar mile hai…

Fir avinash gambhir hote huye bola…

Avinash-sach hi to hai, aajtak to ham sirf mil hi rahe the, asli komal ki pehchan to mujhe aaj huyi hai…

Komal ekdum sambhal ke baith gay aur boli

Komal-kuch bhi kya bol raha hai avya, ye kya badbada raha hai.

Avinash-sabne aaj khush hua aniket dekha, sihri huyi shravni dekhi par maine aaj dekhi komal, ekdum uske naam jaisi, swach manasvi, sacchi komal, maine tumhari aankho ka wo aansu dekha tha aur bahut kuch bol gayi woe k bund..

Komal-please avi iske aage ek shabd bhi mat bolna..

Avinash-par kyu?

Komal-kyuki main keh rahi hu isliye, tumhe hamari dosti ki kasam, tumhe aniket ki dosti ki kasam, aaj mujhe ek vachan de ki aage jindagi me kabhi bhi ye baat apne hotho pe nahi layega aur agar aisa hua to kasam hai mujhe aniket ki wo din mere jindagi ka aakhri din hoga

Avinash-vachan to main de dunga par ek baar sirf itna bata, aakhir kyu?

Komal-kabhi pyaar kiya hai?

Avinash-nahi..

Komal-to karo fir samjhoge

Itna bol ke komal waha se nikal gayi aur jate jate ek dharam sankat avinash ke liye chhod gayi, ek taraf apne baalmirta ka pyaar aur dusri taraf komal jisme mohabbat hote huye bhi haste haste uski khushi ke piye apne prem ka gala ghot diya, avinash aasman ki taraf dekhte huye bola

Avinash-parmeshwar, ab job hi kar sakte ho tum hi kar sakte ho, bas itna karna ki mujhe kabhi kisi ke pyaar me na girana…..

To Be Continued…

Update 21​

To aniket ne apne dil ki baat shravni ko bata di thi aur shravni ne bhi uska proposal accept kar liya tha, ab halanki ye pyaar tha ya sirf attraction ye dono me se koi nah jaanta tha aur abhi is baat se koi fark bhi nahi padta tha, dono filhaal kafi jyada khush the…

Agle din jab komal college pahuchi to aniket abhi college nahi aaya tha aur jab komal canteen me pahuchi to avinash pehle se hi waha maujood tha matlab jo hamesha time par aane wala banda tha wo aaj gayab tha aur late aane wala samay se pehle hi pahuch gaya tha… komal avinash ke paas jakar baith gayi

Komal-kya avi set aaj akele hi anya kidhhar hai?

Avinash-malum nahi, hoga shravni ke sath ya uske sath gaya hoga kahi..

Aaj avinash ka mood thoda off tha

Komal-kya hua avi aur aisi utri huyi shakal leke kyu baitha hai… bhains bhag gayi kya teri jo itni sadi shakal bana rakhi hai..?

Par avinash ne koi jawab nahi diya

Komal-kya hua avi tabiyat theek nahi hai kya, kuch to bol?

Avinash-kya bolu komal, meko khud samajh nahi aa raha hai ke main khush hu ya dukhi..

Komal-ab aisa kya ho gaya hai?

Avinash-tu jaanti hai komal aisa kya hua hai

Komal-bas samajh gayi main aura b is bare me kuch mat bolna, aura b ye sochna band karo

Avinash- itna easy hota hai kya apni soch ko rokna…

Avinash ki is baat ka jawab komal ke paas nahi tha..

Avinash-meko samajh nahi aa raha hai ke main kya karu… apne baal mitra ko uska pyaar mil gaya hai isiliye khush hou ya meri hi aankhon ke saamne mere dost ka pyaar usse dur ho raha hai aur isme na to main kuch kar sakta hu na bol sakta hu ye soch ke dukhi hou… kuch bhi kar lo ye khayal dimag se ja hi nahi rahe.. aur ye sab kam tha to tune usme mujhe kasme aur de di.. apan pehle jaise the sahi the yaar ye bematlab ka pyaar ka lafda mol le liya.. aura b main teko kaise samjhau ke wo gadhe anya ke liye tu hi sahi hai wo pujarin nahi suit hogi anya ko..wo do alag alag disha ke do tok hai aur ye baa two paagal anya ko kaise samajh nahi aa rahi..

Komal-avi arey mujhe bhi kaha ye sab pata tha.. kal pehli baar maine in bhavnao ko samjha hai.. agar mujhe pehle pata hota to main itna kuch karti hi nahi. Wo kehte hai na jo chiz hamare paas hai uski kimat ham tab tak nahi jaan sakte jab tak ho hamse dur nahi ho jati..mere sath bhi wahi hua hai… jab pyaar samajhna chahiye tha nahi samjha aur jab samjha tab der ho chuki thi… aur do alag alag swabhav ke log ek nahi ho sakte ye kaha likha hai…

Avinash-kammo tu khali ek baar bol teko anya chahiye, main tumhari Jodi banane ke liye jo nahi wo karunga…

Komal-murkho jaisi baat kar avi, pyaar adhikar ka nahi samarpan ka naam hai,pyaar me adhikar nahi jataya jata samarpan kiya jata hai, kaisa hai na, aajtak pyaar pe bare me bas kitabo me padha tha logo se suna tha par pyaar ko samajhne ke liye pyaar karna padta hai..

Avinash-aur pyaar karke kya fayda agar ham jisse pyaar karte hai use hi ye baat na bata paye

Komal-sacche pyaar ko shabdo ki jarurat nahi hoti, mujhe bhi kaha aniket ne kuch kaha hai fir bhi main wo bhavnaye samajh gayi na

Avinash-par anya to nahi samjha na, aur use na tu batayegi aur na mujhe batane de rahi hai, fir kya fayda hai aise pyaar ka.. aur suppose kal ko un dono ki shadi ho gayi fir? Fir tumhare pyaar ka kya?

Komal-wo to hai hi aur hamesha kayam rahega..

Avinash-apne samajh ke baahar hai ye concept

Komal-avi tujhe pata hai Krishna ne kisse shadi kit hi?

Avinash-ab uska yaha kya sambandh hai?

Komal-pyaar se to hai

Avinash-pata nahi maine ye sab itna padha nahi hai maybe radha…

Komal-nahi, Krishna ki shadi rukmani se huyi thi.. par radha wo kayam Krishna se prem karti rahi aur ye usi pyaar ki kimat hai ki aaj bhi ham Krishna ko radha ke sath pujte hai radhakrishna ke rup me..

Avinash-fir mujhe batao jab itna hi pyaar tha to Krishna ne radha se shadi kyu nahi ki?

Komal-uski ek bahut sunder kahani hai, suno, ek bar radha aur Krishna sath baithe the aur Krishna to swayam bhagwan the bolte huye Krishna bol gaye ki radha tum kahibhi jao tumhe kewal main hi milunga main hi dikhunga, is srishti me aisi koi jagah nahi hai jaha main nahi hu, Krishna ki baat sunkar radha ki aankho me asu aa gaye, Krishna ne pucha ki kya hua tab radha ne kaha ke hey Krishna! Ek aisi jagah hai jaha tum nahi ho, radha ki baat sunkar krishnako ashcharya hua, laga ki ye to kadapi shakya nahi hai, sab jagah to wo khud parmeshwar virajman hai fir aisi kaundi jagah hai jaha main nahi hu, Krishna soch me pad gaye..

Komal kahani suna rahi thi aur avi mantramugdha hokar sun raha tha aur fir jab komal ne pause liya tab avi ne utsukta se pucha

Avinash-fir radha ne kya kaha

Komal-krishna ne jab pucha ke aisi kaunsi jagah hai jaha main nahi hu to radha ne fiki muskan ke sath kaha ki hey Krishna, mera naseeb ye aisi ekmatra jagah hai jaha aap nahi ho…

Avinash-badhiya…

Aur bilkul radha ki taraf komal bhi fiki muskan ke sath boli

Komal-ise kehte hai prem, isiliye kabhi Krishna ke sath rukmini ka naam nahi liya jata radha ka liya jata hai…isiliye keh rahi hu in bato ko dimag se nikal de anya mere naseeb me nahi hai

Avinash-gazab kammo, kaha se sikha hai tune ye sab

Komal-main library aise hi kitabe nahi padhti.. tune kabhi padha hota to pata hota

Avinash-acha! Aisa hai kya..theek hai to fir tujhe kya lagta hai tu akelehi kitabe padhti hai hamto bewkuf hai… to dekh maine ye pauranik kathaye kabhi nahi padhi par jo padha hai uske hisab se main tere sawal ka jawab deta hu sun,

Komal-arey waah, khushi huyi jaan ke ki tum bhi padhte ho

Avinash-ek famous Marathi writer hai V.P kale (व.पू. काले) unki likhihuyi ek line hai, hamara jo prem hota hai na use kabhi bandh ke nahi rakhna chahiye, use free chhod do jise chahte ho apne dil ki baat keh do, agar tumhara pyaar saccha hai to wo tumhare paas jarur aayega aur jo na aaye to samajh lena ke wo tumhare prem ke layak hi nahi…

Komal-badhiya… to matlab agar anya na aaya to wohi layak nahi hai hai na

Kafi samay baad dono ke chehre pe muskan aayi thi

Komal-avi yaha na har insaan apne chehre pe mukhota leke chalta hai, asal chera kisi ko najar hi nahi aata, ab hamari hi baat le lo, hum dono ko kitabe padhna pasand hai par aaj tak hame ye baat pata nahi thi, tumhe dikhi wo asli komal aur bakiyo ko kammo to ab main is komal ko jara ghar chhod aati hu taki wo kisi ko dikhe na aur fir aayegi kammo aur aage ka aage dekhenge

Avinash- done…tere se koi nahi jeet sakta

Avinash komal kea age jath jodte huye bola aur komal ka chehra badal gaya aur wo wapis se apne purine andaj me aate huye boli

Komal-ek aur baat avya, dobara agar komal ko dekhne ki koshoish ki na to ye tera hath hai na ise tod ke dusre hath me pakda dungi samjha

Avinash-hao, samajh gaya kammo bhai, ab bahut paka diya hai tune cha lab mash cutting chai piya

Komal-teko pina hai tu bula main kyu pilau be, aur meko class me jana hai tu baith yaha chai pite huye aur ladkiya tadte huye main chalti hu..

Avinash ke sir pe tapli maarte huye komal nikal gayi aur avi uski or dekhte huye man me bola

Avinash-kya ladki hai yaar, bahut kuch sikha gayi aaya, bhagwan khayal rakhna iska…..

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Sharabi ke do thikane ya to theka ya to thane ab na to apna hero full sharabi tha na full mawali aur waise bhi subah subah daru pine ka to chance hi nahi tha isiliye is waqt maharaj canteen me baithe gappe haak rahe the aur unke sath the avinash komal aur shravni.. ab in logo ki bate chal hi rahi thi ke utne me waha entry huyi docter suman ki jo inhe pure college me dhundhte huye yaha pahuchi thi aur use dekhte hi aniket bola

Aniket-O dispensary aaj idhar kaise?

Suman bhi unke paas aakar baith gayi aur boli

Suman-kya aniket ye kya baat huyi aise nahi hota hai? Wo headphone wapis kar du kya? Komal keh rahi thi aniket aisa hai waisa hai par ab lag raha hai faltu me ye badi badi baate kar rahi thi tumse kuch nahi hoga…

Aniket-tumhare kehne ka kya matlab hai, siddharth ab tak kuch nahi bola kya? Par ye kaise ho sakta hai uska game bajane ke chakker me avi ne mera game baja diya aur tum keh rahi ho koi fark nahi pada? Matlab meri party fokat gayi…

Avinash-sachme party ka koi fayda nahi hua kya :hinthint:

Tab aniket ne avi baitha tha us khurchi pe laat mari

Aniket-sale naradmuni maje mat le teko baad me dekhunga

Jispar avinash bhola chehra banate huye bola

Avinash-par maine kya kiya hai…

Ab ye dono ki behasbaji shuru ho isse pehle hi suman unhe rokte huye boli

Suman-ye tumlog ka aise hi chalega to main jau kya…

Tab aniket suman wow aha baithate huye bola

Aniket-arey dispensary ruko jara baitho yaha aur avya harami apna gutter band kar thodi der dekh nahi raha docter ka dimag garam hai, jyada bolega to aisi jagah injection lagega ki har waqt baithte time yaad karega..

Ab avinash shant baith gaya aur aniket suman se bola

Aniket-ek baat batau docter suman, tumhara siddharth hoga bada docter par pyaar ke mamle me wo aadmi ekdum paidal hai, itna samjhaya fir bhi koi fark nahi pada, dekho ek baar aur soch lo tum..

Suman-kuch fark nahi pada aisa nahi hai, thoda to fark aaya hai, baatchit wagaire me par ab mujhe lagta hai ke main hi pasand nahi use, aura b mujhe uska picha chhod dena chahiye

Bolte bolte suman ki aankhen dabdaba gayi thi to aniket use pani ka glass pakdate huye bola

Aniket-arey prem diwani, jara santi rakhone bhai ye ekdum devdas banne ki jarurat nahi hai, wo pasand karta hai tumhe

Suman-mujhe acha lage isliye ye bate mat karo aniket

Aniket- arey nahi sachem wo bahut pasand karta hai tumhe, us din jab wo hotel me aaya tha tab ekdum sata savitra (male version of sati savitri :D) banne baitha tha ki pucho mat par jaise hi maine tumhara naam liya aur use bataya ke main tumse pyaar karta hu tab banda full devdas mode me chala gaya tha aur char beer khatam kar di thi agle ne, ab isse ye baat to saaf hai ke wo tumhe pasand bhi karta hai aur umse pyaar bhi karta hai…

Wahi idhar jab shravni ne jab suna ke aniket aisa bola ki wo suman se pyaar karta hai shravni madem ekdum bhadak gayi na bhailog

Shravni-aapne aur kitni ladkiyo se kaha hai ke aap unse pyaar karte ho…

Shravni ki baat sunke aniket ne apne sar pe hath maar liya

Aniket-arey deviji aap abhi kripaya gussa mat hoiye yaha docter sahiba pehle hi garam hai pehle unko shant karne dijiye aap kaha chalti train me chadh rahi hai, aapko baad me sara kissa sonata aur samjhata hu pehle inki baat hone dijiye

Aniket ki baat se shravni chup to ho gayi par uske hoth hil rahe the aur wo muh ki muh me kuch badbada rahi thi jise avinash ne dekh liya aur bola

Avinash-shravni apne pyaar pe bharosa rakho jara…

Par shravni kuch nahi boli uska badbadana chalu hi tha par aniket ne uspe dhyan nahi diya aur suman se bola

Aniket-suman tumne itna samay raah dekhi hai na kuch samay aur sahi, ab itna utawala kyu ho rahi ho aur aisa kaha likha hai ke propose sirf ladka hi karega ladki nahi, jab ladkiya har jagaho par ladko se barabari kar rahi hai aur sirf barabari kya ladko se aage nikal rahi hai to fir is mamle me abla nari kyu ban jati hai? Wo propose nahi kar raha tu kar de...

Suman-main propos to kar du par meri himmat hi nahi hoti hai, uske saamne aate hi pair kaampne lagte hai aur muh se shabd hi nahi nikalte aur ha FYI Mr. aniket rane tumne shravni ko propose kiya tha usne tumhe nahi…

Aniket-theek hai theek hai mat kar propose use propose karne lagayenge par kare kya?

Aniket soch raha tha itne me komal boli

Komal-easy hai, jab ghee sidhi ungli se na nikle to ungli tedhi kar lo

Aniket-kammo sidhe sidhe bata na dialogue kya maar rahi hai

Komal-arey lunth aadmi, kisi bhi chiz ki value tab tab nahi samajhti jab tak hame uske khone ka darr na ho, hame kuch aisa karna chahiye ke siddharth ko lage ki suman usse dur ja rahi hai tabhi uski aankhen khulengi…

Aniket-waah! Kya dimag lagaya hai kammo, gazab solid idea diya hai tune

Komal-experience se hi sikhta hai insaan..

Komal ki baat sunkar avinash ne chauk ke use dekha aur usne use shant rehne ka ishara kiya..par aniket ke is baat ki taraf koi dhyan hi nahi diya wo suman ke bare me sochne laga aur shravni boli

Shravni-par aaplog kisi ko jabardasti pyaar me kaise gira sakte ho?

Jiska jawab avinash ne diya

Avinash-hum use pyaar me gira nahi rahe balki wo pehle se pyaar me hai hum to bas use uska ehsaas kara rahe hai isse pehle ki samay hath se nikal jaye…

Avinash ne apni baat bolte huye halke se komal ko aankh maar di aur usne avi ko table ke niche se laat..

Aniket bhi kuch samay tak kuch sochta raha aur fir bola

Aniket-Ok done..suman kal hospital me badhiya ready hoke jane ka…

Suman-par kyu?

Aniket-kyuki tumhara birthday hai kal

Suman-kuch bhi, mera birthday aane me char mahine hai abhi

Aniket-ye baat siddharth ko nahi malum na bas isiliye hum tumhara birthday kal hi manayenge

Suman-aur use pata hua to…

Aniket-to kya, feka feki ke paise nahi lagte, wo us time dekh lenge

Suman-ok done fir aage..

Aniket-kya sari kahani aaj hi sunogi? Kal ke liye bhi kuch bacha ke rakhne ka, tum bas meri ha me ha milate jana baki ka main dekh lunga, aur ha agar use aur jelous feel karwana hai to tum kuch bhi bol sakti ho I don’t mind kal dophar me milta hu…

Suman-theek hai tumhe jo sahi lage karo..

Aniket-don’t worry, don’t fear Aniket Rane is with you dear :cool:

Aniket ki baat sun kar suman muskurayi aur boli

Suman-be careful while calling me dear coz seems something is burning there..

Itna bolke aniket ke sar pe tapli maar ke suman waha se chali gayi, suman ki baat sun waha sabhi hase the siway shravni ke aur ye baat aniket ke dhyan me aa gayi aur fir usne shravni ko sara kissa sunaya, us samay ke liye shravni bhi samajh gayi par ek baat uske dimag me baith gayi thi wo ye ki aniket daru pita hai

Fir jaisa decide hua tha dusre din aniket mast ready hua raste me ek jagah ruk ke cake aur buket liya aur hospital me pahucha, siddharth ko najar aaye isiliye jaanbujh ke uske cabin ke saamne se dheere dheere chalta hua gaya,

Aniket k dekhte hi siddharth khurchi se uth khada hua aur aniket ne use dekh ke bhi undekha kiya aur sidha dusre section ki or gaya, usne sabko dikhe aise hath me buket pakda tha aur dusre hath me cake,aur ye baat bhi uske dhyan me aa gayi thi ke siddharth uske piche piche aa raha hai…

To Be Continued……

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Jaisa decide hua tha dusre din aniket mast ready hua raste me ek jagah ruk ke cake aur buket liya aur hospital me pahucha, siddharth ko najar aaye isiliye jaanbujh ke uske cabin ke saamne se dheere dheere chalta hua gaya,

Aniket k dekhte hi siddharth khurchi se uth khada hua aur aniket ne use dekh ke bhi undekha kiya aur sidha dusre section ki or gaya, usne sabko dikhe aise hath me buket pakda tha aur dusre hath me cake,aur ye baat bhi uske dhyan me aa gayi thi ke siddharth uske piche piche aa raha hai…

Aniket buket aur cake leke docter suman ke ward me pahucha aur suman ko dekhte hi jor jor se gane laga, happy birthday to you happy birthday to you, happy birthday dear suman, happy birthday to you

Gate huye aniket ne jaanbujh ke dear suman pe jor diya tha aur use dekh ke suman jo sharmayi hai na matlab uske sarmane se aniket ko bhi do minute ke liye jhatka lag gaya, ab jara socho ki ye natak hai yer pata hoke bhi aniket ko jab jhatka lag sakta hai to siddharth ki kya haalat ho rahi hogi, docter siddharth ka dimag hi sunn ho gaya na aur aniket jor jor se gar aha tha aur n chahte huye bhi siddharth usse bola

Suddharth-aniket! Aniket, arey ye sab kya chal raha hai, ye hospital hai koi hotel nahi hai jaha tum celebration kar rahe ho..

Tab aniket apne kaan pakadte huye bola

Aniket-maaf karo docter par aaj suman ka birthday hai to..

Siddharth-kuch bhi kya bol rahe ho, uska birthday 1 may ko hota hai..

Siddharth ki baat sunkar docter suman ke chehre ka rang hi ud gaya, use laga ki ab to sari planning fail ho jani hai to asha se aniket ki taraf dekhne lagi aur aniket bhi pakka khiladi thaw o siddharth ke paas jake bola

Aniket-aapko kaise malum.. :huh: ?

Ab siddharth t t p p karne laga, kya boloe use samajh hi nahi aa raha tha kyuki ye sawal uske liye anapekshit tha fir bhi baat sambhalte huye siddharth bola..

Siddharth-office record me sabki birthdate likhi hoti hai..isiliye pata hai

Aniket-aapka bolna ekdum sahi hai docter sahab par jo birthdate aapko pata hai wo sirf on paper hai.. aapko pata hi hoga pehle gaon me teacher log birthdate pata na hone pe 1 may likh dete the aur admission le lete the bas suman ke sath bhi wahi hua hai, on paper birthdate 1 may hai par asal birthday aaj hai, isiliye aaj hi suman ka janmdin hai…

Aniket ke logic ke samne siddharth clean bowled ho gaya tha fir bhi siddharth ne apni aankho me sawal liye suman ki taraf dekha, waise to suman bhi aniket ke logic se impress thi to usne bhi siddharth ko aanko ke ishare se bataya ke ye sab sach hai, ab siddharth ke liye waha rukna mushkil tha wo waha se jane laga to aniket ne uska hath pakad ke use roka aur ward me patients se bola

Aniket-bhailog aaj apne docter madem ka birthday hai to yaha cake katne se kisi ko koi problem to nahi hai na?

Sabne eksath na bola aur un patients me se 3-4 jo chal sakte the unhone aakar suman ko birthday wish kiya aur aniket siddharth ke kaan ke paas jake bola

Aniket-docter please ruk jao yaar, aap ya ahoge to mujhe bhi sumanse baat karne ki himmat milegi..

Ab aniket ne waha nakabandi hi aisi kit hi ken a chahte huye bhi siddharth ko waha rukna pada fir suman ne cake cut kiya aur fir wahi har birthday wala celebration ise cake khilao use khilao jo hamesha hota hai (sach batau apne ko ye bilkul pasand nahi :sigh: ) fir suman ne apne hath me ek cake ka tukda liya aur aniket ki taraf badhi, aniket aur siddharth agal bagal me khade the aur siddharth ko ab waha rukna ashaniya ho raha tha, uske saamne suman aniket ko cake khilayeg ye soch ke hi uska dimag thanakne laga tha par uske baad waha jo hua uski siddharth ne kalpana bhi nahi ki thi

Suman cake leke aayi aur cake usne siddhath ke saamne pakda, wo ashcharya se kabhi aniket ko dekhta to kabhi suman ko, aur aakhir me suman ne siddharth ko cake khilaya jiske baad siddharth bola

Siddharth-h..happy birthday docter..

Suman-thank u sir, is sab ke liye allow karne ke liye…

Siddharth kehna to kuch aur chahta tha par birthday wish kea age badh nahi paya aur udhar aniket ne chehra barik kar liya aur jab suman waha se sarki to aniket siddharth ke kaa ke paas bola

Aniket-kya yaar docter sahab sala sab kiya hamne aur cake mila tumko, ye kaha ka insaf hai..

Aniket ki baat sun kesiddhath galo hi galo me has raha tha, aniket ko chhod ke suman ne use cake khilaya thaw o banda to isi baat se khush tha par use kaha pata tha ke uski ye khushijyada samay tak nahi tikne wali hai,use hasta dekh aniket suman se bola

Aniket-o docter madem, arey hamper bhi najar dalo bhai hum bhi hai yahya pe

Suman bhi siddharth ki aur dekhte huye aniket se boli

Suman-tum to special hi ani, tumne itna sab kiya hai mere lioye meri bhavnao ko samjha hai tum hi sacche dost ho mere

Aisa bolte huye suman se dost shabd pe jara jyada jor diya jise sun ke siddharth aur khush par agle hi pal suman ne aniket ke diye chocolate ka rapper faadke uske paas aate huye chocolate ka ek tudka aniket ke muh me diya aur use gale laga liya aur thanks kaha…

Suman ko aniket ko gale lagate dekh siddharth ki halat jo huyi hai na ab kya batau, wo banda ek pal bhi waha nahi ruka aur waha se chala gaya, aur yaha sumane ke aise gale lagane se aniket ko pasina aage laga tha aur siddharth ke jate hi dono alag huye aur aniket pasina pochte huye bola

Aniket-o bai o devi, hum dono ki jaan lene ka irada hai kya? Wo to acha hua shravni yaha nahi thi, agar hoti to yahi African jungle wala adiwasi dance karte huye hospital sar pe utha leti wo, nahi to maut aane tak kavita fek ke maarti, suman ye thoda jyada ho gaya?

Jispar suman bhi naak chadhate huye boli

Suman-hone do, jalne do use, jal ke koyla ho jane do, tabhi akal aayegi..

Aniket-bas use jalane ke chakker me meri jaan mat lelena.. bas

Suman-kuch jaan wagaire nahi jane wali kisi ki aur tum bhi dhyan me rakhna ke hum dost hai sirf faltu me ise triangle mat banana

Suman majak me aankh maarte huye boli

Aniket-ghante ka triangle, mere paas ek hai aur wo hi kafi hai mere sar pe nachne ke liye

Suman-fir bhi jhutha hi sahi tumne badhiya birthday manaya hai mera thank you ani

Aniket-arey usme kya hai tum bolo to main roj aise surprise de dunga bas bill mere account me transfer karte chalna, kya hai pappa bambani nahi hai apne..

Suman-acha wo chhodo ab batao aage ka kya plan

Aniket-sach batao suman, mat tadpao bechare ko kyu uska kabir singh banana chahti ho, meri baat mano sab mere jaise nahi hote, kuch logoko apni bhavnaye bol ke nahi batate aati aur bol ke batane se hi bhavnaye samajhti hai kya? Wosach me bahut pyaar karta hai tumse maine dekha hai uski aankhon me, mri mano aur ye jid chhodo, mujhe batao tum bhi to chahti ho na use, fir tum kyu apni bhavnaye use bol ke kyu nahi batati.. ye pehle aap pehle aap ke chakker me gadi chhut jayegi docter madem, apni jid chhodo warna jindagi par pachtana bhi pad sakta hai…

Aniket ki baat suman ko samajh aa rahi thi aur wo bhi ab soch me pad gayi thi….

To Be Continued…..

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Aniket ki baat suman ko samajh aa rahi thi aur wo bhi ab soch me pad gayi thi, aur aniket bhi shant baith ke use haavbhav notice kar raha tha, bahut der tak kuch sochne ke baad suman boli

Suman-tum jo keh rahe ho wosab sahi hai aniket, faltu me aajtak uske bolne ke intajar me samay gawaya hai bas ab bahut ho gaya ab aaj ya to is paar ya to us paar

Aniket-gazab ab kin a tumne aniket ran eke dost wali baat, ab tum meri dost lag rahhi to fir kya decide kiya hai ab?

Suman ekdum soch ke boli

Suman-uske paas aajka din hai…

Aniket-matlab..?

Suman-tumne abhi tak mujhe kabhi detail bataya hai kya , fir pillu mere se detail kyu maan rahe ho…

Aniket-kya baat kya baat kya baat, hamari billi hamise myao

Suman-waisa nahi hai kuch, it’s just ke maine pakka kuch decide nahi kiya hai dekhte hai saamne ko jab samay aayega tab kya karna hai, par jo bhi karna hai aaj hi karna hai, wo tum kya kehte ho ise

Aniket-bhidna, direct bhidne ka…

Suman-barobar, aaj hi bhidna hai…

Aniket-ekdum kadakkk, tu bindass direch bhid main hut ere sath.. tension nai lene ka

Suman-aur ha ek baat batao, ye African dance ka kya prakar hai aur shravni kyu nachegi ispe….

Aniket-abey yaar docter kabhi kabhi discovery channel bhi dekh liya karo be bahut kuch sikhne milta hai usse :redface: abi tumko samjhata hu, African dance matlab wo African tribes hai adiwasi logo ke unko jab kuch pasand nahi aata hai ya samajhlo koi unke area me ghusa to wo chidh jate hai aur fir us ghuskhor ko pakad te hai ya fir jiske hatho se koi gunah hua ho use pakadte hai aur gaon ke beecho beech leke aate hai, kamar pe patte bandhe huye chehre par laal safed line khiche huye chere rehte hai unke, sar pea lag alag panchiyo ke pankho ka mukut pehan ke jo gunehgar hota hai use ek rod se bandh ke uske niche aag laga dete aur fir sab uske ird gird gol bana ke hula..hula…hu…hu… karte huye vichitra haav bhav karte huye chilla ke naach ke apna gussa dikhate hai , beech me muh pe hath rakh ke…aaallaaa…la….laaa… karke chillate hai, aur fir ek aadmi us gunehgar ko rod se band ke uske niche aag laga ke usko bhun ke kha daalte hai, fir koi us gunehgar ke ungliyo ki haddiya ya pairo ki haddiyo ki mala banake gale me pehan leta hai, tumne mujhe gale lagaya ye shravni agar dekh leti na to us gunehgar ki jagah meko bhun ke kha daalti…

Aniket ne ye sari bate full demonstration ke sath batayi thi jise suman ektak dekhe ja rahi thi aur fir aniket ke bataye situation me shravni aur use imagine karte huye suman hasne lagi….

Suman-tum filme bahut dekhte ho na :lol1:

Aniket-hao 😌

Suman-tabhi.. :lol1:

Fir baad me suman apni hasi pe control karte huye boli

Suman-acha tumne aage ke liye kya decide kiya tha pehle wo karte hai fir main dekhti hu mujhe kya karna hai aaj to is siddu ko chhodne wali nahi main

Aniket-siddu?? Docter siddharth se direct siddu?

Suman-teri sangat ka asar hai ani..

Aniket-ye kuch bhi mat bol, main apna sadha, sudha, bhola, abodh, niragas, sajjan, baccha hu meko aise badnaam to mat karo :shy:

Suman-pata hai kitne bhole ho tum..

Aniket-arey yaar chhodo ye sab aur aage ka plan suno

Fir aniket se suman ko sara plan bataya aur wo dono siddharth ke cabin ki taraf nikle…

Aniket ne jhuk ke cabin me dekha to siddharth apna sar pakad ke baitha tha jise dekh aniket suman se bola

Aniket-abey tera siddu to khud patient bana baitha hai

Fir suman aur aniket dono cabin me pahuche aur jate huye aniket ne avi ko ek msg kar diya tha

Cabin me jakar suman boli

Suman-sir aaj mujhe half day mil sakta hai kya?

Siddharth-kyu kya hua?

Suman-nahi hua kuch nahi hai bas aniket ke sath movie dekhne jana tha, birthday party thi to…

Jispar aniket jaldi se bola

Aniket-please sir de dijiye na permission

Siddharth-kamal hai tum logo ki sidhe sidhe movie jane ke liye chutti mang rahe ho?

Jispar aniket bola

Aniket-fir kya kare? Baki log tabiyat theek nahi hai aisa keh ke chutti le lete hai par yaha wo bahana nahi bana sakte naisiliye jo sach hai bata diya, de do na permission

Siddharth-theek hai jao ab aaj tumhara birthday hai to naraj karke kaise chalega

Siddharth ne bhari man se kaha aur suman ne ekdum khush hone ka dikhawa karke thank you thank you bolke siddharth ka hath pakad liya

Dono cabin ke baahar aaye aur sidhe jakar canteen me baith gaye aur idhar siddharth jal bin machli ki taraf tadfada raha tha, thoda timepass karke aniket nikal gaya aur suman akeli hospital me wapis aayi aur siddharth ko dikhe aise uske cabin ke samne se gujri, use dekhte hi siddharth khurchi se uth khada hua aur baahar aakar usne suman ko awaj lagayi

Siddharth-kya hua aap ab bhi yaha hai, movie ke liye nahi gayi?

Jispar suman ne dukhi dikhte huye kaha

Suman-sara mood off kar diya ani ne, achanak use uske pitaji ka call aaya aur kaha ki emergency hai to use jana pada aur jate jate ye movie ki 2 tickets bhi chhod gaya par ab iska kya fayda..

Fir suman wapis apne ward ki taraf jane ke liye mudi aur use piche se awaj aaya

Siddharth- ek minute docter..

Suman ne mud ke piche dekha

Siddharth-aise birthday ke din mood kharab nahi karte, agar aapko koi problem na ho to ham chale movie dekhne

Suman-mujhe kya problem hona hai chaliye, badhiya movie hai wo..

Fir dono suman aur siddharth dono siddharth ke gadi se movie ke liye nikal gaye aur aniket unhe jate huye dekh raha tha

Kuch samay baad jab dono film dekh ke baahar aaye to baahar aate hi siddharth bola

Siddharth-yaha paas hi me ek bahut sundermandir hai waha chale kya..?

Jispar suman ne bhi sehmati jatayi, use bhi to siddharth ka sath chahiye tha, aur waise bhi suman ne decide kar liya tha ke agar aaj siddharth kuch nahi bolega to kal wo apni bhavnaye use bata degi, dono ne mandir me jake darshan kiya aur baahar aakar baith gaye, ab kuch to kehna tha siliye suman ne bolna shuru kiya

Suman-movie badhiya thin a..?

Siddharth-ha badhiya to thi aur tumhare sath dekhi to aur bhi badhiya lagi par….

Suman-par kya..?

Siddharth apne man me kuch shabd sochne laga

Siddharth-movie to achi hi thi aur tumhare sath dekhi to aura chi lagi par asal maja tab aayega jab hum dono sath honge ek hi mandap me aur pantit hamari shadi ke mantra padhega…

Siddharth ka ye bolna tha aur suman ko apne kano pe yakin nahi ho raha tha ke usne kya suna hai, siddharth aage bola

Siddharth-matlab agar tum ha kaho to…

Itne salo ka virah, intajar sabkuch ek hi pal me khatam ho gaya tha, jo baat bolne ki siddharth kabhi hmmat nahi kar paya tha aaj usne ek jhatke me bol di thi, jis pal ki suman chatak pakshi jaisi raah dekh rahi thi wo aa gaya tha aur aaj to siddharth ne use direct shadi ke liye puch liya tha…, waise to suman kab se is pal ki raah dekh rahi thi par ab jab siddharth ne ise istarh propose kiya tha to uske muh se bol nahi fut rahe the, wo sidha siddharth se bilag gayi, us madhur sham me do premiyo ka Milan ho gaya tha, najane kitni der wo ekdusre ke bahopash me the…

Dono premiyo ki tandri tuti siti ke awaj se.. dono ekdum vartaman me laute to aniket avinash aur komal baarat me jaise naachte huye unke paas aa rahe the aura vi au rani ki sitiyo ki awaj se aasman gunj raha tha, pehle to siddharth unhe chauke ke dekhne laga aur fir wo bhi hasne laga aur jab kuch samay baad ye dhingana shant hua to aniket ki nautanki chalu ho gayi

Aniket-suman tumne mujhe dhoka kyu diya, kyu kiye mere komal dil ke itne tukde, ab main kiske liye jiunga

Aise purine jamane ke dialogue maarte huye aniket avinash ke gale me gir ke rone laga aur uske sath sath avinash aur komal bhi rone lage

Suman-aye bas bahut hua ab mere siddu ko koi nahi satayega

Aniket-aur mere tute dil ka kya..

Jispar siddharth aniket ke kaan me bola

Siddharth-wo apan raat me jod lende, hotel ketki, char beer

Jispar aniket ekdum khush

Aniket-arey gazab docter, (fir suman se bola) ja suman ja jile apni jindagi..

Fir siddharth aur suman jis gadi se aaye the usse hi waha se nikal gaye aur komal mandir me aayi aur hath jod ke bhagwan se boli

Komal-key bhagwan, jaise inki naiyaa paar lagayi hai meri bhi laga do….

Update 25​

Dekhte dekhte samay beet raha tha aur board exams ab kareeb aa chuke the, exam ka timetale aa chukka tha aur apni puri gang ekdum se neend se jag gayi thi, kyuki bhale hi aap saal bhar kitni bhi masti kar le par jab exam aati hai to kitabo ki hi yaad aati hai, avinash aniket aur komal ki ye khas baat thi, teeno bhale hi saal bhar kuch na padhe par exam ke pehle ka ek mahina man maar ke hi sahi padhte jaroor the, aur padhai bhi sab sath karte the aur is waqt bhi sab sath baith ke padh rahe the..

Sab sath padh rahe the aur sab matloab inke sath shravni bhi thi to charo sath the aur padhte padhte achanak avinash ko hasi aa gayi aur wo has diya jisse aniket komal aur shravni ka concentration tut gaya aur komal boli

Komal-teko kya hua aise achanak daat kyu nikal raha?

Avinash- kuch nahi bas aise hi :D

Komal-hasa to hasa ab batane me bhi bhav kha raha hai, abe bata na aisa kya ho gaya jo tu hasa?

Avinash-arey kuch nahi meko wo suman aur aniket ka kissa yaad aa gaya

Suman aur aniket ka naam sunte hi shravni ke kaan khade ho gaye…aur idhar avinash haste huye bata raha tha

Avinash-main wo scene imagne kar raha tha jab suman ne ise gale lagaya tha.. tab iski kya halat huyi hogi :lol1:

Itna bol ke avinash komal ko tali deke jor se hasne laga aur aniket ne apna matha pit liya aur idhar avinash ki baat sunkar shravni ko charso challis volt ka jhatka laga..

Shravni-kyaaa..? suman ne aniket k hug kiya tha….?

Ab avinash ke dhyan me aa gaya tha ke jo nahi bolna chahiye tha wo wo bol gaya tha aura b bol hi diya hai to avinash baat sambhalte huye bola

Avinash-hug matlab… aise hi… bas paas aayi ti wo aur kuch nahi..

Par shravni bhadak gayi thi

Shravni-ye sab kya hai aniket..?

Aniket ne baithe baithe hi avinash ko lath mari.. aur bola

Aniket-abey haramkhor aadmi.. muh khola ki baas marega :sigh: hajar baar bola hai thjobda band rakha kar par sun liya to tere baap ki estate chali jayegi na sale narad muni laga di na aag

Aur idhar shravni aur bhadak gayi

Shravni-unhhe kuch kyu keh rahe hai aap aniket, unka bola hua dikh gaya par khud ke gun nahi dikhe aapko

Aniket-arey tum samajh rahi ho waisa kuch nahi hai

Par shravni kuch samajhne ke liye tayar hi nahi thi..

Shravni-mujhe kuch nahi sunna bas aap itna batao ki aapne hug kiya ya nahi?

Aniket-meri baat suno shravni faltu me dimag me gussa mat lao

Shravni-ha ya na?

Aur ab jab aniket ko koi dusra rasta nahi mila to wo bola

Aniket-ha..

Aniket ke muh se haa sunkar mano waha jwalamukhi ka visfot hua ho shravni itna bhadak gayi aur gussa itna jyada tha ke usne sikha aniket ke kaan ne niche rakh di ek aur boli

Shravni- jara bhi sharam nahi aati na ha bolte huye

Avinet ne kuch kehne ki koshish ki par shravni kuch sunne ke mood me hi nahi thi

Shravni-aap manmauji ho theek hai maskhare ko masti majak karte ho theek hai par aisa charitraheen vartan main bilkul bardasht nahi karngi..

Itna bol ke shravni ne apni kitabe bag me bhari aur waha se jane lagi.. aniket uske piche piche use samjhate huye jane laga aur jate jate avinash ko do char galiya bhi deta gaya ( ye ladke ladki kea ate hi itne chutiya kyu ho jate hai :sigh: )

Idhar aniket ke jane ke baad do minute tak shanti rahi, avinash aur komal ko jo hua uspar yakin hi nahi ho raha tha, thode samay baad avinash wapis hasa aur use dekh ke komal bhi hasne lagi

Komal-ek number ka halkat hai tu avi..

Tab avinash ekdum masum chehra karte huye bola

Avinash-maine kya kiya

Komal-kya kiya.! Kya jarurat thi ye baat abhi chhedne ki wo bhi shravni ke saamne..

Avinash-arey maine to aise hi bola tha par kya solid padi na anya ko

Dono fir se hasne lage fir komal boli

Komal-jaanbujh ke bola na tu?

Jispar avinash ne sidha sidha hao bol diya

Komal-kyu jhagda karwana chahta hai dono ka?

Avinash-main kaha jhagda laga raha hu main to ye bata raha hu ke wo chiran anya ke liye sahi nahi hai 😌

Komal-kyu uska pyaar usse chin raha hai?

Avinash-apna pyaar sambhalna sabka apna kaam hai..

Komal-isiliye to tu jhagda karwa raha hai

Avinash-sidha bolunga to anya sunega?

Komal-ti tumhe nahi lagta ki tum un dono ke beech galat fehmi tayar kar rahe ho

Avinash-prem ka aadhar saundrya nahi vishwas hai main bas ye sabit kar raha hu, aur jaha vishwas hai waha mere jaise dus log bhi kuch bol de na to kuch fark nahi panda chahiye

Komal-ye sab mere liye kar raha hai na?

Avinash-bilkul nahi, anya ko uska saccha pyaar mile isliye..

Komal-shravni ka bhi to pyaar hai

Avinash-vishwas nahi hai aur ye bagair viashwas ka nata kab tak tikega? Upper se gussa bahut hai aur gusse me humk sabse pehle unhe khote hai jo hamare sabse karib hote hai..pyaar karna aasan hai nibhana mushkil..

Komal-to tune kiya hai kisi se pyaar

Avinash-shadi nahi huyi meri par barate bahut dekhi hai, abhi tak koi aisi aayi nahi jindagi me, aayi to tumhe jarur bataunga

Komal-bahut lucky hogi wo

Avinash-wo samay batayega

Komal-kaisi ladki chahiye?

Avinash-aisi jo mere ghar ko swarg banaye gharwalo ko swargwasi nahi

Komal-par please unke beech jhagda mat karwa

Avinash-fir tumhe tumhara pyaar kaise milega

Komal-dusre ki kabar pe main apna ghar kaise banau?

Komal ke is sawal ka avinash ke paas jawab nahi tha isiliye wo baat badalte huye bola

Avinash-shravni sach me ani se pyaar karti haiis mamle me mujhe thoda doubt hai, mujhe lagta hai jis tarah se ani ne use propose kiya wo na nahi keh saki aur ise pyaar samajh baithi

Komal-par sach to ye hai ke ani bhi use pasand karta hai

Avinash-aur sach to ye bhi hai ke tum bhi ani ko chahti ho, kitna difference hai na, unke swabhav alag hai vishwas bilkul nahi hai aur yaha tum, koi bandhan nahi fir bhi purn vishwas

Komal-avi please mere liye aisa kuch mat karo jisse tumme aur aniket ke duriya aaye…

Avinash-agar mere dur hone se tum dono paas aane wale ho to main jara bhi nahi sochunga komal..

Komal-aur tumhe lagta hai main itni swarthi hu?

Avinash-kyu nahi?

Komal-jane do chhodo ye bate aur avi tu na jaisa dikha hai waisa nahi hai

Jispar avi avi daat nikalne laga

Aur idhar aniket shravni ko samjha raha tha

Aniket-shravni ruko to meri baat to suno

Aur shravni aur bhi chidhte huye boli

Shravni-jitna sun liya hai kafi hai aur sunne ki meri bilkul icha nahi hai

Aniket shravni ka rasta rokte huye bola

Aniket-shravni main sirf aur sirf tumse pyaar karta hu..

wo halkat ne tumhe bas adhi adhuri baat batayi hai aur tum bhi kamal ho yaar sidhe thappad laga diya, mujhe bas do minute do uske baad jo tum bologi wahi hoga

Shravni kuch boli nahi par ruk gayi, uske baad aniket ne use pura kissa bataya

Aniket-agar ab bhi yakin na ho to tumhari kasam kha ke bolta hu ke main jo bataya wo pura sach hai..

Ab shravni ka gussa thoda shant hua

Shravni-wo hamesha aisa karti hai pehle bhi canteen me usne tumhe dear kaha tha mujhe ye sab bilkul pasan nahi hai wada karo aap suman se kabhi nahi miloge aur agar mile to dur rahoge

Aniket-theek hai baba dur rahunga, khush?

Shravni-nahi

Aniket-to ek dairy milk de deta hu fir khush?

Shravni-nahi

Aniket-to ab kya gana gau?

Shravni- kuch keh nahi sakte

Fir aniket ne shravni ka hath pakad ke use apne karib liya aur gana gane laga (ek aur chutiya karkat :sigh: )

Aniket-

Ruth na jana tumse kahu to

Main in aankhon me jo rahu to

Tum ye jano, ya na jano

Tum ye mano, ya na mano

Mere jaisa deewana tum paoge nahi

Yaad karoge main jo nah u to

Ruth na jana tumse kahu to…​

Aniket ka gana sunkar sravni muskura di

Aniket-arey ladki hasi to fasi…

Update 26​

Samay ki gati ko koi rok paya hai kya, nahi na to wo apni gati se daud raha tha ya yu kahe ki kuch jyada hi fast daud raha tha, ab chuki apne gang ke exams the isiliye is period me jyada kuch khas nahi hua, ha is beech aniket aur shravni ka ruthne manane ka karyakram barabar chalta tha aur jo kabhi nahi hua wo ab hua, avinash aur komal seriously padhne lage, aur iska parinam bhi dekhne mila kyuki jab result aaya tab avinash komal aur shravni to paas ho gaye par aniket fail ho gaya..(ladki ka chakker, jaldi mukti dilana padega ab isko :sigh: )

Gharwalo ke liye ye kuch naya nahi tha ke aniket fail hua hai unhone to aniket ka aisa parakram pehle bhi dekha tha, narayanrao ne bas usse fail hone ka reason pucha ku wo kyu fail hua kaise fail hua to aniket ne bas itna kaha ke

Aniket-bapu 10vi aur 12vi education ka base hai main base majbut kar raha hu, slow education pragati ka lakshan ( sala purana dialogue chipka diya huh)

Avinet ke chehre par fail hone ka jyada gam nahi tha aur na hi narayanrao ne isse jyada use kuch pucha ya koi aur melo drama hua

Dekhte dekhte chuttiya khatam huyi aur college dobara shuru hua, inlogo ke graduation ke liye bhi usi college me admission liya tha aur fail hone ke baad bhi aniket ka college me aana shuru hi tha waise bhi use waha kaun rokne wala tha aur 12th bhi to paas karni thi use..par in sabme sabse jyada changes aaye the komal me, pehle tomboy jaisi dikhne wali komal ab ek khubsurat ladki me badal gayi thi, pehle kisi se bhi bindass bhid jane wali komal ab sabse pyaar se baat karne lagi thi basically ab komal me strisulabh lakshan dikhne lage the siway uske kapdo ko chhod ke (apun ko malum hai apne readers ko purani kammo pasand hai fikar naat wo kahi nahi jayegi bas thodi gum ho gayi hai usko dhundh layenge apan)

Ek din komal college aa rahi thi to kuch launde baahar katte pe baithe the aur jaise hi unko komal dikhi unki tounting shuru ho gayi aur wo komal ko dekh ke bolne lage

Ladka1-kyu be aaj akela hi..

Ladka2-kya karu mera dost mera nahi raha na, aur ye kam tha to wo fail bhi ho gaya isiliye akela hi

Fir teesra bola

Ladka3- jyada akelapan lag raha ho to hum hai yaha

Waise dekha jaye to komal ko gussa bahut aaya tha par college abhi naya naya shuru hua tha to kyu faltu me jhanjhat mol le isiliye wo unhe ignore karke canteen ki or nikal gayi aniket aur avinash wahi the, unhe dekhte hi komal boli

Komal-tum log kab aaye?

Tab avinash ne kaha

Avinash-abhi abhi aaye hai, tu gate par thi tab hum parking me gadi park kar rahe the…

Aniket chup tha aur use aise chup chap dekh ke komal boli

Komal-naye ladke kuch jyada hi natak karne lage hai college me..

Par aniket kuch nahi bola aur chup chap apni chai pita raha tab komal dobara boli

Komal-wo mujhe ched rahe the..

Aniket aur avinash ne sab kuch pehle hi dekh aur sun liya tha aur aniket gusse se komal ki taraf dekh raha tha

Aniket-teko cheda hai na to fir mujhe kyu bata rahi hai

Komal-tujhe nahi bataungi to kise bataungi?

Aniket-problem tera hai mujhe kyu ghasit rahi hai beech me

Aniket ka aisa bolna komal ke liye anapekshit tha..

Komal-ye tera aur mera alag alag kab se ho gaya?

Ab gussa aniket ke chehre par saaf dikh raha tha

Aniket-tu paagal hai kya komal jara bhi akkal nahi hai tujhme, dena than a rakh ke unke kaan ke niche,

Komal kuch nahi boli aur gardan jhuka kar baithi rahi, aniket fir bola

Aniket-tere jaisi dashing ladki aise gardan jhuka ke baith baith jati hai tabhi to un jaiso ki himmat badhti hai, jab tera ye haal hai to sadharan ladkiyo ka ye haramkhor jina haram kar denge, main koi jindagi bhar tere piche piche nahi rahunga, agar tere problem tu solve nahi kar sakti to unhe sehan karte reh….

Aniket ki baat sun kar komal apni jagah se uth khadi huyi aur uske sath avinash bhi par aniket apni jagah se nahi hila ulta usne avinash ka hath pakad ke use bhi baitha liya..

aur us ek pal me sabse pyaar se bolne wali sadi naram dil ki komal gayab ho gayi aur purani komal wapis aa gayi, jiski aankhon me angar the aur chehra gusse se bhara hua tha, wow aha se uthi aur sidha gate ki taraf badhi, wo teeno ladke ab bhi wahi the, komal sidha unke samne jake khadi huyi aur boli

Komal-tujhe bahut chinta hai na meri, ke main akeli ho gayi hu, le pakad mera hath

Aur jaise hi us ladne ne komal ka hath pakda agle hi pal jamin pe tha wo, kya hua kisi ko kuch nahi samjha, us ladke ne jaise hi komal ka hath pakda komal ne apne ghutne se ek jordar kick mar ke us ladke ke ande fod dale boli to goti suja di aur subah subah uski aankhon ke saamne tare chamak gaye, komal ne use itna jabardast mara tha ke dobara jindagi me wo kisi ladki ko chedne ki himmat nahi karega, dusre ladke ne komal ko thappad maarne ki koshish ki par uska hath komal ke gaal tak pahuchta usse pehle hi komal ne use hawa me rok liya aur ek ke baad ek teen char punch jad diye uske itne me teesre ladke ne najane kaha se hockey stick layi aur usne usse komal ke sar pe mara jisse komal ki aankhon kea age andhera chane laga aur wo niche girne lagi aur wo dono ladke uski taraf lapke aur wo komal ko lath maarte isse pehle hi dono apne teesre dost ke bagal me pade karah rahe the, aniket aur avinash waha pahuch gaye the aur unhone un ladko ka kaam ek hi jhatke me tamam kar diya tha fir wo komal ki taraf mude aur use uthaya air kisi ne pani laga to avinash ne komal ke chehre pe pani maar ke use hosh me laya, aur komal ne dekha ke wo ladke jamin pe pade hai

Waha college ki gardi jama ho gayi thi, aniket komal ko uthate huye waha jama gardi se bola

Aniket-aaj komal ne himmat ki hai aise ladko ko sabak sikhane ki, inhone aap mese kayi ladkiyo ko cheda hoga aur tumne chup chap sun liya sahan kiya par komal ne nahi, mujhe garv hai meri dost pe, in haram khoro ko sahan karne se acha agar ek kaan ke niche rakh ke deti to chedna to dur tumhari taraf najar utha ke bhi nahi dekhte, ek baat dhyan me rakhna har baar koi tumhari madad ko nahi aayega, agar koi tumhari madad kar sakta hai to um khud

Aniket ne to bol diya ab bolne ki bari avinash kit hi

Avinash-aur jab in haramkhoro ne jinko sataya hai wo mauke ka fayda utha kea age aaye aur behti ganga me hath dho le (uske baad un ladko se) in ladkiyo me se ek ko bhi agar hath bhi lagaya to itna marunga ke sharir ki koi haddi nahi bachegi jo dard nahi karegi..

Itna bolke wo hockey stick leke wahi khada ho gaya aur sabse pehle komal ne jake uske lath mari jisne use hockey stick se mara tha aur fir kya sari ladkiya un ladko pe tut padi, wo to un ladko na naseeb pe professors waha pahuch gaye aur unki jaan bach gayi warna ladkiyo ne jo unki halat kit hi unke gharwale bhi nahi pehchan pate unhe..

Komal ko thoda jyada maar laga tha to wo use hospital leke gaye aur waha to suman thi hi ilaj karne ke liye, baadme rade ki khabar sun ke shravni bhi baahar aayi aur aniket ke bare me puchne lagi, jab uske dhyan me aaya ke aniket ko kuch nahi hua hai to uska hath pakad ke use baahar le aayi aur shuru ho gayi..

Shravni-hajar baar kaha hai aisi gundo jaisi harkate mat kiya karo par meri suntan kaun hai? Tumhe kuch ho jata to?

Aniket-mujhe kuch nahi hua hai, komal ko laga hai..

Shravni-use kisne kaha tha aisi harkat karne ke liye, ladki ne ladki jaisa rehna chahiye, kyu un mawaliyo se bhidi wo..

Aniket-kamal hai tum ek ladki hoke ye keh rahi ho..

Shravni-ha main hi keh rahi hu aur aap bhi aise logo ki sangat me mat rahiye..

Aniket-shravni dost hai wo mere

Shravni-huh bade aaye dost, wo to paas hoke aage nikal gaye aur tum baithe ho dost dost karte, ab bahut hua ab se aap unke sath nahi rahoge..

Aniket-tum limit cross kar rahi ho ab shravni

Shravni-mujhe kuch limit wagaire nahi pata hai aaj aapko chun na padega komal ya mai

Aniket-ye kya paagal pan hai, tmhe samajh aa raha hai tum kya keh rahi ho, dimag sahi hai tumhara

Shravni-mujhe kuch nahi pata bas aaj mujhe batao komal ya mai

Aniket-baasss bahut hogaya, bol liya tumne jo bolna tha, paagal ladki tumse pyaar karta hu iska ye matlab nahi ke jo tum bologi main wahi karunga.. aur komal se khudko compare karne ki layaki hai kya tumhari, pyaar kiya to kya sar pe chadh ke nachogi, arey haadd dimag kharab kar diya pura, ye mat karo wo mat karo, sala itna to meri maa ne nahi toka mujhe..

Ab aniket to gusse me tha hi shravni ka gussa bhi saatve aasman pe tha

Shravni-theek hai to raho fir yahi komal komal karte huye aur aainda jindagi me mujhe apni shakal mat dikhana…

Itna bol ke shravni waha se pair patakte huye nikal gayi, avinash wahi piche khada hoke ye sab dekh aur sun raha tha aur wo khud se bola

Avinash-ye to sala ek din hona hi tha….

Update 27​

Shravni ne aniket ko jo kuch bhi kaha tha usse use kafi bura dhakka laga tha aur wo muh latka ke wapis room me aaya aur wo kuch bolta usse pehle hi komal bol padi

Komal-kuch bolne ki jarurat nahi hai maine sab sun liya hai

Aniket ko kafi bura laga

Aniket-ab kaise samjhau ise yahi samajh nahi aa raha

Tab komal aniket ko samjhate huye boli

Komal-don’t worry wo gusse me thi abhi aur mujhe uski baat ka bilkul bura nahi laga, tumne uska gussa dekha par uske piche jo tumhare liye chinta thi wo nahi dekhi, wo bas tumhari chinta me aisa boli

Aniket-arey par ye kya faltugiri hai yaarr

Komal-anya wo gusse me boli yaar

Inki bate sun ke idhar avi ka dimag kharab ho raha tha

Avinash-oye bas hogya, gayi to gayi daal usko gadhi ki gand me, waise bhi jate huye shani aur aati huyi Lakshmi ko na nahi bolte, acha hua bala tali BC

Avinash ki baat sun ke komal ne uski taraf gusse se dekha to wo chup ho gaya

Komal-anya iski baat mat sun aur mujhe kuch nahi hua hai tu ja aur jake shanti se shravni ko samjha avi mujhe ghar drop kar dega

Aniket do minute soch ke bola

Aniet-theek hai avya kuch laga to call kariyo main nikalta hu fir

Itna bol ke aniket wala se nikal gaya aur uske jate hi avinash komal ke aye hath jodke usse bola

Avinash-o mother india, kamal hai tub hi, yaha naseeb mathe par tilak lagane aa raha hai aur tu use dusre ka pata bata rahi hai, hockey stick se dimag pe asar ho gaya kya, kuch samajh nahi raha tujhe brain to damage nahi ho gaya na tera

Jispar komal muskurakar boli

Komal-paagal jaisi baat mat kar, aur ek good news hai jo abhi mere dhyan me aayi hai, ab to meko pakka yakin ho gaya hai ke ye shravni kuch aniket se pyaar vyar nahi karti, ulta use to pata hi nahi hai ke pyaar kya hota hai..

Avinash-to fir anya ko kyu bheja use samjhane ke liye

Komal-arey mand buddhi manus pyaar koi geometry ka theorem hai kya samjhane pe samajh aane ke liye, wo to ek bhavna hai jo apne aap man me nirman hoti hai..

Avinash-main na ab pareshan ho gaya hu ye pyaar pyaar sunke (sur shayad readers bhi :banghead: ) mereko khali itna bata ki anya ko kyu bheja us chammak challo ke paas?

Komal-arey kyuki anya pasand karta hai use, aur ek baat batau aaj mere ye bhi dhyan me aaya ke anya bhi usse pyaar vyar nahi karta..

Komal ki baat sunke avinash ne apna matha pit liya…

Avinash-waah to ye log kya ab tak kabaddi kabadi khel rahe the kya :sigh:

Komal-kaisa hai na avi ye baat mere usi din dhyan me aa gayi thi jab shravni ne aniket ke kaan ke niche lagayi thi, kyuki jis insaan se ham pyaar karte hai na use maarne ka sapne me bhi nahi soch sakte aur ye dono murkh hai, dono hi nahi jaante ki prem kya hai, inke beech pyaar hai hi nahi

Avinash-to pyaar nahi to kya hai

Komal-attraction, dono ko ek dusre ke prati akarshan hai aur ye dono ise hi pyaar samajh baite hai, ha manya hai ki pyaar ki shuruwat akarshan se hoti hai par baad me pyaar badhte jata hai aur yaha shravni ko aniket ke apna adhikar chalana hai

Avinash shanti se komal ki baat sun raha tha

Avinash-kammo, kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki main sach me tujhe nahi jaanta ? tune love guru banna tha yaar

Komal-aye chal chal kuch bhi! Subah se koi aur nahi mila kya chake ke jhad pe chadhane ke liye..

Avinash-abe sach bol raha hu main

Itne me docter suman waha aayi aur komal ko check karke dawaiya likh di aur use discharge de diya aur dono hospital ke baahar aaye..

Idhar aniket college pahucha, shravni college me hi thi, aniket ne use canteen me chalne kaha to usne saaf mana kar diya aur akhir me haar ke aniket bola

Aniket-main 2 ghante tumhari raah dekhunga canteen me, aaj mili to theek nahi fir kabhi mulakat nahi hogi

Itna bol ke aniket canteen me jake baith gaya, komal ko call karke puchtach ki aur shravni ki raah dekhne laga, use pura yakin tha ke shravni aayegi aur adha ghanta raah dekhne ke baad shravni aayi aur aakar aniket ke samne wali khurchi par jakar baith gayi par kuch boli nahi aur fir aniket ne baat shuru ki

Aniket-kyo faltu me dimag me gussa bhar rakhi ho? Chhodo is baat ko

Par shravni kuch nahi boli

Aniket-avi aur komal mere bahut karibi dost hai…

Ab aniket ki baat beech me todti shravni boli

Shravni-aur main? Main koi nahi hu?

Aniket-maine aisa kab kaha hai, tum mera pehla pyaar ho shravni

Shravni-tum agar mujhse pyar karte to mera kaha maante

Aniket-acha mujhe batao tumhe kya problem hai avi aur komal se? bhul gayi kya ke aaj avi aur komal ki wajah se hi hum sath hai fir unse kya dikkat hai tumhe

Shravni-mujhe wo dono pasand nahi

Aniket-aur aisa kyu?

Shravni-mujhe nahi pata

Aniket-pata nahi matlab koi to reason hoga

Shravni-pata nahi

Aniket-tumhe nahi pata to kise pata hai fir

Shravni-mujhe wo pasand nahi bas

Aniket-arey par kisi ko napasand karne ke liye koi reason to hona chahiye na?

Shravni-ab jab baat nikli hi hai to batati hu, mujhe na wolog pasand hai na unki bhasha pasand hai aur na unka acharan pasand hai

Aniket-bhasha me kya problem hai, aur dost to aise hi baat karte hai

Shravni-bahut kharab language ka use karte hai wo, sirf chillana, gandi galiya aur hamesha ek dusre ko niche dikhane ki shart..

Aniket-harami, halkat, nalakay ye kya galiya hai kya, ha agar anjan aadmi ko de to galiya ho sakti hai par dosto me nahi, dosto me inhe gali nahi maante, aur ye sab sirf wohi bolte hai kya? Main bhi to bolta hu na unke sath

Shravni-yahi, yahi mujhe nahi pasand, tum mujhe ache se baat karte ho par unke sath ekdum alag rehte ho, mujhe kabhi aise nahi bolte tum

Aniket-wo dost hai mere aur tum pyar ho, agar tumhe dikkat na ho to main tumse bhi aise hi bolunga

Shravni-chii! Khabardar agar mujhe aise baat ki to

Aniket-theek hai main abse kisi ko bhi gali nahi dunga bas fir to theek hai

Shravni-kuch theek nahi hai tumhe unki sangat chhodni padegi

Ab aniket ka para chadhne laga tha aur usne saaf saaf kaha

Aniket-wo to nahi hoga

Shravni- mujhse pyaar karte ho to jarur hoga

Aniket-par mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha hai ki hamare pyaar ka aur mere dosto ka kya sambandh hai

Shravni-hai na, sambandh hai, insaan ki pehchan uske dosto se hoti hai aur ye aise mawali sadakchap dost hai tumhare, mujhe bilkul nahi pasand, wo avinash aur komal bas galiya dete rehte hai maramari karne wale gunde

Ab aniket ka gussa bhadak gaya tha aur wo table par hath maarte huye bola

Aniket-bas bahut hua shravni ab agar avi aur komal ke bare meek shabd bhi bola na to thobda suja dunga kya samajhti kya hai be tu khud ko? Terko kya laga tere liye main apne dosto ko chhod dunga? Arey aniket rane thukta hai aise pyaar pe jo use uske dosto se alag kare, kya to bole pyar? Pyaar ka p bhi jaanti ho kya tum pagal ladki, jiske naam se yaha baith ke tu chilla rahi hai na usi ne mujhe tujhe manane bheja hai aur wo mawali, sadakchap gunde? Tere rup pe fida hua ye jindagi ki sabse badi galti kar li maine, dikhne me sunder hai tu par man ki kali hai, kabhi shakal dekhi hai aaine me apni aur khud se pucha hai ki kyu koi tumhara dost nahi hai? Ye tumhare isi swabhav ki wajahse, us din suman ne mujhe hug kiya to bada gussa dikha rahi thi, kabhi socha haitumhari soch kitni ghatiya hai, ek ladka aur ladki dost banke nahi mil sakte kya? Par tumhe nahi samjhega kyuki tumhare dimag me gobar bhara hai, komal ka bola hua aaj samajh aaya ki shravni matlab gobar, arey dusre par ungli uthane se pehle khud ke ander jhak lena chahiye, bas kuch bhi shabd jodne se kavitaye nahi banti uske liye bhvanao ko samajhna padta hai aayibadi kavita likhne wali, tujhe bura na lage isiliye kaha nahi kabhi par aaj bolta hu, sun! is prithvi ke alawa kahi aur bhi jivan hua to waha ke log bhi bolenge ki teri kavitaye kitni ghatiya aur bakwas hoti hai, dimag ki maa behan kar di be pure

Aniket ki baat sunkar shravni rone lagi jisse aniket aur bhi khawal gaya

Aniket-ab rone jaisa kya hya, sach hajam nahi hua, dusre ko bolte samay acha lagta hai na par khud ke bare me sunne pe rona aata hai, nafrat hone lagi hai be tumse aura b main keh raha hu apni ye shakalmeko dobara mat dikhana chalo utho aur kat lo idhar se :chalnikal:

Shravni tad se uthi aur aniket ko jhapad maarne ke liye hath uthaya to aniket ne uska hath hawa me hi pakad liya

Aniket-ye galti mat karna ek baar maine ye sehan kiya hai aur main ladkiyo ki ijjat karta hu isiliye maaf kar raha hu, teri jagah ye harkat kisi ladke ne ki hoti to wo dobara hath uthane layak nahi bachta

Aniket ne uska hath jhatak diya aur shravni waha se pair patakte huye nikal gayi, aniket bhi baahar aaya aur usne apne katte pe aake ek cigarette sulgayi, ab use thoda theek lag raha tha…

Update 28​

Ab hum aisa keh sakte hai ke shravni ke sath aniket ka breakup ho gaya tha aur breakup ke baad bhale hi wo aniket upper se kuch dikha nahi raha tha par ander se wo kafi dukhi tha, wo ghar par hi ruka raha kahi aana jana nahi, avinash ne ise kafi phone lagaye par wo hamesha baat to taal deta aur akhir me komal boli

Komal-mat pareshan kar use, use recover hone ke liye thoda samay de, thoda akela aur free rehne de use…

Avinash-arey par aise kaise akela chhod du use..?

Komal-avi tu to aise baat kar raha hai jaise tu aniket ko jaanta hi na ho, wo agar yaha aa bhi gaya to hame nahi batana to dur wo us bare me kuch bolega bhi nahi..

Avinash-ha ye bhi sahi hai

Komal-fir use akela rehde de wo normal hua to khud hi aa jayega…

Aniket do dino tak ghar se baahar nahi nikla aur isi time uska bhai yash waha aaya aur use apne sath 1 hafte ke liye leke gaya..

(yash yaad hai na aniket ke chacha ka ladka to aao ab uske bare me thoda jaante hai)

To yash ye aniket ke chacha ka ladka hai sage chacha ka nahi par rishtedari me, swabhav se pura aniket ke jaisa to hua yu ke in bhaisahab ke life me bhi chal raha hai thoda love lafda locha aur apna hero aniket thehra love guru bhale hi khud ka breakup hua ho par bhai ki naiyaa to paar lagwani hi thi isiliye anket uske sath chala gaya, waise is yash ki love story aniket se bilkul alag hai par ab agar wo puri kahani yaha bataunga to 50 update ki story tayar ho jayegi isiliye wo plot ek alag story ke liye agar aap log bole to iske baad wahi shuru kar denge :wink: , to is bhai yash ko hua ek ladki se pyaar aur ab dono ko pyaar ho gaya to inke gharwalo ko ye sab manjoor nahi tha isiliye dono alag bhi ho gaya aura b aniket ka kaam tha inhe ek karwana par aniket ne kuch yuk and kiye ki wo aur alag ho gaye matlab ladka ladki nai unke pariwar wale

Idhar najane kaha se shravni ka aur fir college ki maramari ka kissa narayanrao tak pahuch gaya aur usme unka aur gussa bhadkaya priya (yash ki premika) ki kahani ne fir kyat ha narayanrao ne pehle hi aniket babu ke aane ki tayari kar rakhi thi aur aniket jaise hi yash ke yaha se wapis aaya to uski narayanrao ne badhiya tarike se aarti utari…

Idhar aniket wapis aa gaya hai ye sunke avinash aur komal usse milne pahucheto aniket ghar me hi tha aur khas baat ke ki ghar me bhi goggle laga ke baitha tha jisse avinash ko thoda ashcharya hua

Avinash-anya abe ye kya hai ghar me goggle laga ke kyu ghum raha hai aankhe aayi hai kya (eye flu, cunjuctivitis) ?

Jispar aniket baat chipate huye bola

Aniket-arey kuch nahi ye to aise hi…

Avinash-aise hi :huh: ? nikaliyo to jara goggle :huh:

Aniket ne goggle nikala to uski ek aankh neeli huyi padi thi jise dekh ke avinash apne shirt ki bahi uper karte bola

Avinash-kisne mara teko tu uska naam bata khali nahi uske hath pair tode maine aaj to mera naam bhi avi nahi

Aniket-nahi tod payega tu

Avinash-abe tu naam to bata khali

Aniket-narayanrao rane :sigh1:

Naam sunte hu avinash niche baith gaya

Avinash-aaila teko kaka ne foda hai to sorry main isme kuch nahi kar sakta kar kuch bhi bol umar ke hisab se tagda foda hai teko :lol1:

Avinash aur komal tali deke hasne lage

Avinash-par hua kya? Kyu mara tujhe ?

Aniket ne jab puri hakikat batai to wo aur hasne lage

Sham ko aniket ne avinash ko cal karke bulaya, gaon ke baahar ek tekdi thi, aniket aur avinash do hi samay us tekdi pe jate the ek jab party karni hoti tab aur dusra jab wo udas hote tab

Tekdi ki jagah bahut sunder aur shant thi aur waha tekdi pe ek bada aur juna ped tha aur uske aaju baju chabutara bana hua tha, waha kisi prakar ka halla nahi tha ekdum shant vatavaran, awaj tha to bas haw aka aur ped ke patto ka, teki thodi uchi jagah pe hone ki wajah se waha se shahar ke light raat ke samay me dekhe ja sakte the , ekdum nirmanushya sthal, purnina ki raat hone ki wajah se waha chand ki roshni maujood th, matlab na to waha purn prakash tha aur na hi purn andhera..

Aniket ne char beer li jise dekh ke avinash samajh gaya ke aaj tekdi party hai, dono tekdi par pahuche aur us ped ke niche jakar baith gaye, dono chup the, avinash ke dhyan me aa gaya ke aniket ko apne man ki baat kehni hai par use shabdo me kaise bayan kare use samajh nahi aa raha tha isiliye dono shanti se beer ke ghut le rahe the, kya kamal ki hoti hai na ye dosti bhi, avinash bas aniket ki shanti ko sun raha tha aur bagair shabdo ki uski vyatha ko mehsus kar raha tha aur aakhir me aniket bola

Aniket-avi us din hospital me jab shravn meko chhod ke gayi tab tu kuch bola tha, kya tha wo

Avinash-acha wo, ye to hota hi tha wala

Aniket-kehna kya chahta that u

Avinash muskuraya..

Avinash-uske pehle ek kahani sonata hu sun, main ek baar ek mele me gaya tha, waha main ek dukan me ek sunder sa tajmahal dekha, wo tajmahal itna sunder tha ke maine use kharid liya, chotasa, hath ki hatheli par sama jaye aisa, sbubhra, safed ekdum, aakhir taj hai wo, prem ka Pratik apne desh ki shan, koi murkh hi hoga jise taj me khubsurti na dikhe, main bhi uski khubsurti pe mohit ho gaya aur maine use kharid liya aur ghar ke liye nikla, main bahut khush tha use kharid kar, aate huye raste me bhi maine do teen baar use khol kar dekha, us taj ko bag me rakhne ki meri icha nahi thi maine use apne hath me lekar hi ghar aaya, ghar aakar maine sabko wo taj dikhaya sab khush huye use dekh kar, maine use apne room me tavle par rakha, raat me bhi main najane kitni der use dekhta raha, subah uthne par mere dhyan me aaya ke table par aur bhi saman jaise meri kitabe wagaire rakhe the, unse taj ko dhakka lag kar wo gir kar tut gaya to.. isiliye maine use uthakar TV par rakha, laga ki ab yaha dhakka nahi lagega ye safe jagah hai par do din baad dhyan me aaya ke uspar dhul baithne lagi hai..

maine fir use ache sesaaf karkealmari me rakha, waha wo safetha par ab main use dekh nahi pa raha tha aur jaise jaise din beette gaye main taj ko bhul gaya, ab to yaad bhi nahi ki maine use kab dekha tha

Aniket ko thoda thoda andaj aa raha tha avi ki bato ka par wo sahi se samjha nahi tha to bola

Aniket-avya chadh gayi kya teko kya badbada raha hai sahi se bata

Avinash fir muskuraya aur bola

Avinash-main us taj me ek pal me mohit ho gaya tha isiliye use kharid liya par agle sare pal use sambhalne me nikal gaye, tere sath bhi yahi hua hai, tu ek pal me shravni par mohit hua, uske aur tere swabhav ke jamin aasman ka fark tha fir bhi tu mohit hua aur isiliye tu use sambha;ne laga aur ek din jab tera moh tuta to tu jag gaya, asal me jise tu pyaar samajh raha thaw o to bas akarshan tha aur akarshan aur pyar me yahi fark hai, jaise jasise din beette hai akarshan kam hota hai aur pyaar badhta jata hai, tum dono yaha galat nikle aur ye baat us din mere dhyan me aa gayi isiliye main bola tha ke ye to sala ek din hona hi tha…

Aniket-matlab mera shravni pe pyaar na hoke main bas uski taraf attaracted tha

Avinash-hao

Aniket-aur teko aisa kyu lagta hai

Avinahs-bahut si bate hai, thoda apne dimag pe jor daal smajh jayega, pyaar kabhi adhikar nahi batata be, aur jab aap kisi se pyaar karte ho to uspar aapka pura vishwas hona chahiye uske bagair koi matlab nahi hai. Shravni yahi chuk gayi, uski shak karne ke swabhav se use bhi nahi samajh aaya ke uske dil me pyaar ki jagah shak bhar gaya hai, uske ahankar ne kabhi use pyaar karne hi nahi diya..

Aniket ke aankho se ek aasu tapka

Aniket-avi tu meri jagah hota to kya karta

Avinash-meko lagta hai tune ab shravni se dur rehna chahiye

Aniket-matlab apne naseeb me pyaar nahi hai

Avinash komal ki di huyi kasam me bandha hua tha use yaad karke bola

Avinash-apan sale karmheen daridri, sab kuch aankho ke samne hai sab samajh raha hai par bol nahi sakta aur jise bolna chahiye use samajh nahi raha…

Avinash ki baat sunkar aniket sawaliya najro se use dekhne laga..

To Be Continued…

Update 29​

Avinash ki baat sunkar aniket sawaliya najro se use dekhne laga..

Aniket-avi teko koi pasand hai kya? Kabhi bataya nahi tu…

Avinash-kash!! Par nahi..

Aniket-fir teko ye itna sab kaise malum be pyaar ke bare me?

Avinash-prem kya ladki aur ladke ke beech hi ho sakta hai kya? Ek dost dusre dost se pyar nahi kar sakta kya? Ham bhi to bachpan se sath hai, aur tere to kitne upkar hai mere pe agar tu nahi hota to aaj main kahi majduri kar raha hota

Aniket-bsdk hajar baar bola hai tere ko ye baat mat nikala kar ar maine bola na sara paisa byaj sahit wasulunga par abi ye chhod pyaar ke bare me bata

Avinash-kya pravachan chalu hai kya? Ke main koi bawaji hu?

Aniket- waisa nai be par aaj tak dekha hua avi aur prem ke bare me bolne wala avi inme fark hai re, kaha se sikha ye sab

Avinash-wo kya hai na bhai uperwala akal baat raha than a to main drum leke gaya tha aur tu katori samjha..

Aniket-bsdk matlab merko akal nah hai aisa bolna hai ka tujhe

Avinash-hoti to ab tak teko tera pyaar dikh jata na?

Ab aniket me thodi hi kyu na ho shravni ab bhi baki thi siliye wo avinash ke bolne ka matlab nahi samajh raha tha

Aniket-mujhe to pyaar dikha tha re par mera naseeb use hi nahi dikha

Aniket ki baat sun ke avi ne sar pe hath maar liya aur man me bola

Aninash- iske dimag ka board jab tak kora nahi hoga tab tak komal ka naam likhna mushkil hai

Aur avinash ko aise khoya dekh ke aniket bola\

Aniket- kya hua avya? Kya soch raha hai?

Aur socte sochte avi flow flow me bol gaya

Avinash-board kora kaise kare soch raha hu

Par aniket ko kuch samjha nahi

Aniket-board? Kaisa board, abe kya bol raha?

Avinash ke dhyan me aaya ke wo kya bol raha hai aur wo baat sambhalte huye bola

Avinash-kuch nahi meko lag raha jyada ho gayi aaj

Aniket-abe par ab tak pehli bhi khatam nahi huyi hai

Dono fir se beer pine lage aur aniket dobara bola

Aniket-kyu kiya hoga re usne aisa? Kya mila hoga use aisa karke?

Avinash-swabhav, swabhav hota hai hare k ka, aur gussa mat hona anya wo tere layki ki nahi thi

Aniket-aur teko aisa kyu lagta hai?

Avinash- ek baat ho to batau, shuruwat to yaha se hai ke pyaar logo ko jodna sikhata hai aur wo logo ko todne nikli thi, hamesha ye mat karo wo mat karo, aisa mat bolo, aur tu bas bail jaise uske saamne mundi hilata tha, waise dekha jaye to galti teri bhi hai, tu agar shuru se saribaate clear rakhta tobaat alag thi par tu to uske roop ke moh me un bato me bhi hami bharta chala gaya jo tere swabhav me hi nahi thi, aur sabse buri baat matlab jab tumhara breakup hua to wo apni galtiya manni chhod kar tujhe thappad lagane chali thi, aur bhi bahut si bate hai jo batati hai ke usne tere se kabhi pyaar nahi kiya tha aur wo tere layak nahi thi

Aniket-avya fir jo mere liye sahi hogi wo kaisi hogi?

Avinash-ekdum tere jaisi, tere jaisi mastikhor par saaf dil ki, sirf tumhari masti ko na samajh ke usme shamil hone wali, tere pe dil ki gehrayi se pyaar karne wali aur tujhe free chhodne wali, tere pyaar ne puri tarah dubi huyi aur tujhpar vishwas karne wali, tere jaisi bindaass yaro ki yaar ladki suit hogi teko…

Aniket-sale avya puri beer utar di tune meri, sachme aisi koi ladki hogi kya? Itnni sab qualities wali, ye sab ek ladki me mil jayegi kya, shravni thi kya aisi…

Ab avinash ka dimag fir gaya

Avinash-abey BC bsdk anya aaj ke baad us chiraan ka naam mere saamne liya to chappal se marunga, abe neech aadmi main teko chand dikhaa chahta hu aur tu gobar me atak raha, mar tu main chala tera kuch nahi ho sakta,

Aniket ne use hath pakad ke wapis niche baithaya aur kaan pakadte huye bola

Aniket-avya aise adhe me chhod ke mat ja be apne bhai ko, maaf karo maaf karo aage se nai lunga uska naam

Avinash-dekh main dil se bata raha hu, uska naam hi nahi usko dil se bhi nikal daal, meri guarantee hai hai meri batayi huyi ladki teko jarur milegi aur sirf milegi nahi balki jindagi bhar tera sath bhi degi

Aniket-para kaha milegi wo?

Avinash-milegi aas paas hi par uske pehle aankho pe se shravni naam ki patti hata

Aniket apne khayalo me kho gaya aur avinash ne bhi use nahi cheda… dono baitha ke apni beer pine lage aur fir aniket bola

Aniket-avya main sahime kismet wala hu be jo tere jaisa saccha dost mila hai, sabko aise dost nahi milte.

Avinash-ha na chal fir pair chu ke ashirwad lele…

Aniket-ja na bsdk itna bhi acha nahi hai tu lawde hudd

Baad me wo dono ekdusre ke kandhe pe hath rakh ke waha se nikal gaye…

Baad me wapis se college shuru aur fir wahi tikdi aur unki tigdam bhi, aninash aniket aur komal wapis se apne kaam pe lag gaye the aur kamal baat ye ki itna sab hone ke baad bhi shravni ko apni galti ka ashaas nahi hua tha, galti manna to dur wo ulta usne is sab ka dost avinash aur komal pe laga diya tha aur apne dosto ko ye bata rahi thi ke kaise komal aur avinash ne aniket ke dimag me uske liye ulti baate bhari hai aur jab uski dost jo komal ki bhi dost thi usne ye sab bate in teeno ko batayi to aniket bhadak gaya

Aniket-isko to ab acha sabak sikhana padega..

Par komal pe is baat ka jara bhi asar nahi hua ulta wo aniket ko samjhate huye boli

Komal-arey jane de anya kyu dimag me gussa bhar raha hai, jane de usko jo bolna hai bolne de

Aniket-kammo agar wo mere bare me bolti ti meko ghanta fark nahi padta par tum dono ke bare me bola hua mujhe sehan nahi hoga

Ab avinash samjhate huye bola

Avinash-hamko ghanta fark nahi pada ab kya jake maarega use?

Aniket-avya main nahi chhodne wala usko

Avinash-agar sach me use satana hoga to kuch alag karna hoga bhidu

Aniket sochne laga aur fir thode samay me bola

Aniket-jalne wale ko aur jalaye to

Avinash-abe kehna kya hai teko

Aniket apne idea pe ekdum khush tha wo bola

Aniket-usko jalana hoga to main agar dusri ladki ko girlfriend bana ke uske saamne lau to?

Aniket uth ke khada hua aur komal se bola

Aniket-meri premika banegi??

Aniket ki baat sun kea vi bhi apni jagah se uth gaya

Avinash-arey sahi idea hai

Aur komal ko to usne jo suna uspar vishwas hi nahi ho raha tha aur uske baad jo usne kiya uske baki logo ko yakin nahi hua…..

To Be Continued…..

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Aniket-meri premika banegi??

Aur komal ko to usne jo suna uspar vishwas hi nahi ho raha tha aur uske baad jo usne kiya uske baki logo ko yakin nahi hua…..

Komal apni jagah se tad se uthi aur usne aniket pe hath utha diya par ain mauke pe apne hath niche table pe de mana, komal ne itne jor se table par hath patka tha ke table par rakhe chai ke glass gir gaye aur thoda jyada awaj hone se canteen me maujood sabhi log unhe dekhne lage aur komal daat piste huye aniket se boli

Aniket-teri himmat kaise huyi meko jhuti girlfriend banane ki? Aaj bol diya hai aage bola to ye hath table ki jagah tere gaal pe padega aur glass ki jagah tere daat gire honge..

Komal ka aisa raudra avtar der ke aniket ko kuch bolna hi nahi jam raha thaw o ekum chup ho gaya aur avinash ne komal ka hath pakad ke use niche baithaya

Avinash-shant gada dhari bheem shant!

Komal guse se tharthara rahi thi

Komal-ye pagal hai kya… murkh, akkal naam ki chiz nahi hai, main hi murkh hu jo isse py…

Komal bolte bolte ruk gayi, usne apne shabdo ko muh me hi rok liya aur aniket ghabrane ki wajah se uske ye dhyan me nahi aaya par avinash ke dhyan me aa gaya aur use to yahi chahiye tha

Avinash-de de aur galiya de, uske bagair samjhega nahi ye gadha..

Komal ne ek jordar punch avi ke pet me mara

Komal-avya dimag pehle hi ghuma hua hai aur mat ghuma

Avinash-arey par main yahi chahta hu? Ruk kyu gayi?

Komal ne gusse se avinash ki taraf dekha aur fir aniket thoda sambhalte huye bola

Aniket-shant kammo shant, shravni ke bolne se fark nahi padta bol rahi thi fir itna chidhne jaisa kya ho gaya abi?

Komal-anya tu paagal hai kya, bachi kuchi akal bhi bech di kya, dekh main tere har masti me shamil houngi par ye jhuti premika ka faltupana apne se nahi hoga

Aniket-theek hai to aisa bol na hindi me meko laga aaj dhai kilo ka hath padne wala hai meko, avya sala apna pailwan khawal gaya yaar aaj, jane de teko ye idea nahi pasand to koi dusti khojenge idea ki kami thodehi hai apne ko (ha meko to jaise aur koi kaam hi nahi hai inke liye idea sochu :sigh: )

Avinash-arey wo to hai hi par pehle tum tumhare dimag shant karo cold drink bulao

Aur aniket ne cold drink ka order de diya fir teeno kuch samay shant baithe aur achanak avinash bola

Aninash- idea :idea:

Aniket aur komal utsukta se uski taraf dekhne lage aur eksath bole

“kya, kya jaldi bata”

To avinash hasne laha aur aniket bola

Aniket-akela kya daat nikal ke has raha hai be humko bhi bata bsdk

Tab avinash bola

Avinash-kal tv pe main ramayan dekh raha tha usme raavan ke ant ko karnibhut uska ahankar hota hai

Aniket-sidhe sidhe batayega harami ke idea ke naam pe yahi sab bate karega tu

Tab avinash wapis hasne laga aur ab komal boli

Komal-ab agar tu dobara hasa na avya to tere daat yahi girenge

Tab avinash khud ko sambhalte huye bola

Avinash-abe gawaro yahi to idea hai, abi dekho main hasa to tumko kyu gussa aaya..

Tab aniket bola

Aniket-tu hasa isiliye nahi, tu bematlab hasa isiliye aur tere hasne ka kaaran humko pata nahi tha isiliye gussa aaya

Avinash-correct, ab samajh agar hum aise hi shravni ke saamne hase to use kaise samajh aayega ki hum kyu hase hai? Use to yahi lag raha hoga na ki usne jo bhi hamare bare me bola hai usse hum gussa honge chidhe huye honge, par iske ulta agar hum chidhne ki bajay hasne lage to use aur gussa aayega, aur uska ahankar use sabak sikhayega,

Aniket-kya halkat aadmi hai be, kabhi kabhi samajh nahi aata ki sala tu chiz kya hai, tekdi wala avi aur abhi waha pura alag hai be

Avinash-teki wala tera dost hai bhidu aur abhi wala shravni ka virodhi :cool:

Aur usi time pe shravni waha aayi aur use dekhte hi avinash jor jor se hasne laga aur haste haste aniket ko piche dekhne ka ishara kiya aur jab aniket ne piche palat ke dekha to wo bhi jor jor se hasne laga, in dono ko aise paaglo jaisa hasta dekh komal ko bhi hasi aa gayi aur wo bhi hasne lagi, aniket aur avinash ke hasne par shravni ne itna dhyan nahi diya par komal ko hasta dekh use sehan nahi hua, wo waha se tad se uthi aur pair patakte huye waha se nikal gayi, ab teeno fir se hasne lage aur ab ye asal hasi thi

Shravni ko waha se aisa jata dekh komal boli

Komal-waah avi seth waah kya dimag hai tumhara

Avinash-dhanyawaad madam

Aniket ko narayanrao ne kuch kaam bataya tha to wo waha se nikal gaya aur uske jate hi avinash bola

Aninash-kammo teko bhi akal nahi hai na.

yaha log saamne se tilak lagane aa rahe aur tu unhe piche hata tahi hai

Komal-tujhe nahi samjhega

Avinash-to samjha na pareshan ho gaya hu main (aur readers bhi :sigh: avinash-adi tu chup baith abi… me-bhag bsdk 😏 )

Komal-ye aisa jhutha natak karke kya fayda

Avinash-to tu saccha kar na, ek baar ka tera natak dekh ke to use kuch samajh aata

Komal-jab mujhe pata hai ki wo ye sab natak kar raha hai to mujhe kitni takleef hoti iska andaja hai tujhe, nahi na?

Avinash-ha wo bhi sahi hai par ek baat puchu?

Komal-ab mana karungi to chup baithega kya, aur teko kab se permission leni pad rahi hai be

Avinash-anya ko maarne ke liye jo hath uthaya thaw o table par kyu patka

Komal muskurayi aur boli

Komal-pyaar karti hu na, thappad use padta to takleef mujhe hoti, apan jisse pyaar karte hai use hi maarne ke liye hath uthaya ye soch ke hath table par patak diya

Avinash komal ke haavbhav dekh raha tha

Avinash-sach me yaar ye anya bewkuf hai, jo ladki usse itna pyaar karti hai wo saamne hoke bhi use dikh nahi rahi aur meko ye sab samajh raha hai par main bol nahi sakta,aur aaj tune fir se sabit kar diya ki tu ani ke kitna pyaar karti hai, ek wo thi jo baat baat pe hath utha deti thi aur ek tu hai, hats off kammo

Komal-bas bas bahut ho gayi ab meri taarif

Uske baad mission burning shravni aath dino tak chala, har baar jab bhi shravni dikhti ye hasne lagte aur akhir kaar wo pareshan ho gayi aur ye log jab canteen me baithe the tab aakar chillane lagi

Shravni-kya natak chal raha hai ye? Mujhe dekh ke hasne kyu lagte ho?

Tab avinash bola

Avinash-teko kisne bola ki hum teko dekh ke haste hai

Shravni-avinash aap jyada bol rahe hai aur aniket aap bhi insab me shamil ho gaye?

Aniket-shamil na hou to kya karu? Dost hai mere art u jab dono ka naam pure college me famous kar ahi thi tab maja aa raha tha to hasne lage, has rahe the tumhari murkhta pe, tumhare ahankar pe, hasi aa rahi thi tumhari harkao pe to binawajah khud kit ulna kisi se karne lagi aur khudka pyaar gawa baithi apni jelousy pe

Shravni ko uski galti dhyan me aa gayi thi wo gardan jhuka ke rone lagi aur rote huye boli

Shravni-I am sorry aniket, main galat thi, tumpe binwajah shak karti rahi aur tumhe gawa baithi, mujhe maaf kar do, tumhe hamare pyaar ki kasam, tumse dur hone ke baad meri kya haalat huyi hai main bata nahi sakti, par tum samajh jaoge kyu ki tum bhi mujhse utha hi pyaar karte ho mujhe pata hai, aur ye mera pyaar hi tha jisne mujhe swarthy banaya, ab main samajh chuki hu ke main tumhare bagair nahi reh sakti, apne pyaar ko maaf karke ek mauka nahi doge, ek galti to dushman bhi maaf karta hai tum to pyaar ho mera.. ek galti se koi apne pyaar ko aise dur karta hai kya?

Avinash ka gussa badh raha tha aur komal ko ghabrahat ho rahi thi par aniket shanti se shravni ki baat sun raha tha…..

To Be Continued…

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Avinash ka gussa badh raha tha aur komal ko ghabrahat ho rahi thi par aniket shanti se shravni ki baat sun raha tha aur idhar sab taktaki lagaye aniket ko dekh rahe the ki ab ye kya bolega aur akhir kar aniket ne bolna shuru kiya

Aniket-shravni maaf kiya tumko…

Aniket ka itna bolna tha ke avinash ke gusse ka bandh futa aur wo apni jagah se utha par wo kuch bolta isse pehle hi aniket ne use ishare se shant rehne kaha aur niche baithne kaha

Thank you thank you bolte huye shravni aniket ke gale lag gayi aur rone lagi aur rote rote hi boli

Shravni-mujhe mere pyaar pe pura bharosa hai

Aniket-pyaar..??

Aniket se shravni ko apne se alag kiya aur niche baithaya aur fir bola

Aniket-sach me bharosa hai apne pyaar pe? Shravni dekho ye sach hai ki mujhe lagta tha ki main tumse pyaar karta hu par sacchai ye hai ke main sirf tumhare roop par mohit hua tha aur us akarshan ko main pyaar samajh baitha..

Aniket ki bat sun kar shravni ko dhakka laga

Shravni-par main sach me tumse pyaar karti hu

Aniket-mujhe aisa nahi lagta

Shravni-par kyu?

Aniket-agar sach me pyaar hota to tum usi din mafi maangti jis din hamara breakup hua tha

Shravni-mujhe maaf kar do par us din main gusse me thi

Aniket-chalo maan liya tum us din gusse me thi fir itne din kis ki raah dekh rahi thi

Shravni-apni galti ka ahsaas itni jaldi nahi hota hai insaan ko

Aniket-to fir ab apni galti samajh aa gayi hai kya?

Shravni-isiliye to mafi maang rahi hu

Aniket-dekho gussa mat manna aur agar gussa aaye bhi to ab mujhe ghanta fark nahi padta, tum dikhne me bahut sunder ho par maha dhurt ho, tumhe agar sachme mafi maangni hoti na to sidhe aake mafi maangti par tum aayi ham kyu has rahe hai ye janne ke liye, tumhe laga ki tumhe dekhte hi main pighal jaunga tumhare piche aaunga par waisa hua nahi aur tumne palti maar li aur fir ye sab mafi maangne ka drama, tum pyaar ke liye nahi balki avi aur komal ko nicha dikhane ke liye ye kar rahi ho par ab tumhare in magarmacch ke aasuo aur is kutilta me main nahi fasne wala kyuki mere sath mere dost hai jo samay aane par mujhe bhale hi marenge par sahi raste pe le aayenge, tum ahankari aur dhurt ho isiliye akeli ho, to ab ye tumhari jhuti bhavna, aasu aur chalbazi ka potla uthao aur niklo idhar se aur ab jindagi pe apni shakal mat dikhana

Komal aur avinash ab shant ho gaye the kyuki aniket ke shravni ki sari chalbazi khuli kar di thi aura b uske paas dusra koi rasta nahi tha to wo jor se rone lagi aur itna der jo avinash apna gussa roke huye tha wo bola

Avinash-o rudali, suna nahi kya? Apna potla uthao aur ye jo rona dhona hai wo dusri taraf jake karne ka idhar hamare saamne nahi, aur abhi aniket tha isiliye usne pyaar se samjhaya ab agar dobara aayi to main apne tarike se samjhaunga aur wo kuch tumhe jamega nahi ab nikal pareshan ho gaye tere chakker me..

(gazab londe, avi-tu fir aa gaya, ja na jake aage ka likh na, “bsdk jyada bolega to role kaat dunga tera yahi heart attack se mar jayega, avi-karke dikha :roll: “writer ki koi ijjat hi nahi hai lawda :cry: khair aage badhte hai)

Baad me avinash apni jagah se utha aur usne aniket ko gale laga liya

Avinash-gajab londe dil khush kar diya aaj tune, agar koi puche ki jindagi ke kaunsa acha kaam kiya hai to pehle ye batane ka

Aniket-ab ek mahan sant ke tekdi ke pravachan se sikha hu main to

Avinash-aisa kya, kaun hai re wo sant? Mereko ko bhi mila na :shy:

Aniket-do beer ander jaye bagair nahi milte wo baba

Komal ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha

Komal-kiske bare me baat kar rahe ho tum log

Aniket-arey koi nahi hai ye tekdi ke avinand baba bas unhi ke bare me

Ab tekdi sunne ke baad komal ko sab dhyan me aa gaya

Komal-arey unke bare main to main bhi suna hai bahut bade chor.. matlab thor(thor mane mahan Marathi shabd hai avenger mat samajhna :redface: ) baba hai wo hame bhi unke pravachan ka labh mila hai

Teeno fir se din khol ke has rahe the aur din pankh laga ke ud rahe the, kahi na kahi shravni ke prakaran se aniket ko aghat pahucha tha par wo yash ke haal dekh raha tha kyuki uski lovestory ke bhi bara baje huye the isiliye ab aniket ne apne man ke darwaje band karke rakhe the

Kuch reham kar e jindagi, thoda sawarjane de

Tera agla jakhm bhi she lenge, par…pehle wala to bhar jane de..

Komal ne ab decide kar liya tha ke agar uska pyaar saccha hai to ek din aniket jarur samjhega aur avinash to mauke ke intajar me tha aur yash ki kahani use bhi pata thi jisse is waqt aniket ki mansik stithi ka pura andaja tha avinash ko isiliye usne bhi thoda rukne ka socha par masti shuru hi thi

Ek din college ko chutti thi to aniket ghar par hi tha, avi aur komal dono aniket ke ghar par pahuche kaushalya radio par gane sun rahi thi aur kuch kaam kar rahi thi

‘mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai, mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai’

In dono ko dekhte hi kaushalyat thode gusse boli

Kaushalya-aao aao aao, avi kaha rehta hai tu aajkal? Aur komal kaku ki yaad nahi aati kya? Ya sirf ani se mil liye ho gaya

Tab komal boli

Komal-waisa nahi hai kaku aapki yaad to hamesha aati hai

Avinash-hao aura apse jyada aapke hath ke khane ki, kuch hai kya bahut bhuk lagi hai

Kaushalya-hmm, laga hi tha bhukkad aisa hi bolega, ja jake fridge me dek bahut kuch hai ye ani to kuch khata hi nahi

Avinash kitchen me ghusa aur hath me laddu ka box lekar baahar aaya, use dekhte hi komal laddu lene ke liye jhapti par avi ne box piche chipa liya par komal ne uske paas se laddu le hi liya aur kha bhi liya, ab inka awaj sunke aniket bhi apne room se baahar aaya aur usne in dono ko laddu khate dekha aur avinash se bola

Aniket-oye bhukkad logo mera ghar kya college ki canteen hai kya

Kaushalya-ani khane de na baccho ko tu to kuch khata nahi

Ab jab kaku ne uski side le li thi to avi ne daat nikal diye, isdar komal man laga ke radio par ka gana sun rahi thi, idhar kaku ne avi ki side li thi to aniket ke avinash ke hath se laddu ka box chhin liya aur khane laga, inki masti aise hi chalu thi to kaushalya boli

Kaushalya-tum log tumhara chalne do main jara mandir hoke aati hu

Itna bol ke wo mandir ke liye nikal gayi

Kuch adhe ghante baad avinash hasa to komal ne usse pucha

Komal-avi kya hua hasne jaisa?

Jispar avinash ne kaha

Avinash-kya, main kabi hasa

Fir aniket hasa aur fir komal aur fir sare ekdum hasne laga (paagal hai sabke sab ab kya bolu main :sigh: ) itne me radio pe awaj aaya bam bam bhole, wo aniket ne sun liya aur fior aniket shuru ho gaya aur khade hoke bolne laga

Aniket-bam bam bhole, bam bam bhole bam bam bole

Idhar komal shuru ho gayi

Komal-mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai, mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai

Udhar avinash badbada raha tha

Avinash-bhuk lagi bhuk lagi, khane ku deo re.. bhuk lagi bhuk lagi

Ek ghanta beeta aur jab kaushalya mandir se ghar lauti to jo scene unhone dekha unhone apna matha pit liya unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ke ghar me ye sab kya tufan macha hua tha wo jor se chillayi

Kaushalya-arey ye sab kya chal raha hai!!!

Kaushalya ka awaj sun kar aniket aur komal ek pal ke liye shant huye par fir wapis shuru ho gaye

Bam bam bhole bam bam bhole

Kaushalya sabse pehle komal ke paas gayi aur usse pucha

Kaushalya-komal bacche kya hua? Tum log aise kyu kar rahe ho?

Par komal to apni hi masti me thi

Komal-mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai

Kaushalya(komal ko samjhate huye)- ha chale jana sajan ke ghar par pehle bata ye kya chal raha hai

Kaushalya ki baat sun kar komal muskurayi aur apni odhni ko sar par ghunghat jaisa lete huye boli

Komal-main o sajan ke ghar hi hu sasu ji pranam

Aur fir wapis shuru ho gayi,

Komal-mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai

Idhar aniket pure ghar me naachte huye fir raha tha aur bam bam bhole to suru hi tha, ab kaushalya pareshan ho gayi

Kaushalya-arey tum dono yaha ho to wo teesra bander kaha hai avi kaha hai

Itne me kitchen me kuch girne ka awaj aaya to kaushalya bhagte huye kitchen me pahuchi aur waha ka scene dekhte hi boli

Kaushalya-hey prabhu! Avi nalayak ye kya kiya tune

Avinash ne kitchen me ghuskar bani huyi sari rotiya khatam kar di thi aur sath me chawal aur daal ka bhi khatjma kar diya tha aura b pattha farsan ke dabbe se farsan kha raha tha..

in teeno ko harkate aur ghar ki halat dekh ke kaushalya ko bas chakkar aana baki the, unhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha aur unhone akhir me narayanrao ko phone lagaya

Kaushalya-aho, jaldi ghar aao ye ani avinash aur komal ko kuch ho gaya hai, paagal jaisa kar rahe hai

Narayanrao-kaushalya shant ho pehle aur ache4 se batao kya hua hai

Kaushalya-phone pe batane ka samay nahi hai aap jaldi ghar aao in teeno ne pura ghar sar pe utha liya hai

Kaushalya ki baat sunkar Narayan ek naukar ko sath leke bhagte huye ghar pahuche aur jab unhone ye sab bate apni aankho se dekhi tab sari baat unke dhyan me aa gayi aur wo hasne lage aur unko aise hasta dekh ke kaushalya ka gussa aur bhadak gaya

Kaushalya-has kya rahe ho aap pehle inko hospital leke chalo

Jispar narayanrao bole

Narayanrao-uski koi jarurat naih hai pehle batao inhone fridge par rakhe huye laddu khaye hai kya?

Kaushalya-kya aap bhi laddu khane se aisa hota hai kya?

Narayanrao-kaushalya aaj kya hai?

Kaushalya-mahashivratri!

Ab kaushalya ke dhyan ke sari baat aayi aur wo sar ko hath lagate boli

Kaushalya-arey bhagwan matlab un ladduo me bhang mili huyi thi, ab kya kare? Aap bhi na aisi chize ghar me rakhte hai kya?

Narayanrao-arey apne gada electronics wale jethabhai hai na unhone diye the, mujhe kya pata tha ye kha lenge

Kaushalya-baad me baat karenge pehle inko theek karo

Narayanrao-chinta mat karo main hu na

Fir narayanrao ne apne sath laye naukar ko awaj di aur use bagiche se amrud ke ped ke patte td lane ke liye kaha aur wo jaldi jake wo patte tod ke le aaya, tab tak ghar me bam bam bhole ka hungama shuru tha

Sabse pehle narayanrao ne char patte apne hath me liye aur bholenath ma Prasad hai kha le aisa bolke aniket ko khila diye idhar komal ka shuru tha

Komal-mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai

Narayanrao-komal sajan ke ghar jana hai na to ye lo ye khao pehle

Avinash-meko bhi khane ku deo re

Narayanrao-le ye le ye kha le

Narayanrao ne badi calaki se sabko amrud ke ped ke patte khila diye the aur kuch ekad ghante me teeno thode thode hosh me aaye par kisi ne unse kuch nahi kaha bas narayanrao aur kaushalya ek dusre ki taraf dekh ke muskura rahe the….

Update 32​

Ek din aise hi avinash aur aniket canteen me masti karte baithe the waise bhi dusra koi kaam thodehi hai isko to komal bhagte huye waha canteen me aayi aur khurchi par baithne se pehle hi bolna shuru kar diya

Komal-arey yaar locha ho gaya hai thoda

Tab avinash bola

Avinash-arey gazab, wahi soch raha tha main ke itne din shanti me kaise bite waise bhi shant reh reh ke bore ho gaya tha main, bas locha hone ki der hi bata kya hua

Komal-arey apni suman ki shadi pakki ho gayi hai

Aniket-arey waah! Ye to badhiya news hai! Par locha kya hua isme

Tab usko rokte huye komal boli

Komal-pehle tum dono apne muh band karo beech me mat bolo aur jo main bol rahi hu suno, suman ka love matter uske ghar par pata chal gaya aur fir kya uska baap jaat paat leke baith gaya hai aur do din me jabardasti uski shadi paas ke gaon ke patil ke ladke se fix kar di hai, anya suman ko room me band karke rakha hai aur usse uska phone bhi le leiya hai, suman ne uski dost ke hath se ye baat mujh tak pahuchayi hai

Komal ki baat sunkar aniket ne sar pe hath rakh liya

Aniket-fir apan isme kya kar sakte hai? Ause aise case me ladki ka baap aur bhai bahut maarte hai mere ko anubhav hai iska (yash wale matter me bhai aise maar bhi kha chukka hai ek baar)

Komal-matlab tu kuch nahi karega

Aniket-kammo ab kya uske baap ke gundo se maramari karu ke suman ko bhagau waha se

Komal-par anya kuch to karna padega kyuki suman ne bola hai agar uski jabardast shadi karwayi gayi to wo atmahatya kar legi

Atmahatya ki baat sunkar aniket aur avinash dachak gaye mane chauk gaye aur avinash bola

Avinash-ye to solid locha ho gaya hai, kuch bhi hua to suman apni dost hai, apan nahi karenge to kaun karega

Aniket apna sar khujlate huye bola

Aniket-hmm theek hai bolo kya karna hai fir,

Komal-lagao dimag dekho koi rasta milta hai kya, koi na koi solution to milega hi

Tab aniket avinash se bola

Aniket-avya bsdk soch kuch kya sirf khan eke liye rakha hai kya teko

Avinash-ekdum correct, meko batao tum logo ne kabhi motu patlu cartoon dekha hai kya?

Av aniket khawal gaya

Aniket-kammo ek laat maariyo jara is gadhe ke bacche ko, jab dekho tab kahani sunane baith jata hai, yaha chal kya raha hai isko cartoon yaad aa raha hai

Komal ne bhi gusse se avinash ki taraf dekha to wo baat sambhalte huye bola

Avinash-abey gawaro cartoon isiliye bola ki main bhi wo motu jaisa hu khali pet mere dimag ki batti nahi jalti, to pehle mere pet me kuch dalo aur idea nikalo, vadapav khilao idea lo 😌

Aniket ke canteen wale ko order de di

Aniket-o kaka jo bhi hai khane ka do aur agar nai hai to bhatti ke koyle de do wahi thus dunga iske nadle me

Avinash- :D

Aniket aur komal kya kare soch rahe the aur idhar avinash mast do vadapav kha ke chai pike Dakar dete huye bola

Avinash-aao idhar aao plan suno, mere 1400gms ka dimag yaha hai to apne 800gms ke dimag ko pareshan par karo tum log

Uske baad avinash ne unko pura plan bataya aur uska plan sunke aniket bola

Aniket-kya haramkhor aadmi hai be, plan bata raha hai ke meri supari de raha hai, tere jaise dost ke hote huye dushman ki jarurat hi nahi hai main waise hi barbad ho jaunga

Avinash-theek hai cancle plan, tumlog batao kya karna hai

To komal boli

Komal-nahi nahi yahi plan theek hai, anya jyada se jyada thoda maar khana padega par suman ki jaan bach jayegi

Aniket-arey par idhar apan log hi dimag khapa rahe hai udkar jisko shadi karni hai wo tayar hai kya?

Komal-arey udhar ko aag lagi hai aura b to wo suman ke liye kuch bhi karne ko tayar hai, meri phone pe baat huyi hai usse aur aur sach to ye hai ki ye sab bate use bhi pata nahi thi

Aniket ne thoda time socha aur fir bola

Aniket-theek hai to fir chalo lagte hai kaam ke jo hoga

dekha jayega ab

Uske baad aniket jake docter sidharth se mila aur use pura plan bataya aur siddharth bhi isme tayar ho gaya

Ab decide huye mutabik komal suman ke ghar pahuchi uski shadi ke liye, shadi ka din aa gaya tha aur komal ne sara plan suman ko bataya, plan sun ke suman khushi se uchal padi aur usne komal ko gale laga ke uske galo ko chum liya, komal apna gaal saaf karte huye boli

Komal-oye main lesbo nahi hu ye jo kuch bhi karne ka hai na siddharth ke sath kariyo samjhi..

Par ek bada problem ho gaya, ek ladki bhagte huye suman ke pitaji ke paas pahuch gayi aur boli

Ladki-kaka aapni suman balcony ke kud ke us siddharth ke sath bike par bhag gayi hai, wo highway ke paas wale mandir me shadi karne wale hai ye maine use uski dost ko batate suna aur usne laal rang ka top aur blue jeans pehni hai…

Us ladki ki baat sunkar sharir par bijli gire aise suman ke pitaji stabdh khade the aur fir wo apne ek naukar par garje

S. dad- kashya gadi nikal

Wo teen char logo ko sath lekar gadi se suman ko pakadne nikle, ab ye suman ki kharab kismet ki chauk se turn lete huye wo piche se kisi ko dikh gayi aur usne kapdo se use pehchan liya fir bhi pehchan me na aane ke liye unhone helmet pehna hua tha

“malik wo dekho wo bike par hai wo”

Siddharth bhi puri tayari se aaya tha, usne apne ek dost ke paas se sports bike li thi aur black jacket aur helmet pehan ke dono gadi pe nikal gaye, us mandir tak pahuchne me unhe do ghante lagne wale the

Siddharth ne back view mirror me piche aane wali suman ke pitaji ki gadi dekhi aur apne bike ki speed badha di, suman ke pitaji apne driver ko galiya de rahe the

S dad- gadi bhaga bhadkhau pakad unko

Bichara driver full speed me gadi bhaga raha tha fir bhi wo log dikh nahi rahe the aur malik ki galiya sun ke driver bola

Driver-arey malak wo sport bike hai videshi gadi apan kitna bhi speed lele unko nahi pakad sakte

Uski gadi sach me 120 ki speed pe daud rahi thi aur akhir suman ke pitaji bole

S dad- bhagne de bhagne de jayenge kaha, us mandir me to rukenge hi,main bhi dekhta hu ye shadi kaise hoti hai,milne de ek baar dono ko

Idhar siddharth tufan speed me gadi bhaga raha tha aur wo log uska picha kar rahe the

Udhar avinash ne shadi ki sari tayari kar rakhi thi, pandit, haar do witness sab ready tha bas raah thi dulha dulhan ki aur wo bhagwan se hath jod ke prarthna kar raha tha ke sab sahi ho

Do ghante tak ye pakda pakdayi ka karyakram chala, mandir highway se 500 mtr ander tha aur wo rasta thoda kharab tha to siddharth ko gadi sloe karni padi aur yahi car ke driver ko mauka mila aur usne car aage leke gadi ke saamne khadi karke rasta rok diya

Siddharth ko na chahte huye gadi rokni padi aur gadi rukte hi char naukar aur suman ke pita patapat baahar nikle aur siddharth ki or bhage aur suman darr ke siddharth ke piche chipi

Uska khel khatam ho gaya tha, dono bhi darr ke kamp rahe the aur wo log karib aate hi unhone unke pair pakad liye…..

To Be Continued…..

Update 33​

Khel khatam ho gaya tha, dono pakde gaye the aura b dono hi darr se thar thar kamp rahe the aur jaise hi wo log unke karib aaye unhone unke pair pakad liye, suman ke pitaji khawal gaye aur gusse me unhone ek sansanit lath siddharth ko mari, ye siddharth ke liye anapekshit tha aur lath padte hi siddharth jamin par gir gaya aur uska helmet dur ja gira,

Use dekhte hi suman ke pitaji chillaye

S dad- tu kaun hai??

Ghabrate huye wo bola

“main kaun hu ye jab pata hi nahi tha to fir hamara picha kyu kar rahe the?

Ab suman ke pitaji aur jyada gussa ho gaye

S dad-sidhe se batayega ke maru ek aur lath

To wo hath jodte huye bola

“main, aniket, Aniket rane”

Fir suman ke pitaji ne us ladki ka helmet utara aur use dekh kar shock ho gaye aur chillaye

S dad-komal tu?? Arey to fir suman kaha hai

Komal bhi chehre par darr aur confusion ka bhav late huye boli

Komal-mujhe kya pata kaka

S dad-fir kise pata hai

Waise to man hi man dono has rahe the par uper se komal aur aniket aisi acting kar rahe the ki agar koi director dekh leta to abhi dono ko film ke liye sign kar leta, ab suman ke pitaji aur chidhne lage the

S dad-tu kya ye lafange ke sath ghum rahi hai? Tu bhi bhag ke shadi karne wali thi kya?

Komal-nahi kaka aisa nahi hai

S dad-to fir aise bhut ke jaise gadi kyu bhaga rahe the

Komal-kaka ye mera dost hai, isne nayi gadi li hai to mujhe bata raha tha ke ye gadi kitni fast bhag sakti hai bas…

Komal ki baat sun kar suman ke pitaji ne ek sansanit thappad apne driver ko lagaya aur bole

S dad-tu kya ganja pi ke tha kya itni der bhadkhau, tujhe ye bhi nahi samjha ki ye suman nahi hai

Wo driver apna gaal sehlate huye bola

Driver-malak us ladki ne ko kapde bataye the waisa hi dress isme pehna hai aur chehre pe helmet hone ki wajah se chehra nahi dikha

Waise to wo kehna chahta tha ke tum baap hoke apni beti ko nahi pehchan paye aur mujhe bol rahe ho par agar wo aise bolta to ek aur thappad pad sakta tha isiliye usne ye baat man me hi rakhi

S dad-arey aaj kya ladki bhagao din hai kya jise dekho bhag raha hai

Gusse me fir se ek thappar aniket ko laga ke wo apne gaon ke liye nikal gaye, do ghante unhe yaha aane me lage the aur do ghante ab jane me lagne wale the, unke jate hi komal ekdum khush, itna ke khusi me waha kudne lagi aur aniket ko hug kar liya par aniket chillane laga :sigh:

Aniket-ui maa, mar gaya re, budhau ne kya jor se mara hai re, kandha dukh raha hai abhi bhi

To komal use samjhate huye boli

Komal-don’t worry anya meko malum hai tujhe kaunsi dawai suit karegi, firak naat aaj ki tekdi party main sponcer karti hu, ja anya ja jile apni jindagi

Idhar avinash ne sari tayari pehle ki kar rakhi thi, suman ki jagah komal bhagi thi aur jis ladki ne ye sab info suman ke pitaji ko di thi wo bhi inke plan ka hi ek bhag tha, avinash ne suman ki shadi ne pareshanikhade karne wale mukhya logo ko char ghante ke liye badi chalaki se waha se dur kar diya tha, idhar jab ye sab shuru tha tab suman sadhi sadi pehan kar ghunghat lekar catering walo ke beech jake baith gayi, catering ka tempo lekar siddharth baahar khada tha aur mauka dekh kar suman us tempo me ja baithi

Avinash ne sari tarayi arya samaj mandir me kit hi aur arya samaj mandir ke marriage certificate ko aap court me bhi challenge nahi kar sakte ye baat avinash jaanta tha, aur is taraf se bagair kisi takleef ke suman aur siddharth ki shadi ho gayi, mamla garam tha isiliye in dono ko kuch dino ke liye avinash ne apne mama key aha kokan me bhej diya aur mama ko bhi is baat ki khabar kar di gayi thi isiliye mama ne bhi udhar sari fielding laga li thi..

Idhar sara matter sort hote hi aniket ne avinash ko phone lagaya aur avinash ne bhi udhar se sab ache se hone ki jaankari di, fir aniket ne suman ko siddharth ko congratulate liya aur unhone in logo ko thank you kaha aur suman boli

Suman- aniket, papa bahut gusse me honge na?

Aniket-ha matlab koi bhi baap aise me gussa to karega hi par fikar naat thoda time lagega par Buddha pighle ga

Fir phone call khatam hone ke baad komal aniket se boli

Komal-anya main kya soch rahi thi,ab yaha taka a hi gaye hai to chal shadi kar le kya?

Aniket komal ki baat sun kar ekdum serious ho gaya do minute tak use kya bole samajh hi nahi aa raha tha aur uski ye haalat dekh ke komal ki hasi chhut gayi

Komal-anya majak kiya re tune bhi seriously le liya yaar

Aniket-kammo aise majak mat kiya kar heart fail ho jata abhi

Dono fir wapis aane ke liye nikle par komal ki baat aniket ke dimag me ghum rahi thi

Kuch ek hafte baad suman aur siddharth wapis aaye, siddharth ke ghar par to kuch problem nahi tha, unhone shadi ki ek reception patry di aur idhar suman bato bato me siddharth se shart laga baithi, suman ka bolna tha ke aniket avinash aur komal kuch bhi kar sakte hai, ispar siddharth ne shart lagayi key w teeno usse patry leke dikha de, agar wo hara to double patry dega aur agar unlogo ne haar maanli to triple party dega ek extra avinash aniket aur komal ko harane ki khusi me, shuruwat main maskhari me shuru huyi baa tab serious ho gayi thi aura b apni tikdi bhi isme shamil ho gayi thi aur fir in teeno ne usme bhi khas kar avinash ne dimag lagana shuru kiya par kuch nahi ho raha tha, siddharth ko kuch bhi bol do, kitna bhi pareshan karo wo party ke liye tayar hi nahi ho raha tha

Ab aniket pareshan hone laga

Aniket-avi dimag chala lawde, apni ijjat ka sawal hai ab ye

Avinash-abey lekin ye docter kuch bhi karo sunne ko tayar hi nahi hai, kuch na kuch jalim upay karna padega

Reception party chal rahi thi aur komal suman ke sath stage par thi to wo waha se aakar boli

Komal-kya hua kuch sujha kya?

Dono ne na me gardan hila di aur avinash ekdum bola

Avinash-kammo inki suhagraat kabi hai?

Komal-kal

An avinash aur aniket ekdusre ki taraf dekh kar hasne lage

Avinash-ab tera kya hoga re siddharth, ab dekhte hai party kaise nahi dega

(abi shadi ko ek hafta ho gaya aur suhag raat itna rate to iske bare me job hi sawal hai comment me puchne ka agar hai to udhar jawab dega apun )

To waha inki planning chal rahhi thi udhar siddarth bhi kuch kam nahi tha, ek teeno agle din siddharth ke ghar pahuche to siddharth pe pitaji ne inhe ander hi nahi ghusne diya :lol1:

Komal to wapis apne ghar chali gayi aur aniket aur avinash wahi baahar baithe

Aniket-avya, ye docter to apne pe bhari gir gaya yaar

Avinash-hao be isne pehle hi ghar me bol rakha tha apne ko ander na aane de

Aniket-main kya bolta hu, ab agar apan haar maan bhi le to teen party milegi fir haar manne ke kya dikkat hai waise bhi shart aaj raat tak hi thi

Jispar avinash haste huye bola

Avinash-thi nahi hai, jo kuch karne ka hai aaj hi karna hai

Aniket-matlab? Avi tere chehre ki hasi dekh ke lag raha hai tere dimag me kuch to bhayankar hai, plan bata ab jaldi

Avinash-meko ek rassi chahiye anya

Aniket-ab wo kyu?

Avinash-sab batata hu tu gadi nikal pehle, time nahi hai apne paas

Idhar siddharth double khush, ek to tikdi ko hara diya isiliye aur sabse important matlab aaj uske jindagi ki ek anmol ghadi thi, sara room phulo se sajaya gaya tha aur siddharth khushi khushi room me aaya, suman filmo me dikhate hai waise ghunghat leke baithi thi

Siddharth suman ke paas gaya aur usne uska ghunghat uthaya, suman sharmayi (kya laga tha suman nahi hogi waha, abe purana ho gaya wo sab apne paas naya idea hai aage padho :lol1: )

Suman ekdum kamal ki sunder dikh rahi thi itni ke siddharth ne kabhi socha nahi tha, wo suman se kuch bolta itne me..

Dhenchu….dhenchu….dhenchu…..dhenchu…..

Baahar ek gadha chilla raha tha, suman ko hasi aa gayi, do minute shanti me bite aur fir se siddharth kuch bolne ko hua aur

Dhenchu….dhenchu….dhenchu…..dhenchu…..

Aur is baar gadhe ka chillana ruk nahi raha tha aur akhir me pareshan hokar siddharth ne khidki kholi, wo groung floor par rehte the, khidki khuli aur baahar dekha to siddharth me apne sar pe hath de mara, suman bhi khidki me aayi aur baahar ka najara dekh ke hasne lagi aur haste huye boli

Suman-maine kaha tha docter sahab inko mat chedo ye kuch bhi kar sakte the, ab ya to maan lo ki haar gaye ho ya fir is background music ko enjoy karo..

Aur akhir me siddharth me apni haar maan li,

Aniket aur avinash jake ek gadhe ko pakad laye the aur dono use dande se dhakka maar rahe the aur wo chilla raha tha, jaise hi siddharth me haar mano unlogo ne gadhe ko chhod diya…..

To Be Continued…..

Update 34​

Waqt ki sabse achi baat yahi hai ke wo kabhi rukta nahi hai, acha ho ya bura nikal jata hai, beech ke kuch samay me yash ki life me bahut kuch hua tha, uski kahani aniket se alag thi, ek taraf jaha aniket ka breakup hua tha jo ki sahi hua tha aur use ab tak komal ke pyaar ka ehsaas nahi hua tha wahi yash ko break up hone ke baad samajh aaya ki wo apni girlfriend priya se kitna pyaar karta tha aur uski girlfriend ko bhi, to yash k eek din aniket ko kaha tha k eek baar aankhe band kar ke apne pyaar ke bare e soch aur dekh kiska chehra saamne aata hai (wohi ajay devgn ki batai trick) to aniket ne waisa hi kiya aur pehle pehal to usne is baat ko majak me udaya par sach ye tha ke use komal ka chehra dikha tha

Aniket soch raha tha ke use komal kaise dikhi, dimag me kayi khayal eksath ghum rahe the, vicharo ii angina madhimakkhiya use das rahi thi, wo man hi man keh raha tha ke ‘ab ye kya hai naya locha? Itne samay se hum sath hai kabhi mujhe aisa kuch mehsus nahi hua to aaj komal ka chehra kaise dikha, kya main sach me komal se pyaar karne laga hu? Nahi nahi aisa nahi hai wo to bas meri dost hai, waisa kuch hota to main shravni ke piche kyu jata? Fir meri aankho ke saamne shravni ki jagah komal ka chehra kaise aaya, abe yaar ye yas ne bhi naya jhanjhat piche laga diya hai’

Acha bhutkaal me komal ke sath bitaya har pal aniket ki aankho ke saamne aane laga aur usme bhi suman ke shadi ke time komal ka ‘chal shadi kar lete hai’ bolna to uske dimag me ander tak ghusa hua tha

Aajtak aniket ne komal ki taraf bas dost jasise dekha tha, uske liye komal aur avinash me koi fark nahi tha par man me uthti huyi bhavnaye bhi dab nahi rahi thi aur use reh reh kar yaad aa raha tha uska komal ko boli kyui wo line ke is duniya me agar wo aakhri ladki bhi hogi to wo atmahatya kar lega par usse shadi nahi karega, maa bapu bhi bol rahe the to aniket ne unhe bhi samjhaya tha kewo aur komal bas dost hai aur kuch nahi, aur ye sab kuch agar aisa tha to ab ye sab bhavnaye kya hai? Yash ki lovestory dekh ke aniket ko lag raha tha ke uska dimag fir gaya hai, shayad shravni ke baad usne dusri kisi ladki ko dekha nahi tha aur komal hamesha uske sath rehti hai isiliye use komal ka chehra dikha ho, kya kare yahi aniket ke samajh me nahi aa raha tha

Ek pal ko aniket sochta ke sidhe jake komal ko apni bhavnaye bata de par agle hi pal uske dimag me khayal aaya ke ‘komal ne hi to uski aur shravni ki setting lagayi thi agar komal ke man ke mere liye aisi koi feeling na huyi to? Main bola aur usne gusse me dosto tod di to? Avinash kya bolega? Dilfek aashiq ek ladki gayi nahi ke dusri ke piche lag gaya? Hath me katora leke ghumne wala bhikari jo ek dar se prem nahi mila to dusre darwaje par pahuch gaya? Aur is sab me avinash bhi mujhse dur ho gaya to? Nahi !! nahi!! Main ek baar ko pyaar ke bagair reh lunga par dosto ke bagair nahi reh paunga…’

Dil keh raha tha ke bindass jake komal ko apni feelings bata de, naraj huyi to use mana lenge par dimag keh raha tha ke aisa mat kar, teri ek galti aur sabse kimti dosto khatam ho jayegi, ek baar shravni ke samay pea pan ne bewkufi ki hai, is baar ye dono dur ho jayenge, aur in dono ke bagair jine ki kalpana bhi nah ki ja sakti, aur akhir me dimag jita aur dil hara, aniket ne decide kiya ke uske liye pyaar se jyada dosti important hai..

Us din se aniket ka swabhav uske baat chit ka tarika badal gaya, komal aas paas hoti to wo uncomfortable ho jata, komal se baat karte huye soch ke baat karne laga, bolte huye sambhalne laga, ye baat komal ke bhi dhyan me aa gayi aur usne is bare me pucha bhi par aniket ne kuch nahi bol ke is baat ko hasi me taal diya tab komal ne jab aniket nahi tha tab avinash ko pucha

Komal-avi ye anya ko kya hua hai?

Avinash-arey wo uske bhai yash ke love story me loche chal rahe hai, vaat lagi huyi hai isiliye iska mood thoda aisa hai

Uske baad avinash ne komal ko yash ka pura kissa bataya (apun wo batake agli story ka spoiler nahi dega :D ) aur wo sunke komal boli

Komal-acha aisa hai kya, fir theek hai.. mujhe laga ki…..

Avinash-kya?

Komal-kuch nahi

Avinash-bol na kya laga?

Komal-mujhe laga ki tune mere bare me use kuch bataya hoga

Avinash-batana chahiye tha kya?

Komal-nahi

Avinash-par kyu? Pichli baar wo gobar thi main samajh sakta hu par ab kya dikkat hai

Komal-use khud ye baat samajhni chahiye

Avinash-ye teri jidd hai

Komal-jidd nahi hai vishwas hai apne pyaar pe

Avinash-tu faltu me samay barbad kar rahi hai isse acha main bata deta hu usko

Komal-tu kuch nahi batayega

Avinash-tu adiyal aur wo murkh, waah rab ne bana di Jodi, par meko faltu kasam me bandh ke rakha hai, meri haalat pitamah bhishm ke jaisi ho gayi hai, galat tarike se raajpat hote dekha nahi jata aur kudh raja ban nahi sakta

Komal-mat soch itna time sab theek kar deta hai, itna load nahi lene ka avi

Dono canteen se baahar nikle avinash komal ki di huyi kasam ke bare me soch raha tha, komal agar ek baar use khud ki kasam deti to wo khushi khushi haste huye wo kasam tod deta par aniket ki kasam wo nahi tod sakta tha, kaise bhi karke ko aniket ko khud kuch nahi bata sakta tha aura b uska kurapati dimag kaam pe laga..

Avinash ghar par bhi isi bare me soch raha tha par use idea kuch mil nahi raha tha akhir me usne pareshan hokar TV shuru kiya aur mahabharat dekhte baitha… mahabharat me is waqt ladayi ka scene shuru tha, bhagwan Krishna bheem ko ashwathama naam ke hathi ko maarne ko bol rahe the aur bheem ne apni gada ke prahar se us hathi ko maar diya aur chillane laga, ashwathama mara gaya maine ashwathama ko maar diya maine ashwathama ho maar diya, ashwathama guru dron ke bete ka naam tha aur jab unhone bheem ki baat suni to unhe kisi par yakin nahi hua aur wo is baat ki satyata janne ke liye yudhisthir ke paas aaye, kyuki yudhisthir kabhi jhuth nahi bolte the, bhagwan Krishna ne yudhisthir ko pehle hi bata diya tha ye baat aur jab dronacharya waha aaye aur yudhisthir se pucha ke kya ye sach hai? To yudhisthir bole ki ye sach hai ashwathama mara gaya aur fir dhire se kisi ko sunai na de aise bole nar ya pashu pata nahi,

Waise dekha jaye to na to wo sach bole na hji jhuth, yudhisthir ko bura lag raha tha ke unhone apne guru se jhuth kaha tha aur ye unke jindagi ka pehla jhuth tha par fir Krishna ne unhe samjhaya ke, yudhisthir manya hai ki aap sach nahi bole par aapne jhuth bhi nahi bola hai, saamne wale ne aapki puri baat nahi suni ye uska dosh hai aapka nahi aur kisi ke bhalayi ke liye bola gaya jhuth bhi satya ki taraf pavitra hota hai’

Avinash se scene dekh kar apni jagah se uth khada hua aur TV ko pranam karne laga aur fir khud se bola

Avinash-main bhi ek number ka bewkuf hu, itni sidhi baat mere dhyan me kaise nahi aayi

Avinash ke dimag meek nayi kurafati idea janm le chuki thi aur usne man hi man khush hokar apni pith thapthapayi aur gabbar singh wale style me bola

Avinash-ab tera kya hoga re anya!..

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Akkha din aniket aur avinash ki mulakat nahi huyi, dekha jaye to avinash hi usse milne nahi gaya tha wo ek dusre kaam me busy tha aur kuch kaam se wo dusre gaon gaya hua tha par sham ko lauta to sidha aniket ke ghar par pahucha, aniket is waqt ghar me apne bapu narayanrao ke sath baitha hua tha, avinash jate hi bola

Avinash-anya mere sath chal jara kaam hai

Aniket-kya kaam hai? Aur din bhar kaha gayab tha be?

Avinash-arey nawab sahab apne sinhasan se utro aur chalo important kaam hai raste me batata hu

Aisa bolke avinash ne aniket ko aankh maar ke ishara kiya itne me narayanrao bole

Narayanrao-ja baba ja, aankh maar ke bula raha hai matlab jaruri kaam hoga

Narayanrao ki baat sunkar avi sambhalte huye bola

Avinash-nahi nahi kaka aisa bhi koi khas kaam nahi hai aura ankh kaha mari to to macchar aa gaya tha aankho ke saamne

Narayanrao-avi tera baap aur main bachpan ke gotiya khelte the sath me to meko mat sikha ye sab, mujhe ache se pata hai tumhare macchar, makode sab, aur tekdi se aate huye aaram se dekh ke aana

Avinash-arey kaha kya aap bhi

Narayanrao-avi ! bête is waqt teri gadi pe thaili tangi hai, hamesha tu chappal pehan ke aata hai aaj jute pehne hai, itni thandi bhi nahi hai fir bhi tune jacket pehna hai, iska kya matlab hai

Ye sab to aniket ne bhi notice nahi kiya tha, dono ekdusre ki taraf ashcharya se dekhne lage

Avinash-ye to aajkal ka fashion hai kaha

Narayanrao-ab jata hai ke nikalu tera fashion

Avinash-nahi nahi main chala..

Itna bolke avinash aur aniket dono baahar aaye aur narayanrao apne purine din yaad karke hasne lage

Avinash-anyakya danger baap hai be tera, kaka kya detective the kya?

Aniket-arey bapu don hai apna, sadha mat samajhna unko,apne sare ranga rang karyakram pata hai unhe, wo chhod aaj teki party ka plan kaise achanak?

Avinash-aisehi

Fir dono daru lene dukan pe pahuche aur avinash bola

Avinash- anya aaj apna full mood hai do nahi teen teen beer liyo

Aniket-teen teen, kya hua avya? Kya kaaran kya hai? Kya koi mil gayi kya teko bhi?

Avinash-abe jitna bola utna kar, halgi bajane bola hai wo baja karyakram mundane ka hai ke shadi ka tere ko kya itni panchat hai bhai

Aniket-aaj to full mood me dikh raha bhai, chal tub hi kya yaad karega hone de kharcha..

Sara maretial leke dono tekdi par pahuche par aaj waha ek kamal ki baat huyi thi

Aniket-aaila avya yaha bhi gardi chalu ho gayi be, apne se pehle ek banda aake baitha hai yaha

Avinash-apne ko kya karne ka hai? Wo uska kaam karega apan apna

Dono ek side jakar baithe aur aniket ne pehli beer kholi itne me ek awaj aaya

“kya bhai meko chhod ke akele akele party”

Thoda andhera tha, chehra saaf nahi dikh raha tha par aniket us awaj ko pehchanta tha

Aniket- aaila yash tu aur yaha

Aniket gale mil ke yash se mila aur fir avi ko tapli maarte huye bola

Aniket-halkat aadmi ye tera hi plan hoga, dikhta garib hai tu par hai dus dimag ka raavan

Fir yash avi ki side lete huye bola

Yash-uska kuch nahi hai re isme , mera hi mood thoda kharab thato socha ke mood thik karne ke liye tere se badhiya aadmi kaun hoga isiliye milne aa gaya to avi mila fir maine hi teko surprise dene ke liye ye plan banaya

Yash ko dekh ke aniket ekdum khush tha, fir priya ke bare me baat chit huyi aur fir beer ka eke k round, fir yash ne baat chedi

Yash-aur bata kya bolti teri komal

Jiskar aniket chauk ke yash ki taraf dekhne aga

Yash-matlab teri dost komal aisa bolna tha meko

Fir aniket sambhalte huye bola

Aniket-sahi hai, badhiya hai wo

Aniket komal ke bare me jyada baat nahi kar raha tha par yash bhi to tha uska hi bhai, wo bhi kured kured ke puche ja raha tha aur usme avinash to tha hi ha me ha milane ke liye

Avinash-anya isko ko suman ka kissa bata be, yash ye sun

Fir aniket ke suman ka kissa sunana shuru kiya aur ek ke baad ek kisse sunate gaya, aur idhar avinash uska glass bhare hi ja raha tha, aur kisse sun kar yash dil khol kar has raha tha aur aniket use hasa raha tha aur haste haste yash bola

Yash-tum dono ek se badhkar ek ho

Aniket-hao fir wo to hai hi

Yash-namune ho ek number ke

Aniket-hao hai hi

Yash-jabardast understandiong hai tum dono me

Aniket-hao bilkul hai

Yash-dono ke gun bhi ek jaise hai

Aniket-hao bilkul hai

Yash-tu usse pyaar karta hai

Aniket-hao bilkul karta hu

Apan kya bol gaye hai ye dhyan me aate hi aniket ekdum chup ho gaya aur yash haste huye uski taraf dekh raha tha

Yash-pyaar karta hai na usse

Par aniket kuch nahi bola

Yash-dekh tu bhale hi kuch na bole par tera chehra bata raha hai ke tu komal ko kitna chahta hai, bas ya to tu ye baat batana nahi chahta ya fir tere bhi dhyan me nahi aaya hai ki tu usse pyaar karta hai

Aniket ki aankhe bhar aayi thi aur muh se shabd nahi nikal rahe the yash uske kandhe par hath rakhte huye bola

Yash-anya main ekdum dil se keh raha hu, tu sirf mera bhai nahi balki mera dost bhi hai, bachpan se jaanta hu tujhe, tu pyaar karne laga hai komal se aur meri maan komal hi tere liye sahi ladki hai, maan le ki pyaar karta hai tu usse, teri aankho me ye saaf dikhta hai re aur ek aashq hi dusre aashiq ko pehchan sakta hai…

Aniket ne fir ek najar avinash ko dekha aur usne bhi ha me gardan hila di aur jaise hi avinash ne ha kaha aniket ka sabra chhut gaya aur yash ke gale lag gaya aur uski aankho se aansu behne lage

Kaisa hota hai na hum ek shabd bhi nahi bolte par jo hamse vicharo se bhavnao se juda hota hai use barabar samajh aata hai ke hum kya kehna chah rahe hai, yash sab samajh raha tha,wo gana hai na dil ka haal sune dil wala, aniket s waqt kya feel kar raha tha ye shabdo me batane ki jarurat nahi hai, uske aansu bata rahethe kea b sab saaf hai

Kuch der tak koi kuchy nahi bola aur akhir me shanti bhang ki aniket ne

Aniket-hao!! Main pyaar karta hu komal se, ekdum tahe dil se chahta hu use

Aur idhar avinash hawa me hath uthate huye bola mano usne jund jeet li ho

Avinash-yeesssssssss!! :yes2:

Aur agle hi pal uth ke waha bagair music ke nachne laga, yash aur aniket uska dhingana dekh ke has rahe the aur nache nache avinash ne aniket ko gale laga liya

Avinash-gazab launde, dil khush kar diya tune

Aur fir yash se gale mil ke avinash ne use thankyou bola

Avinash-arey abhi to party shuru huyi hai

Aur fir unka beer ka program wapis shuru ho gaya aur yash bola

Yash-anya gadhe tu hamesha komal ke sath raha fir tere dhyan me kaise nahi aaya ke jo mujhe yaha aana pada teko samjhane ke liye

Aniket-wo lambi khani hai be abhi sunane lagunga to 34 update lagenge par yaha aana pada matlab? Tu isi liye yaha aaya tha kya?

Avinash aur yas has rahe the aur ab ye sara mamla aniket ke dhyan me aa gaya aur wo baithe jagah par avi ko lath maarte huye bola

Aniket-sale halkat aadmi? Mereko shak hua tha ye teri ki karamat hogi

Avinash-kyu ye sab nahi karna chahiye tha kya

Aniket-sala dus dimag ka ravan

Avinash ka plan success ho gaya tha, komal ne use kasam di thi ke wo aniket ko kuch nahi batayega aur isme se avinash ne rasta nikala tha, aniket ko wo bata nahi sakta tha par yash ko batane kisne mana kiya tha :lol1:

Fir yash ne pucha

Yash-to bandhuraj ab komal ko I LOVE YOU kab bolega?

Tab aniket bola

Aniket-already abhut late ho gaya hai ab aur der nahi karunga

Yash-matlab?

Aniket-bhale duniya ko aag lag jaye par tumhara bhai komal ko aaj hi propose karega :cool:

Yash aniket ko samjha raha tha par ab aniket bhai sunne ko tayar hi nahi theaur fir yash avinash se bola

Yash- avi tu hi bol isko kuch

Aur avinash bas itna bola

Avinash-jaag utha shaitaann….!!

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Avinash bas itna bola

Avinash-jaag utha shaitaann….

!!

Aur aniket bola

Aniket-der se jaga hai par ab dekho mera kamal

Yash-kya karne wala hai bhai tu?

Aniket-main komal ko propose karunga

Aniket ki baat sunkar dono yash aur avinash ekdum khuch ho gaye

Avinash-arey waah, jabardast ek number bhai, to kab karega ye nek kaam

Aniket-kab matlab, abbey abhi isi waqt

Ab dono hasne lage aur yash aniket ko samjhate huye bola

Yash-anya dekh mana ke der ho gayi hai par bsdk itni bhi der nahi huyi hai ke tu subah tak na ruk sake

Aniket-wo meko kuch nahi malum chahe kuch bhi ho jaye main komal ko aaj hi propose karunga bas baat khatam

Yash wapis samjhate huye bola

Yash-arey bhai apan piyele hai re aur ab raat bhi ho gayi hai kal mast plan karte hai fir bindass propose kar diyo

Aniket-nahi nahi nahi nahi! Wo kuch nahi propose to aaj hi hoyega

Ab avinash use samjhate huye bola

Avinash-anya bsdk pagal ho gaya kya, baat maan lawde aisi jidd mat kar yash ki baat sahi hai wo barabar bol raha hai apan plan karke karenge sab

Par aniket kisi ki baat sunne ko tayar hi nahi tha, yash aur avinash use samjha ke thak gaye the aur avinash ne aakhri koshish ki

Avinash-anya raat ho gayi hai be abhi aise time komal ke ghar pike ghusega to uska pailwaan baap hath pair tod dega tere

Par aniket manne ko tayar hi nahi tha aur avinash aur yash ko bhi ye baat pata thi ye ye jaga hua shaitan ab kisi ki nahi sunega isiliye avinash bola

Avinash- aniket maharaj krioaya wapis apni jagah par virajiye air hame kuch sochne dijiye, bsdk ne sari daru utar di

Kismat achi thi ke aniket ne ye baat maan li aur yash aur avinash planning karne lage aur yash bola

Yash-sabse pehle sabse bada problem dur karna padega aur wo problem yani komal ke pitaji

Avinash hasa aur bola

Avinash-tu bhi ani ka hi bhai haiabe pehle chhote chhote problem solve kar bado ke bare me baadme sochenge

Yash ko bhi uski baat sahi lagi

Yash-to tu hi bata kya kare? Kaha se shuruwat kare?

Avinash-apan komal ko baahar bulate hai matlab kahi milte hai aur fir ani ko bolne denge

Par ab ye baat itni asani so ho jaye to wo aniket kaisa, aniket bolne laga

Aniket-aye avi, yash apne ko pyaar me thrill bhi mangta hai

Uski baat sun ke avinash ne sar pit liya

Avinash-ye apne ko maar khilayega, o bhai o ye thrill kam hai kya ki is time tu daru pi ke komal ko propose karne wala hai?

Ab aniket avinash ko samjhate huye bola

Aniket-dekh avya, ye yash ko dekh iski lovestory me kitna thrill hai kitni excitement hai, aur ye to meri jindagi ka aakhri propose hai be, isiliye ye propose aisa hona chahiye ke jindagi bhar yaad rahe, komal ko surprise dene ka hai bhidu

Avinash ko bhi aniket ki baat sahi lagi, komal ne jis chiz ki itne din raah dekhi wo pal to yaadgar hona chahiye tha na, ab kuch dhamake dar karna chahiye, aba vi bhai bhi aniket ke support me aa gaye

Avinash-ab to lawda duniya idhar ki udhar ho jaye anya tu komal ke ghar me ghus ke propose karega main hu fikar not, jo hoga tera bhai dekh lega par aaj tera propose dhamakedar hona chahiye

Par sar pitne ki bari yash kit hi

Yash-avi pagal ho gaya kya bsdk ek to pehle hi yeda hai usme ab pike aur bhi jyada yeda hai aur tu iske hath me jalti mashal dene ki baat kar raha, iska kya parinam hoha iske bare me to socho be :redface:

Ispar aniket ke kuch bolne se pehle hi avinash bola

Avinash-parinam waggaire gaya gadhe ki gand me jo hoga dekha jayega, anya sun komal pehle male pe rehti hai aur uske room ko balcony bhi hai tu sidha pipe se chadh ke uper jaiyo aur propose kariyo aur agar uske pitaji aa jaye to bindass niche kud jane ka, jyada se jyada pair tutega bas w apne docter suman aur siddharth kab kaam me aayenge

Idhar yash ki pareshani badh rahi thi

Yash- avi tu usko idea de raha hai ke uski supari de raha hai be? Ye aise kudna vudna mat be usse acha komal ke pitaji na rahte huye khel kiya to?

Avinash ghadi me time dekhte huye bola

Avinash-us hisab se apne paas bas 30 minute hai

Yash-matlab?

Avinash-matlab komal ke pitaji raa ko 10 baje kaam par se aate hai aur apna bhai kal dophar ko wo kaam pe jaye tak rukne ko tayar nahi hai

Yash sar khujate huye bola

Yash-ye anya bhi na dimag ki vaat laga deta hai, pehle isko pyaar samjhane ke liye dimag khapaya ab propose me dimag badhir karke rakh diya hai, avi tu hi kuch soch bhai mera to dimag hi nahi chal raha

Ab avinash apne kurafati dimag se sochne laga

Avinahs-idea!! Anya ka propose hone tak agar apan komal ke pitaji ko baahar hi kahi rok ke rakhe to? Anya ka propose karke ho jaye fir ye call karke batayega aur unhe chhod denge

Avinash ki baat sunkar aniket ekdum khush

Aniket-par tum log unko rokoge kaise

Avinash-wo humlog dekh lenge tu bas mohim fatte kar aur call karke bata

Aur fir us tekdi se teen sainiko ki fauj nikli ‘mission komal propose’ pura karne ke liye

Avinash ne apni gadi wahi sahi jagah dekh ke lock ki aur teeno yash ki car se nikle aur komal ke ghar pahuche, komal ke room ki light shuru thi, building ke saamne ke gate par watchman hone ki wajah se teeno building ke piche ki taraf gaye aur yash ke car pe chadh kar diwar kud kar ander ghuse, yash aur avinash ne aniket ko pipe pe chadhne me madad ki aur aniket pat se uper chadha aur balcony me kuda, usne pahuchne ka ishara karte hi yash aur avinash nikal gay eagle mission par

‘mission ani ke sasur ko mamu banao’

Gadi me baithte hi yash bola

Yash-aage ka kya plan hai

Avinash-aage ke chauk par kuch na kuch kaaran se komal ke pitaji ko rokne ka aur aniket ka phone aane tak rok ke rakhne ka

Yash-wo to pata hai par unko rokenge kaise? Aur atka bhi le par uljha ke kaise rakhenge?

Avinash-wo hi to samajh nahi aa raha hai yas, aur apne paas ab samay bhi kam hai wo aane hi wale honge jaldi side side me laga dekhte hai kya hota hai

Yash ne gadi side me lagayi aur dono baahr aakar sochne lage, avinash puri koshish kar raha tha par dimag me koi idea hi nahi aa raha tha itne me unhe komal ke pitaji ki gadi

aati huyi dikhi aur avinash bola

Avinash-ho gaya kand, komal ke pitaji aa gaye ab aur koi rasta nai hai,

Yash kuch bolta isse pehle hi avinash bhag ke road cross kar raha tha aur

Dhadaammmm!!

Avinash komal ke pitaji ke gadi ke aada aa gaya, uske achanak saamne aane se komal ke pitaji darr gaye aur gadi ko break lagan eke pehle hi avi ko unhone gadi se thok diya aura b avinash apna pair pakad ke chilla raha tha

Avinash-aahhhh maa mar gaya re pair gaya mera!!

Uski nautanki dekh ke yash bhi ghabra gaya par avinash ne use halke se aankh maar di, avinash ne apna kaam kar diya tha aur ab yash ki bari thi, aaju baju log jama hone lage the

Komal ke piaji tension me aa gaye aur apni baat bolne lage

Sayajirao(komal ke pitaji)- meri..meri koi galti nahi hai ye hi achanak saamne aa gaya

Yash-maaf karo kaka galti kiski thi wo apan baad me dekhenge pehle isko dawakhane me leke chalo

Komal ke pitaji ko bhi ye baat jam gayi wo bole

Sayajirao-ha ha koi dikkat nahi yahi paas me ek hospital hai waha chhodta hu tum logo ko

Jispar avinash karahte huye bola

Avinash-nahi us hospital me nahi, ,eri behan docter hai uske hospital me le chalo

Avinash ne suman ke hospital ka pata diya to ispar sayajirao bole

Sayajirao-arey ye to bahut dur hai usse acha paas ke hospital me chalo

Par yash baat sambhalte huye bola

Yash-accident ki case hai kaka, kyu police ka lafda piche lagana chahte ho usse acha iske behan ke hospital me chalo wo sab sambhal legi

Yash ki baat komal ke pitaji ko jam gayi

Sayajirao-theek hai main riksha bulata hu

Sayajirao ka in logo ko riksha me katane ka plan tha ye yash ke dhyan me aa gaya to yash bola

Yash-rikshaw ki raah dekhne se acha apan tumhari gadi pe chalte hai main isko pakad ke baithta hu piche

Police case sunne ke bada sayaji rao bhi ghabra gaye the unhone ye baat maan li, yash avinash ko sahara dete huye gadi pe bithaya aur wo piche baitha, teeno hospital ke liye nikle, dono ekdum khush the ki inko dawakhane ke chhod kar wapis aane me sayajirao ko kam se kame k ghanta lagega tab tak aniket ka kaam ho jayega…

To Be Continued……

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Komal ke pitaji yash aur avinash hospital pahuche, sayajirao ko aur thodi der rokne ke liye aur aniket ko thoda aur samay dilane ke liye avinash jaanjujh ke sayajirao ka hath pakad ke chal raha tha aur dusre hath se yash ko pakad ke wo dheere dheere ander gaye

Idhar aniket balcony me aaya aur waha ki khidki se usnje jhuk ke ander dekha to komal koi kitab padhte padhte so gayi thi, aniket se use dheme awaj me awaz lagayi

Aniket-kammo…ka..kammo…

Komal shayad abhi abhi soyi thi aur shayad sapne me bhi aniket ko dekh rahi thi wo neend me hi boli

Komal-anya chup na kyu sata raha hai..

Idhar aniket khud se bola

Aniket-l kar lo baat abi kaise uthau isko, kame..kammo..

Komal ne adhi aankhen kholi aur aniket ko dekh ke pyaar se muskurayi aur neend me boli

Komal-hi anya :love:

Use laga ki wo sapne me aniket ko dekh rahi ha, idhar aniket pareshan, usne idhar udhar dekha, balcony me ek lakdi padi thi usne wo lakdi di aur khidki se wo lakdi ander daal ke komal ko hilane laga, komal ne neend me jor se hath mara to wo lakdi aniket ke hath se gir gayi, an koi aur rasta na dekh kar aniket thoda jor se bola

Aniket-kaaammooo…

Komal pat se uth gayi par wo uth ke baiothi to uski pith aniket ki taraf thi aur wo jor se boli

Komal-anyaaa..

Komal itnhe jor se boli thi ke uski maa jo unke room me leti huyi thi wo bhag ke komal ke room me aayi aur komal ki maa ko waha dekh ke aniket khidki ke niche chip ke baith gaya aur man me bola

Aniket-aaila ek to iska baa pane wala hoga aur ye kumbhkarn jaisi soyi hai, badi mushkil se uthaya to chillate huye uthi, ab iski maa ke jane tak chip ke baithna padega

Komal ki maa room ke aake uske sar par hath firate huye boli

Sangeeta-kya hua komal, bura sapna dekha kya koi? Kitne jorse chikhi..

Komal baat sambhalte huye boli

Komal-ha, bura sapna hi dekha tha

Tab uski maa use samjhate huye boli

Sangeeta-darr lag raha hai kya? Main ruku tumhare paas?

Idhar aniket ne sar pe hath maa liya aur man me bola

Aniket-arey mother india, jao yaar apni beti ko apne damad ke darshan hone do be, tumko to damad ko dekhne me samay hai abhi aur choti bacchi hai kya wo jao na mataji…

Komal puri tarah se jag gayi thi wo boli

Komal-nahi maa jao aap main so jaungi koi baat nahi hai

Aniket khidki se chip kar sab dekh raha tha, komal ki maa ne komal ko sulaya aur uske bagal me uskesar par hath ferte huye khud bhi wahi baith gayi aur aniket wapis man me bola

Aniket- ab kya ye mother india lori sunayegi kya usko? Arey jao bhai mataji lori sunne ki umra nahi hai uski I love you sunne ki umra hai, jao yaar, agar tumhare sajan aa gaye to tumhare beti ke sajan ki vaat lag jayegi

Aur shayad aniket ki baat komal ke maa tak pahuch gayi aur wo waha se chali gayi, aur unke waha se jane ke baad aniket wapis khidki me aaya aur awaj lagayi

Aniket-aye kammo…

Ab komal jag hi rahi thi wo uth baithi aur usne aniket ko dekha, aniket ko waha dekh ke use yakin hi nahi ho raha tha aur wo aankh badi kiya aniket ko dekhe ja rahi thi jispar aniket hasa aur dheere se bola

Aniket-kya kammo aise kya dekh rah hai? Kabhi handsome ladka nahi dekha kya? :hinthint:

Komal pat se uthi aur pehle apne room ka darwaja band kiya aur ander aake balcony ka darwaja khola aur boli

Komal-anya tu yaha kya kar raha hai? Arey baba ne dekh liya to problem ho jayega ye kya chal raha hai….

Komal bol rahi thi ke aniket ne aage aakar apna hath uske muh pe rakh ke uska muh band kiya aur bola

Aniket-tu teri sawalo ki toop baad me chalana abhi main jo bol raha hu sun

Komal ne ha me gardan hilayi aur aniket uske dono hath hath me lete huye bola

Aniket-sabse pehle to main ekdum shudh murkh aadmi hu, mian jise dhundh raha thaw o pehle se hi mere sath tha par mujhe kabhi dikha hi nahi, tu meri har bhavna ko samajhti hai, mujhe puri tarah se jaanti hai, tumhare sath bitaya har har mere liye anmol hai, tumne mujhe kabhi bandhne ki koshish bhi nahi ki, maa bapu aur avi ke baad tum hi ho jisme mujhe puri tarah se samjha hai mujhar vishwas rakha hai, meri har masti me, har ache bure kaam me mera sath diya hai aura b ye sath mujhe na sirf in janm ke liye balki saat janmo ke liye chahiye, dogi mera sath? Main aaj puri tarah tumhara ho gaya hu banogi meri? Apne pyaar se meri jindagi sawarogi, main tumse pyaar karta hu ye main aaj manya karta hu yachak jaise bhksha ka katora leke tumhare saamne khada hu, apne pyaar se mujhe mamamal karogi?, I love you Komal, do you love me?

Komal ne aniket ki puri baat suni aur fir aniket ka hath chhoda aur uske baad jo hua wo kisi ne nahi socha tha

Fataakkk!!

Komal ne sansanit thappar aniket ke jada tha

Komal-tu daru pike aaya hai, hosh me bhi hai tu kit u kya bol raha hai, nashe me hai tu

Aniket-nashe me nahi hu komal, ab jake kahi main hosh me aaya hu aur aaj jake dhyan me aaya hai ke tum bhi mujhse utha hi pyaar karti jo, I love you..

Firse Fataakkk!!

Komal-tum ye sab nashe me keh rahe ho subah sab bhul jaoge

Aniket-agar aisa hai to main hamesha nashe main rehne ko tayar hu

Firse Fataakkk!!

Aniket-I love you

Fataakkk!!

Aniket-I love you

Komal ki aankho se aansu beh rahe the wo aniket ke gale laggayi aur boli

Komal- I love you, I love you, I love you

Dono kitni der ek dusre se chipke rahe pata nahi, aniket maja lete huye bola

Aniket-sala ye ajab style hai be, pehle gaal sujane ka fir I love you bolne ka

Komal kuch hug todne ko tayar nahi thi wo waise hi boli

Komal-pehla thappad tum shgarab piker aaye isliye, dusra tum sach me hosh me ho ya majak kar rahe ho ye dekhne ke liye

Aniket-aur teesra

Komal-itne din jo mujhe sataya, rulaya hai na uske liye

Aniket-theek hai kau main vachan deta hu ki ab tumhari aankho se ek aasu nahi niklega

Komal-rulake to dekho fir main hu aur tum ho aur ye kau kya hai ab

Aniket-let me explain, kammo mane dost, gusse me kamu aur pyaar se kau.. samjhi :D

Komal-acha ji..

Aniket-hao 😌, acha kau ab chhod yaar meko

Komal-nahi, main nahi chhodungi, tu kahu bhag gaya to..

Aniket-nahi wo kya hai na agar mere sasurji aa gaye na to wo hum dono ko nahi chhodenge isiliye bola

Fir na chahte huye komal ne aniket ko chhoda, aniket fir se balcony ki taraf jane laga aur piche palat kar komal ka chehra apne dono hatho me lekar aniket ne uske mathe par apne hoth tika diye, komal ne apni aankhe band ki thi aur fir wo apni aankhe khol kar boli

Komal-aniket rane nishana chuk gaye yaha

Aur usne aniket ka chehra apne hath pe pakda aur apne hoth aniket ke hotho se tika diye, dono beudh hokar ekdusre ko kiss kar rahe the, kuch samay baad alag hokar komal boli

Komal-beer bahut kadwi hoti hai kya?

Aniket-pata nai? mujhe to meethi lagi aaj

Komal-acha ab jao tum papa aane wale honge

Aniket balcony me wapis aaya aur bola

Aniket-kau wo chautha thappad kis liye tha?

Komal muskurayi aur boli

Komal-propose karne aaye aur ek chocolate bhi nahi laye isiliye

Jispar aniket ne haste huye kaha

Aniket-bas itni si baat, arey ek kya tumhare liye apan pura dukan kharid lega aur chocolate ki jarurat ki kya hai ab mu to meetha kiya na

Komal-mister wo maine kiya

Aniket-to usme kya hai ab main kar deta hu

Komal-abhi nahi tu jao ab papa aane wale honge ye kiss udhar raha..

Aniket pipe pakad ke niche aaya aur jate jate komal ko flying kiss diya, komal to satve asman par thi abhi, usne khud ko chikoti kari ye dekhne ke liye ki kahi ye sapna to nahi

Udhar docter suman ne avinash ka pair dekhte hi use x-ray room me bheja, itne me aniket ka phone aaya ki mission accomplished, yash ki to khushi ka thikana nahi tha par komal ke pitaji waha hone ki wajah se wo kuch kar nahi raha tha, unka kaam ho gaya tha to yash bola

Yash-kaka thank you ise yaha tak lane ke liye aap ja sakte hai main dekh lunga yaha

Komal ke pitaji bhi bach gaya sochte huye waha se nikal gaye aur yash unko baahar tak chhod aaya, itne samay me avinash x-ray kara ke baahar aaya, yash ko dekh ek suman aur avinash dono uski taraf asa se dekh rahe the pehle to yash sada sa mu bana ke khada raha aur fir achanak

Dhatad tatad…!! Dhatad tatad…!! Dhatad tatad…!!

Yash wahi nachne laga aur use dekh ke avinas bhi kahapiche rfehta wo bhi ek pair pe nachne laga

Dhatad tatad…!!

Dhatad tatad…!! Dhatad tatad…!!

Dhatad tatad…!!

Suman bhi unke sath mil gayi, docter room me sirf dhingana shuru tha itne me siddharth ander aaya aur naraj hote huye bola

Siddharth-tum logo ko akal hai ya nahi, ye hospital hai tumhare college ka canteen nahi hai jo naach rahe ho.. suman inka theek hai tumhe samajh chahiye na, bacche nahi ho ab, kya hua kya hai?

Suman gardan jhuka kar khadi thi aur waise hi boli

Suman-aniket ne komal ko propose kar diya hai..

Siddharth-to usme naachne jaisa kya hua, ab bilkul awaj nahi aana chahiye

Teeno neha me gardan hilayi aur siddharth waha se nikal gaya, suman se yash aur avinash ko shant rehne ko kaha itne me siddharth wapis aaya aur usne darwaja band kiya aur…

Dhipadi dhipang dhichipadi dhipang

Idibadi dhichipadi dhipang…..

Siddharth bhi unke sath nachne laga……

Update 38​

Avinash ki x-ray report aa gayi thi aur unka pair fracture ho gaya tha, komal ke yaha se nikalte hi aniket sidha hospital pahucha, avinash bed pe soya hua tha aur aniket ko dekhte hi fir se ek baar celebration shuru ho gaya, yash ne aniket ko gale laga ke congrats kiya aur fir avinash bhi uth ke usse gale mila par ye ab ye dhingana dekh ke suman khawal gayi

Suman-arey tum logo to thodi bhi akal hai kya? Ya sab akal bajar me bech aaye ho?

Tab aniket bola

Aniket-kya hua dispencery itna bhadak kyu rahi ho

Par suman ne uski taraf dhyan nahi diya aur avinash par gussa hone lagi

Suman-avi dimag hai tere me? Pair tut gaya hai aur tu yaha nach raha hai?

Aniket ke sun ke shock ho gaya

Aniket-kya? Pair tut gaya? Kaise?

Jispar avinash haste huye bola

Avinash-tere sasur ne gadi chadha di mere pe

Aniket ko kuch samajh nahi aaya, use laga ki ye log natak kar rahe hai par sach me avinash ka pair fracture hua tha, aniket ki aankho me pani aa gaya, gala bhar aaya tha usne avinash ka hath apne hath me liya, man me aneko bhavnaye umad aayi thi par samajh nahi aa raha tha ke unhe bayan kaise kare, aniket ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ke is harkat ke liye avinash ko gali de ya thank you bol ke aabhar vyakt kare, yash ne waha huyi sari ghatna batayi, aniket ne avinash ka hath nahi chhoda tha aur ek aasu uski aankho se nikal kar avinash ke hath pe pada aur avinash bola

Avinash-paagal hai kya anya abbey pair tuta hai mera mara nahi hu main

Aniket ne use ek chapat lagayi aur avinash haste huye bola

Avinash-abey band kar yaar teri nautanki

Jispar aniket thoda gussa hote huye bola

Aniket-kya jarurat thi be iski?

Avinash-nahi to kya karte tu ghode se niche utarne ko tayar hi nahi tha, aaj hi propose karna tha tujhe, aur jyada load mat le re dosti ke liye to jaan hajir hai ye BC pair kya chiz hai, don’t worry teri shadi ke liye aur ek pair aur do hath hai apne paas tudwane ke liye

Avinash ki baat sun kar aniket muskuraya

Aniket-sudherega nahi na tu

Jispar avinash haste huye bola

Avinash- jani agar hum sudhar gaye to duniya khatam ho jayegi re..

Itne me komal ka phone aa gaya, aniket se use sara kissa bataya to usne avinash ko phone dene kaha par avinash ne ishare se mana kar diya aur aniket ne bhi wo so ggaya hai aisa bol ke phone rakh diya.. yash bhi ghar wale chinta kar rahe honge keh ke nikal gaya aur suman ne kaha ki wo hai waha raat me chinta karne ki jarurat nahi hai aur subah discharge mil jayega par aniket avinash ke paas se hila tak nahiaur dono baate karte baite matlab avinash leta tha aur aniket baitha tha

Aniket- avi beta abhi to bach gaya tu par kal subah kammo vaat lagayegi teri tab kya karega

Avinash-abey kuch nahi bolegi wo

Aniket-lagi bet, agar hara to tekdi party dega

Avinash- cal done lagi bet

Itna bol ke avinash hasa aur uske is tarah se hasne ka matlab aniket ko barabar malum tha

Aniket-sala halkat aadmi taang tuti padi hai par dimag barabar kaam kar raha hai tera, ruk sasur ko bolta hu agli baar dimag pe mare tere..

Aise hi baate karte huye unhe kab neech lagi pata hi nahi chala aur subah subah unki aankh khuli komal ke awaj se..

Komal-utho raja maharaja logo utho

Dono komal ke awaj se ekdum uth baithe aur komal ab avinash ko kuch bolti isse pehle hi avinash bola

Avinash-arey bhabhi aao..

Bas avinash ke muh se bhabhi sunna tha ke komal ka gussa turant gayab hi ho gaya aura b gusse ki jagah sharam ne le li, komal sharmakar aniket ki taraf dekhne lagi aur aniket bhi uski taraf dekh raha tha itne me avinash khasa aur bola

Avinash-o love birds apun bhi hai idhar dhyan me rakhne ka kya (bola, romance ke beech me bola, avi-tu fir aa gaya, aur sun taang tudwayi hai inke liye itna to apun bolega tu jake tera kaam kar, me-hao to ja raha hu na bhadak ta kyu hai be sala ijjat hi nahi apun ki :redface: )

Aniket-avi kaha kho gaya

Avinash-arey kuch nahi woe k banda beech me aa gaya tha uso bhagaya

Aniket-kya??

Komal-ye sab chhodo aur avi mana ki anya ke paas dimag thoda kam hai par tere paas to hai na kya jarurtat thi is sab ki?

Avinash-arey ye peepal ke ped ka bhut kuch sune tab na, waise ek baat bata jo isne kiya wo nah karna chahiye tha kya :hinthint2:

Avinash ki baat sunkar komal sharmayi aur aniket haste huye bola

Aniket-aaila avi apna pailwan sharmata bhi hai re

Teeno dil khol ke hase aur baad me hospital ki formalities puri kar ke avinash ko discharge mil gaya aur aniket ne use uske ghar drop kiya aur komal ko lekar apne ghar pahucha to use dekhne hi kaushalya boli

Kaushalya-ya sunbai ya (aao bahu aao Marathi me bahu k sunbai bolte hai)

Kaushalya ki baat sun ke dono thoda shock huye, kal raat ke propose ke bare me inko kaise pata chala? Fir bhi aniket baat sambhalte huye bola

Aniket-maa kya hai ye? Matlab kuch bhi?

Kaushalya-acha main kuch bhi bol rahi hu? Bhul gaye sajan ke ghar jana hai ha

Ab komal thoda jhuta gussa dikhate huye boli

Komal-kya kaku aap bhi wo to bhang ka asar tha aap bhi na…

Par kaushalya use beech me rokte huye boli

Kaushalya-ab kaku wagaire nahi maa bolna samjhi sunbai

Itne ke narayanrao bhi baahar aaye aur wo bhi shuru ho gaye

Narayanrao-arey sunbai aaj subah subah..

Ab aniket chidhne laga tha

Aniket-ye kya chalu hai aap logo ka subah subah, matlab ab mere doct ghar bhi na aaye?

Narayanrao paper padh rahe the wo use baju me rakhte huye bole

Narayanrao-dost? Abhi bhi sirf dost? Arey ye jab pehli baar aayi thi tabhi maine pehchan liya tha daal me kuch kala hai

Aniket-kya bapu subah subah kya feka feki hai

Narayanrao-beta baap hu main tera aur teri nas nas se wakif bhi hu aur kyu re nalayak sharab pike ladki ko propose karte huye sharam nahi aati tujhe?

Ye ek aur shocking baat

Aniket-kya bapu aapne bataya nai ke aap CID me ho? Arey abhi 12 ghante bhi nahi hue aur aapko sari khabar mil bhi gayi kamaal hai :shocking:

Narayanrao-to tujhe kya lagta hai tu baahar jo kand karta hai mujhe pata nahi

Aniket bas apna sar khuja raha tha

Narayanrao-o chote sarkar mat takleef do apne dimag ko yash ne good news batayi hai hame

Aniket-ye yash ke to :mad2: sale ke pet me koi baat nahi pachti

Aniket komal aur narayanrao dining table par baith kar baate kar rahe the itne me kaushalya ne ek plate lakar waha rakhi

Kaushalya-lo muh meetha karo garam garam badam ka halwa, ani ka favourite

Ab muh meetha karne ki baat sunkar aniket ne table ke niche se komal ko laat mari par ye achanak hone se komal darr gayi aur khadi ho gayi to narayanrao bole

Narayanrao-kya hua komal aise kyu uth gayi?

Komal kuch bolti itne me aniket bola

Aniket-sorry ha, ghar me chuhe ho gaye hai ekada gaya hoga pair par se don’t worry

Aniket ki baat sunkar narayanrao hase

Narayanrao-main batau komal, aajkal itne chuhe ho gaye hai na ke sirf bhagte hi nahi hai balki khurchi par baith kar halwa bhi khate hai

Narayanrao ki baat sunkar komal hasi aur wo aage bole

Narayanrao-ani beta tu duniya ka pehla ladka nahi hai jisme pyaar kiya hai, hamne bhi pyaar kiya hai, tumhe hamne google se download nahi kiya hai jo laat maar ke bol raha hai chuke ho gaye

Sab hasne lage aur kaushalya boli

Kaushalya-to komal kab aaye tumhare ghar tumhare mummy papa se milne?

Komal kuch bolti isse pehle hi aniket bola

Aniket-maa kya hai? Merse jyada jaldi to aaplogo ko hai, abhi shadi ke bare me bilkul baat nahi hogi hame jab sahi lagega hum bata denge tab tak shant rahiye

Kaushalya-ani teri height nahi badhi par umra badh gayi hai

Fir narayanrao kaushalya ko samjhate huye bole

Narayanrao-arey rani sarkar, kal to propose kiya hai aur aaj aap shadi ki baat kar rahi ho ab kal boliyega ke pota chahiye, arey baccho ko jara enjoy karne ko, ek baat shadi ho gayi jimmedari aa gayi ye ye samay nahi aayega

Koushalya-to kya shadi ke baad nahi kar sakte enjoy

Narayanrao-aap batao hamne aakhri picture kaunsa dekha tha sath me? Ya aakhri baar kab gaye the kahi ghumne? Nahi yaad na isiliye keh raha hu baccho ko abhi unki jindagi jine do aur aap jake mandir me bhagwan ka abhishek karo itni sunder aur samajhdar sathi mili hai hamare vanar ko wo kya kam hai..

Narayanrao ki baat par sab hasne lage…..

Update 39​

Aniket aur komal ekdum khush the aur khush rehna bhi chahiye, unki life ka ek naya chapter shuru ho gaya tha, avinash bhi pandhra din aaram karke ab wapis college aane laga tha par ab wo sabke saamne komal ko bhabhi bolna taalta tha, dheere dheere ye news sare college ko pata chal gayi thi..

Pehle dost aur ab premi to masti ka dose bhi double ho gaya tha par ek baat thi, koi bhi agar majak me bhi shadi ki baat chedta to aniket chidh jata tha,

Ek din aniket akela hi baitha tha to komal uske piche se aayi aur pat se usne aniket ka gaal chum liya, ab hamesha sher banke ghumne wala apna aniket aise time pe bhigi billiban gaya karta tha

Aniket-kya kau, koi dekh lega to kya bolega

Komal-palu ye na mera dialogue hona chahiye tha

Aniket-pa..lu :wtf: ye kya hai ab naya?

Komal-wo maine aaj tumhara naamkaran kiya hai

Aniket-chee :yuck: matlab kuch bhi ? palu, kya palu kutta palu billi palu bakri palu, kya hai ye

To komal use samjha ke batane lagi

Komal-dekho palu ke do matlab hote hai ek to hindi me hi hai, palu matlab kisi chiz ko pa lena hasil karna aur maine tumhe pa liya hai aur dusra hai telegu me, doodh ko telegu me palu bolte hai..

Aniket-ab doodh aur mera kya sambandh hai?

Komal-ek to tum gore ho bilkul doodh jais aur dusra doodh sabme adjust o jata hai bilkul tumhare jaise isiliye aaj se tumhara naam palu

Aniket-kyu aniket naam pasamd nahi kya?

Komal-tumhe komal naam pasand nahi kya? Kau kyu?

Aniket-arey komal naam sabke liye hai kau sirf mere liye sirf main bulaunga is naam se

Komal-fir plau bhi sirf mere liye..

Aniket hasa

Aniket-bato me aaj tak tumse koi jeet paya hai kya

Komal-bato ka kya hai tumne to muhe hi jeet liya hai

Dono hath me hath daal ke waha baith gaye

(these nibba nibbi aur inki bate :sigh: avi kidhar hai be tu ye nibba nibbi pagal kar denge meko :crazy: avi-aur likh bsdk meko chhod ke scene abhi thoda time aur nahi aayega apun :beee: )

Komal-ani ek baat puchu

Aniket-nahi bola to nahi puchegi kya?

Komal-mujhe batao ham dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai fir jab shadi ki baat aati hai to tum chidh kyu jaye ho?

Aniket-uska kya hai na kau apni shadi matlab ek special event hona chahiye, kuch to thrilling hona chahiye tab to maja aayega na..

Komal-thrilling matlab kehna kya chahte ho

Aniket-sach batau to abhi mujhe bhi samajh nahi aaya hai me par abhi samay hai usme…

Komal-pata hai apni shadi ke bare me soch kar hi main khushi se sihar jati hu, main bachpan se meri shadi ki planning karti aayi hu aura b to main meri sari icchaye puri karungi..

(these kids, story me ho isiliye itni bate kar rahe ho warna yaha to do ghante aur 20 logo me shadiya ho rahi covid ke chakker me #CKMKB :mad2: stay home, wash your hands regularly, wear mask )

Aniket-kar kau jo planning karni hai kar par abhi time hai usme

Komal ne apni gardan aniket ke kandhe par rakh di aur apni shadi ke sapne sajane lagi aur kuch samay baad aniket hasa

Komal-kya hua? Aise hase kyu?

Aniket-wo mere dimag me na ek sawal aaya hai

Komal-sawal? Kaisa sawal palu?

Aniket-nahi jane do tum hasogi..

Komal-nahi hasungi batao

Aniket-hasne ka nahi bata raha hu

Komal-arey baba nahi hasungi ab batao bhi

Aniket-thodi der pehle jab tum aayi tab tumne kya kiya?

Komal-kyu tumne nahi pata maine kya kiya?

Aniket-batao na

Komal-usme kya hai batane jaisa, maine kiss kiya hai usme kya sawal hai

Aniket-tumne chummi di hai ke li hai

Komal-aur dono me kya fark hai

Aniketwaisa nahi par fark to hai na dene ka aur lene ka

Aniket ki baat sunkar komal apni his nahi rok payi

Aniket-dekha maine bola than a tu hasegi

Komal-arey waise nahi par mujhe samajh nahi aa raha iska kya jawab du, maine chummi di bhi aur li bhi

Aniket-aise kaise koi ek baat batao

Komal-theek hai to maine chummi di

Aniket-to fir maine bhi tumhe wo wapis deni chahiye na

Komal haste huye boli

Komal-nahi nahi maine chummi li hai

Aniket- to fir maine bhi to ab leni chahiye na

Aisa bol ke aniket ne komal ko apni baho me bhara aur apne hoth uske hotho par tika diye, kuch pal bad komal usse alag huyi aur boli

Komal-ab batao tumne ye kya kiya hai

Aniket-kau ye na process hi difficult hai waise main kya bolta hu shakkar khud khao ya koi jabardast khilaye lagegi to wo meethi hi :D

Komal-aajkal tumhari ye harkate bahut badh gayi hai palu

Aniket-ab tumhare sath ye harkate nahi karunga to ko college ke watchman ke sath karunga

Ye dono apne pyaar ki gulugulu kar hi rahe the ke itne me piche se awaj aaya

Avinash-tum log ka ye gulu gulu karke ho gaya ho to main aau kya?

Dono jhatke se piche mude to avinash aasman ki taraf mu karke khada tha usko dekh ke aniket bola

Aniket-aa gaya betal mewri pith pe baithne, ab teko nahi bolenge to aayega nahi kya?

Avinash mu uper karke andhe log jaise chalte hai waise hath aage karke chalte huye unki taraf aa raha tha..

Avinash-anya ek locha ho gaya yaar, aaj subah se meko kuch dikh hi nahi raha hai

komal-aisa kya..

Avinash-hao be sach me kuch nahi dikh raha

Aniket-aur tu sach bol raha hai ye kaise maan le

Avinash-arey tu abhi kiss kar raha thaw o bhi meko nahi dikha..

Avinash ki baat sunkar komal ne sandel nikal ki aur wo kuch bolti isse pehle hi avi waha se bhag liya

Komal-nalayak aa idhar main karti hut era ilaj pura dikhna band ho jayega

Jispar avinash bhagte huye bola

Avinash-waah beta ani kya sasural dhundha hai be, baap pair tod raha beti andha kar rahi

Avinash kuch komal ke hath me nahi laga aur wo thak ke wapis aniket ke paas aake baith gayi aur avinash ke dur se hi apne dono kaan pakde

Avinash-sorry sorry, abbey maine pura college tum log ko dhundha par tum kahi dikhe hi nahi fir kisi ne bataya ke tum yaha ho to main aa gaya par don’t worry mere aane tak tumhara saka karyakram ho gaya tha jyada kuch nahi dekha maine..

Fir aniket komal ko gale lagate huye bola

Aniket-abey pyaar karte hai darte hai kya kisi ke baap se..

Avinash abbey whi to batane aaya tha ke komal ke pitaji aaye hai college me..

Ye sunte hi dono jhatke me alag ho gaye aye ek sath pucha

Komal-kya? Kab kidhar hai abhi papa?

Aur inki ye halat dekh ke avi has raha tha

Avinash- ab kidhar gayi himmat, sasur ka naam aate hi dur h gaye dono, kya gunda bano ge re tum :lotpot:

Aniket bhag ke avinash ke paas gaya aur uski pith me mast do char mukke jade

Aniket-bahut masti sujh rahi hai teko ruk sale teri masti hi nikalta hu baahar

Avinash-anya sorry na yaar jane de chal picture dekhne jate hai pichture meri taraf se

Jispar komal boli

Komal-arey waah avi tu kab se sudhar gaya, picture aur wo bhi tere taraf se, kya baat hai…

Avinash-ha to apun hai hi dildar yaro ke yaar :cool:

Aniket-apan teeno jayenge

Avinash-hao 😌

Aniket-thodi to sharam rakh

Avinash- sharam main aaj hi bech khayi hai aur Dakar bhi de chukka hu, aane ka hai to aa nahi to main chala akela..

Aisa bol ke avinash jake gadi ke paas khada ho gaya aur piche se ye dono bhi aaye aur teeno theater par pahuche aur avinash aage jake ticket le aaya, picture shuru hone me abhi samay tha teeno bate karte huye khade ho gaye aur jab cinema hall me jane ka time hua to avinas ne ticket checker ko do tickets di aur khud baju me ho gaya aur haste huye aniket ko aankh mari

Avinash-ja anya ja jile apni jindagi

Jispar aniket hasa aur bola

Aniket-sala nautanki

Avinash-abe jao maje karo main kabab me haddi nahi banta..

Itna bol ke avinash waha se nikal gaya

Update 40​

Phulo ki khushboo aur pyaar chipaye nahi chipte, aap kitni ki koshish kyu na kar lo wo ek na ek din saamne aa hi jata hai.. samay apni gati se aage sarak raha tha aur aniket aur komal ka pyaar badhte dino ke sath badh raha tha, dono sath sath rehte ghumte the, kabhi mandir me kabhi nadi kinare kabhi film dekhne, komal ne haav bhav baat chit me bhi fark pada tha, wo baithe baithe hi muskurane lagti, khud me khoye rehti, khud se hi bate karti, aaine ke saamne sawarti rehti, ek din aniket ne komal ko mandir me milne bulaya aur komal ko najane kya lehar aayi pata nahi

Aniket mandir me komal ki raah dekhte baitha tha aur wo jab aayi to use dekhte hi aniket ke dil ki dhadkan badh gayi, pehle pehal to usne komal ko pehchana hi nahi par jab dekha to dekhte hi reh gaya, aaj komal bahut alag dikh rahi thi, do minute ke liye to aniket ko apni aankho par vishwas hi nahi hua..

Aaj komal jis tarah se tayar hokar aayi thi na koi bhi use dekh kar uspar fida ho jata, khule chhode huye baal, kaano me jhumke, jinke halne ke sath sath aniket ka man bhi hal raha tha, naak me choti si nosering ghayal kar rahi thi, mathe par choti si laal tikli, chehre par halka sa makeup, pehli baar usme pink color ki lipstick lagayi thi, hoth ekdum gulab ki pankhudiyo jaise dikh rahe the aur aniket ko apne me uljha le rahe the, gale me ek motiyo ki chain, dono hatho me chudiya, light color ka nailpaint, dark chocolaty color ka top aur usko matching work kiya hua lehnga, baye kandhe par nakshi kaam kiya hua dupatta, balo ki ek lat chehre par aati huyi, aankho me kajal mano lag raha ho un aankho ki wajah se us kajal ki shobha badh gayi hai aur ye sab kam tha to hotho ke uper ka til, chalte huye dono hatho se ghaghra thoda uper pakadne se pair main pehni huyi payal ki jhankar dil ki dhadkan aur badha rahi thi, usme ek hathy me mehndi aur jaise jaise kmal muskura rahi thi lag raha tha jaise phulo ki varsha ho rahi hai

Aniket ektak bagair palace jhapkaye komal ko dekhe jar aha tha, uske us roop saundarya ko dekh ke aniket mantramugdh ho gaya tha, aise lag raha tha jaise koi apsara swarg ka rasta bhul kar sidhe dharti par aa gayi hai, komal uske karib aakar uski aankho ke saamne chutki bajate huye boli

Komal-hello palu..

Aniket ne komal ke dono hath pakde ayr waha baitha liya aur komal kuch bolti isse pehle aniket ne apni ungli uske hotho par rakh di

Aniket-shhhh kuch mat bolo

Uske baad najane kitni der wo komal ko dekhta raha, komal itni sunder dikh sakti hai ye usne sapne me bhi nahi socha tha, hamesha jeans tshirt wahi komal aur aaj wali komal me jamin aasman ka fark tha, kitna bhi dekh le man hi nahi bhar raha tha aur akhir me komal hi boli

Komal-ab bas bhi karo aise kya dekh rahe ho

Aniket-dekh raha hu ke koi itna khubsurat kaise ho sakta hai, ek pal bhi tumse najre hatane ko man nahi maan raha..

Komal-bas palu mujhe cane ke jhad par mat chadhao, mujhe pata hai main kaisi dikhti hu

Aniket-tumhe bilkul pata nahi hai..jara meri najro se dekho samajh jaogi..swarg ki apsara bhi jal ke khakho jayegi aaj tumhe dekh ke

Komal-arey waah! Tum aisi bate bhi karte ho mujhe nahi pata tha warna pehle hi aise tayar hoke aa jati

Aniket-wo koi gadha hi hoga jo aisi khubsurti saamne aane ke baad bhi aise nahi bolega, kau mujhe to lagta hai aaj tumhe meri hi najar lag jayegi

Komal-pyaar karne walo ki kabhi najar nahi laga karti..

Aniket-ye jo tumhare hotho par ka til hai na, maa kasam jaan lega dikh raha hai

Komal-arey ab bas bhi karo

Aniket-man nahi bhar raha na, kitna bhi dekh lu aur dekhne ki icha hai..wo to adi idhar nahi hai warna ek update sirf tumhare roop pe likh deta ( main kyu likhunga be tu likh :beee: )

Komal-kya badbada rahe ho kaun adi aur wo kyu likhega mere bare me, meki or sirf dekh bhi liya na to do kaan ke niche padegi uske

Aniket-kau aaj main pura paagal ho gaya hu, mujhe hi samajh nahi aa raha hi kya badbada raha hu..

Komal hasne lagi

Komal-tum na paagal ho gaye ho0, pure paagal

Aniket-pehle nahi tha main aisa par tumne bana diya hai, waise main kismet wala hi ke tum meri jindagi me aayi

Aisa bol ke aniket ne komal ka hath chum liya aur komal has kar boli

Komal-fir wrong number

Jispar aniket ne haskar kaha

Aniket-darr lagta hai kahi chand par daag na lag jaye

Uske baad wo gungunane laga

Chand bhi dekha, phool bhi dekha

Baadal, bijli, titli, jugnu

Koi nahi hai aisa

Tera husn hai jaisa

Meri nigah ne ye kaisa khawb dekha hai

Jamin me chalta hua mehtab dekha hai

Meri aankho ne chuna hai tujhko duniya dekhkar

Kiska chehra ab main dekhu

Tera chehra dekhkar​

Komal sharam se pani pani ho gayi, mandir thodi chai par tha aur waha se pura gaon dikhta tha, dono ek or jakar baith gaye aur wo najara dekhne lage, komal apna sar aniket ke kandhe par tika kar baithi thi

Aniket-kau apan bhi kitne bewkuf hai na? kitne samay se hum sath the, pyaar hokar bhi na batane me kitna samay gawa diya..

Komal-samay maine nahi tumne gawaya tha

Aniket-tumhe kab ehsaas hua ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho

Komal-jab tum shravni ke liye net practice kar rahe the tab..

Aniket-tum bhi kamal ho yaar tabhi sidha sidha batana than a meko

Komal-par tumhare dimag par us samay wo gober sawar thi na?

Aniket-aur tumne ye baat kisi ko pata bhi nahi chalne di

Komal-sach hai par avi ye baat jaanta tha

Avinash ka naam sunke aniket ekdum shock

Aniket-kya?? Avya ko malum tha? Ab milne de usko uski dusri tang bhi tutegi ab, sale harami ne pehle nahi bataya meko..

Komal-isme uski koi galti nahi hai, maine hi use tumhari kasam dekar mana kiya tha

Aniket-kau matlab main hi bewkuf hu na jo samajh nahi paya

Komal-bewkuf hai to kya hua ho to mere hi..

Aniket-par aaj tumhari khubsurti dekh k eek baat pata chali hai kau

Komal-kya?

Aniket-yahi ke meri choice ekdum solid hai aur teri ekdum buri..

Komal-rehne do jo hai mera hai..

Uske baad kuch samay baad aniket ne komal ko apni car se uske ghar drop kiya..komal bahut khush thi aur khushi khushi ghar me gayi par uski khushi jyada samay tak nahi tiki

Ghar me ghuste hi usne dekha ke uske pitaji aaj kaam se jaldi aa gaye hai aur wo use dekhte hi bola

Sayajirao-itna saj dhaj ke kaha gayi thi?

Komal-wo meri dost ki shadi me gayi thi..

Sayajirao chashme me se komal ko dekh rahe the

Sayajirao-shadi tekdi wale mandir me thi kya?

Apni chori pakdi gayi hai ye komal ke dhyan me aa gaya aur wo gardan jhuka kar kuch na bolte huye khadi rahi itne me uski maa aayi aur boli

Sangeeta-abhi ko tumhe ghar chhod kar gaya hai wo ladka kaun tha??..

To Be Continued….

Update 41​

Apni chori pakdi gayi hai ye komal ke dhyan me aa gaya aur wo gardan jhuka kar kuch na bolte huye khadi rahi itne me uski maa aayi aur boli

Sangeeta-abhi ko tumhe ghar chhod kar gaya hai wo ladka kaun tha??..

Komal kuch nahi boli to uske pitaji ne use dobara shanti se pucha par awaj ka tone wahi tha

Sayajirao- suna nahi tumhari maa kya puch rahi hai?

Komal apni sari himmat jama karke boli

Komal-aniket..

Sayajirao-pura naam?

Komal-aniket narayanrao rane

Sayajirao kuch der tak kuch sochne lage, shayad kuch yaad kar rahe the fir bole

Sayajirao-ye wahi hai na, tumhare college ke trustee ka ladka

Komal ne gardan hila kar ha kaha

Sayajirao-tumhara usse kya sambandh ?

Ab komal ke saamne sawal aa gaya tha ki sirf dost hai bol ke baat taal de par agle hi pal dimag me khayal aaya ke aaj na kal ye baat batani hi hhai fir aaj kyu nahi? Par pata nahi kyu wo bol baithi

Komal-dost hai..

Sayajirao-bulao use

Komal ko kuch samajh me nahi aaya

Komal-theek hai bula lungi

Sayajirao-bula lungi nahi abhi bulao

Komal ab darr se tharthar kamp rahi thi aurt kampte hatho se usne aniket ko call lagaya, idhar kya hua hai aniket is baat se bekhabar tha,wo to komal ki khubsurti me hi khoya hua tha wo phone uthate hi bola

Aniket-yes my love, bolo

Komal-aniket tum abhi ke abhi mere ghar aao

Aniket-kyu mere saas sasur baahar gaye hai kya

Aniket apne hi mood me tha

Komal-nahi wo dono yahi hai aur papa ne tumhe ghar par aane ko kaha hai

Aniket-aailasasur ji ne bulaya hai, badhiya, waise bhi main khud unse milne ka soch raha tha..

Komal-aniket baat serious hai jaldi aao

Aniket-don’t worry kau main abhi aaya

Aur aniket se gadi ghuma li aur khud se bola

Aniket-sala baap aur ladki ne ek hi din jhatke dene ka plan banaya hai pehle beti se roop se ghayal kiya ab baap kya karega pata nahi

Aniket se jhat se avinash ko phone lagaya

Aniket-avi main komal ke ghar jar aha hu, uske papa ne bulaya hai tub hi pahuch waha

Avinash-mereko bhi bulaya hai kya

Aniket-hao sab ko bulaya hai meri barat nikalne wali hai, tub hi kamal ki baat karta hai men..

Avinash-fir kyu bulaya hai?

Aniket-abey meko kya malum aura b CID banna band karega, bataya utna kar sawal mat kar aur waha pahuch ke baahar hi rukiyo, komal ka baap pailwaan hai unki beti se lafda yahi shamshan me apne naam ki adhi lakdiya, hath pair tod ke baahar feka to hospital leke jane waha koi hona chahiye na aur aaj tak apna anubhav hai pyaar ke mamle me meri hamesha dhulayi huyi hai wo yash ka matter ho ya suman ka

Avinash-ye bhi hai be, par ek acha hua, is baar maar khane me alag nahi lagega teri net practice huyi hai pehle hi

Aniket-ab baate baad me kar aur jaldi pahuch, main bhi pahuch raha hu

Idhar komal full tension me thi ke ab kya hoga? Ek pal ko lagta ne darr ke mare aniket nahi aaya to? Par usne wo khayal nikal diya, aniket darne walo ne se nahi tha aur wo aayega iska komal ko pura yakin tha aur itne me aniket aaya aur komal ki dhadkane aur badh gayi

Aniket ke aate huye sayajirao ki firing shuru ho gayi

Sayajirao-naam kya hai tera?

Aniket-aniket

Sayajirao-baap ne pura naam nahi sikhaya kya?

Sayajirao ke baat karne ke tarike se aniket samajh gaya tha ke mamla serious hai

Aniket-aniket narayanrao rane

Sayajirao-college ke trustee ka beta hai na tu?

Aniket ne bas ha me gardan hilayi

Sayajirao-tum dono kaha gaye the?

Aniket-tekdi wale Krishna mandir me

Sayajirao-waha kya kaam tha?

Aniket situation normal karne ke liye bola

Aniket-mandir me kyu jayenge kaka, bhagwan ke darshan karne gaye the

Sayajirao gusse ne aniket ki tarav dekh rahe the

Sayajirao-abhi aate waqt darwaje par ka nameplate nahi dekha kya? Pailwan sayajirao patil bolte hai mujhe, sidhe sidhe jawab de nahi to aaya chalk e hai jayega rengte huye

Aniket ne ha me gardar hilayi

Sayajirao-college me yahi sab karne jate ho kya? Yahi sab sikhaya hai maa baap ne? mujhe ache se pata hai amiro ke baccho ke lakshan, bholi bhali ladkiyo ko apne piche lagana, timepaas karna par dhyan me rakhna ye meri beti hai aur aainda iske aaspaas bhi dikha to….

Itna bol ke sayaji rao apne shirt ki bahi uper kar rahe the aur mucho ko taav diya, ab aniket ko bhi thoda gussa aa gaya tha, kyuki use kuch bhi bolo kitni bhi galiya do wo she lega par uske maa baap ko bola hua use sehan nahi hota tha usne man me kuch nishchay kiya aur bola

Aniket-iske aaspaas dikha to kya?

Sayajirao ne ek sansanit thappad aniket ko jad diya aur aniket sidha jamin par gira, komal ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi ek bhi shabd bolne ki, wo gardan jhuka kar ro rahi thi, aur aniket samajh gaya tha ke buddhe ne pailwani jarur chhodi hai par ab bhi hath me bahut jaan hai aur agar ye case hath ke baahar nikal gaya to aaj ek bhi haddi nahi bachegi, wo waise hi pade pade bola

Aniket-maaf karna kaka par aap samajhte ho main waisa nahi hu, yakin na ho to komal ko puch lo

Ab sayajirao komal ki taraf mude

Sayajirao-komal sach sach batana tum sirf dost ho ya kuch aur..

aur khabardar agar jhuth bola to

Ab komal ki bari thi, usne man hi man socha ki yahi sahi samay hai, ab nahi bol payi to kabhi nahi bol payegi, usne decide kar liya tha kea b piche nahi hatna hai

Komal-papa hum pyaar karte hai ek dusre se

Sayajirao ne kabhi ladka aur ladki me bhedbhav nahi kiya tha aur aaj bhi nahi kiya ek thappad komal ko bhi laga

Sayajirao-sharam nahi aati baap ke saamne aise baat karte huye

Komal-maaf karna papa par jo sach hai wo yahi hai, hum dono ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte hai

Idhar aniket ko bilkul pasand nahi aaya tha komal ko mara hua

Aniket-kaka job hi jitna bhi maarna hai meko maro par komal ko saja mat do

Sayajirao-ab tu mujhe batayega ki main meri beti se kaise baat karu

Pata nahi kyu par aniket ko is situation me bhi hasi aa gayi aur use hasta dekh sayajirao aur bhadak gaye

Sayajirao-thappad bhul gaya kya jo has raha hai

Aniket ka darr ab nikal gaya tha aur ab jo bhi hoga uske liye wo tayar tha aniket aage bola

Aniket-kal tak wo aapki beti thi, aaj meri jivansathi hai, shadi to main usse hi karunga aapki majri se ya aapki marji ke bagair, ab bhale hi aap mere hath pair tod doya kanyadaan ke liye maan jao

Aniket seena chauda karke sayajirao ke saamne khada tha aur chehre par gajab ka confidence tha darr ka kahi namonishan bhi nahi tha

Sayajirao-abhi ke abhi tere baap ko phone kar

Aniket ne phone lagaya aur uske kuch bolne se pehle hi sayajirao ne phone le liya..aur bole

Sayajirao-main sayajirao patil bol raha hu aur apna ladka jinda chahiye to agle adhe ghante me yaha aao, nahi aaya to tere bete ki body raat ta pahucha dunga

Narayanrao bhi aisi baat sunkar khawal gaye

Narayanrao-aye sayaji…mere bete ke baal ko bhi dhakka laga to khade khade chir dunga..aa raha hu main….

To Be Continued…..

Update 42​

Narayanrao dandanate te huye komal ke ghar par pahuche aur unhone baahar se hi garjana ki

Narayanrao- sayaaaajiii….

Komal ke pitaji bhi darwaje me aakar chillaye…

Sayajirao-arey baahar khada hokar kya chillata hai..aa ander aa..

Narayan-ha to main kya darta hu kya tujhse? Hoga tu pailwan aur tere jaise bahut dekhe hai maine bhi

Aisa bol ke narayanrao ander aaye aur ander aate hi wo sidha aniket ke paas gaye aur uska chehra ache se dekhte huye aniket se boele

Narayanrao-isne mara kya tujhe?

Ab puri situation bahut mushkil ho gayi thi aur usme bhi agar aniket abhi ha bolta to narayanrao aur bhi gussa hote isiliye usne na bola to narayanrao gusse me bole

Narayanrao-nahi kya bol raha hai thobda dekh apna saaf samajh aa raha hai maara hai tujhe

Fir narayanrao sayajirao ki taraf mud ke bole

Narayanrao-sharam nahi aati aise baccho pe hath uthate huye ?

Sayajirao-to ab kya aarti utaru kya uski ? meri beti ko fuslaya hai usne

Narayanrao-waah re waah! Aaya bada meri beti ko fuslaya hai bolne wala aur teri beti to choti bacchi hai na jo use fusla liya

Narayanrao komal ki taraf mude aur bole

Narayanrao- kya komal sach kya hai wo batao jara apne baap ko

Komal fir boli

Komal-waisa kuch nahi hai, hum dono pyaar karte hai ekdusre se

Narayanrao komal ke paas gaye aur use ache se dekhte huye bole

Narayanrao-sayaji, ashram nahi aati kya beti par hath uthate huye ?

Sayajirao-wo meri beti hai, tu kaun mujhe puchne wala ?

Narayanrao-teri beti? Abe teri beti thi ab mere ghar ki bahu hai

Sayajirao-waah re waah! Kya to bole meri bahu hai, arey main nahi dene wala aise choro ke ghar me apni beti ko, eklauti beti hai meri..

Narayanrao-apne kiye karmo ki saja yahi bhugatni hoti hai aur meko chor bol raha hai tu arey pailwani ki masti dikha ke logo ke dabbbe chura ke khane wala tu mujhe chor bol raha hai..

Itne ne komal ke pitaji has diye aur narayanrao unki taraf dekhne lage

Narayanrao-jara der ruk nahi sakta tha tu sayaji? Laga apne daat dikhane..

Jispar sayajirao apne hath jodte huye bole

Sayajirao-jaisa baap waisa beta dono ek number ke nautanki..

Narayanra-tu bhi kuch kam nahi hai sayaji..

Idhar komal aur aniket dono full confusion me unhe kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ke ye sab kya ho raha hai, dono apne apne bapo ko ashcharya se dekh rahe the, aur usme aur jyada kehar bole to dono ek dusre ke gale bhi mile.. ab to dono aur bhi shock ( aap log hi confuse hai na, :lol1: bhai aaya hai bata ke jayega )

Itne me Narayanrao haste haste komal aur aniket se bole

Narayanrao-arey aise aankhe faad ke kya dekh rahe ho? Tumko kya laga tha tumhare maa baap ekdum hi lallu hai unhe to kuch pata hi nahi hai..

Jispar sayajirao bole

Sayajirao-naru inki haalat na us kahawat jaisi ho gayi hai, inko laga billu aankh band kar ke doodh pi rahi hai aur koi dekh hi nahi raha.. waisa hua hai inke sath

Fir narayanrao ne bolna shuru kiya

Narayanrao-tum dono pyaar me ho ye sab hum pehle se jaante the par tum dono ye baat hamare saamne manne ko tayar hi nahi the, isiliye fir hum logo ne decide kiya ki tumhari firki li jaye, pehle to sirf aniket ne komal ki pehchan karayi mujhe tabhi laga tha ke inke beech kuch to hai fir wo bhang wala kissa hua aur pehli baar aniket aur komal ne nashe me hi sahi apna pyaar bayan kiya aur dusre hi din maine komal ki sari details college me nikalwa li aur tab pata chala ke ye to mere hi classmate ki sayaji ki beti nikli

Fir sayajirao aage bole

Sayajirao- dusre din naru mujhse aake mila aur bhang ke kisse me bare me mafi bhi mangi, hum dono ko is rishte se koi dikkat nahi thi par tum dono ka hi kuch fix nahi ho raha tha isiliye humne bhi tumhe thoda samay dene ka socha, aaj sham ko jab maine tumhe mandir me dekha tabhi naru ko call kar diya tha aur tabhi usne ye sari nautanki plan ki..

Fir narayanrao bole

Narayanrao- tumko laga tha ke tumhare maa baap to kabhi jawan the hi nahi unhe ye pyaar wagaire kya malum, par gaon bhar logo ki hawa tingt karne walo ki hawa tight kar di aaj hamne..

Komal aur aniket ko dono ko is khulase pe kya bole samajh hi nahi aa raha tha par dono ki khushi ka ab thikana nahi tha aur komal jakar sidhe uske pitaji ke chipak gayi

Sayajirao aniket se bole

Sayajirao-sorry beta wo main jara character me ghus gaya tha aur tumhe ek rakh di, aur waise bhi thappad ka hakdar to hai tu kyuki mei beti ko mujhe dur jo leke jane wala hai..

Jispar aniket apna gaal sehlate huye bola

Aniket-mujhe mara to mara, komal ko bhi to padi, par kuch bhi bolo aapka hath solid hai din me tare dikh gaye

Sayajirao-aur ye dhyan me rakhna, agar meri beti ko jara hi takleef huyi to ye thappad yaad kar lena..

Aniket-ye to ab aakhi jindagi nahi bhulunga main

Sab log hasne lage aur fir sayajirao bole

Sayajirao-fir kab bajana hai sahdi ka band

Jispar aniket ne kaha

Aniket-kaka abhi hamari umra kaha huyi hai shadi ki thoda to samay dijiye

Sayajirao-ha ye bhi sahi baat par par ab jara apni padhai ki taraf dhyan ko tumhara gradation hone ke baad main jyada raah nahi dekhunga

Jispar narayanrao bole

Narayanrao-sayaji, tera ye ehsaan kaise utarunga main, tune bahut badea kaam kar diya hai aaj mera ab shadi ke liye kyu na ho ani paas to hoga

Sabhi log firse hasne lage itne me kisi ne jhuk kar darwaje me se ander dekha aisa laga, sayajirao uthkar baahar aaye dekhne aur chillaye

Syajirao-tu yaha kya kar raha hai..

Wo avinash tha, usko khade khade tension aa raha tha ke itni der se ander chal kya raha hai isiliye wo dekh raha tha aur avinash ekdum bola

Avinash-main wo ani ka dost avi

Sayajirao ne use pehchan liya aur uska hath pakad ke ander laye aur use dekhte hi narayanrao bole

Narayanrao-ye hai nautanki number 2, avi..

Sayajirao-arey ye wahi hai jo us din mere gadi ke saamne aaya tha

Jispar narayanrao hasne lage

Narayanrao-arey sayaji ye inka plan tha tujhe bewkuf banane ka idhar aniket komal ko propose karne aaya tha aur tab tak tujhe roke rakhne ke liye ye teri gadi ke saamne aa gaya

Sayajirao ne apna hath uthaya aur avinash ne apni aankhe pakki band kar li, use lag raha tha kea b jhapad padegi par hath gaal pen a padte huye pith pe pada

Sayajirao-shabaas, dost ke liye pair tudwa liya, aniket naseeb wala hai wo tumhare jaisa dost mila hai use…

Ab apne avi seth bhi ekdum khush…

To Be Continued…..

Update 43​

Sab kuch sahi chal raha tha par sab sahi chale ke kismat ko kaha manjur hota hai (aur yaha inki kismet likhne wala apun hai :evillaugh: ) hame jo chahiye wo hame na mile ye to niyati ka pasandida khel hai aur har love story puri hoti hai aisa bhi nahi hai..

Aniket aur komal ekdusre ke pyaar me puri tarah se dube huye the, komal aur narayanrao ki permission leke aniket yash se milne chala gaya aur uski shadi ki bhi puri planning ki aur yash ki bhi shadi ho gayi usse hi jisse wo pyaar karta tha, samay pankh laga ke ud raha tha aur dekhte hi dekhte din hafte mahine nikal gaye..

Aniket jitna chatur tha utna hi niragas bhi tha, maja masti se paripurn tha, jaise wo kai logo ko pasand tha waise hi wo kayi logo ki aankho me khatak ta bhi tha, aniket ke to apni taraf se aaj tak sabse dosti hi kit hi par kuch mahan log aise bhi the jo use apna dushman maante the aur in sab se aniket puri taraf se bekhabar tha…

Ek din komal ko mil kar wapis aate samay aniket ek nirjan jagah par ruka uska phone baj raha tha aur wo phone uthane ke liye usne gadi roki aur itne me hi achanak uske sar par ek fatka pada aur uski aankho ke saamne andhera cha gaya..

Najane kitne samay baad use hosh aaya, wo ek nirjan room me band tha, uske sar par maar itne jor se laga tha kea b bhi uska sar thanak raha tha par ye sab uske kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ke kya ho raha hai.. uske dono path pair rassio se bandhe huye the aur muh par bhi kapd bandha hua tha, pura hosh aate hi aniket chatpatane laga par use bahut kas ke banda gaya tha, wo apni puri jaan laga ke chillane ki koshish kar raha tha par muh me kapda fasa hone ki wajah se nas ‘uu..uuu’ ki awaj ke alawa koi awaj baahar nahi nikal rahi thi, aniket ne khud ko chudane ki bharpur koshish ki par sab vyarth, wo jitna khud ko chudane ki koshish karta utna wo rassi ki gath aur bhi pakki ho rahi thi, bahut koshish karne ke baad aniket thak gaya aur waise hi jamin par pada raha

Sar par jaha maar laga tha wo hissa to dukh hi raha tha sath hii uska sar ye soch ke jyada dukh raha tha ke ye sab aakhir chal kya raha hai? Kaun kar raha hai ye? Aur kyu kar raha hai? Soch soch ke uska sar fatne ko aaya tha, aniket ke man me ab bahut bure khayal aane lage the, apne sath kuch ho gaya to maa bapu ka kya hoga?, komal ka kya hoga? In bato ke bas khayal se hi aniket ke pasine chutne lage, aniket ab pura ghabra gaya tha aur uski aankho se aansu behne lage the par unhe dekhne ke liye waha koi nahi tha, aisi haalat me bahut samay nikal gaya aura b aniket normal ho gaya tha, usne apne aap ko samjhaya ki ye waqt bhavuk hone ka nahi hai balki paristithi ka saamna karne ka hai…

Aniket ne apne aas paas najar ghumayi, wo ek bhayan andheri room thi, sab taraf dhul ka samrajya pasra hua tha, sab taraf makdi ke jale latak rahe the, diware kali pad chuki thi, sara tuta futa saaman waha idhar udhar pada hua tha, wo ek purana godown ya koi band padi huyi factory thi aisa aniket ko andaja aaya, bhayanak shanti thi waha.

Kisi bhi insaan ki koi nishani nahi thi waha beech beech me kabutar aur chmgadar ka awaj aa raha tha

Aniket shanti se hare k awaj sunne ki koshish kar raha tha, uske dhyan me aa gaya tha ke use jaha rakha gaya hai uske paas hi kahi samundar tha, wo sochne laga ke uske gaon ke paas to kahi bhi samundar nahi hai samundar to uske gaon se 120km dur hai, aniket ko ashcharya hua ke wo waha pahucha kaise aur use pata bhi nahi chala, sharir par ke kapde dekh ke lag raha tha ke wo kuch ghante nahi balki kayi dino se behosh tha, wo waise hi pade pade sochne laga ki akhir hua kya hoga

Kuch samay baad use bhuk lagi to usne idhar udhar najar ghumayi to uske dhyan me aaya ke waha ek table par ek plate me ek pav rakha hua hai aur ek pani ki bottle aur ek straw bhi hai

Udhar ghar par aniket raat bhar aaya nahi tha to ghar walo ne koi tension nahi liya tha kyuki iska is tarah raat bhar gayab rehna gharwalo ke liye kuch naya nahi tha par jab aniket ka phone nahi lag raha tha to komal ne ghar phone kiya to gharwalo ko chinta hone lagi, aniket ka kahi koi pata nahi lag raha tha, kaushalya aur komal ro ke behal the aur akhir me avinash aur narayanrao police me complaint likhane gaye, har jagah aniket ko dhundha lekin kisi ko kuch pata nahi tha kisi ne use nahi dekha tha, uski aakhri mulakat komal se huyi thi par uske baad use kisi ne nahi dekha tha, yash se bhi puch ke dekha gaya par use bhi aniket ke bare me kuch pata nahi tha, aur usme kehar yani aniket ki bike bajar me ek jagah par mili par uska kahi pata nahi chal raha tha

Idhar aniket ko bhuk lagi thi aur khane ko jo rakha tha wo thoda dur tha, wo jaise taise renge huye sarakte huye is khane ki plate tak pahuch to gaya tha par khayega kaise muh par to kapda bandha hua tha, ab wo kuch nahi kar sakta tha wo waise hi jamin par pada raha,

Aniket sochne laga ki kisi ne use kidnap kiya hai aur ab uske pita se paise ki demand karenge, use yakin tha ke uske pitaji use jarur chhuda lenge….

Akkha din aise hi nikal gaya, sham ko aniket ko kisi baat karne ka awaj sunai diya koi to kisi par gussa kar raha tha

“arey murkh aadmi, tujhe kaha tha sirf behosh karna aur tune ye kya kar diya? Wo mar gaya hai ke jinda hai hai wo?

“nahi malik jinda hai wo saas chal rahi hai uski”

“arey par aise maarte hai kya ?”

“malik jyada jor se maarta to uska sar fat jata na, fir bhi maine use dawa laga di hai aur uska khun aana bhi band ho gaya hai”

“aisa kya ? fir do din ho gaye hai use ab tak hosh kyu nahi aaya use”

“malik aaj subah hi hosh aaya hai use”

“kaise, hamme se koi bhi dinbhar aaj yaha nahi tha fir tune kab dekha ?”

“abhi aane ke baad dekha, wo sarakte sarakte huye pani ke paas gaya tha aur mujhe batao malik aapko badla hi lena hai to hath pair tod dalo ya fir sidha khatam kar do use yaha kyu rakha hai”

“meri to icha hai use maar daalne ki par usse pehle use pata chalna chahiye ki use kyu aur kisne mara hai, papa ne warning di hai ki jab tak wo khud yaha nahi aate tab tak koi kuch nahi karega aur teko pata hai jo bhi unki baat nahi manta uska haal iske jaisa hi hota hai”

“malik tab tak wo jinda rehna chahiye na”

“bandh ke rakha hai aise kaise marega”

“malik bhukha hai wo, khayega kaise muh me to kapda thusa hua hai”

“ha ye bhi hai, ek kaam kar uske khane tak muh khol de uska aur jarurat pade to tu khila de par hath mat kholna, bahut danger hai wo”

Fir wo aadmi aniket ko khana khilane ke liye ander aaya….

To Be Continued….

Update 44​

Wo aadmi ander aaya aur aniket ki taraf dekh ke hasa aur usse bola

Aadmi- main tera muh sirf aur sirf do minute ke liye kholunga aura b ye teri choice hai ki tu un do minute ka kaise upyog karta hai, ya to un do minute ke khana kha ke apni bhukh thodi mita le ya to mujhse sawal kar le, waise bhi sawal puchke koi fayda nahi hone wala hai kyuki mujhe to waise bhi tere lafde ke bare me nahi pata hai aur jo bhi mujhe pata hai main tujhe nahi batane wala to tere do minute shuru hote hai ab..

Itna bol ke fir us aadmi ne aniket ke muh ka kapda hata diya aur aniket ko bhi uski baat sahi lagi kyuki is samay sawal puchne se jyada kuch khana jaruri tha.. us aadmi ne pav ke tukde karke aniket ko khilaye aur fir us pani ki bottle se ajeeb se taste wala pani bhi use pila diya aur achanak aniket chillane laga, aniket ko laga ki ab yahi sahi mauka hai isse pehle ki ye gunda uska muh band kare kya pata koi chillane ka awaj hi sun le par hua iske bilkul ulta, wo aadmi apni jagah par khada hokar aniket ko dekh ke has raha tha, aniket jab chilla chillakar chak gaya tab wo guard bola

Guard- hoi gaya chilla ke? Dekh le thoda aur chilla le kya pata koi teri madad ko aa jaye, murkh ladke yaha se 10 km tak bas tu aur main hu isiliye ab apna gala faadna band kar

Aniket- agar aisa hai aur yaha koi nahi hai to mera muh kyu banda hua hai?

Guard- hum hokum ke gulam hai jo malik bolega wahi karenge

Aniket- aur ye malik kaun hai tera?

Guard- kyu be bahut chul hai kyat ere me? Sab abhi janega? Pata chal jayega muh band kar apna

Itna bol ke us guard ne aniket ka muh dobara band kar diya, kuch samay baad kisi gadi ke aane ka awaj aaya, aniket ka sara dhyan darwaje ki taraf tha, darwaja khula aur ek ucha lamba aadmi ander aaya, hath me sone ka bracelet aur aankho par goggle, ander aate hi usne guard ko ishara kiya aur guard ne aniket ke muh par ki patti hata di aur wo aadmi bola

Aadmi- acha! To tu hai aniket

Pety me kuch jane ke baa dab aniket ka darr kam ho gaya thaw o bola

Aniket- tum log kya bagair aadmi confirm karte uthate ho kya? Main hi hu aniket aur tum log ho kaun aur kya chal raha hai ye?

Wo aadmi shanti se khurchi par baitha aur gogglr nikal kar bola

Aadmi- mera naam rajeshwar hai, tere se kuch hisab baki tha bas isiliye uthaya hai tujhe..

Aniket- kimat bata mere bapu fek ke marenge tere muh pe..

Aniket ki baat sunkar rajeshwar hasa aur aniket ke paas jakar usne ek jordar thappad mara aniket ko aur bola

Rajeshwar- tu abhi chota baccha hai mere samne aur ha ye bhi sun ke tere baap ke jaise 10 log main apni jeb me leke chalta hu isiliye aainda kuch bhi bolne se pehle dus baar soch lena

Usne fir us guard ko ishara kiya aur guard baahar gaya aur anpe sath ek ladke ko ander lekar aaya aur us ladke ko dekhte hi aniket bola

Aniket- raman tu?? (raman wahi hai jisne komal ko cheda tha aur baad me in sabne uski kutai bhi ki thi )

Ab aniket ko sari kahani dhyan me aa gayi thi aur rajeshwar bola

Rajeshwar- ye mera eklauta beta raman, pehchanta hai na ise

Jispar aniket hasa

Aniket- main kya akkha college janta hai ise to, mawali harkate kar raha tha to college ki ladkiyo ne sandel maar maar ke bhagaya tha ise

Aniket ka is tarah hasna raman ko acha nahi laga aur wo aniket par tut pada aur use maarne laga aur jab maar maar ke thak gaya tab usne aniket ko chhoda, aniket jamin par pada tha aur uske muh se khun nikal raha tha us khun ko thukte huye haste huye aniket bola

Aniket- agar itna hi apni mardangi dikhane ka shauk hai to ek baar mere hath khol ke dekh, fir the batata marte kaise hai na teri gand me jhadi jhusa ke tujhe morn a banaya to mera naam bhi aniket nahi..

Raman fir se aniket ko maarne lapka par rajeshwar ke ishare par guard ne use beech me hi rok liya aur rajeshwar aniket ke paas jate huye bola

Rajeshwar- itni haalat kharab hai fir bhi akad kam nahi huyi hai teri, maan gaye teri himmat ko, teri aankho me mujhe bilkul darr nahi dikh raha hai aur yahi mujhe pasand nahi aaya, dusra koi hota to mafi maangeta to main use hath pair tod ke chhod deta par tere liye maine kuch aur soch rakha hai..

Aniket ne bhi thanka kar kaha

Aniket- maine kuch nahi kiya hai, tumhare ladke ki galti thi aur use uski saja mili hai

Ab tak shant rajeshwar ekdum khawal gaya usne dono hatho se aniket ki gardan pakdi aur daat peeste huye bola

Rajeshwar- tujhe pata nahi hai tune kya kiya hai..us din mera beta sharminda hokar ghar aaya tha aur mahina bhar baahar nahi nikla, uske dimag par asar ho gaya tha aur itne mahine lage hai use theek hone me aur tu bol raha hai tune kuch nahi kiya ? waise to galti us komal ki hai, saja use deni thi par mil gaya tu..

Komal ka naam sunte hi aniket par mano bijli giri ho wo ekdum shock ho gaya aur ab aniket ke chehre par chinta dikhne lagi aur wo samjhate huye bola

Aniket- dekho rajeshwar aap ko samajh nahi aa raha hai ke galti aapke bete kit hi..

Rajeshwar- maantu hu ki usne galti kit hi par tum logo ne use sare college ke saamne ladkiyo se maar khilakar sharminda kiya hai, uske dimag par iska asar hua hau aura b tumko iski saja bhugatni padegi, ab bata saja tu bhugtega ya komal ?

Jispar aniket bagair ek pal gawaye bola

Aniket- tumko jo saja deni hai main bhugatne ko tayar hu, par agar komal ki taraf aankh utha kar bhi dekha to main aankhe nikal lunga tumhari

Rajeshwar hasa

Rajeshwar- main bhi yahi chahta hu, kyuki tujhe saja di to use apne aap saja mil jayegi, aur mujhe use tadapte huye dekhna hai

Itna samay shant baitha hua raman bola

Raman- papa maar dete hai ise bahut ho gayi baat

Jispar rajeshwar samjhate huye bola

Rajeshwar- nahi beta maar diya to saja ka maja nahi aayega, ise to main aisi saja dunga ki ye jinda to rahega par komal se apne pariwar se kabhi mil nahi payega aur wo bhi jindagi bhar tadapte rahenge

Raman- aisa kya karne wale ho aap

Jispar rajeshwar haste huye aniket ki taraf dekh kar bola

Rajeshwar- tu bhi janna chahta hoga aage tera kya hoga to sun, mera import export ka kaam hai aur kal mera maal ship se france jane wala hai, main tujhe ek container me daal dunga france sarkar ke liye tu ghuspaithiya hoga aur wo tere mare tak tujhe jail me rakhenge, mera badla bhi pura hoga aur main pakda bhi nahi jaunga

Ye sun kar aniket ke pairo tale jamin sarak gayi, pair kampne lage aur wo niche baith gaua aur rajeshwar jate jate bola

Rajeshwar- ek baat bhyan me rakhna, agar tune bhagne ki koshish ki to ye haalat komal ki hogi ab choice teri hai tu ya komal..

Uske baad raman rajeshwar aur guard teeno hase aur waha se nikal gaye…

Update 45​

Aniket waise hi pada raha, uski aankho se aansu beh rahe the, kya kare yahi use samajh nahi aa raha tha, use khud ki chinta nahi thi use chinta thi komal ki apne maa baap ki, dil aur dimag me kya kare kya na kare isko leke jung chidi huyi thi, dimag keh raha tha ke

“us ladki ke liye tu apni jindagi daav par laga raha hai par tere maa baap ka kya ? unhone tujhe janm diya tujhe paal pos ke itna bada kiya tere sath agar kuch bura ho gaya to unka kya hoga”

Wahi dil keh raha tha ke

“komal ke bina tu kaise jiyega ? aur soch agar in logo ne komal ko kuch kar diya to ? komal ko kuch hone ke khayal se hi tere rongte khade ho rahe hai komal ko agar kuch ho gaya to jina mushkil ho jayega au raise tujhe jinda lash ki taraf dekh kart ere maa baap ko kya mehsus hoga unhe bhi dukh hoga”

Dimag keh raha tha

“to yaha se nikalne ka, bhagne ka rasta khoj”

Dil keh raha tha

“fir komal ka kya ?”

“arey yaha se bhagne ka sidha police station jane ka aur in paagal logo ko police ke hawale karne ka,in dono baap bete ko jail me sadane ka?

“kitne din rahenge jail me, kabhi na kabhi to baahar aayenge aur baahar aane ke baad wo aur khatarnak honge”

“wo baad ka baad me dekhenge pehle yaha se nikalne ka rasta khojna chahiye”

Uske baad aniket ne bahut koshish ki par sari koshishe bekar ho gayi, waha se bhagna to dir wo to apne hath ki rassi bhi nahi khol pa raha tha, wo chhutne ke liye jhatpata raha tha itne me guard waha aaya aur aniket se bola

Guard- kya chal raha hai aniket babu, kyu faltu me apne aap ko takleef de raha hai, ek to ye rassi nahi chhutne wali aur tu kitni hi koshish kar le te tutegi nahi ha isme tere sharir par jakham jarur ho jayegi..

Aniket se sidha sawal kiya

Aniket- mujhe chhodne ki kimat bol, itna paisa milega ki jindagi bhar kamane ki jarurat nahi padegi

Wo guard hasa aur bola

Guard- beta hamara dhandha bhale hi gair kanuni ho par hamare dhande ke bhi kuch usool hai jo ham maante hai, hamare dhandhe me insaan ki jabaan ki kimat hoti hai samjha

Aniket- tujhe nahi lagta ki ye sab galat ho raha hai ?

Guard- wo sab sochna mera kaam nahi hai, aur agar tu yaha se bhagne ki soch raha hai to main tujhe abhi khol deta hu

Itna bol ke us guard ne aniket ke hath khol diye aur bola

Guard- par bhagne se pehle bas ye dekhta ja

Itna bol ke us guard ne apne phone se kisi ko video call kiya aur bola

Guard- kaha hai wo batana jara

Udhar dusri taraf se awaj aaya..

“yahi hai boss, ruko camera ghumake dikhata hu”

Us guard ne apna phone aniket ko dikhaya, aniket ko usme komal dikhayi di, wo mandir me ja rahi thi, fir guard bola

Guard -do log hamehsa komal par najar rakhe huye hai, idhar tu bhaga aur waqha unhone komal ko uthaya, to ab kya socha hai tune..?

Aniket ne apne hath aage kar diye aur guard ne fir se uske hath bandh diye aur waha se chala gaya aur aniket thak ke wahi shant baith gaya

Sabke chehre aniket ki aankho ke saamne ghum rahe the, maa papa avinash aur komal, sabke sath bitaye pal kisi film ki taraf uske aankho ke saamne chal rahe the, reh reh kar use komal ki yaad uski aankho me aasu bhare ja rahi thi, such aniket ke saamne hath jode khada tha par use us such ka anubhav nahi lete aaya iska dukh tha, komal uske saamne thi uske sath thi fir bhi apni bewkufiyo me wo us such ko anubhav na kar saka, hath se ret fisalti hai jaise samay nikal gaya tha aura b hatheli khali thi, fir bhi ek khushi thi ke in sab anmol palo ki uske sath yaade thi jinke sahare use ab apni aage ki jindagi gujarni thi

Kabhi kisi chiz ke bare me jyada na sochne wala aniket, bas apni hi masti me rehne wala aniket ab kahi piche chhut gaya tha, ab jo yaha aniket thaw o har chiz ke bare me sochne wala jimmedari ko samajhne wala aniket tha, ab tak usne jo bhi kiya use sab yaad aa raha tha aur usne man hi man bhagwan se prarthana ki

Aniket- hey mahadev ab sab kuch aapke hath me hai, prabhu kripa kariye marg dikhaiye..

Kuch der baad guard fir se ander aaya aur ab uske hath me ek injection tha, aniket bola

Aniket- ye kya hai

Wo guard hasa aur bola

Guard- waise dekha jaye to ye tere hi kaam ki chiz hai

Aniket-main bilkul ye injection nahi lagwaunga..

Guard-arey maine kaha na ye tere hi kaam ki tere hi fayde ki chiz hai, dekh isme behoshi ki dawa hai, ise lagan eke baad kam se kam 48 ghanto tak tujhe hosh nahi aayega aur hamara fayda ye kit u behosh hoga tab tak container ship par load ho jayega, kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega, tujhe bhi nahi, fir karib 15 din lagenge tujhe waha pahuchne me, 48 ghanto me tu bharat ki seema se baahar hoga, isiliye 48 ghanto baad jab tujhe hosh aaye to chillane lagna, fir ship ke log tujhe container se baahar nikalenge, ship videshi hai isiliye wo tujhe wapis nahi layenge fir ship ke kisi room me tujhe band karke rakhenge, tu mare na isiliye khane ko dete rahenge, ek baar ship france pahuch gayi to tujhe custom waloko saup denge aur waha se tu sidha jail me

Aniket ko kuch bhi sun raha thaw o ekdum bhayankar tha wo guard fir bola

Guard- aur sabse badi baat, tu mana karne ki haalat me nahi hai, faltu me hath pair hilayega to tujhe hi takleef hogi

Wo guard itna chatur tha ke usne aniket ko bato me uljha kar use injection de diya aur aniket ko pata bhi nahi chala wo bol raha tha

Guard-chinta mat kar videshi jail bharat ki jail se achi hoti hai,aur is injection ka asar jaldi nahi hoga to do ghante me dheere dheere behosh hoga

Jaise jaise samay aage sarak raha tha aniket ko gungi(behoshi) aane lagi thi, saamne jo chal raha tha use sab dikh raha tha awaj sunai de rahe the par sharir ekdum sust ho gaya tha, thodi der baad use container ka awaj aaya, guard uske paas aaya aur kuch bolne laga, uska awaj aniket ke kano par pad raha tha par use kuch samajh nahi aa raha thaw o bas guard ko dekhe ja raha tha

Guard ne uske bande huye hath pair khol diye par aniket ko waha se bhagna to dur apne hath ki ungli hilana bhi mushkil tha, guard ne use uthaya aur container me lejake rakh diya aur uske baad wo container alag alag boxes se bhar diya

Aniket ab puri taraf behosh ho chuka tha aur use container me rakha hai ye usne dekhi huyi aakhir chiz thi, behosh haalat me bhi uski aankho ke saamne use maa papa avi aur komal dikh rahe the, wo usse baat kar rahe the, use ye bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ke ye uska bhram hai wo bhi unse baat kar raha tha, sharir shant pada tha par man sabke sath tha, ye acha hua tha, is behoshi ki dawai se wo apna sara dard bhul gaya tha

Najane kitne samay baad use hosh aane laga par aankho ke saamne ab bhi chehre ghum rahe the, fir awaj kano par padne lage, usne aankhe kholi par kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha, usne thodi si aankhe kholne ki koshish ki par behoshi hat nahi rahi thi, wo waise hi pada raha, docter suman, sidharth aur bhi teen log the jinke chehre saaf nahi dikh rahe the, aniket ne ache se dekha to rahesh raman aur guard uspar has rahe the, aniket ne firse aankhe mund li aur behosh ho gaya…..

Update 46​

“ani!! Aniket..

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Suman aniket ke gaal pe thapki dete huye use hosh me lane ki koshish kar rahi ti aur aniket ko aise lag raha tha ke wo neend me hai

Aniket-sone de na sumi, kyu sata rahi hai

Itna bol ke aniket ne fir se aankhe band kar li aur suman use firse uthane lagi, use ab chinta ho rahi thi, wo siddharth se boli

Suman-sid ise dose kyada to nahi ho gaya na ?

Siddharth-suman injection dekar sirf abhi char ghante huye hai aise kya kar rahi ho, tum docter ho bhul gayi kya ?

Piche se awaj aaya

Aniket-farre chala ke paas huyi hogi

Aniket adha hosh aur adhi behoshi me tha , uski baat sun ke siddharth hasne laga

Siddharth-ye dekl lo :lol1:

Suman aniket se hath pe maarte huye boli

Suman-dekho na ye rakshas pura hosh me bhi nahi hai fir bhi iski harkate band nahi hoti

Siddharth- par socho pura hosh me aane ke baad ye kya karega ?

Suman-ha wo bhi hai, eke k baat hai bhale hi ye pura hosh me aa jaye par fir bhi iska sharir thoda sust hi rahega kuch der

Ek nurse ko waha aniket ke paas ruka kar wo dono chale gaye, adhe ghante baad aniket hosh me aaya aur nurse ne siddharth aur suman ko bula liya aur wo dono waha aa gaye, suman ke awaj dene par aniket ne aankhe kholi aur bola

Aniket-kya sumi tum dono bhi honeymoon par ja rahe ho kya ?

Fir suman use yaad dilate huye boli

Suman- kaha france ?

France sunte hi aniket ko charso challis volt ka jhatka laga ho waise use sab yaad aa gaya aur uske chehre ke haav bhav badalne lage wo ekdum pareshan hote huye bola

Aniket-main..main yaha kaise aaya.? Tum log bhi kahi us rajeshwar ke sath mile huye to nahi ho ? main to container me tha fir main yaha kaise aaya..?

Siddharth aniket ko shant karte huye bola

Siddharth-aniket shant hi jao pehle, tum ab ekdum surakshit ho aur apne gaon me hi ho

Aniket-komal kaha hai ? komal..!! komal..!!

Aniket ka awaj sun ke komal bhagte huye room me aayi aur wo aniket ke gale lag gayi

Komal-chinta mat karo ani main ekdum theek hu aur surakshit hu.. aur tum bhi safe ho ab..

Aniket ne komal ko kas ke gale lagaya tha aur ro raha tha..

Aniket-I am sorry, maaf kar do mujhe galti meri hai..

Tab komal ne use samjhate huye kaha…

Komal-tum pehle shant ho jao, kuch nahi hua hai sab safe hai shant ho jao tum.

Aniket-aur..aur wo halkat rajeshwar…..

Aniket bol hi raha tha ke itne me rajeshwar room me aaya aur use dekhte hi aniket ekdum khawal gaya

Aniket- ye neech aadmi yaha kya kar raha hai…

Rajeshwar hase aur bole

Rajeshwar-mujhe thank you bolne ki bajay galiya de rahe ho aniket ? no problem, tum kitni hi galiya de do mujhe uska kuch nahi lagega kyuki tumhare utne upkar hai mujhpar..

Aniket- waah!! Bahut ache !! kya upkar ka badla chukaya hai.. sumi tu kya sun rahi hai jao pehle jakar police ko phone karo aur is aadmi ko ander karwao

Itne me awaj aaya

Raman-sirf unhe nahi mujhe bhi ander dalwana padega.

Raman ander aaya aur use dekhte hi aniket ne komal ko apne paas khich liya aur bola

Aniket-sumi tu police ko phone kar rahi hai ya main karu ?

Par suman apni jagah se nahi hili aura b aniket ka gussa fut pada tha

Aniket-matlab sumi tub hi in logo ke sath mili huyi thi.. sharam nahi aayi tujhe ? aur tum logo ne komal ko bhi pakad liya. ?

Itne me narayanrao aur kaushalya ander aaye aur unhe dekhte hi aniket ka sara gussa gayab ho gaya usne un dono ko bed par baithe baithe hi hug kiya

Aniket-maa babpu, I am sorry maaf kar do mujhe, mujhe ab samajh aa gaya hai ke main nahi reh sakta aapke bagair

Narayanrao aniket ke sar par hath firate huye bole

Narayanrao- hum bhi nahi reh sakte tumhare bagair, ansh hai tum era tere bina kaise rahenge

Sab shant ho gaye the aur aniket ro raha tha, narayanrao ke aankho se bhi aansu tapka

Narayanrao-tu ab aaram kar hum sab yahi hai chinta mat karna

Aniket ab shant ho gaya tha aur ab use sab yaad aane laga tha..

Yash ki shadi ke baad ek din subah narayanrao aur aniket chai pite baithe the tab narayanrao bole

Narayanrao-aniket graduation ab pura ho gaya hai tumhara aba age ka kya socha hai. ?

Aniket-abhi kuch iske bare me socha nahi hai papa

Narayanrao- fir ab tum mera business apne hath me le lo aur mujhe retairment de do

Aniket- kya bapu kuch bhi, abhi aapka market khatam thode hi hua hai, sab bolte hai aap mere bade bhai hai kya..

Narayanrao- faltu bakwas karke baat mat badlo, theek hai main dekh lunga business kam se kam apni maa ko to retairment de de

Aniket- kuch bhi kya bapu, apni budhi thanthanit hai abhi

Kaushalya uske piche hi aakar khadi thi ur ye aniket ko nahi pata tha, kaushalya k eek mukka uski pith me mara aur boli

Kaushalya-kyu re main budhi dikhti hu tujhe..

Tab aniket narayanrao ko dekh kar bola

Aniket-dekha bola tha na ek dum thanthanit, aur aap bol rahe ho retairment de de

Kaushalya-bas hogayi ab tumhari masti ab main sidha sayajirao ke ghar jaungi aur shadi ka muhurat nikalungi aur tumhari shadi ek bar kara di to main marne ke liye free

Aniket- aise kaise, apne pote ki shadi dekhe bagair main kahi jane nahi dunga tumko

Kauhslaya-ha yaha bete ki shadi ka pata nahi hai aur pote ki shadi dikhayega..

Aniket chidh kar bola

Aniket- kya aap logo ko subah subah koi kaam nahi hai kya ? subah subah mere piche hath dho ke lag jate ho main chota hu abhi

Kaushalya- do do prem prakaran karte time nahi dhyan aaya kit u chota hai, tekdi ke karyakram karte time nahi samjha kit u chota hai? Daru pike komal ke ghar me ghuste samay khayal nahi aaya kit u chota hai? Aur shadi ki baat karo to bolta hai ki chota hu main, ab kya maar kha ke manega

Aniket achanak serious ho gaya

Aniket-kya laga rakha hai shadi shadi ? mujhe jab shadi karni hogi karunga mere piche mat pado aur agar jabardasti ki to ghar chhod ke chala jaunga fir baithe rehna

Narayanrao-darwaja udhar hai, sidha nikal jana, bahut sehan kar liya tujhe, kyu nahi karni shadi

Aniket-main kaha keh raha hu nahi karni? Shadi karni hai par abhi nahi

Narayanrao- fir kab?

Aniket-main khud bata dunga

Narayanrao kuch bolte itne me avinash waha aa gaya aur use dekh kar narayanrao bole

Narayanrao-avinash ab tu hi samjha tere dost ko humne to iske saamne hath tek diye hai

Avinash-meri bhi kaha sunta hai wo kaka

Aniket-aye chomde teko kya malum be kis bare me baat ho rahi hai ?

Avinash kandhe udate huye bola

Avinash-kaka kaku sath me baa tar rahe hai matlab teri shadi ke bare me hi baat hoyi aur kya baat honi hai?

Aniket- aaya bada sherlok holmes ki aulad chal kaam hai apne ko

Itna bol ke dono baahar nikal gaye aur aniket bola

Aniket-in dono ne dimag ghuma diya hai yaar, din nikalte hi shuru

Avinash use samjhate huye bola

Avinash-kya galat hai usme? Tumhare relationship ko 3 saal ho gaye hai, dono ke gharwalo ko dikkat nahi hai aur tu kya baccho jaise nakhre kar raha hai be

Aniket-tu nahi samjhega

Avinash- to samjha na

Aniket-bataunga par pehle mujhe abhi komal key aha chhod de

Avinash ne aniket ko komal ke paas chhoda aur wo nikal gaya, aniket aur komal dono tekdi wale Krishna mandir me jakar baith gaye, aniket ekdum shant tha aur ye baat komal ke dhyan me aa gayi

Komal-kya hua, aaj bhi shadi ki baat huyi hai

Aniket chidh kar bola

Aniket-ab tum mat shuru ho jana, pehle hi dimag garam hai

Komal-maine kaha kuch bola hai? Maine to bas pucha hai ki ghar par kuch baat huyi kya

Aniket-kau yaar kuch samajh nahi aa raha ki kya karu? Maa bapu kamthe kya jo ab avi bhi shuru ho gaya hai, koi mujhe samajh ke nahi leta

Komal-main hu na tumhe samajh ne ke liye bolo kya hua hai?

Aniket-wahi hamesha ka shadi kar le.

Komal-to karo na

Aniket-aise kaise karu?

Komal-kaise matlab sab karte hai waise

Aniket kau yaar ab kaise samjhau tumhe

Komal-kuch problem hai kya?

Aniket-nahi

Komal-fir kya dikkat hai aaj na kal shadi to karni hi hai

Aniket chidh ke bola

Aniket-mujhe abhi nahi karni hai

Komal-ani gussa mat hona par mujhe batao ki shadi ki baat aate hi tum chidh kyu jate ho?

Aniket-main kaha chidhta hu

Komal-yahi baat tum ache se bhi bata sakte the aaj mujhe saaf saaf batao tumhe shadi karni hai ya nahi

Aniket komal ke dono hath hath me lete huye bola

Aniket-shadi to karni hai, tumse hi karni hai par abhi nahi

Komal-fir kya budha hone ke baad karni hai? Maine aaj tak nahi kaha par mujhe bhi gharwale, rishtedar puchte hai ki jab sab fix hai to shadi me deri kyu

Aniket-kau shadi ek avismarniya ghatna hai mere jindagi ki aur wo itni asani se ho rahi hai, isiliye mujhe sahi nahi lag raha

Komal-main samjhi nahi tum kya kehna chah rahe ho?

Aniket-ab kaise batau yaar tumhe, ab yash ki shadi huyi, kitne lafde huye usme, suman ki shadi, solid maja aaya usme par hamara kya? Kuch nahi, itna plane ki isme kuch bhi happening nahi hai, aisa kuch thrilling chahiyie tab maja aayega shadi me, kuch excitement chahiye

Komal-tumhara dimag ghum gaya hai kya? Ye kya bate leke baithe ho, arey jab sab ache se ho raha hai to tumhe uski value hi nahi hai, such gale me mala pehnanae aa raha hai aur tumhe excitement ki padi hai, tum jo bol rahe ho tumhari samajh me aa raha hai?

Aniket-wahi to samjha raha hu sabko par koi samajhne ko tayar hi nahi hai, aise sidhe sidhe shadi me kya maja hai yaar, shadi kaisi dhamakedar chahiye

Komal-matlab tum shadi maje ke liye kar rahe ho pyaar ke liye nahi..

Aniket-nahi kau main bahut pyaar karta hu tumse, shadi bhi karenge par usme kuch excitement honi chahiye

Komal-aur agar tumhe excitement nahi mili aur mere gharwalo ne meri shadi kahi aur kar di to?

Aniket ekdum tali bajake bola

Aniket- ek number, agar aisa hua to tumhe shadi ke mandap se utha launga, kya jabardast hoga na wo? Shit yaar meko ye idea pehle kyu nahi aaya, isme maja aayega

Komal-tum paagal ho gaye ho, tumhe khud samajh nahi aa raha hai ke tum kya kar rahe ho, tum aise nahi the ye dimag me kya bhara hua hai? Kaunsi excitement ke piche bhag rahe ho?ab tak jo hua kam excitement wala tha kya? Shravni, daru pike propose karna, papa ke hath ka maar khana, ye sab kam eximent wala tha kya

Aniket-wahi to jab sab itna sahi hua hai to shadi me kitni excitement honi chahiye

Komal-tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai, tumhe bas apni excitement ki padi hai na mere pyaar ki chinta hai na maa papa ki khushi ki, itna dhtyan me rakho ki is paagalpan me tum saamne aati khushi ko dur kar rahe ho, dhaga itna bhi mat tano ki to tut jaye, hath se samay nikal jaye to fir rote rehna apni excitement ji lekar

Itna bol ke komal waha se chali gayi, aniket ne use awaj deke rokne ki koshish ki par wo nahi runi aur aniket aasman ki taraf dekh ke bola

Aniket-bhagwan, hai koi is dharti par jo mujhe meri bhavnao ko samjhega…

Update 47​

Aniket jab wapis hosh me aaya tab wo hospital me hi tha, suman aur siddharth ne aakar aniket ko sahise check kiyaaur fir suman hasi aur aniket se boli

Suman- chal ye nautanki uth kuch nahi hua hai tujhe, teri body bilkul sahi kaam kar rahi hai dmag ka pata nahi

Aniket- thank you suman

Aniket ke thank you bolte hi suman ne pat se sthethoscope kaan ko lagaya aur aniket ko check karne lagi

Suman- iski wapis se tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai lagta hai, isne mujhe sumi ji jagah suman kaha aur uper se thank you bhi bola

Aniket hasa aura age bola

Aniket- sab bate baad me pehle mujhe batao mujhe us container se baahar kisne nikala pehle mujhe use thank you bolne ka hai

Suman- tune just abhi abhi use thank you bola hai

Aniket- matlab tumne chudaya mujhe ?

Suman- haa!! Matlab atkaya bhi maine hi tha to chudaungi bhi main hi na

Aniket- kya… ??? ye sab tune kiya tha ?? par kyu ??

Suman- matlab directly nahi kiya tha karwaya tha.. tumhe excitement chahiye thin a, to ab jara sabra karo sab pata chalega

Fir suman siddharth se boli

Suman- chalo ab jab ye sudhar hi gaya hai to ise pura hi sudhar dete hai sid ise aur bhi logo ko thank you bolna hoga na, unhe bula lo

Siddharth suman ki baat pe muskuraya aur baahar jakar usne sab ko ander bulaya, to rajeshwar raman aur wo guard ander aaye unhe dekh ke aniket bola

Aniket- ye bhi tumhare plan me shamil the kya ? ye log to mujhe france bhej rahe the..

Rajeshwar- galat bilkul galat.. hamne bas tumhe bataya tha ke tumhe france bhej rahe hai par bheja nahi..

Aniket- jab bhejna hi nahi tha to fir ye sab kiya hi kyu ?

Rajeshwar- maine kaha than a tumhara mere uper ek upkar hai to ab suno wo kya hai, ha ye sach hai ki raman us din maar khane ke baad jab ghar aaya to uske baad wo hafta bhar ghar me hi tha par ek baat bahut achi huyi thi , raman us din se badal gaya tha, use uski galti samajh aa gayi thi apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya tha usne sari galat sangat chhod di thi, saaf bhasa me kahu to uska paiso ka ghamand utar gaya tha, us ghatna ne use ander se jhakjhor diya tha aur wo sahi raste par aa gaya tha, usne gaon chhoda dusre shahar jakar padhne laga aura b to aage ki padhai ke liye wo videsh jane ka soch raha hai, komal ki wajah se aur tumhari wajah se mera beta sahi raste par aa gaya hai, tumhara ehsaan kaise mano samajh nahi aa raha.

Rajeshwar ki baat sunkar aniket ne sar par hath maar liya aur bola

Aniket- waah! Shabass! To aise mana hai aapne ehsaan, is sab me mujhe kuch ho jata to, jaan chali jati to ?

Jispar suman ne haskar kaha

Suman- aisa ho ti nahi sakta tha, aise kaise jaan chali jati ? ek docter humne tumhare liye waha rakh rakha than a to tumhe kuch kaise hota..

Wo guard muskura raha tha, suman fir uski pehchan karate huye boli

Suman- to ye jinhe tum guard samajh rahe ho ye hai docter rajesh, waise to docter hai par actor banne ka shauk hai, natak wagair me bhi kaam karte hai aur inki acting ka jalwa to tumne dekh hi liya hai, aur ha wo jo tumhe inhone ajeeb sa pani pilaya than a wo actually protein vitamin aur glucose ka mix tha, hame bas tumhara dimag sahi jagah lana tha aur sharir ki dekh bhal hum kar hi rahe the bas tumhe is bare me pata nahi tha aur jis hisab se tumhe bagair pata chale Ramesh ne tumhe injection diya hai tum ye bhi samajh gaye honge ki ye kitne badhiya docter hai..

Aniket- arey par mujhe itne din kaha lekar gaye the, aur mujhe to samundar ka bhi awaj aa raha tha..

Ab siddharth haste huye bola

Siddharth- itne din ? arey sirf do dino me tumhari ye haalat huyi hai aur tum sirf ek ghante ke liye behosh the aur tumhe yaha ke hi farm house par rakha gaya tha aur samundar ka awaj tape par baj raha tha taki tumhe lage ki ha ye sab sach me ho raha hai aur tum is natak ko na pakdo, Ramesh me jaan bujh kar tumhe sunai de aise bola tha ke tum do dino se behosh ho aur tumne wo maan liya

Aniket- kaamal karte ho tum log, aur ye jaroor us dus dimag wale tavan ke hi dimag ki upaj hogi, kidhar hai wo harami ?

Ab komal aur avinash ander aaye…

Avinash- ye dekh main pehle hi bol raha hu main sirf shamil tha aur teko uthana aur farm house par chhodna itna hi kaam tha mera bas..

Aniket-nalayak aadmi meri kya halat huyi malum hai kya ?

Avinash- shukar mana main waha nai tha agar main raman ki jagah hota na to aisa fodta teko, tera naseeb ke ye role mujhe nahi mila, telo excitement ke kutte ne kata than a, tu kisi ki koi baat sunne ko tayar hi nahi tha..

Aniket- avi tu hi mera saccha dost hai re, meri excitement puri karne ke liye kiya na tune ye

Avinash- nahi, kaisa hai na tu ekdum bhayankar hushar hai hamara koi bhi plan tu jaldi pehchan leta isiliye mian jab is bare me soch raha tha tab FB me meko raman dikha aur mere dimag me idea aaya, raman ke paas solid reason tha teko maarne ka aur tere ye kabhi dhyan me bhi nahi aata ki ye hamara plan hai par isme risk tha, teko kuch ho jata to isiliye suman aur sid ko bhi shamil kiya isme aur ab baki ka plan teko hamare director sahab batayenge..

Aniket ab ye soch hi raha tha ke ab ye director kaun aa gaya itne me yash aur priya haste huye ander aaye

Yash-teko kya laga tu akela hi game kar sakta hai, abe thoda dimag bhagwan ne hame bhi diya hai..

Aniket-teri hi kami thi bhai, ek to teri shadi karwayi aur tune meri hi game kar di

Yash-ab kya kare wo kahawat hai na, lato ke bhut bato se nahi maante yas wo bhut hai tu, avi ne sab sari baat batayi tab maine aur priya ne ye sab planning kiya

Fir priya bolne lagi

Priya-tumhe lag raha hoga ki ye sab humne tumhari excitement ke liye kiya hai to tum murkh ho, hamne ye sab tumhe ye samjhane ke liye kiya hai ki jindagi me masti maja jaruri hai par usse kisi ko takleef nahi honi chahiye, aur jab khushiya darwaje par fdastak de to unka aanand lena chahiye na ki unhe taal kar murkhta ka pradarshan karna chahiye, kyuki kal kya hoga koi nahi jaanta, kal kal karte huye life kab hath se nikal jayegi pata bhi nahi chalega, isiliye life ki taraf hoda seriously dekhna tuhme sikhana ha, shadi yani koi maja masti nahi hai, do pariwaro ka aatmao ka Milan hai, ye koi event nahi hai jo dhamakedar hona chahiye, shadi ek jimedari hai ekdusre ko sambhalne ki, sirf apne such ki chinta na karke apne jivansathi ke man aur iccha ka samman karne ki, shadi baccho ka khel nahi hai na hi koi dikhawa hai samaj ko dikhane ke liye, kya kuch samajh aa raha hai ? ya bheje tumhe france?

Aniket hath jodte huye bola

Aniket-nahi mata samajh gaya main, ye baat jindagi bhar yaad rahegi ab, maa bapu kidhar hai unko bolo agar wo bole to main abhi ke abhi shadi karne ko tayar hu

Ab narayanrao kaushalya aur sayajirao ander aaye

Narayanrao- pakka na palte ga to nahi ?

Aniket-bilkul nahi aur tumne shadi na karwayi to kal isko bhaga ke mandir main shadi kar lunga..

Ab sayajirao haste huye bole

Sayajirao- ye sach hai ke sahdi to kal hi hogi par mandir me nahi yahi hogi, in baccho ne sari tayari kar li hai, marriage hall book hai cards bat gaye haipar ek problem hai, dulhe ke kapde reh gaye bas..

Aniket- aniket ekdum khush ho gaya, matlab use yakin nahi ho raha tha ke ye sab ho gaya hai fir bhi wo komal se bola

Aniket-kammo mere se shadi karni hai ke kapdo se, nahi ab ek pal bhi waste nahi karna hai, jarurat padi to lungi baniyan pe shadi kar lunga main to ab

Priya- uski koi jarurat nahi hai hame pata tha isiliye hamne sari kharidari kar li hai

Suman-aur hatele ani ki baarat hospital se hi niklegi…

Vishesh amantran

Bhagwan maruti ki kripa se hamare vaanar ki shadi uske shobhe aise sunder kanya se kal hone wali hai aur is vaanar ki baarat kal hospital se hi niklegi to aap sabhi se nivedan hai ke kal 7 baje shadi ke liye padhare

Swagatotsuk

Narayanrao rane
Kaushalya rane
Sayajirao patil

Aur jisse in logo ne bulaya nahi hai fir bhi sabse pehle aane wala
Adirshi ​

Update 48​

Aniket ki shadi thi koi sadhi ghatna nahi thi, yash aur avinash ne mil ke akkhe gaon me patrika bati thi aur to aur college ke notice board par bhi cipka di thi taki sab ko ye baat pata chale ki aniket ki shadi hai isse akkhe college ko bhi is sadi ki khabar ho gayi thi aur sabhi log shadi me aane ke liye utsuk the, aniket ki baarat bhi top hatele tarike se hospital se nikalne wali thi to mashish bhai ne apni gadi nikali aur SHADOW KING Chinturocky ragish7357 ko leke sidhe hospital pahuche Mr.Marlega AverageNB waha pehle hi pahuch gaye the, yash aur avinash aniket ke kapde leke waha pahuche, hospital me sirf awaj hi awaj tha only kalla danga macha hua tha

Itne sab shor se siddharth pareshan ho gaya aur wo sabko shant karte huye bola

Siddharth-arey se sab kya chal raha hai tum logo ka ? hospital hai ye aurshadi sham me hai tum kya subah subah hi aa gaye ho ?

Tab chintu bhai aage aake bole

Chinturocky- ye baat aadi se pucho docter, usne 7 baje ka bola par ye nahi bataya ke subah ke 7 ya sham ke 7 isiliye hum log aa gaye hamari koi galti nahi hai isme

Siddharth-ruko usko call karta hu abhi

Aur fir siddharth me adi ko call lagaya (par iske paas mera number kaise aaya 🤔 kaun leak kiya mera number :cold: )

Siddharth-adi teko kuch akkal hai ya nahi hai, aur adha message kya deta hai be, ye sare log is vanar ke liye hospital me aa gaye hai aur bas dhingana macha hua hai, tu pehle idhar aa aur samjha sab ko

Adi- maine kaha adha messhage diya be aur jinko sirf shadi me aana hai wo sham ko aayenge ye to khas dost hai, par tu chinta mat kar meri canteen walo se baat ho gayi hai sabko udhar bhej de..

Fir siddharth ne phone cut kiya aur sabse bola

Siddharth-aap logo ko job hi masti Karni hai canteen me jake kari aur ye apne dulhe ko bhi le jao sath me..

Fir kyat ha sabne aniket ko kandhe par uthaya aur morcha nachte huye nikla canteen ki taraf

Ab waha ashish_1982_in bhai bhi pahuch gaye aur apne sath aate aate ek saloon wale ko bhi utha laye taki wo dadhi wagaira sab set karde aniket ki, an aniket bhi badhia dadhi cutting karwa se sahi dikh raha tha aura b dulhe ki tayari ke sath sath majak masti bhi shuru thi

Leon32- ani excitement mila ke aur chahiye :D

Aniket-O bhai main pair padta hu aapke wo baat mat nikalo yaar, ab to sari jindagi ka sabak mil gaya hai, ab aur koi excitement nahi chahiye

Idhar avinash ne sabko apne apne kaam baat diye the.. Nevil singh aur 11 ster fan shadi ki sari tayariya dekh rahe the aur SANJU ( V. R.

) bhai unke kaam ko supervise kar rahe the

Idhar marriage hall me bhi dhum dham shuru thi komal ki sari saheliya use gher ke baithi thi aur sath me thi Mahi Maurya ji, komal ko badhiya sajaya ja raha tha aur sath hi chedkhani bhi chal rahi thi

Mahi-aaj to komal ko aise tayar karenge ki aniket ki wicket gir jani chahiye…

Dusri taraf aniket bhi badhiya tari se ready ho gaya tha, uske ek badhiya jari ke wrok wali sherwani pehni thi aur sar pe feta pairo me mojdi, gale me ek sunder ka pehdal aur motiyo ki mala, aur ek resham ka dupatta sherwani me uper lekar dulhe babu tayar ho gaye the aur narayanrao sabko jaldi karne ka bol rahe the, avinash aur yash ne jab aniket ko dekha to dekhte hi reh gaye aur avinash jake uske gale lag gaya, aniket ko is taraf se dulhe ki poshakh me dekh kar yash aur avi ki aankho me khushi ke aasu aa gaye, dono ne aniket ko apne kandhe par uthaya aur baahar leke aaye, baahar band baja aur ek sunder safed ghoda tayar tha…

Aur ab nikli aniket ki baarat, ab baarat nikle to nagin dance to hona hi tha :D uske bagair baarat aage kaha badhne wali thi Mr. Nobody aalu Vikram Bhosle Dkumar sab badhiya band ke sath nachne ka maja le rahe the band wale baja baja baja ke pasina pasina ho gaye the par koi ruk hi nahi raha tha aur in sab me bhi ekbanda thoda piche chal raha tha aur wo the apne Lovingheart kya hai na bhai thoda kidnaping wale kand se naraj tha wo piche piche tha par dhyan rakh raha tha ke koi gadbad na ho..

Yash aur avinash ko to kisi chiz ka dhyan hi nahi tha aur fir aaya is desh ka nation shadi band wala gana ‘ye desh hai veer jawano ka’ aur uske baad jo baarat me dhamal huyi wo shabdo me vyakt nahi ki ja sakti yash aur avi ne narayanrao se kaha ke kaka aaj to eklaute bete ki shadi hai jalwa to dikhana padega fir kya narayanrao ke aisa jalwa dikhaya ke sab log bas unhe cheer kar rahe the

Akkha gaon baarat dekhne aaya tha aur apne pitaji ko istarah nachte dekh aniket bhi has raha tha..

Dekhte dekhte samay nikal raha tha aur baarat abhi adhe raste me bhi nahi pahuchi thi aur fir jab narayanrao ne gadbad jki tab jakar ye log marriage hall tak pahuche

Aur fir jo log marriage hall me the wo bhi nachne me shamil ho gaye jinme the hamare bade bhai nain11ster Naina Moon Light A-Star

Aniket ke ghodi se utarne ke baad sabhi log use badhiya stage tak le gaye..

Udhar komal tayar ho gayi thi aur uski sari saheliya use bata rahi thi ke aniket kitna smart dikh raha hai aur aniket ke bare me sun kar komal ke dil ki dhadkan badh gayi thi aur jab priya ne komal ko dekha to wo boli

Priya- kya baat hai komal, aaj to tera alag hi roop nikhar aaya hai..

Priya ki baat sunkar komal sharma gayi

Idhar aniket stage me pahuch chukka tha aur komal ko dekhne ke liye utawala ho raha tha aur uski najar idhar udhar ghum rahi thi tab avinash bola

avinash-jara sabar kar le bhai wo aahi rahi hai aise dhundh kya raha ai

Aniket-arey wo to aayegi hi par apna khasam khas jigli dost nahi aaya abhi

Fir avinash ne idhar udhar dekha aur bola

Avinash-wo dekh wo aa gaya, shaitan ka naam liya aur shaitan hajir

Ek ladka badhiya blue color ka kurta pehne waha aa raha tha badhioya raubdar muche pair me mojdi mathe me tilak wo haste huye aniket ke paas aaya aur aniket ne use gale laga liya

Use dekh ke Lovingheart ne apne paas khade bande se pucha

Lovingheart- ye kaun hai? Pehleto nahi dekha isko

Fir us bande ne 11 ster fan se pucha wo unhone bhi mana kar diya ki nahi jaante

Baad ne ladka avinash se mila aur avinash ne uski pehchan yash se karayi aur jaise hi yash ne uska naam jana yash sab se bola

Yash-arey bhailog yahi hai wo adi, isilne itna sataya hai apne ani aur komal ko

Bas itna sunna tha ke sabhi log adi ke paas pahuche aur maskhari me hi use pmaarne lage jinme sabse aage apne Lovingheart bhai the (bahut mara be kidnaping wale kand ke liye :cry: )

Adi- abe chhodo be

Ab bhale hi shravni aniket ki ex thi par shadi ka card use bhi diya tha, (bhedbhav nahi karta apun) wo bhi shadi me aayi thi aur sabko adi ko maarta dekh wo bhi chillayi

Shravni-maro isko mera naam kharab kiya hai pura kisi ko bhi naam batao to gobar bolke hasta hai wo

Sab has rahe the ha kuch notable members bhi the jo is sab ka maja dekh rahe the Naik Rahul Ajay Ramesh628 Vk248517 Rudrathakur DAIVIK-RAJ aur Ass_hish wo to bas raah dekh raha tha ke khana kab shuru hoga, ek aur banda tha jo kisi ke najar me nahi aaya par apna dhyan tha uspe Jaguaar bhai…

Itne me yash ne aniket ko apne taraf ghuma liya aur bola

Yash-anya aaj to beta gaya tu, komal aa rahi hai

Aniket ghumne wala tha par yash ne use ghumne nahi diya

Yash-arey itni asani se nahi barkhurdar, jara sabra karo wo paas aa jaye fir ghumna matlab dono pe eksath bijli gire

Komal dheere dheere eke k kadam chalte huye aniket ke paas aayi, wo bhi betab thi aniket ko is tarah dekhne ke liye, uske kareeb aate hi aniket ghuma, dono ki najre mili, aaju baju calta hua sara awaj mano unke liye tham gaya ho, us pal me sirf wo dono hi the, komal ke liye bas waha aniket tha aur aniket ke liye komal

Komal ne ek laal ghagra pehna hua tha aur usme wo kamaal lag rahe thi, sar par transparent ghunghat liya hua tha aur aniket man hi man soch raha tha ke acha hua ghunghat me se dekh raha hu direct dekhta to najane kya hota, komal ko dekh ke aisa lag raha tha mano koi rajkumari aayi ho, uski naak me phni huyi nath to jaanleva lag rahi thi hath me laal chuda, halka sa makeup kano ke jhumke, wo itni sunder lag rahi thi ke aniket ko lag raha tha ke komal hi hai ya koirajkanya jo swarg se sidha uske liye dharti par aayi hai, aniket use dekha hi raha aur komal ka bhi haal waisa hi tha, dono sabkuch bhul ke ekdusre ko dekh rahe the tab Naina ne unhe hila kar hosh me laya

Naina - arey tumhari hi komal hai wo ab use dekhte hi rahoge ka shadi bhi karoge shadi kar lo fir jindagi bhag dekhte rehna..

Shadi ki rasme shuru huyi par dono ka usme dhyan kaha tha, chori cori ekdusre ko dekhna shuru hi tha..

saptapadi(phere) ke samay jab komal ne aniket ke hath me apna hath diya to unki Jodi dekh ke sayajirao aur sangeeta ki aankho me pani bhar aaya, such aur dukh ka ek milajula pal tha wo

nain11ster aur bhai ne mangalastak gaye aur aniket aur komal agni ki sakshi me shadi ke pavitra bandhan me hamesha hamesha ke liye band gaye, kaushalya ki to khushi ka koi thikana hi nahi tha aaj..

Jaymala hone ke baad fir shuru hua khane ka karyakram (ab jisko jo jo pasand hai imagine kar lene ka wo sab tha shadi me :D ) aur kam aniket aur komal khana khane baithe tab sab ne aniket ko komal ke lie kuch kehne ko kaha tab aniket bola

Aniket- pyaar ki har raah par tum ho sath
To aa jayegi is jivan me rangat
Nahi chahiye koi excitement na koi thrill
Jivan ke har mod me chahiye teri sangat……….

Update 49
Epilogue​

Din beet kar ab raat aa chuki thi, aniket aur komal parinay sutra me bandh gaye the aura b uske jivan ki ek nayi shuruwat hone wali thi… tekdi par aaj avinash akela hi party kar raha tha, uska sathi aaj waha nahi than a, wo shanti se beer ka eke k ghut le raha tha itne me piche se awaj aaya

Yash- kya avi seth ? akele akele party ?

Avinash ne piche palat kar dekha to yas uski taraf dekh kar muskura raha tha

Yash-kya bhai avi sirf aniket dost hai kyat era, hum nahi hai ?

Avinash- arey waisa nahi hai aao baitho

Yash- to fir aaj kya gum me rum

Avinash- ab kaheka gum bhai apne bhai ki shadi huyi hai aaj bas usi ki party kar raha hu

Yash-ha ye bhi sahi hai

Avinash- yash teko batau, ye sab yaade na aankho ke saamne kisi film ki taraf chal rahi hai, kya dhamal kiya hai hum logo ne par ab ani par jimmedari badh gayi hai, uski shadi ho gayi hai to0 aisa rukha rukha lag raha hai, ab wahi uski grihastio chalu ho jayegi fir kaka ka business ab use kaha samay milega na masti ke liye

Fir uske baad najane kitna hi samay avinash uske aur aniket ke kisse suna raha tha aur has raha tha, wo itna hasa ke uski aankho me pani aa gaya…

Fir yash bola

Yash-ek baat bata avi.. aniket ki jaymala hone tak to tu stage par tha fir baadme achanak kaha gayab ho gaya tha ?

Avinash- main kaha gayab hua tha bhai, arey ha yaad aaya wo baahar kuch kaam the to bas wahi dekh raha tha

Fir yash bhi beer ke halke halke ghut lete huye bola

Yash-ek baat bata pichli baar hum log tekdi par aaye the tab ani ko komal ke pyaar ka ehsaas dilane hi aaye the na barobar

Avinash- hao ye to pehle hi decided than a

Yash- hmm aur us raat propose kaarne ka bhi koi plan nahi tha barabar..

Avinash- hao na bhai, par aniket kuch sunne ko hi tayar nahi tha, bole abhi propose karega, mera to dimag hi kaam nahi kar raha tha.. sab kaise ekdum achanak hua tha

Yash hasa aur wo avinash ne dekha aur bola

Avinash- abhi has aa rahi hai par us time fat gayi thi bhai

Yash-nahi main uske liye nahi hasa..

Avinash- fir kyu hasa ?

Yash- avi tum jaanta hai na main umra me terese bada hu, tere se jyada duniya bhi dekhi hai, ek baar nahi do do baar pyaar bhi kiya hai..

Avinash- ha to..

Yash- aur pyaar ke mamle me bhi mera anibhav tere se jyada hai

Avinash- yash gol gol bate mat ghuma sidhe sidhe bol na kya kehna chahta ha tu

Yash ne ek pause liya aur usne avinash ka hath pakda aur uske shirt ki bahi per ki, avinash ke hath pe ek tattoo tha, yash bola

Yash- ye kya hai ?

Jispar avinash bola

Avinash-ye ye to mere naam ka hai A.K. avinash kanitkar

Yash- to tere is tattoo ke bare me ani ko malum hai ?

Avinash- nahi ?

Yash- kyu ?

Avinash- arey usme kya hai itna

Yash- bahut kuch hai, tum dono baal mitra ho na, tumko ek dusre ki har baat pata hai fir ye baat ani ko kaise nahi malum ?

Avinash- yas teko jyada ho gayi hai tu kuch bhi bol raha hai.

Yash- maine ye tattoo tab dekha tha jab hum aniket ko komal ke ghar ki diwar par chadha rahe the, acha ye sab chhod ye bata komal jab dulhan ban ke aayi tab maine teri aankho me pani dekha tha kyu ?

Avinash-arey wo pal hi aisa tha, main bhavuk ho gaya tha

Yash- fir ek baat bata, us raat aniket ka komal ko propose karne ka plan bana tab tune bataya tha ke komal ki room kaunsi hi, uske pitaji kitne baje ghar aate hai yaha tak ki komal jag rahi hogi ya soyi hogi ye bhi pata tha tujhe, itni infoi tere paas kaise ?

Avinash gardan jhukakar niche baitha tha aur yash bol raha tha

Yash – abhi jo tune ye sab apni purani yade batayi hai usne komal bhi thi par tune komal ka jikra ek baar bhi nhi kiya, jab pehli baar tune shravni ke propose aur aniket ke rangit talim ka kissa mujhe itne utsah se bataya tha tabhi mere dhyan me aa gaya tha ke us din na sirf komal balki tere dil me bhi pyaar ne janm le liya tha, teri komal se kya baat huyi ye bhi tune mujhe bataya aur jab tune komal ke vichar sune usidin tune decide kiya ke aniket ke pyaar ke liye agar komal shravni ke propose me madad kar sakti hai to tub hi komal ki madad karega use uska pyaar dilane me kyuki tu khud komal ko man hi man chahne laga tha, komal ke aansu bhi too tujhe hi dikhe the warna maujud to waha kai log the

Avinash ki aankho se aasu beh rahe the usne bas ha me gardan hilayi aur yash shant hua, jab avinash thoda shant hua tab yash bola

Yash- kyu kiya aisa ?

Avinash jabardasti muskuraya aur bola

Avinash- kyuki aniket sirf dost nahi hai mera bhai hai, bachpan se sath ai humlog , aur uske to aneko upkar hai mujhpar, aaj tak usne job hi mere liye kiya hai uske saamne to ye bahut kam hai, komal to abhi abhi jindagi me aayi thi re aniket aur mera sath to tab ka hai jab se hame chaddi bhi pehanni nai aati thi, sar pe baap ka saya nahi tha par umra me bhale hi mere hi itna tha par kabhi bhi mere bhai ke baap ki kami nahi mehsus hone di, aur bhai jinhe pyaar nahi milta unhe kuch nahi milta aisa bhi nahi hai yaar, mere paas mera anmol dost hai, mujhe mera pyaar na mila isse koi fark nahi padta, mere bhai ko uska pyaar mila ye kya kam hai ? aur ani ke dosti par to 1 kya 10 komal kurban karne ke pehle main 1 pal bhi nahi sochunga

Yash- arey par tum komal se….

Avinash ne yash me muh par hath rakh diya

Avinash- wo sab khatam ho gaya hai, shadi ki us pavitra agni me jal ke rakh ho gaya hai, aur ab komal sirf aur sirf meri bhabhi hai aur hamari sanskruti me maa ke baad bhabhi ka darja hota hai, main aba age padhne ke liye dusre shahar jar aha hu, ani ki aisi icha hai wo chahta hai ki main padhu aur mere liya uska shabd hi sab kuch hai, tumne ye baat aaj boli hai aage mat bola kyuki agar aisa hua to ye mere pyaar aur dosti ka apman hoga, tumhe priya ki kasam, aur ye bhi mat samajhna ki ye happy ending nahi tha arey bhai aniiket aur komal ki shadi happy ending se kam thi kya aur raha sawal mera to wo hai na adi usne mere loiye bhi kuch to socha hoga…

Avinash waha se utha aur khali beer ki botal wahi fodi aur nikal gaya aur jaye huye wo gar aha tha

Avinash- ye dosti hum nahi chhodenge, chhodenge dum magar tera sath na chhodenge…

Yash jate huye avinash ho dekh raha tha aur bola

Yash- pyaar karna to priya ne sikhaya tha par use nibhana aaj avi sikha gaya, pyaar karne wale to bahut dekhe the par dosti par pyaar nyochavar karne wala HATELA aaj pehli baar dekha, main to aaj tak is hateli lovestory ko ani ki samajhta tha ye to hateli lovestory avi ki nikli....

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